Epilogue – January 1999
Chapter 32 of 32
noodleSeverus has something to show Hermione – with very pleasing results. A birthday lunch provides the opportunity for an important announcement.
ReviewedA/N:
This story would never have happened without Severus Snape, and it is to him that I owe the greatest thanks for the experience of writing this story. It was his original prompt, while I was revisiting The Crystal Cave, that set the whole thing in motion. There I was, reading Mary Stewart's description of young Merlin when suddenly my mindscape was invaded by a rather impatient, insistent wizard whose forceful enunciation of "Sound. Familiar?" precipitated an avalanche of plotting and a personal adventure that I wouldn't trade for worlds.
My sincere thanks also to Justice for beta reading the early chapters, linlawless, who stepped in to help, and TeaOli, who broadened my grammatical horizons fit to leave me speechless (and is probably sorry she ever introduced me to the em-dash), and an unknown number of Administrators form Ashwinder and The Petulant Poetess. Thanks also to AmyLouise for advising me in the proper use of the French language and to bleddyn for verifying my geographical description of the Welsh countryside.
Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to read and to those who have reviewed. I really enjoyed sharing the story with you all.
Hermione's reference to a locked garden and a helpful robin is drawn from The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett (1911).
Pugsley Addams is the property of the cartoonist Charles Addams. I make no profit from his character.
Senior Auror McPhee is adapted from the character Nanny McPhee in the film Nanny McPhee, Universal Pictures, 2005.
Canon characters are the property of J.K. Rowling. I make no money from them.
My thanks and gratitude to my beta, TeaOli, who very kindly offered to beta read several years (!) ago. Tea, your advice, knowledge, wonderful sense of fun, and talent for giving a touch of class made writing, editing, editing, and editing both an education (believe it or not) and pleasure. I salute you!
Eileen heard the cracks of multiple Apparitions and hurried downstairs, excited and apprehensive at the same time, while being thankful that Toby was not too far away. After so many years spent in largely silent contemplation, her confidence with strangers was still a little tenuous. Seeing the number of visitors, she was also relieved that Hermione had legalised her Portkey arrangements to a proper international arrival base serviced by Australian Wizarding Customs and Border Protection and now had a designated Apparition point in an outdoors location.
She need not have worried about her capabilities at offering hospitality; Jean Granger followed, wiping her hands on a kitchen towel.
"Madam Snape, I presume?" a cheerful, grey-bearded wizard called with a genial wave. Behind him, a small retinue of Magibotanists burdened with the paraphernalia of their profession looked about them with expectant delight.
"I am," Eileen answered, remembering to raise her voice a little. "And here is my friend, Doctor Jean Granger."
"Professor Leif Bellamy at your service, mesdames!" The professor bowed gallantly. "I hear that the experimental site is a reasonable hike from here?"
Eileen smiled. "That depends on how fit you are. Toby can do it in twenty minutes, but it takes me nearly half an hour."
"It's quite a pleasant walk after a good cup of tea," Jean said, coming to Eileen's side. "We've just managed to tame a real meatosaurus of a woodstove into producing a decent batch of scones, if you'd all care to join us for morning tea?"
Eileen gave Jean a grateful smile at the very English chorus of "Ooh, yes, please!"
She summoned Tocky, who appeared at once with soap suds clinging to his fingers. "Fetch Toby and Andrew from the work shed, please. Tell them the kettle is on and we have Magibotanical company," she instructed.
"How's the water?" Hermione called.
Severus withdrew his hand from a ceremonial dip in the River Severn. "Bone achingly cold," he called back. Climbing up the bank, he proved his statement by placing his benumbed hand on Hermione's warm cheek, cutting off her shriek of protest with a captivating kiss.
