Awakening
Chapter 1 of 7
SavvaSome wizards don't get a second chance. Severus Snape isn't blowing his.
I do not own Harry Potter or any of its characters; J. K. Rowling does. In addition, I do not make any profit from this fanfiction. Huge thank you to my betas Valady and AmyLouise.
Cinderella Man
Yeah, I'm not even really supposed to be here right now,
So fuck it,
I might as well make the most of it. *
Awakening
The moment Lily's green eyes, Harry's green eyes, Severus corrected himself, disappeared into nothingness, he relaxed. Here it was: Death, black and calm infinity. There was no pain, no worries, no duties, no sacrifices—nothing but blackness. Severus embraced the peacefulness readily and duly. He had been waiting for it for quite some time.
He was convinced that time was supposed to end in the afterlife, and thus he wasn't sure exactly how long he had been swimming in its all-encompassing blackness. Yet, the moment he felt the first, definite, and outright troubling signs of his returning senses, he knew that he hadn't been drifting there, in that long-awaited sea of calmness, nearly long enough. At least, it wasn't as long as he had anticipated. No peace for me, he thought. Darn, why am I not surprised?
First, he felt a hot, almost burning, touch of hurried fingers on his temples. Then those same fingers ran across his face, and a warm, slightly damp palm was pressed firmly into his forehead. A moment later, his whole face was covered with cascades of hair, with someone's impatient breath tickling his neck. Somebody was feeling for his pulse, he detected with apprehension. Though he had to admit that a heavy mane of hair on his face felt rather nice. It smelled of a peculiar fusion of rain, smoke and cooking oil. Still, Severus found the scent agreeable and even somehow soothing. It was... homey. The word popped up in Severus' mind by itself and shocked him - Homey? What the heck!
"I think I've got him," a loud, boisterous, and painfully familiar voice finally announced triumphantly. Unable to concentrate just yet, Severus couldn't place the voice immediately. Plus, he had no chance to even try because just a breath later... Hmm, a breath, whose breath? Is it I who is breathing? Severus wasn't sure at all when he heard, "Give me that. He needs it!" and a soft, suffocating mass, which Severus, even in his suspended state between life and death, unmistakably identified as a woman's bosom, had replaced the curls on his face, knocking that bloody unknown breath right out of his lungs.
At that moment, he understood quite clearly that he had undoubtedly arrived at his destination. He was in his special, very personal, and apparently perverted hell where all sorts of evil creatures were beginning to taunt him. Surely, elaborated tortures were to follow.
Those dark thoughts didn't last long in Severus' head though, because a millisecond later the bosom's mildly suffocating, yet wonderfully comforting, warmth and heaviness were gone from his face. In its place, an ice-cold cloth was rudely slammed onto his forehead. Unexpectedly zapped with pricking coldness, Severus was forced to open his eyes, only to meet the bright and overly friendly brown eyes of Molly Weasley.
Hell! Definitely hell! thought Severus. However, when a second later he noticed the sight of that same comforting bosom heaving enthusiastically right in front of his eyes, and a soft mass of reddish-chestnut curls held by a touchingly ridiculous scarf, his thoughts suddenly changed to, Maybe not.
Molly gently patted his cheek and said, "Welcome back, darling." Then, she turned her face to someone Severus couldn't see and cooed, "Hermione, honey, take over please, Arthur is waiting for me."
At this, Severus uttered a muffled moan of protest and tried to sit up. An excruciating pain rushed through him in an overwhelming tide, and everything went black and silent once again.
* Eminem/Cinderella Man
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Latest 25 Reviews for Cinderella Man
60 Reviews | 6.28/10 Average
Black was the perfect addition to this story. Bravo.
Oh shit is right Sevvie, my boy. That was not a good idea.
Brilliant start. I love his muddled thought process.
I do not know how often I have read your story, but it never fails to cheer me up, thank you!
Loved it! Bet when he finally mentions junior he finds out that Hermione has been dreaming of that too...
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
:) Absolutely! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my tale!
I do love a happy ending, and this was a very happy ending. thank you
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
Yay! Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Haha, I love the twisted sense of humor he has- thinking he's in hell and more things to follow then he wake up to Molly. Will keep reading!
I really like Pans in this story and her way with Seveurs is delightful. I truly enjoyed the boy's reactions to his situation and their willingness to help their one time professor and Head of House. The meeting with Harry was interesting, and I loved how you conveyed so much in such little ways. Your characters are delightfully in character and so well written. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
Thank you so much for your wonderful review, and I am very sorry it took me so long to respond. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little tale. Yay! Thank you again for your kind words! It means a lot to me !
She came to her senses! No ring, a perfect timing and a medlesome Muggle - Loving this story... just told two friends about it too.
Awwww, he adopted the puppy - but why name it Black? I thought the name Black would stick in his craw?Love the story, Really enjoying it. Your Severus is so adorably lovable in this and yet has all the qualities I love about himGood job!
oh my gosh, this is great! I absolutely love his revelations.
And that protrait - did you paint that? It's amazing! What a incredible talent you have.
Yea light at the end of the tunnel. Loved the Slytherin social club.
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
Yay! Thank you so much!!
I must admit I found the group therapy a bit too straight forward for a bunch of Slytherins but at least it had the desired result. And the picture at the end is gorgeous by the way.
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
Perhaps. They should've stayed quiet and let Severus run in circles. They are cold and indifferent Slytherins after all.
What torture for him ... and again he is saved by walking the dog. I am glad she is smiling. Let's hope this meeting does not end badly.
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
:) Yes, let us hope that Severus will finally make things right. Thank you so much for reading my little tale and even more so for reviewing.
I love the scene with the Slytherins giving Severus an impromptu makeover. I do hope things go well between he and Hermione this time.
Response from Savva (Author of Cinderella Man)
Yay! I'm so glad that you liked that scene. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
/me slaps Severus' naughty, wandering hands...
Shit is right. How could he get so carried away. Still, she let him kiss her, so it would seem that she is interested, it is just too much too soon. Perhaps she likes the dress so much she'll come back for it.
What luck! It's all falling into place so nicely it's as if it was meant to be. And I love the last line!
I love how Pansy found him and saved him from himself. But what was he thinking, not pursuing Hermione. Wait until she is done with school, yes, but what was he waiting for? And the rest of his life is going so well. I hope something can be done!
I love this new determined version of Snape. I wonder if Hermione noticed him noticing her, and if she, too, is missing time with him.
Poor guy. Just when he thinks there will be some peace ... . But it's good for us that he lives, so he'll just have to get over it. :)
This wonderful man deserves a happy ending...I'll say no more.
I love this Snape. Wonderful way to start, with good strong characters. Looking forward to reading the rest.