Chapter 4
Chapter 4 of 11
MinervaA chance comment on encountering Severus Snape on a bad hair day leads to mortification (hers), teasing (his) and eventually to Emma, Elizabeth and Simon Granger-Snape.
Snape had woken up with more aches in his body than usual. His joints had not taken kindly to a three-day encampment in the mud without the benefit of warming charms.
Thankfully hearing no clanking pipes – everyone else was apparently still asleep – he made his way to the nearest bathroom.
A long scratch on his upper arm had bled profusely, and Snape was in the process of peeling down his torn shirt. He did not hear the bathroom door open.
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Children? What children? Granger obviously had not meant to say that aloud. Scrutinizing his lank and matted strands in the mirror, he had to concede that she was right. If Mendel was to be believed, a combination of his and her hair – this morning Granger’s had looked like the inside of a horsehair mattress after inept fifth years had practiced slicing hexes – might produce shiny, full bodied dark curls.
Snape had not seen a lot of Granger during the past years, but when working together with her he had been pleased that she had grown into her own. Gone was the ever-present need to prove herself to the Wizarding World; no longer did she try to make people see her own way of thinking with all the subtlety of the Hogwarts Express in full steam. The Potions Master was quite sure that the old fire was still there, that there still would be some colour coordinated charts in her drawers, but was relieved that he had never been subjected to one of her bossy and impatient speeches.
While he could sympathize with her – having to explain everything twenty times over was not something he liked either – this more restrained behaviour of the MLE official had helped him making the transition from hand-waving-11-year-old to reliable working partner. Working partner, all right, but children?
Snape did not fool himself that Granger might be harbouring romantic feelings for him, but put that uncharacteristic outburst down to three hours of sleep, a mind that would not stop analyzing what it saw and an underlying tendency to voice her thoughts out loud. She was a Gryffindor after all.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Bad Hair Day
160 Reviews | 7.12/10 Average
It's always hard to keep your temper , when you are under stress, especially if your name happens to be Snape.
Stupid review box won't let me review so I have to go to the one that won't let you rate stories. Ugh. Anyways, I liked your little story, except for the last chapter they did seem a little out of character (of course, when do we ever see Snape happy, or professing love?), but I adored your epilogue with the potions accident of "Longbottomish" proportions. Brilliant.
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
You are right. As much as I (and all readers of HGSS, I guess) wish him to be happy or at least content, it is terribly difficult to plot and write AND stay in character. Although JKR leaves a lot to our imagination (thankfully, the books are written for children) about what being a DE-spy means for Severus. Is he mainly at the castle, going to meetings rarely and to raids not at all? While I guess he would feel guilty nevertheless with this scenario it is possible to heal and have a future eventually . Stories like Loten's Post Tenebras, Lux or Chaos Has Come Again (don't know the author) ring true and in character for me but now and again I ran away with a lighthearted plot-bunny like BHD (besides - I haven't the stamina for a serious, novel-length endavour). Thank you!
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
You are right. As much as I (and all readers of HGSS, I guess) wish him to be happy or at least content, it is terribly difficult to plot and write AND stay in character. Although JKR leaves a lot to our imagination (thankfully, the books are written for children) about what being a DE-spy means for Severus. Is he mainly at the castle, going to meetings rarely and to raids not at all? While I guess he would feel guilty nevertheless with this scenario it is possible to heal and have a future eventually . Stories like Loten's Post Tenebras, Lux or Chaos Has Come Again (don't know the author) ring true and in character for me but now and again I ran away with a lighthearted plot-bunny like BHD (besides - I haven't the stamina for a serious, novel-length endavour). Thank you!
Aw, nice happy ending. Well done.
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
Thank you for all your reviews!
Response from Minerva (Author of Bad Hair Day)
Thank you for all your reviews!
Not really a romantic place for a first kiss, but you do what it takes.
Or is it a running gag?
Sounds like they both got a bit of revival from meeting together. And poor Hermione with her family. I can completely understand having relatives you don't want to be around.
I see a chance meeting in the future.
Ah, a budding relationship and it looks like they got over the shock of comments that should have remained un-uttered.
That would definitely leave a person dumbfounded considering they aren't in a relationship beyond occasional coworker. LOL
Ah, a throwback to the beginning. Nothing like sleep deprivation causing you to say something you regret after it's out.
Oh what words might those be? Enquiring minds want to know. And maybe he'll remember to lock the door next time.
You are really good at these little cliffhangers. I wonder what comes of shortened tempers?
Well, that's a get your attention type of start. On to read more.
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Such a sweet, well told tale! I loved it 
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Lovely story. Very enjoyable to read!
Absolutely adorable. This is really a cute story so far.
LMAO, what a response. I think I would be dumbfounded too.
That was magic. Well done! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Chocolate cake, and kisses, a perfect ending. Thank you 
AWWWWW Lovely 
Now for the epiligue. 
MERLINS BOXERS!!! On to the next chapter.
More chocolate cake sharing, in public too, I'm shocked! ,I tell you, shocked!
I wonder who he will meet, in the cafe?