The ninth of January had dawned clear, crisp and bright, and it was still early enough for only the hardiest souls to be out and about. In a daze of complete happiness, Hermione struggled to pay attention to her surroundings. She tore her eyes away from the engagement ring adorning her left hand. Sneaky wizard. You knew I'd never have refused you, especially on your birthday! "It's lovely here," she said, looking across the Severn's shimmering breadth. "It's sad, though, to think that Eileen played by the river with her brother when they were children... but at least they were happy memories. Enough for her to name you after it."
"Hm," Severus responded. "Now that I've personally met the geographical feature, I think it's time to show you what I've been thinking of." He smirked at Hermione's sigh of impatience and firmly took hold of her left hand. "So you don't keep looking at it and fall over something. Come along." He wended along the riverbank in what Hermione suspected was an extended route. Gradually, he began to work his way uphill.
"Harry sent me a letter yesterday," Hermione said, talking to assuage her excitement. "He was feeling a bit glum because he's starting to enjoy working with Senior Auror McPhee, which means that he mightn't have much more time with her."
"He'll have her for a while yet, Hermione." Severus glanced at her wryly. "Inside knowledge," he said in answer to her unasked question. "But he can't keep her Senior Auror McPhee doesn't work that way. She'll go to wherever some goose-cap scapegrace needs her guidance."
"Have you heard any more from Draco?"
"You are getting fidgety, aren't you? Draco leaves for Borobudur tomorrow night. Yesterday evening, Kingsley himself escorted him and Narcissa back from visiting Lucius in Azkaban and then took Draco back to Hogwarts for a few parting words of wisdom from Pugsley and Mr Longbottom."
"Draco's mother doesn't object to him going overseas? I gather she was a bit clingy," Hermione said, recalling Professor Addams' opinion that Draco really needed to get away from maternal apron strings.
"A little. The prospect of an empty nest troubles her, but her compulsory rehabilitation sessions and part-time work at Madam Malkin's will see her through the adjustment."
"Professor Addams has worked wonders with rebuilding the reputation of Slytherin House there's pride there now. Good pride, not the arrogant kind."
Quirking an eyebrow, Severus patiently picked a route through a copse of trees. "Indeed. Pugsley will never take any grief from the stuffier elements of the Pureblood set as some have already found out. Titles and wealth carry precious little weight with him."
Hermione fidgeted with building anticipation. "Wasn't it good news for Petrus?"
"Yes, Irma and Minerva said that he now enjoys something of a rock star status with the students."
Hermione frowned quizzically. "Does he? I was referring to the Ministry granting him full rights as a British citizen so he can travel whenever and wherever he wants to but he said he really loves the library and wants to stay there. He's even got a dual nationality passport, now. And a Gringotts account!"
"Being a paid staff member, he'd have to put his earnings somewhere," Severus pointed out with exaggerated patience.
"And Madam Pomfrey says that Moaning...Miss Myrtle is a lot happier now that she has Paulus to float around with. They've been inseparable Madam Pomfrey told me that they're a tremendous help to the younger students who need someone to talk to about the war. Or just school in general."
Rolling his eyes, Severus pushed through a ramshackle hedge and murmured an incantation. The air ahead of them rippled and settled.
Hermione gasped.
"I've put a holding deposit on it," Severus explained. "Of course, I need to know that you're happy with it before we proceed any further."
"It's gorgeous!" Hermione breathed, taking in the two storey stone house, a row of walled gardens, and a view across the Severn into England. "Was this your mother's family home? I wonder if one of those gardens has been locked for years and years and only a robin redbreast can help find the key?"
"You haven't seen inside, yet," Severus cautioned, handing her a small bundle of keys. "No, this wasn't where she lived it was a few miles downriver and was demolished over a decade ago. This property has been under Muggle ownership for over a hundred years. No resident ghosts or house-elves," he clarified as Hermione eagerly opened the door. "It's been extended from its original two-up-two-down construction which was built by a tea and spice merchant as a holiday retreat and, I suspect, to strategically stockpile merchandise but most of the original features are still in place. As for the gardens, I haven't found any of them to be locked. And why would you require a robin's assistance when Alohomora would do the job far more efficiently?"
