What was there not to absolutely love about this last chapter?  It was packed so full it could have been more than one chapter. I loved Hermione discovering Severus was alive. I love how each of the girls is able to use their gifts to fight the bad guys. I like how the grown ups trust the kids to help. I love your island and you discriptions were perfect so tha I could picture the battle of the island in my head just fine. I love Severus and I love Hermione. It was cute, humorous, sweet and entertaining.  Thank you for a really fun read.  

Ahhhhh, she's not gonna die. She'd aready be very sick. Severus would be too sad and he'd be stuck with having to get the girls to Austrailia.  I'm sure you'll work this out.  

She's really asking for it!!!!! I do hope she didn't pour his fire whisky out. He deserves some comforts in this life. They don't seem to be managing the post war troubles very well back at home. Sounds like they only have one wizard that can make a portkey. I'm not confident in his comarad's at arms back home ability to handle their (Snapes or their own)problems. People starve on these atolles. I hope they find her bead bag. I like that bag. I think it would be better if Severus came clean to Hermione and she could help him. Expecially if they find her reference books. He is going to have to take a Navy approach to this situation and be the Captin. She needs to respect his authority. This is serious. 

Quite enjoyable and educational. I'm getting up dated on my brit slang and foods we don't generally have across the pond. He seems happy enough and only a little lonely. I think he could use some femenin company, don't you?  I confess I've not seen the movie mentioned in the review on live journal. 

I am very happy to be able to revisit this wonderful story, for the tenth anniversary of TPP. Thank you again for a great read.

well, I liked it, though I do feel sorry fir poor sod what got ate by the wards. that had ti hurt! :)

Lol teenage girls dropping like flies at his feet! but being spotted isn't good! wonder how they'll get out of this now..

Uh oh.. that's not good.

so I find myself wondering what, exactly, marmite tastes like? I mean, I know what it is, but what's it like? have you ever tried it?
love the story so far, especially when Snape can't bear to read out the supply list lol.

Thank you, you took one of my favourite movies of all time , and made it one of my favourite fics of all time .

Oh poor Colin, I loved Hopping Pot. Karma has delivered Severus into the hands of his destiny, now the fun begins.

It is such fun to see Severus as "Father Goose" ,The relationship between Severus and Colin is a surprise, Colin would all but faint if Severus looked his way, but a few years can make a big difference.   

This story was so much fun to read.  Thanks so much for sharing your adventure!!

So entertaining and great fun to read!  I've never heard of the movie, it looks like a must see. I really do appreciate the premise and characterizations of Snape and the the little girls and the unique relationships he had with Colon & Seamus. Now all I need to make me fully satisfied is a lemon (or lime) outtake or oneshot set in the same world!

The end notes would have made all the difference if they were at the beginning of the story.  I had never heard of "Father Goose", so this was just a disjointed mess.

Great story! Now I have to see if my mother has a copy of Father Goose. Couldn't find "foxy" online... still curious though

Good adaptation.  Thanks for writing it.Just some questions about some things I did not understand:1. Who cleaned up the "indisposed" Death Eaters if Neville and Harry went to England with their portkey?  Did the girls take the boat to Australia?  Why didn't Hermione just make a "girly" portkey that the wards wouldn't have noticed?2. What exactly did the fiend fyre do?  Did it burn up the Carrows?  Did it burn up the Horocrux?  Why was it that the wards did not keep it out?  Surely they must have resealed after the Carrows entered.  Would the fyre affect the wards?  Are they down once it went out?3. Why did the Death Eaters want the horcrux in the first place?  No one made any use of a horcrux object the first time Voldemort returned.4. Why didn't Harry pack some basilisk teeth in Severus' supply box?  How was he supposed to "kill" the Horcrux if he found a way to access it?  Could they go back once the fyre is burned out?5. Why didn't Severus strangle Hermione -- or at least slug her -- when she was out of control bossy when she arrived?  He seemed way too passive and she was intolerable.6. Who did the Bulgarian boat belong to?  Why did no one question the presence of spell books on board as indicating that it belonged to the enemy?  And that the enemy had a radio just like theirs

And a fitting end was had by all. Love Father Goose and your version of it will definitely go into my favorites list. ^_^

Lovely story, thank you! Just the thing to make me able to bear the forecasted 30 degrees Celsius today ...

Ahhhh! He thinks she's gonna die. Me thinks it wasn't a poisonous snake at all. Hermione's gonna get drunk. ^_^

I'm thinking "African Queen"

Poor Colin.  That made me sad.

Let me say first that I absolutely loved your disclaimer.  That alone made me want to read your story.

This line: Cilla hit the island two days later with the ferocity of a scorned, premenstrual, chocolate-less female. = AWESOME

Really got into the story and very much looking forward to more.

"Father Goose" by way of Harry Potter...this should be interesting!

Aah! I've seen this movie. Father Goose? Was it Cary Grant? I Can't remember the female lead. Good idea. I like it very much.