Bad Hair Day
Minerva160 Reviews | 7.12/10 (160 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
A chance comment on encountering Severus Snape on a bad hair day leads to mortification (hers), teasing (his) and eventually to Emma, Elizabeth and Simon Granger-Snape.
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I like those out-of-the-question choices for names.
And at the risk of sounding repetitive, I adore your writing!
The wearing of black jeans. Thinking of chocolate. Or Italian teams. Of course. *adores*
*bursts out laughing*
I'm beginning to adore your writing!
This is my favourite chapter so far. There isn't one sentence I don't like, and in fact, there are a lot of sentences I love.
LOL! I can't even begin to imagine how they must have felt encountering each other in the bathroom of all places!
Tempers getting short – I can well imagine...
Wow! That has to be the shortest and most excellent start of a story I've seen! *is totally intrigued now*
awwwww.... so cute!
Nothing wrong or missed regarding the books! It's perfectly logical Hermione would read both or possibly many of Charlotte Brontë and Jane Austen. I am amused by the assumed godson/godfather - so many of us writers want Severus connected familarily with the Malfoys. However, I do like the relaistic view of the Grangers and Hermione's extended family - trust broken is so hard to earn back.
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
Thank you for your long review. I checked the hp-lexicon, you are right of course, Draco is not Snape's godson. Thinking on it it is quite obvious that Lucius would choose someone for his/her connections. But I like to think that the Malfoys were friends of Severus on some level and that he cared for Draco.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh, I totally agree. I have used the 'godfather/godson' relationship between Severus and Draco myself in a story or two. (Plight-Trothed Bride in fact, although not in Self-Writing Parchment or Consequences of Meddling With Time. Im S-WP - Draco os given to Severus as an apprentice because of the Vow between Narcissa and Severus - taken away from Narcissa as punnishment) However, it works well in your story, as it adds a richness in the relationship between Draco and Severus, and as you said, a deeper friendship with the Malfoys. Drawing on the Head Of House being an equalizer of sorts. It works. Am enjoying the story, waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
Thank you for your long review. I checked the hp-lexicon, you are right of course, Draco is not Snape's godson. Thinking on it it is quite obvious that Lucius would choose someone for his/her connections. But I like to think that the Malfoys were friends of Severus on some level and that he cared for Draco.
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Oh, I totally agree. I have used the 'godfather/godson' relationship between Severus and Draco myself in a story or two. (Plight-Trothed Bride in fact, although not in Self-Writing Parchment or Consequences of Meddling With Time. Im S-WP - Draco os given to Severus as an apprentice because of the Vow between Narcissa and Severus - taken away from Narcissa as punnishment) However, it works well in your story, as it adds a richness in the relationship between Draco and Severus, and as you said, a deeper friendship with the Malfoys. Drawing on the Head Of House being an equalizer of sorts. It works. Am enjoying the story, waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Ha!! I love your tale - keep up the good work
I love this story! If she's 30 she's not getting any younger - she should get a move on with those kids! Lol! More please! Gx
Well.... who knew? 
If she is willing to share her chocolate cake, she is already hopelessly in love. Just sayin'.....
Lovely story. Short chapters but I am sure that is the format you selected for a reason. Hope to read more soon!
Grea t story telling, thankyou
Fabulous. fabulous. fabulous. I love this story! Thank you for sharing your humor with us.
Italian fashions, Italian cuisine, etc. ^_^
Obviously, they hardly though of one another if so many things triggered their memories.
I love that he ate her cake. Men love chocolate, they just don't admit it.
Goodness ! I dread to think how he'll respond! (Actually, I can't wait to find out.)
Wonderful! Never have 38 words promised such a good fic. :)
Love it! Keep writing please... and make it last :D !!!
Close your eyes and think of shampoo, Severus!
Shiny, full bodied dark curls eh? Well then, he must do it. For the children.....
"might produce shiny, full bodied dark curls" I'd say he's seriously considering it. ^_^