Hermione smiled happily as she went inside. "It's just a story I read, once. Actually, I read it so many times that the book fell apart."
For a moment, Severus lingered at the front door, listening with growing satisfaction to the rapid, shallow echo of Hermione's footsteps in empty rooms and her delighted exclamations over stone fireplaces, mullioned windows, exposed oak beams, and the tasteful incorporation of modern conveniences. He sauntered into the hallway and braced himself as Hermione charged down the stairs and flung herself at him, covering him with kisses and words of love.
"But will it be the right choice for you, Severus?" she asked, catching her breath. "You said you wanted a laboratory for your potions work."
"Present and accounted for," Severus affirmed. Leading her into the kitchen, he opened a wardrobe-sized cupboard and lifted a hatch concealed in the floor. "Lumos."
Hermione counted thirty steep steps before reaching the floor of a generously proportioned, stone-lined room. The air carried the faintest scent of black tea, cloves and bergamot. "I can picture this with workbenches, mazes of glassware, row upon row of neatly labelled, impeccably ordered ingredients and softly simmering cauldrons," she said. "It's you, Severus."
"Thank you, m'lady," Severus intoned with a half-bow. "Bewitching and sensually ensnaring as that vision is, I was thinking of housing something else in here as well." He pointed to a featureless side wall. "The dragon mosaic from the villa would fit perfectly there. I can't, in all conscience, leave such a work in the open air."
"Nor should you!" Hermione agreed. "It's part of your heritage. What's going to happen to the rest of the villa?"
Severus wrapped his arms around his witch and held her close. "Now it's part of your heritage as well, my dear. Oriens is taking care of the villa. He's having it incorporated into an existing nature reserve as a protected area for the staged reinstatement of magical creatures which will also give an extra layer of protection to the link to Merlin's cave. And, apparently, there's a pair of pine martens living by the villa now, which delighted Oriens greatly." He held her at arms' length to look into her eyes. "Are you happy with it?"
"I am, Severus. It feels like home already."
"Good. Now there's just the nuptials to get through," he said through a sigh of sufferance. "We should have a centaur-style ceremony," he teased, thinking of Firenze's description of what would take place as, on Bane and Esnyë's behalf, the palomino centaur invited Severus and Hermione to the springtime celebration. "It would be far less fuss."
"Yes, I'll just quickly go and build a stone circle out the back complete with a crystal heart stone. Then we'll stand before the heart stone, and you shall place thereon a sprig of holly, and I'll put beside it a sprig of ivy, we'll pledge each other in mead, feast all day and consummate our vows under the stars," Hermione replied evenly while wandlessly casting a rather complicated charm.
Severus raised his eyebrows. "Firenze didn't say anything about consummation." Glancing upwards, he beheld a velvety night sky dotted with bright stars and animated constellations.
"Ah, but if we really did have such a ceremony...," Hermione murmured, seductively running her hands down his chest and stomach.
Severus felt his pupils dilate as her quick fingers found a path to his skin. He hoped that he would never lose the sense of amazement that came with the very physical evidence of being desired and loved it was like a secret ingredient that enhanced the passion of his response. Now there's a bit of glory that cannot be bottled, he concluded before his rational mind went elsewhere.
Having cleaned, oiled, and neatly stored the tools he had first arrived in Australia with, Toby clattered up the stairs for lunch, remembering to leave his boots at the door and reminding Andrew to do the same. "Just shake 'em out when y' want to put 'em on again," he advised. "The spiders 'round 'ere could eat an Acromantula for breakfast."
"Yes, I met one of them behind the bathroom door last night you don't have to convince me." Andrew spread his fingers to show Toby that the spider known as a grey huntsman easily measured a handspan. "It was a good idea to hide out in the shed," he said, catching a glimpse of the perfectly laid table and neatly transfigured interior. "The ladies have been busy, and I have a real knack of getting under foot."
