Prefect
Chapter 4 of 7
phoenixRewritten and expanded! It's tough to be a werewolf in a society where you are misunderstood and feared. How does Remus Lupin, the first werewolf to attend Hogwarts, handle this responsibility? A look at the MWPP Hogwarts years.
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When Remus received his Prefect badge in the post, his parents had been very proud. He had been shocked. James was the smartest Gryffindor and a natural leader. He couldn’t believe that Dumbledore was placing this level of responsibility on him. Prefects helped enforce the rules and keep the younger students in line.
Remus grew anxious. If he couldn’t stop his friends, how could he be a Prefect? He briefly considered sending the badge back to Dumbledore, but what would he tell his parents? No, he had to keep the badge and do his best not to let Dumbledore down.
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Hearing the trap door scraping, Remus looked up nervously. This close to moonrise, it was dangerous for anyone to be with him. “What are you doing here?” he asked his friends.
“Success, mate. We are now full-fledged Animagi,” replied James smugly before transforming into a stag.
Remus was shocked. They’d really done it. “Well, you two’d better hurry, I can feel it coming, and I don’t want to hurt you.” As he felt the tingling turn to pain, he saw Sirius and Peter turn into a dog and rat. As the wolf took over, he hoped they would be safe.
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When Remus returned to the dormitory, his friends met him with raucous cheers, recounted the fun they’d had, and how much better it would be next month. He couldn’t really remember, but he had impressions of running free.
“We came up with nicknames, too. I’m Prongs, Peter’s Wormtail, Sirius’ Padfoot, and you, naturally, are Moony. What d’you think?”
Remus was overwhelmed.
“I still think we need a group name,” added Sirius.
James thought a moment. “How about Marauders? We’ll be our own private club.”
Remus couldn’t help the sick feeling in his stomach, but there had been no harm, right?
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Knowing what they did had been wrong, he had barely slept the night before. He never should have let them join him. What if he had got free? He had never been careless about his transformation before, and he had promised Dumbledore he would stay in the Shack. Never before had he felt so miserable. Surely, he would be expelled if anyone found out what he had done. And what would happen to him if the other parents found out? He had to put a stop to this now, before it became a habit. Surely, they would listen to him.
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Pulling his friends to the side at breakfast, Remus said, “We can’t do that again. What if I’d hurt someone?”
“Wasn’t going to happen. James and I are big enough to keep you at bay.”
“And we’ll stay well away from the village,” added James.
“You started to remember last night, and we can tell you had fun. Do you really want to be a prisoner in that creaky old shack?”
He had to admit being free had been wonderful. The grass had been soft and fragrant. “I suppose not.”
“Good! The Marauders ride in a month,” said James triumphantly.
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Sirius slammed the book down. “I’ve been thinking.”
“That would be a first,” quipped James.
“Ha-ha. Seriously, if we’re going to sneak around, we need a way to avoid getting caught. What if we make a map of the school?”
“What good would that do?” asked Remus, not entirely liking the idea of breaking more rules.
“If the map could tell us where everyone is, a lot.”
“How do we do that?” asked Peter.
“We have James and Remus, our Charms geniuses. I’m sure they’ll work something out. A variation of a Locator Charm, perhaps?”
James grinned at the challenge.
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It took them months. James finally convinced Remus to get a note allowing him access to the Restricted Section since no one would question Remus’ research motives; after all, he was a Prefect.
Sometimes, Remus thought he was being used, but he reminded himself that friends helped each other. And what he was doing was not really hurting anyone. Besides, this could be incredibly useful magic. When they finished the Map, he couldn’t help feeling proud of his accomplishment. Even though they were planning on using the Map to break rules, it was still a very elegant piece of magic.
A/N: I hope you are still enjoying this one. This will go through until the end of his time at Hogwarts and hopefully provide some insight into his character.
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I think you are doing a magnificent job with such limitations! I could never, ever write this well in so few words. I think you are keeping everyone in character and I like the way you played out the scene with Severus and Sirius. I also like that you had Remus go to try to apologise, I think that that was something he would definitely have done. Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. It really was challenging to write this story in this fashion. I don't know that I'll be doing something like this again for that reason. Though, it has been quite fun. I do think that Remus would have tried to apologize and I'm glad that you agree with me.
Oh, poor Remus! That would really suck, never remembering much of what you had been doing. Very nicely done!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you so very much,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I always kind of got the impression that before Wolfsbane, he would lose control, and I supposed memory. Writing this fic made me even more sympathetic towards him than I already was.
Another wonderful chapter! You are doing such a wonderful job! It is like you used a time turner to go back and managed to get into his head. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you are enjoying this. It was a real challenge trying to get into his head when you have a word limit. I'm glad you find this characterization realistic. More will be coming soon.
Again, I loved this - I never thought I'd like something written just about Remus, but the way you've written this is very addictive! -Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. I found this addicting to write. It was a lot of fun to really concentrate on Remus, though there is some more Marauder stuff in the next couple, but this remains a predominantly Remus story.
Another great one! I like how you are putting in his feelings about how James and Sirius treated Severus and about how he had misgivings about his friends becoming Anamagi. You capture Remus very well. I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I tried to take the few tidbits we had about Remus's time at school from both Snape's Worst Memory and his own recollections to Harry. I know he felt guilty about his friends and I'm glad to have captured that here.
Another great chapter! You are writing this very well! I really feel for poor Remus! You rock!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. I was trying to imagine how hard it would be to be Remus. We know that he hasn't had an easy life and I wanted to show that it's been that way the whole time, not just once the first war was over.
That was very well done! I am sure that that is exactly how he probably would have felt. Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you very much. I know I responded to the other review for chapter 3, but I did want to thank you for taking the time to comment on each chapter. I liked this one because you really get in Remus's mind.
Oh, is this going to include the one I read on your LJ? That was fantatic! And so is this! I love it. I can imagine how hard it must have been to write it. I don't know if I would be able to pull it off. I can't wait for more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Jen, yup, this will come to include the one I had in the LJ, though it will be marginally reworked, but nothing big, just a few little tweaks as we've seen his transformation in the shack before, no. :)This is truly one of the most difficult things I've written because of the constraints. Telling a whole story in 100 word snippets is hard. That's a very short time to have a scene and then it's on to the next. LOL It was a lot of fun though.
This is really interesting! I love the perspective of this - can't wait to see where it goes! - Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. This has been a really fun fic to write. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Lovely story. I'm so impressed when I read a series of drabbles that make a complete story. I could never do it. Excellent job, my friend. Thanks for sharing with all of us. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Jenny. It wasn't easy. There was so much temptation for me to keep expounding on scenes and make it a much more in depth story, but that would have defeated the point. Not sure I'll do it again, but it was a fun exercise.
Okay, I did leave a review already, but got kicked off line, so I don't think it posted. I think you did a lovely job with this story! I feel really bad for poor Remus, but I am glad that Dumbldore tried to help him and continued to look out for him. You did a magnificent job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to give a bit of a happy ending to someone that's going to have a very rough life. :)
Aw, those drabbles made me have that faith in the Maurarders I had during PoA before I learned the leaders were prats in HBP. Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I had fun with this one adapting a drabble challenge to something unique. I have been thinking about expanding this story to cover Lupin's time at Hogwarts a bit more thoroughly. We'll see what the muses say. :)