I started at the beginning and read straight through.  The next thing I did was to add this story to my favorites list.  I am so glad I decided to see what Cinderella Snape would be like.  It's going to be a pleasure to follow along and see how Severus, Hermione, and Black get along.Well done!BethPS- From the moment I read that Black had one blue eye and one brown, I knew that he would be special.

interesting - keep up the good work

Against all liklihood, doing nothing has got him the girl!  Let's hope his hangover doesn't make him blow it.

simply wonderful!!!!

hugs and chocolate!!!

Thank you for another lovely chapter. I like it how you made Severus like the smell of bread, I'll read it as part of his healing that he allows himself to enjoy simple pleasures. And that little dig at Harry (when presenting the OoM), kindly done yet very much in character.

"By the next morning, a decision was reached—Severus Snape was leaving Hogwarts for good. He had a new life to live and a witch to find."I love this new and determined Snape! The pic is a perfect accompaniment. This is how I will now and forever invision a post DH Severus. I wish I could hang this on my wall! Have you ever done any with Severus in a mustashe and goatee?

Nice art of grumpy!alan!Snape.  Waiting for his Cinderfella moment.

Heeee.  Poor Snape.

Lovely as ever, thank you!

Aww, a cute ending, and a happy one which I always love! I liked your little story very much. Will we be treated to the second half of the story where he must convince her of the need for a Snape junior?

Snape has changed too much, too easily, and far, FAR too fast. Changes have to occur or there's no story, but he's not Snape any more, and it's only the second chapter.I find I'm not much interested in this insipid fellow wearing Severus's name. My own opinion, of course. Each to his own taste, said the man as he kissed the cow.

Yeah, that was definitely a 'shit' moment. He should have left it at the kiss and not gone for the feel. Well, he has his foot in the door with her, so here's hoping for more.

Good dog. I love that he did decide on the name after checking to see if it was a boy. I'm eager to hear what caused Hermione to change her mind and why on earth she was out all night in the rain.

And that's what he gets for sitting on his hands for a whole year. While it's late, it's not yet too late. Nice to see him show the tiniest bit of compassion for the pup. Wonder if the irony of calling it 'Black' will occur to him?

I like you showing how he grew and change now that he is finally his own man. And I love his epiphany that he doesn't want to teach and finally knows what he wants in life. The part with him not going to the ceremony but then having to deal with Harry instead was great.

I love the insight to his thought process as he's brought back to the land of the living.

Timing's a bit off there, mate. :)

What  a good doggie.  Man's best friend, he is. )

Looks like he might have left his run too late. Poor Severus. 

That Molly, she's such a troublemaker! :)

Nothing like a comforting bosom when you're feeling like crap! :)

Shit! indeed, she will have to come back to return his robe, and retrieve her dress. I don't thing that Severus has lost as much ground as he thinks. 

lol poor chap cant catch a break!! im sure u will remedy this tho!!

hugs and chocolate

Well, he definitely gave her something to think about.  And he will have to see her again to give her dress back...

Black deserves an extra bone, at the very least. Now don't blow it Severus.