"Yeah, same 'ere."
"Besides, rebuilding that old Triumph's engine was far more interesting. I've never done anything like that before! Arthur will be delighted at how well it's come up."
"I 'ope so. 'E wants to get t' whole thing ready for that Potter bloke's weddin' in June, I think 'e said. Plenty of time, yet." Toby stepped inside and shook his head in wonder. "Look at this... I wouldn't recognize the place from what it was yesterday. Magical coolin' and all." He accepted a tankard of chilled pumpkin juice from Tocky, then blinked at a loud crack from outside. "Gunshot, Apparition, or another bloody gum tree droppin' a branch," he said as Eileen and Jean rushed to the window to look.
"Apparition," Andrew affirmed as he listened in on the women's excited whispers. "The birthday wizard has arrived..."
"It's the tenth today," Toby groused airily.
"Steady on, Toby, he's a wizard, not a Time Lord. He's arrived exactly when he said he would. Our young folk would've had a lot to do, I suspect, and there are some things you just shouldn't rush," Andrew said with an indulgently hopeful smile. "Look! Hermione is glowing! Good Lord, Severus looks so different when he smiles I'd say he's gone ahead and asked her."
"Smilin' is 'e? Quick! Take a photo!" Toby sneaked a look at the couple over Eileen's shoulder, affectionately sliding an arm around her waist. "If Sev'rus ain't scowlin', she must've said yes. Good on you, lad!"
Severus took Hermione's left hand, holding it so that the yellow gold of the summer sun burnished the white gold of her engagement ring and made the three small, practically sensible diamonds sparkle merrily.
Hermione watched him study the tiny rainbows of dancing light and smiled. "Some would say there's magic in that," she said.
Severus gave a half-smile and tucked her hand into the crook of his arm. "They're probably right. But I always knew that there was more to magic than foolish wand-waving."
Together, they made their way to the house, where two sets of parents eagerly awaited their news.
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I have read this before and loved it. I have just finished reading it again and find I still love it!
Wow, what a stunning story, and well written! Genious how you melded the Merlin saga into this story,and based on my favorite novels of Mary Steward. I loved this..took some time to read, but worth all of it! Thank you!!!
aww, I love happy endings to stories. :) thank you for sharing it with us, I quite enjoyed reading it!
so, I feel like I missed something. what eileen saw while they were taking about Hermione's heritage, the woman in the dress and cape, who is she?
so... methinks sister Clairice isn't who she seems?
yay, glad they might finally do something for Petrus! the quip about Minerva hiring a gargoyle would be hilarious if it came true!
So, I'm curious if Dragon's Spur and Duboisea are real Australian plants, or merely imaginative? I've never heard of either before. :)
This is my second time reading this...and yep...I still love it. Congrats on a great fic! :D
I love this story. I have also read and enjoyed the stories about Merlin too, and this story really brings them together beautifuly Have you ever been to Abergavenny? I highly recommend visiting the Anglican church and Priory. It's famed as the'Westminister of Wales'. ps, I know, I live there.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
You live there? Squee! I've never been there so I hope I didn't mangle any facts (Cuthbert would haunt me - trust me, he's worse than back-to-back staff meetings with a half-day workshop on acronyms). If I do get over there one day, I'll have to go on 'pilgrimage' and pay my respects properly. I loved Mary Stewart's Merlin trilogy, those books helped me recover from exams on several occasions :o) Thanks for reviewing and keep an eye out for Welsh Greens!
Response from mea (Reviewer)
We also have a castle keep with a musem in it. If you're interested in efegies there are a few in St. Mary's church right next to the referbished St. Mary's Priory. If you like tapastries, they have, in the priory, a very long tapastry done by local ladies all about Abergavenny. Come and have a look!
