Prologue – Spinner’s End, June 1960
Chapter 1 of 32
noodleApart from it being an artefact of considerable antiquity, no one at the Department Of Mysteries could determine what it was. It was taken from the body of a slain Death Eater at the first fall of Voldemort and was, undeniably, of magical origin. Unable to extract its secrets, and unwilling to risk further experiments, the Unspeakables consigned it to the vaults. Or so they thought. Only one wizard may provide the answer, but he has no idea of his connection to it.
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An on-line translator was used to translate English into Welsh
Llygad y Ddraig - Eye of the Dragon
hello, neis i gyfarfod â chi - hello, nice to meet you
This is not intended as a cross-over fic. Some scenes, objects and places from Mary Stewart's Merlin Trilogy are used as plot points in this fic and will be properly cited when used. At no time do Ms Stewart's characters interact with Ms Rowling's characters. Familiarity with Ms Stewart's work is not at all necessary.
The passage that Toby reads is a summarised and re-worded scene from pages 19-20 of "The Crystal Cave" by Mary Stewart (1970), in which a six-year-old Merlin meets his uncle Camlach.
Canon characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, and I make no money from them. Many thanks to Justice for beta-works.
Eileen heard the crack of an Apparition and hurried downstairs, frightened and furious, but at the same time thankful that Toby was not at home. All emotions faded instantly to dumb shock as she looked upon her brother, who dropped to his hands and knees in front of the fireplace with a gasp of pain.
"Drusus, what happened?" Eileen ran to him and grasped his shoulders, pushing him up so she could look into his face.
"Cruciatus Curse. They know, Eileen, they know I have the Llygad y Ddraig."
"How?" she whispered, with a sense of creeping horror that the inevitable was unfolding.
"Betrayal from within our family; the traitors who practice the Dark Arts have finally succeeded. They are looking for me as we speak; I need to leave it with you. I will be the decoy and draw their attack. You must keep it hidden."
Eileen shook her head as the implications of her brother's news chilled her to the bone. "I can't."
Drusus grasped her hand. "You have to; it is a duty of our family. They will not look for you. There is no traceable evidence that you still exist, let alone where you are. Not even the Ministry knows. Eileen, if the Llygad is taken the dark will prevail without resistance; I curse the day our forbears ever got involved with their arts!" Drusus scowled at the fireplace and shuddered. "I don't have much time," he said, looking at her with tenderness.
He had been the only one who had not completely erased Eileen from memory, the only one who had not regarded her flight from an arranged marriage as an unforgivable insult. Indeed their patriarch would have killed her if Drusus had not smuggled her out of Wales and devised a means to keep her hidden.
While he was surprised at her marriage to Toby, whom she had met at a Muggle dance hall nearly two years ago, he unreservedly gave her his blessing. He approved of anything that helped maintain her cover. For Eileen, Drusus was the last link to her past, the last thread of her roots. She knew with a deep dread that he would soon be gone.
Drusus took something from inside his robes and lifted a silver chain from around his neck. He placed the object on the floor. At the end of the chain was a disc of pale blue multi-faceted crystal. Two silver dragons circled its edges, their tails linked at the bottom and their jaws grasping the chain.
"Eileen, you were always better than me with your charms. Make as precise a duplicate of this as you can. I will carry the copy; you take the original."
Eileen nodded tearfully. There was no escape from this. "And when they find your copy does not work?" she asked warily.
"It will be a long time before they attempt to use it. Things are not ready; they are still gathering their forces. There will be war, I know it. They will only attempt to use the Llygad when they have everything in place. The best we can hope for is the light will prevail before then, and we must help them to do just that." He watched his sister move quietly to the bookshelf and select a nondescript volume from the bottom shelf. Opening it, she produced her wand, knelt in front of Drusus with the object between them, and began the incantations.
The resulting copy was excellent. Drusus passed his hands over it, searching for any tell-tale flaws. Even the protective charms and wards were installed, giving the duplicate an aura of power that tingled in his fingertips. Without extensive diagnostics, the only way to tell the fake from the original would be when it failed in its task.
A muffled noise issued from an adjoining room, and Drusus was on his feet in a second with wand drawn. "It's alright," Eileen told him softly. She walked through the door and out of sight for a moment. Drusus held his breath as he heard her talking to someone, then felt his jaw drop open as she reappeared and approached him, carrying a child no more than six months old.
"You didn't tell me..." he began. He continued apologetically, "I guess you had no way to find me." His eyes brightened suddenly. "Well? What have we got? Boy or girl? Any magical abilities?"
"He's only six months old! It's way too early to tell if he'll be a wizard. For all our sakes I hope not. I hadn't planned on..." She shook herself and continued, "Severus Tobias Snape, meet your uncle, Drusus Ambrosius Prince."
