Run of the Marauders
Chapter 5 of 7
phoenixRewritten and expanded! It's tough to be a werewolf in a society where you are misunderstood and feared. How does Remus Lupin, the first werewolf to attend Hogwarts, handle this responsibility? A look at the MWPP Hogwarts years.
ReviewedA/N: For those that caught the original version, this is pretty much the chapter that was posted before. There were a few minor changes made to this one to make it less repetitive.
Run of the Marauders
Full moon was tonight. The others thought it was fun. As usual, they would join him, run with him, keep him safe. While they thought they were like him, they weren’t. They could never understand what he went through. They could control their transformations; his came with the moon, completely unbidden.
Madam Pomfrey led him to the Whomping Willow and escorted him to the Shack. “I’ll be back in the morning, dear.”
He nodded and sat in the silence, waiting. He could feel it coming. It wasn’t long now. There was nothing he hated or feared more than the moon.
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“Is it time, yet?”
James checked the window. “Not quite, Padfoot.”
Sirius paced restlessly. “You know what you have to do, Wormtail?”
“Same thing I do every month. And I can ride on you this time, right?”
“Yeah, sure. The moon’ll be up soon. Let’s go now, and he’ll be transformed by the time we get there.”
James sighed.
“There’s no reason for us to wait. He won’t attack us as animals.”
“Fine. But we wait in the tunnel until he’s done. You know he doesn’t like us watching.”
“All right! Let’s go.” Sirius grabbed the cloak and headed downstairs.
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Remus started hyperventilating. It was starting. Even though he didn’t remember life before his affliction, the transformation terrified him. Not only did it hurt, but he could also feel his mind slip away. He hated losing control. When he regained human form, he always had a hard time remembering what he had done.
Doubling over in pain as the moon rose, he tried to suppress the cries, but it hurt too much. His body stretched and pinched, and he writhed, unable to control anything. He could feel his mind slipping away; the cries turned to howls as the wolf arrived.
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Anyone who looked out the windows of Hogwarts castle would see a very unusual sight on full moon nights. Thankfully, the castle was dark and all were asleep. Near the Quidditch pitch, three large shapes ran across the grass. At first, one might think that stag was in trouble as two large dogs chased it. A closer look would show that the dogs were not chasing it, but playing with it.
A Muggle would be incredibly confused by this dichotomous sight, but a wizard would immediately suspect magic was at work, and that those animals were more than they seem.
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Remus rolled over, utterly exhausted. As always, he couldn’t remember anything. Shivering, he buried himself deeper against the warm furry mass next to him. Suddenly, that furry mass moved and he opened his eyes. A boy was shaking the dog.
James urged, “Padfoot, we need to get up. It’s nearly morning.”
The dog stretched.
“Hurry up! Madam Pomfrey will be back for me soon. We don’t want to be expelled,” Remus said urgently.
Peter shuffled nervously.
Padfoot finally transformed. “All right, already. There’s still time. See you in a couple of days?”
“Yeah. Thanks, guys.” Sadly, he watched them go.
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I think you are doing a magnificent job with such limitations! I could never, ever write this well in so few words. I think you are keeping everyone in character and I like the way you played out the scene with Severus and Sirius. I also like that you had Remus go to try to apologise, I think that that was something he would definitely have done. Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. It really was challenging to write this story in this fashion. I don't know that I'll be doing something like this again for that reason. Though, it has been quite fun. I do think that Remus would have tried to apologize and I'm glad that you agree with me.
Oh, poor Remus! That would really suck, never remembering much of what you had been doing. Very nicely done!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you so very much,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I always kind of got the impression that before Wolfsbane, he would lose control, and I supposed memory. Writing this fic made me even more sympathetic towards him than I already was.
Another wonderful chapter! You are doing such a wonderful job! It is like you used a time turner to go back and managed to get into his head. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you are enjoying this. It was a real challenge trying to get into his head when you have a word limit. I'm glad you find this characterization realistic. More will be coming soon.
Again, I loved this - I never thought I'd like something written just about Remus, but the way you've written this is very addictive! -Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. I found this addicting to write. It was a lot of fun to really concentrate on Remus, though there is some more Marauder stuff in the next couple, but this remains a predominantly Remus story.
Another great one! I like how you are putting in his feelings about how James and Sirius treated Severus and about how he had misgivings about his friends becoming Anamagi. You capture Remus very well. I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I tried to take the few tidbits we had about Remus's time at school from both Snape's Worst Memory and his own recollections to Harry. I know he felt guilty about his friends and I'm glad to have captured that here.
Another great chapter! You are writing this very well! I really feel for poor Remus! You rock!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. I was trying to imagine how hard it would be to be Remus. We know that he hasn't had an easy life and I wanted to show that it's been that way the whole time, not just once the first war was over.
That was very well done! I am sure that that is exactly how he probably would have felt. Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you very much. I know I responded to the other review for chapter 3, but I did want to thank you for taking the time to comment on each chapter. I liked this one because you really get in Remus's mind.
Oh, is this going to include the one I read on your LJ? That was fantatic! And so is this! I love it. I can imagine how hard it must have been to write it. I don't know if I would be able to pull it off. I can't wait for more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Jen, yup, this will come to include the one I had in the LJ, though it will be marginally reworked, but nothing big, just a few little tweaks as we've seen his transformation in the shack before, no. :)This is truly one of the most difficult things I've written because of the constraints. Telling a whole story in 100 word snippets is hard. That's a very short time to have a scene and then it's on to the next. LOL It was a lot of fun though.
This is really interesting! I love the perspective of this - can't wait to see where it goes! - Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. This has been a really fun fic to write. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Lovely story. I'm so impressed when I read a series of drabbles that make a complete story. I could never do it. Excellent job, my friend. Thanks for sharing with all of us. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Jenny. It wasn't easy. There was so much temptation for me to keep expounding on scenes and make it a much more in depth story, but that would have defeated the point. Not sure I'll do it again, but it was a fun exercise.
Okay, I did leave a review already, but got kicked off line, so I don't think it posted. I think you did a lovely job with this story! I feel really bad for poor Remus, but I am glad that Dumbldore tried to help him and continued to look out for him. You did a magnificent job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to give a bit of a happy ending to someone that's going to have a very rough life. :)
Aw, those drabbles made me have that faith in the Maurarders I had during PoA before I learned the leaders were prats in HBP. Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I had fun with this one adapting a drabble challenge to something unique. I have been thinking about expanding this story to cover Lupin's time at Hogwarts a bit more thoroughly. We'll see what the muses say. :)