This has been, hands down, one of the very best fanfic stories I have ever read. Let me clarify - one of the best stories! I love the blending of Merlin and Nimue, Petrus, the dragons, the centaurs! Just so much of it was amazing.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it even though it did take years (!) longer than I thought. As said in the A/Ns for the epilogue, it was Severus who pointed out the Merlin connection - and he's not the sort of inspiration one argues with ;o) But it was good to give the centaurs their moment (in Canon, they seemed a bit looked-down-on), and of course dragons are very misunderstood. There's more to 'em than this malarkey about dragon-you-inter-their-cave-and-eatin'-you (thanks, Hagrid)!
I've just finished reading this whole story - and oh, how immensely satisfying it is! This is such a splendidly solid and coherent world, interwoven with such lucidity and balance. I particularly liked your version of Tobias, and Petrus is a delight. Hermione and Severus work very well together, and I was very much impressed by your sheer attention to detail.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Thank you for your kind words and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed reading. I'd originally set out to do something a bit different in SSHG and if I've succeeded in that, well, I can only be happy about it :o)
I normally review long fics at least every other chapter... however, I was reading this offline and was not able to review that often. I did want you to know that I read your fic and thoroughly enjoyed it. It had intrigue, and adventure, and romance and best of all....Crookshanks!!!!I LOVED him in this fic. He made me giggle everytime!I Loved This Fic!--his
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Thank you for reading and enjoying :o) Crooks has a way of threading his presence through a story (and no doubt leaving shed hairs for readers to appreciate). There were a couple of passages when he'd appear from nowhere and I'd be obliged, as a mere human, to write his (half) Kneazle Majesty into the scene.
I can't recall the title of one fic I read a long while ago, but in it Crooks magically made himself heavier while sitting on Hermione's lap - thus ensuring that she couldn't get out of her chair! That still makes me laugh 'cause I'm certain felines can really do that ;o)
What a wonderful chapter!!! So many pieces of seeminly unrelated facts have fallen into place to create a firm foundation for the Light to have defeated the Dark.The way Severus found his way to the Dark side because of the planted book explains a lot about the "how could this have happened?" we've all wondered about at least once.The lineage of both of Severus' parents was a splendid revealation, and I'm wondering what we may yet find out about Hermione's and Petrus' ancestry.I think Tocky speaks the truth about the greatest magic of all: "Love’s bonds is letting magic flow, and love is magic that is lasting forever.”Well done, and now I'm off to read the epilogue. Beth
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hello Beth!
Thank you! I'm relieved that it all came together :oP
Yes, I wondered how Severus, while still so young, reportedly knew a good (or bad) many curses by the time he got to Hogwarts - and not just the language kind! (But he assures me that he could "let rip" with fine style from a very early age). Sirius had a hide pointing that out - the little snot - in Canon that really annoyed me. What colour did the pot call the kettle, hmmm?
House elves are a very ancient race and, in spite of their usually subservient nature, I think they're actually very wise. But then how often has quiet wisdom been ignored because Pride and Superiority shout it down? Treat your House elves well - the benefits will extend well beyond the physical neatness of your household ;o)
This has got to be one of my all time favorite stories now! It's so very well written and I love your original characters! I could not help but think of Toothless when ever I was reading parts with Petrus. Love love love it :D
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you very much :o) LOL I had the flying theme from How to Train Your Dragon running through my head while the Hebridean gave Severus and Hermione a lift back to Scotland. Delighted you enjoyed the story and it really was a pleasure to write.
I'm so sorry for the double review, my computer is having a hissie fit.