Drusus took the infant from her and held him up for a moment. "Hello, neis i gyfarfod â chi." The raven-haired child stared at him, dark eyes rounded with curiosity. "He's definitely one of us," he chuckled, placing his nephew carefully on the hearth rug and disengaging a lock of his own raven hair from a surprisingly strong grip. "What do you think of these?" he asked, dangling the two objects above him. Severus reached out, eyes and hands trying to catch the tiny rainbows of dancing light refracted from the crystals.
"Drusus, stop it, he doesn't need to know this, any of it." Eileen was holding back tears with a heroic effort as she knelt beside him. Her brother placed an arm around her and pulled her close into a hug, keeping one hand free to entertain a fascinated Severus with the glittering counterfeit.
"It's his heritage, Eileen, as much as it is yours and mine. Our family did not always have a reputation of allegiance with the dark; perhaps one day we will be free of it but that freedom will not be won through ignorance. The Llygad y Ddraig was with us generations before the road toward evil was taken. It is a miracle we who follow the light have kept it secret within our own family for so long." He looked at her with immeasurable grief in his eyes. "Until now." He shook his head before continuing. "Like it or not it is inseparable from our family until the day it is returned to the rightful owner, and you have not forgotten why that is, have you? Or to whom it belongs?"
"That story is a dream or a fairy tale: only a fool would believe there is any truth in it," Eileen snapped viciously.
"Dreams may reflect reality; fairy tales are often based on fact: both can be instructive."
Relenting, Eileen placed the Llygad around her neck, more for her brother's sake than any desire to carry it. She would find a safe place for it later so Toby would not ask any questions. Her brother engulfed her in a desperate hug. It was time for him to leave. "I love you, Eileen. Remember that always."
"Drusus, my brother and best friend, I never doubted it. I love you too. Don't forget me."
"Never." He picked Severus up and prodded him in the chest. "You, Severus, you look like a wizard to me, one of considerable power. Be brave and be careful, little falcon." He kissed them both and placed Severus in his mother's arms. When Eileen looked up through her tears, the space he had occupied was empty. They would never see him again.
Toby clattered through the front door, ditching his tool bag and work boots as he strode into the sitting room. The house was quiet, as it usually was, even after Severus was born. The boy rarely made a sound, and when he did he was far from raucous.
Toby was pleased to see the fire had been lit. Rain and fog had drifted in during the early evening and, though it was summer, things were a touch raw outside. A scrap of something smouldering to one side of the grate caught his eye, and he fished it out carefully. It was not paper, or fabric, or any substance he knew of. There was writing on it, smudged by soot and ash, in a flowing ornate script that reminded him of the signage used to attract tourists to stay at pubs. Frowning, he read what was left of the words.
My uncle called me to him, there in the room where I sat with my mother. He was tall and golden-haired, a warrior and a son of the King. I walked to him bravely even though my heart trembled. His blue eyes were fixed on me with an expression that was not unkind, so different from the suspicious glances that I was used to receiving. I heard my grandfather speak aloud, saying that a child such as I, black-haired and black-eyed, so different from the rest of the family in form and nature, was surely a bastard whelp of the Devil. I gave no heed to his words and did not pause until I stood before my uncle, who asked of me my name.
"Myrddin," I answered, and boldly looked him in the eyes. "I am called Myrddin Emrys."
My uncle looked at me with interest. "Emrys? Child of the Light?"
"Yes sir, I am told that is what it means." I began to feel as though I had found an ally.
My uncle turned from me and spoke to my grandfather, saying that I bore an unusual name for one reputed to be the spawn of evil. He had sight of the truth when he mused that this supposed Devil was in fact a man: a Roman.
Toby's first reaction was to dismiss this as discarded rubbish, although he looked in the grate again to see if any other scraps were left. There were none. He was a little disappointed; it might have been a good read. He wondered if Eileen wrote it. While she never spoke of her family, she had mentioned once that her colouring was a strong family trait. Colouring like the boy in the remnant of a story. His son had his mother's hair and eyes. Was Severus the inspiration for this Myrddin lad? He snorted: things women do when they get fanciful! His eyes were drawn to one of the bricks lining the back of chimney; he could see the edges clean of soot. He would check it when the fire died down. Toby read the passage again before folding it carefully and tucking it into a hidden pocket on the inside of his belt. He did not even wonder why he did so.
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I have read this before and loved it. I have just finished reading it again and find I still love it!
Wow, what a stunning story, and well written! Genious how you melded the Merlin saga into this story,and based on my favorite novels of Mary Steward. I loved this..took some time to read, but worth all of it! Thank you!!!
aww, I love happy endings to stories. :) thank you for sharing it with us, I quite enjoyed reading it!
so, I feel like I missed something. what eileen saw while they were taking about Hermione's heritage, the woman in the dress and cape, who is she?
so... methinks sister Clairice isn't who she seems?
yay, glad they might finally do something for Petrus! the quip about Minerva hiring a gargoyle would be hilarious if it came true!
