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Seeing Stars
PMmistress12 Reviews | 5.0/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Hermione has been waiting for an excuse to get closer to her former Potions master for some while. An evening of celebratory star gazing might just be the answer ...
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PMmistress
Member Since 2012 | 1 Story | Favorited by 2 | 2 Reviews Written | 36 Review Responses
Just a geeky Severus Snape fan - jealous of his relationship with Hermione Granger (my favourite pairing) - or indeed anyone else!
Reviews for Seeing Stars
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Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you! So sorry about the incredibly long delay in responding - like over a year!! But I've only just been able to access my account again here on TPP! I don't write fan fic anymore (and this was the only one I ever wrote under this pen name) ... life moves on I guess!
Thanks again! :-)
Hot! In a steamy bodice ripper way, but I can live with that.
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you so much for your review - I am SO sorry about the incredibly late response - like over 2 years!!! But I have only just managed to access my account again here on TPP! I no longer write fanfic and haven't since this story (my one and only under this particular pen name - I've written plenty of others under another name!) ... Life moves on I guess!
Thanks again! :-)
Well, that is one way to heat up a night. Hopefully they found time to retire someplace more comfortable than a corridor. ;)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
I'm SO incredibly sorry for the delayed response to your lovely review - like nearly 3 years!!! But I've only just been able to access my account again here on TPP!
This was the only story I wrote under this particular pen name (I've written plenty of others - less erotic! - under another name) and it was also the very last fanfic I ever wrote!! I kind of cringe when I read it now ... but, hey, I guess life moves on!!
Thanks again for reviewing at the time! :-)
Response from phoenix (Reviewer)
Don't feel bad. I kind of had a step away from fandom and I keep trying to get back in, but my motivation isn't quite there. I shouild probably read some more fic to wake my muses up. And I go back and read some of my stuff and cringe a bit, too, so you are not alone. ;)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
I'm SO incredibly sorry for the delayed response to your lovely review - like nearly 3 years!!! But I've only just been able to access my account again here on TPP!
This was the only story I wrote under this particular pen name (I've written plenty of others - less erotic! - under another name) and it was also the very last fanfic I ever wrote!! I kind of cringe when I read it now ... but, hey, I guess life moves on!!
Thanks again for reviewing at the time! :-)
Response from phoenix (Reviewer)
Don't feel bad. I kind of had a step away from fandom and I keep trying to get back in, but my motivation isn't quite there. I shouild probably read some more fic to wake my muses up. And I go back and read some of my stuff and cringe a bit, too, so you are not alone. ;)
thank u!! I had just enough time to read this b4 my meeting..i love quick one shots with this pair .if u have any sugesstions I would love to hear what u think is good...this put the romance and want back into the sex ...thank u again
hugs and chocolate!
-julie
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Sorry about the incredibly long response - like 3 years!!! I have only just been able to access my account here on TPP again!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my little fic - it seems like a long, long time ago now ... I haven't written anything for years!
Thanks again. :-)
P.S. Do you think that chocolate you offered is still OK?! LOL!
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Sorry about the incredibly long response - like 3 years!!! I have only just been able to access my account here on TPP again!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my little fic - it seems like a long, long time ago now ... I haven't written anything for years!
Thanks again. :-)
P.S. Do you think that chocolate you offered is still OK?! LOL!
The story was splendid! Oh to be Hermione! I noticed she barely spoke to him throughout the night. I kept expecting her to say something to let him know his seduction was more than appreciated. I'm assuming her body language was sufficient to encourage this man, who seems would be worried about rejection, to take things as as far as calling her "my love" on the first date, so to speak. He did say he had been watching her. Maybe he also performed a little bit of legilimens on her to find out why she kept finding excuses to ask him potions questions. What ever may be the case, I loved the self confident seduction. I like the magic that lets people see them dancing but not be able to see all of the other things they were doing very much! Of course our gorgeous wizard is also so sexy because he is also quite powerful and able to perform wonderful magical feats. I suppose it would have been quite handy magic for a spy to possess. A brilliant mind and a extremely powerful wizard are about as sexy as it gets. It is especially sexy because he doesn't feel any need to be a show off. He just is. I would like very much to read more of this Severus and Hermione relationship. How many places and how many ways can he take her and surprise her. Do they keep their affair a secret? The game of remaining to appear to be uninvolved would be sexy. Sneaking around is much more fun and naughty even if no one else would care. These two have a high drive for challenge and probably grow bored easily. The game would add a layer if excitement to their otherwise busy but uneventful lives now that The Dark Lord is gone. An excellent piece of erotica and "explicit sexual content". Well done!!!!
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
I'm sure you are going to be shocked at getting a response after all this time - like just over 3 years!!! I've only just been able to access my account again here on TPP!!! I hate not responding to reviewers but obviously haven't been able to up until now!
Thank you SO much for your lovely, in-depth review ... not sure if you're still reviewing these days but I gave up on the fanfic a long time ago. I'd written a lot under another pen name, on here and numerous other sites, but this was the first (and only!) one I'd done under this name - it was also the last story I ever wrote. To be honest, I cringe when I read it now!! But, hey, life changes I suppose and we move on ...
So sorry for the incredibly long delay but thanks again for reviewing at the time!! X :-)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
I'm sure you are going to be shocked at getting a response after all this time - like just over 3 years!!! I've only just been able to access my account again here on TPP!!! I hate not responding to reviewers but obviously haven't been able to up until now!
Thank you SO much for your lovely, in-depth review ... not sure if you're still reviewing these days but I gave up on the fanfic a long time ago. I'd written a lot under another pen name, on here and numerous other sites, but this was the first (and only!) one I'd done under this name - it was also the last story I ever wrote. To be honest, I cringe when I read it now!! But, hey, life changes I suppose and we move on ...