It's over I will truely miss not seeing an update for " A Place in the World " in my in-box. You have taken us all on a wonderful adventure, full of magic and mystery. Now at the end of the road, everyone has indeed found their place in the world, from little Tocky finding his true family, miss Myrtle and Paulus as ghostly therapists, the centaur herd made whole again, Toby and Eileen together, Petrus a British citizen, and happy in the library, Draco on his way healing and wisdom, even the dragon mosaic has a place, and last but never least, Severus and Hermione together as they should be. How you have managed to keep so many elements in balance and keep us all so enthralled leaves me in awe thank you so very much for this lovely story, it is one that I will be reading again and again.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi Mick! Well, if you do read it again I hope it keeps you happily entertained :o) I'm pleased that you enjoyed the adventure ('cause writing it certainly was), and would quote a well-known venerable Hobbit on the subject of ending roads:
"Roads go ever ever on Under cloud and under star, Yet feet that wandering have gone Turn at last to home afar. Eyes that fire and sword have seen And horror in the halls of stone Look at last on meadows green And trees and hills they long have known."
(From The Old Walking Song by B. Baggins)
And all is well in the world, with a place for everyone, even Petrus, Draco and the other post-war Slytherins, and Miss Myrtle who is no longer moaning. Even Toby and the Grangers have a place in the magical world. Happy sighs!!THYANK YOU for this wonderful and detailed story! I realize it was a huge commitment of your time, and I hope you feel accomplished - as well as encouraged to continue writing. You created some intriguing characters and a fascinating set of circumstances. Well done, you!
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you, June - yes it did take a couple of years longer than I thought it would, but then when I sketched out the plot I was naive enough to think I could do it in 8 - 10 chapters ~facepalms~. The characters, however, had other ideas and it was either do as they instructed or get Imperio'd ;o)
This was a marvelous ending, with the two sets of parents getting on so well and Hermione and Severus settling down in a lovely old house on the Severn. I'm impressed that you managed to work in so many other happy endings, too. But most of all, Noodle, thank you a million times for this lovely story, which I've now re-read and re-read and always find new things and ideas in. It is a real achievement.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Glad you enjoyed the story (and found it here of TPP after t'other site crashed) and the happy endings. As I said in the A/Ns, writing it was certainly an experience that I'd never, ever trade. Thanks again for reading and reviewing :o)
Loved it so! Like I said before, one of the two best stories I've ever read...really...and i've read A LOT of stories...Thank you so very much!
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you very much for reading and enjoying - it's a pleasure to have a completed story to share :o)
Aww, so very sorry to see this end. It's been such a joy to read and anticipate.Guess I'll just have to start over again from the beginning! :-)
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you! I've really enjoyed writing it - even more so for having completed the story ;o)
What a lovely chapter! I am so happy that Severus and his mother can be close again. This opportunity for his entire family to be made whole is a rare gift and I hope all will be well. I like the idea of Purrin' Therapy. Little Southpaw even healed Severus' irritated and irascible mood with only a look. There are days when I think I would be better off if I had a half-Kneazle to purr away my moods.I wonder what will happen at the Gobstones match? Will Eileen want to play, too? That will be interesting, and I just bet she could beat the socks off all of them!Beth
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you Beth! I like the idea of Purring Therapy to a ridiculous extent - a cup of tea and a purring feline, what good medicine :o)
Well something does happen at the Gobstones match, but Severus doesn't want to talk about it ;o)
Cheers
Shell
Severus and Hermione"honorary dragonets", made me smile. Then Hermiones fairwell to the old dragon,brought a tear to my eye. Severus' reaction to Minerva's hug was priceless, as was the dragon's laughter. The centaur herd is whole again, that can only be a good thing. Toby and Eileen are getting to know eachother again, they are different people now, it would be nice if they could be friends. Hagrid is the same as ever, a Barghest called Petal of all things, he will never change thank goodness. It was wonderful to see Severus able to let go of all the pain and anger of the past, and forgive his mother.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi mick! No doubt Hagrid will tell you that the Barghest is a very misunderstood creature and they really don't deserve to be called "Old Shuck" and all sorts of other nasty names. As for snatching solitary travellers off the moors, well, they get lonely, don't they? They don't do any harm, they just want some company. And they love to play. Not the Barghest's fault if someody goes and faints with fright...