So, I'm curious if Dragon's Spur and Duboisea are real Australian plants, or merely imaginative? I've never heard of either before. :)
This is my second time reading this...and yep...I still love it. Congrats on a great fic! :D
I love this story. I have also read and enjoyed the stories about Merlin too, and this story really brings them together beautifuly Have you ever been to Abergavenny? I highly recommend visiting the Anglican church and Priory. It's famed as the'Westminister of Wales'. ps, I know, I live there.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
You live there? Squee! I've never been there so I hope I didn't mangle any facts (Cuthbert would haunt me - trust me, he's worse than back-to-back staff meetings with a half-day workshop on acronyms). If I do get over there one day, I'll have to go on 'pilgrimage' and pay my respects properly. I loved Mary Stewart's Merlin trilogy, those books helped me recover from exams on several occasions :o) Thanks for reviewing and keep an eye out for Welsh Greens!
Response from mea (Reviewer)
We also have a castle keep with a musem in it. If you're interested in efegies there are a few in St. Mary's church right next to the referbished St. Mary's Priory. If you like tapastries, they have, in the priory, a very long tapastry done by local ladies all about Abergavenny. Come and have a look!
This has been, hands down, one of the very best fanfic stories I have ever read. Let me clarify - one of the best stories! I love the blending of Merlin and Nimue, Petrus, the dragons, the centaurs! Just so much of it was amazing.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it even though it did take years (!) longer than I thought. As said in the A/Ns for the epilogue, it was Severus who pointed out the Merlin connection - and he's not the sort of inspiration one argues with ;o) But it was good to give the centaurs their moment (in Canon, they seemed a bit looked-down-on), and of course dragons are very misunderstood. There's more to 'em than this malarkey about dragon-you-inter-their-cave-and-eatin'-you (thanks, Hagrid)!
I've just finished reading this whole story - and oh, how immensely satisfying it is! This is such a splendidly solid and coherent world, interwoven with such lucidity and balance. I particularly liked your version of Tobias, and Petrus is a delight. Hermione and Severus work very well together, and I was very much impressed by your sheer attention to detail.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Thank you for your kind words and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed reading. I'd originally set out to do something a bit different in SSHG and if I've succeeded in that, well, I can only be happy about it :o)
I normally review long fics at least every other chapter... however, I was reading this offline and was not able to review that often. I did want you to know that I read your fic and thoroughly enjoyed it. It had intrigue, and adventure, and romance and best of all....Crookshanks!!!!I LOVED him in this fic. He made me giggle everytime!I Loved This Fic!--his
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Thank you for reading and enjoying :o) Crooks has a way of threading his presence through a story (and no doubt leaving shed hairs for readers to appreciate). There were a couple of passages when he'd appear from nowhere and I'd be obliged, as a mere human, to write his (half) Kneazle Majesty into the scene.
I can't recall the title of one fic I read a long while ago, but in it Crooks magically made himself heavier while sitting on Hermione's lap - thus ensuring that she couldn't get out of her chair! That still makes me laugh 'cause I'm certain felines can really do that ;o)
What a wonderful chapter!!! So many pieces of seeminly unrelated facts have fallen into place to create a firm foundation for the Light to have defeated the Dark.The way Severus found his way to the Dark side because of the planted book explains a lot about the "how could this have happened?" we've all wondered about at least once.The lineage of both of Severus' parents was a splendid revealation, and I'm wondering what we may yet find out about Hermione's and Petrus' ancestry.I think Tocky speaks the truth about the greatest magic of all: "Love’s bonds is letting magic flow, and love is magic that is lasting forever.”Well done, and now I'm off to read the epilogue. Beth
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hello Beth!
Thank you! I'm relieved that it all came together :oP
Yes, I wondered how Severus, while still so young, reportedly knew a good (or bad) many curses by the time he got to Hogwarts - and not just the language kind! (But he assures me that he could "let rip" with fine style from a very early age). Sirius had a hide pointing that out - the little snot - in Canon that really annoyed me. What colour did the pot call the kettle, hmmm?
House elves are a very ancient race and, in spite of their usually subservient nature, I think they're actually very wise. But then how often has quiet wisdom been ignored because Pride and Superiority shout it down? Treat your House elves well - the benefits will extend well beyond the physical neatness of your household ;o)
This has got to be one of my all time favorite stories now! It's so very well written and I love your original characters! I could not help but think of Toothless when ever I was reading parts with Petrus. Love love love it :D
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you very much :o) LOL I had the flying theme from How to Train Your Dragon running through my head while the Hebridean gave Severus and Hermione a lift back to Scotland. Delighted you enjoyed the story and it really was a pleasure to write.
I'm so sorry for the double review, my computer is having a hissie fit.
