Birth of the Marauders
Chapter 3 of 7
phoenixRewritten and expanded! It's tough to be a werewolf in a society where you are misunderstood and feared. How does Remus Lupin, the first werewolf to attend Hogwarts, handle this responsibility? A look at the MWPP Hogwarts years.
ReviewedBirth of the Marauders
After not finding his friends in the common room, Remus headed to the dormitory and saw them huddled around James’ bed, whispering.
“Why didn’t you tell us you’re a werewolf?” asked James
Stunned, Remus replied, “Because I knew you wouldn’t like me.”
Sirius said, “You’ve got it all wrong. We’re friends no matter what. It’s actually really cool.”
“How’d you figure it out?”
“After two years of being gone every full moon? We aren’t that thick,” replied James.
“You don’t hate me?”
“Of course not, mate. We’d never abandon you,” said Sirius
Remus smiled, realizing the Hat had been right.
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“We’ve decided something,” announced James. “It must be lonely when you transform, so we’re going to become Animagi. Peter researched it and werewolves only attack people, so we’ll be safe with you as animals.”
“I can’t let you do that. It’s too dangerous.”
James had a gleam in his eye. “We’ve got it all worked out. Sirius nicked a book from his parents’ library. It’ll be brilliant.”
“It won’t be easy. What if something goes wrong?” He couldn’t let his friends get in trouble.
“I’m top of the class.” James grinned confidently. “Think of all the fun we can have.”
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Remus couldn’t believe what his friends had told him. He couldn’t make them understand. They’d argued until a Prefect said ‘lights out’. James and Sirius wouldn’t budge. They were adamant.
Sirius had showed him the book. It made the transformation process sound simpler than Professor McGonagall’s lecture, a point he had tried to make. Once he realized arguing was futile, he had let it drop. They were his only friends, and he didn’t want to risk losing them. But would this be risking making them like him? He wasn’t sure. He only knew he didn’t want to drive them away.
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While they practiced in secret, they would give Remus regular updates on their Animagi progress. Surprisingly, none of them had suffered any serious harm, though Peter did once have a rat’s tail for two days, and Sirius’ hair became shaggier than normal.
He still couldn’t believe his friends would go through this much effort to make his transformations more bearable. Sirius and James would talk eagerly about finally being able to explore the Forbidden Forest and have free run of the grounds. Remus smiled weakly as he listened to their plans, harbouring unspoken doubts. How could he destroy that glee?
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They’d noticed Severus eyeing them warily and James grew concerned about what the greasy Slytherin knew. No one really liked ‘Snivellus’, so no one said anything when James decided to discourage Snivellus’ snooping.
When Severus retaliated, Sirius joined the fray. Remus knew he should say something, stop his friends, but what? James and Sirius would claim Severus had it coming, and he had been snooping. Deciding there was nothing to be done, Remus remained silent.
It didn’t stop that day. It almost seemed as though James and Sirius were making it a habit, but Remus continued to rationalize their behaviour.
A/N: Isn't it amazing what you can do with 100 word snippets? When I wrote the first five drabbles, I had no idea they would morph into a real story. It's been fun and I hope you are enjoying it. The original ones still haven't been posted, but they will be coming. :)
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I think you are doing a magnificent job with such limitations! I could never, ever write this well in so few words. I think you are keeping everyone in character and I like the way you played out the scene with Severus and Sirius. I also like that you had Remus go to try to apologise, I think that that was something he would definitely have done. Keep up the wonderful work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. It really was challenging to write this story in this fashion. I don't know that I'll be doing something like this again for that reason. Though, it has been quite fun. I do think that Remus would have tried to apologize and I'm glad that you agree with me.
Oh, poor Remus! That would really suck, never remembering much of what you had been doing. Very nicely done!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you so very much,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I always kind of got the impression that before Wolfsbane, he would lose control, and I supposed memory. Writing this fic made me even more sympathetic towards him than I already was.
Another wonderful chapter! You are doing such a wonderful job! It is like you used a time turner to go back and managed to get into his head. Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you are enjoying this. It was a real challenge trying to get into his head when you have a word limit. I'm glad you find this characterization realistic. More will be coming soon.
Again, I loved this - I never thought I'd like something written just about Remus, but the way you've written this is very addictive! -Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. I found this addicting to write. It was a lot of fun to really concentrate on Remus, though there is some more Marauder stuff in the next couple, but this remains a predominantly Remus story.
Another great one! I like how you are putting in his feelings about how James and Sirius treated Severus and about how he had misgivings about his friends becoming Anamagi. You capture Remus very well. I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I tried to take the few tidbits we had about Remus's time at school from both Snape's Worst Memory and his own recollections to Harry. I know he felt guilty about his friends and I'm glad to have captured that here.
Another great chapter! You are writing this very well! I really feel for poor Remus! You rock!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks. I was trying to imagine how hard it would be to be Remus. We know that he hasn't had an easy life and I wanted to show that it's been that way the whole time, not just once the first war was over.
That was very well done! I am sure that that is exactly how he probably would have felt. Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thank you very much. I know I responded to the other review for chapter 3, but I did want to thank you for taking the time to comment on each chapter. I liked this one because you really get in Remus's mind.
Oh, is this going to include the one I read on your LJ? That was fantatic! And so is this! I love it. I can imagine how hard it must have been to write it. I don't know if I would be able to pull it off. I can't wait for more!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Jen, yup, this will come to include the one I had in the LJ, though it will be marginally reworked, but nothing big, just a few little tweaks as we've seen his transformation in the shack before, no. :)This is truly one of the most difficult things I've written because of the constraints. Telling a whole story in 100 word snippets is hard. That's a very short time to have a scene and then it's on to the next. LOL It was a lot of fun though.
This is really interesting! I love the perspective of this - can't wait to see where it goes! - Noelani
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Noelani. This has been a really fun fic to write. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Lovely story. I'm so impressed when I read a series of drabbles that make a complete story. I could never do it. Excellent job, my friend. Thanks for sharing with all of us. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks, Jenny. It wasn't easy. There was so much temptation for me to keep expounding on scenes and make it a much more in depth story, but that would have defeated the point. Not sure I'll do it again, but it was a fun exercise.
Okay, I did leave a review already, but got kicked off line, so I don't think it posted. I think you did a lovely job with this story! I feel really bad for poor Remus, but I am glad that Dumbldore tried to help him and continued to look out for him. You did a magnificent job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to give a bit of a happy ending to someone that's going to have a very rough life. :)
Aw, those drabbles made me have that faith in the Maurarders I had during PoA before I learned the leaders were prats in HBP. Great job!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
Thanks,
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolf Blues)
. I had fun with this one adapting a drabble challenge to something unique. I have been thinking about expanding this story to cover Lupin's time at Hogwarts a bit more thoroughly. We'll see what the muses say. :)