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway
I think Severus approves of that quote ;o)
I've been wanting to say before I move on that I have visited the Notre Dame Cathedral once many years ago. You must have been there yourself to write about it as you have. I have never had a similar experience before or since. I saw several cathedrals during my visit to Paris but my visit to Notre Dame was exceptional. As I walked through the doors into the sactuary, my vision was immediately dawn upward, and my eyes burst into tears as I was unexpectantly and immediately overcome by emotion. It was incredibly beautiful but more than that, it was awesomely spiritual; but what would make a person's heart feel like bursting all of the sudden without warning? I did feel the presense of The Living God in that place. There are not words to discribe my feelings. It was only after the first burst of emotion that swept over me just entering the sanctuary that I was able to be awed by the fact that I was standing where so many rare and podigious others had stood, in who's footsteps I'm not fit to trod. There is something different and special about that particular cathedral. And I'm happy to say that after almost having a heart attack from walking up the many stairs to the bell tower in awe of the worn steps where so many other priests and pilgrims had trod for hundreds of years, I was able to reach out and touch a gargoil. It was fantastic! I also don't think I had ever been that high before, if you don't count jet liners. There is definitely something different and special about that place.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
It sounds like your visit to Notre Dame brought you a touch of Grace, which is a very great thing to experience - one that will be remembered forever. And yes, I have been there. I'd done a project on Notre Dame when I was in high school, so it was with a peculiar sense of familiarity with which I explored the cathedral in real life over a decade later. Something that did bring me great joy (and Petrus too, when he read the news) was that after I started writing this story, eight new bells were cast for Notre Dame, along with a new Great Marie to reside in the south bell tower, and their voices tuned to sing with Emmanuel. To hear Notre Dame in full voice while within its walls... What words could describe it?
Let me know if the follwing link doesn't work out of TPP. It's the inauguration of the new bells. In the video of the ceremonies, the bells begin to sing at 58:02 beginning with Emmanuel himself, who seems to call the other bells to wakefulness. There surely can't have been a dry eye in Paris!
You are exciting and wonderful in this chapter! I love the dragons and I love the Kozacs interaction with Hermione. Great battle scene! It's so wonderful that our beloved Severus is able to garner the entire wizarding world's strength by his honor and relationship to Merlin. He is humble though. So is Kingsley. Great wizards, they are. And Hermione doesn't realize she's probably going to go down in history for her battle from the back of a dragon and being the mate of Merlin's heir in the battle of the Dementors rather than Harry Potter's best mate. I like it! I love the revelation that Sister Clarise is Eileen Prince-Snape. How long do I have to wait for the rest of he story, my noodle?
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
And thank you again! Glad you enjoyed it :o) I dare say Hermione will feature in many songs and legends of the future (especially among the Kozaks, to whom tales and legends are a vital part of life).
“I have three precious things which I hold fast and prize. The first is gentleness; the second is frugality; the third is humility, which keeps me from putting myself before others. Be gentle and you can be bold; be frugal and you can be liberal; avoid putting yourself before others and you can become a leader among men.” Lao Tzu
First, Yehy for Ronnald!!!!! YOU GO BRO! Regarding the bells, there is a youtube video with the "Harry Potter Theme" (Hedwig's Theme) played on the Univeristy of Rochester Carillon bells. It could be the background music for the battle but times it by 10. I love house elves! Toby has no idea how lucky he is to have little Tocky as his friend for life! Hermione will just have to adjust to the fact that he serves the Snape Family. Severus is so brave to stand still for the attempted dementor attack. Are you ever going to tell us the origin of Petrus?
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Yeah, I think Ron gets a bit of a pasting in Fanfiction. He's not that bad, really, and I think he'll grow up to be a very good and decent man... but he's just not the one for Hermione ;o) Perhaps Hermione has come to terms with the fact that house-elves really do need to serve - it's their nature after all - but they should never be mistreated.
In every life, in every story, there are perhaps the things that should remain the mystery, non?