So sorry for the incredibly long delay but thanks again for reviewing at the time!! X :-)
Yummy!!!
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you SO much,
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
!!
"this is not the way I planned it". Love to see the same scenario from his POV! :)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you, sunny! Yes, I did toy with doing a second version from Snape's POV. However, as I'm writing under a pseudonym here and am actually not too keen on this whole particular fic now, I doubt 'PMmistress' will be allowed near quill & parchment in future! ;-)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
You, madam, are just a tease. Pseudonym, huh? :)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Haha! I'm sure Severus would say the same if he knew me ;-) For the record, I don't really want to disclose my real (as in pen) name publically (defeats the object of having a pseudonym really - besides a bit of guess work is good for readers brains I reckon!) However, I'm happy to do so privately if anyone cares enough to ask (which I'm sure they don't!!) :-)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Ah, I see. I thought you must have had another pen name we all knew and were trickin' us! :)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
I don't think 'tricking' anyone exactly was ever in my mind! But you're right in that I'm a regular writer/reviewer on here & elsewhere known by another name. I'm only incognito to avoid detection by my own family (not that they read my stuff anyway!) as this fic is a little more - er, shall we say adult - than my normal work &, silly as it probably sounds, I'd prefer to keep it separate :-)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
I can understand that. Mind you, I deliberately try to squick my boys by reading them what I've written! (They are 17,21, and 22 I might add). They even suggest warped prompts at times. :)
Great story!
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you for your review - my sincere apologies about the incredibly late response - like nearly a year!!! I have only just been able to access my account again here on TPP as I no longer write fanfic. Thanks again! :-)
I usually prefer to read epic-length stories, but I really enjoyed this little interlude. Thanks for sharing even if the real you is a secret :)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you for your review - it's so lovely to get them after a while has passed! I'm really glad you enjoyed my little one-shot :-) And, as for the real me, well that's not so much that I wanted it to be a 'secret' as the fact that I wasn't too keen on various family members being able to track down what I was writing (not that I think they're bothered one way or the other really!!)
Response from Elecord (Reviewer)
I was just teasing about the real you. A good pseudonym can be quite useful.
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
It most certainly can ;-) And I knew you were mentioning the 'secret me' in jest - no offence taken! :-)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Haha! Sorry! I meant to write: 'it most certainly can be (useful)' in response to your "a good pseudonym can be quite useful" - I think I need a beta for my reviews & responses now!!
Response from Elecord (Reviewer)
If that's the worst error you've made all day, I think you're doing alright :)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you for your review - it's so lovely to get them after a while has passed! I'm really glad you enjoyed my little one-shot :-) And, as for the real me, well that's not so much that I wanted it to be a 'secret' as the fact that I wasn't too keen on various family members being able to track down what I was writing (not that I think they're bothered one way or the other really!!)
Response from Elecord (Reviewer)
I was just teasing about the real you. A good pseudonym can be quite useful.
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
It most certainly can ;-) And I knew you were mentioning the 'secret me' in jest - no offence taken! :-)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Haha! Sorry! I meant to write: 'it most certainly can be (useful)' in response to your "a good pseudonym can be quite useful" - I think I need a beta for my reviews & responses now!!
Response from Elecord (Reviewer)
If that's the worst error you've made all day, I think you're doing alright :)
Great narrative! Nice used of images...so much you could almost touch and taste what was described. Thanks for this wonderful, well writen fic. Wish there were more to come!
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you SO very much
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
- I really appreciate your lovely review! As explained to others, PMmistress is just a pseudonym (I normally write under another name) but I have no intention of letting her anywhere near quill & parchment again! I'm afraid there won't ever be more of this particular fic :-)
Response from Sugaryfine (Reviewer)
Oh heck! well actually I didnt mean the same type or line of writing... cause I thing you have a way with words. If you dont mind, could you tell me your other penname so that I can read your other stories (I might have but I dont know!) ...say to my contact ads? Thainks again for such a good story
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you,
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
- what a lovely compliment! I hope you've received the e-mail I sent giving you my other penname. And you have indeed reviewed some of my other work in the past :-)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you SO very much
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
- I really appreciate your lovely review! As explained to others, PMmistress is just a pseudonym (I normally write under another name) but I have no intention of letting her anywhere near quill & parchment again! I'm afraid there won't ever be more of this particular fic :-)
Response from Sugaryfine (Reviewer)
Oh heck! well actually I didnt mean the same type or line of writing... cause I thing you have a way with words. If you dont mind, could you tell me your other penname so that I can read your other stories (I might have but I dont know!) ...say to my contact ads? Thainks again for such a good story
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you,
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
- what a lovely compliment! I hope you've received the e-mail I sent giving you my other penname. And you have indeed reviewed some of my other work in the past :-)
Loved the story. I thought the writing flowed beautifully, and, of course, the plot was just wow. Thanks so much for the wonderful read.
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Aww ... Thank you,
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
, what a lovely review! It's really made my day as a matter of fact; especially as I'd given up on ever getting any more reviews on here. So kind of you :-)
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Aww ... Thank you,
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
, what a lovely review! It's really made my day as a matter of fact; especially as I'd given up on ever getting any more reviews on here. So kind of you :-)
Thank you! I just ran across this and now I think: WOW!!! It seemed like a daydream that met reality, ultimately satisfied.
Response from PMmistress (Author of Seeing Stars)
Thank you SO much for your review ... I no longer write fanfic and haven't since this particular piece (my only one under this particular pen name) so it's lovely to think it's still being read!
Thanks again! :-)
BTW: Do I know you?!