It's over I will truely miss not seeing an update for " A Place in the World " in my in-box. You have taken us all on a wonderful adventure, full of magic and mystery. Now at the end of the road, everyone has indeed found their place in the world, from little Tocky finding his true family, miss Myrtle and Paulus as ghostly therapists, the centaur herd made whole again, Toby and Eileen together, Petrus a British citizen, and happy in the library, Draco on his way healing and wisdom, even the dragon mosaic has a place, and last but never least, Severus and Hermione together as they should be. How you have managed to keep so many elements in balance and keep us all so enthralled leaves me in awe thank you so very much for this lovely story, it is one that I will be reading again and again.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi Mick! Well, if you do read it again I hope it keeps you happily entertained :o) I'm pleased that you enjoyed the adventure ('cause writing it certainly was), and would quote a well-known venerable Hobbit on the subject of ending roads:
"Roads go ever ever on Under cloud and under star, Yet feet that wandering have gone Turn at last to home afar. Eyes that fire and sword have seen And horror in the halls of stone Look at last on meadows green And trees and hills they long have known."
(From The Old Walking Song by B. Baggins)
And all is well in the world, with a place for everyone, even Petrus, Draco and the other post-war Slytherins, and Miss Myrtle who is no longer moaning. Even Toby and the Grangers have a place in the magical world. Happy sighs!!THYANK YOU for this wonderful and detailed story! I realize it was a huge commitment of your time, and I hope you feel accomplished - as well as encouraged to continue writing. You created some intriguing characters and a fascinating set of circumstances. Well done, you!
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you, June - yes it did take a couple of years longer than I thought it would, but then when I sketched out the plot I was naive enough to think I could do it in 8 - 10 chapters ~facepalms~. The characters, however, had other ideas and it was either do as they instructed or get Imperio'd ;o)
This was a marvelous ending, with the two sets of parents getting on so well and Hermione and Severus settling down in a lovely old house on the Severn. I'm impressed that you managed to work in so many other happy endings, too. But most of all, Noodle, thank you a million times for this lovely story, which I've now re-read and re-read and always find new things and ideas in. It is a real achievement.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
! Glad you enjoyed the story (and found it here of TPP after t'other site crashed) and the happy endings. As I said in the A/Ns, writing it was certainly an experience that I'd never, ever trade. Thanks again for reading and reviewing :o)
Loved it so! Like I said before, one of the two best stories I've ever read...really...and i've read A LOT of stories...Thank you so very much!
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you very much for reading and enjoying - it's a pleasure to have a completed story to share :o)
Aww, so very sorry to see this end. It's been such a joy to read and anticipate.Guess I'll just have to start over again from the beginning! :-)
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you! I've really enjoyed writing it - even more so for having completed the story ;o)
What a lovely chapter! I am so happy that Severus and his mother can be close again. This opportunity for his entire family to be made whole is a rare gift and I hope all will be well. I like the idea of Purrin' Therapy. Little Southpaw even healed Severus' irritated and irascible mood with only a look. There are days when I think I would be better off if I had a half-Kneazle to purr away my moods.I wonder what will happen at the Gobstones match? Will Eileen want to play, too? That will be interesting, and I just bet she could beat the socks off all of them!Beth
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Thank you Beth! I like the idea of Purring Therapy to a ridiculous extent - a cup of tea and a purring feline, what good medicine :o)
Well something does happen at the Gobstones match, but Severus doesn't want to talk about it ;o)
Cheers
Shell
Severus and Hermione"honorary dragonets", made me smile. Then Hermiones fairwell to the old dragon,brought a tear to my eye. Severus' reaction to Minerva's hug was priceless, as was the dragon's laughter. The centaur herd is whole again, that can only be a good thing. Toby and Eileen are getting to know eachother again, they are different people now, it would be nice if they could be friends. Hagrid is the same as ever, a Barghest called Petal of all things, he will never change thank goodness. It was wonderful to see Severus able to let go of all the pain and anger of the past, and forgive his mother.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Hi mick! No doubt Hagrid will tell you that the Barghest is a very misunderstood creature and they really don't deserve to be called "Old Shuck" and all sorts of other nasty names. As for snatching solitary travellers off the moors, well, they get lonely, don't they? They don't do any harm, they just want some company. And they love to play. Not the Barghest's fault if someody goes and faints with fright...
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway
I think Severus approves of that quote ;o)
I've been wanting to say before I move on that I have visited the Notre Dame Cathedral once many years ago. You must have been there yourself to write about it as you have. I have never had a similar experience before or since. I saw several cathedrals during my visit to Paris but my visit to Notre Dame was exceptional. As I walked through the doors into the sactuary, my vision was immediately dawn upward, and my eyes burst into tears as I was unexpectantly and immediately overcome by emotion. It was incredibly beautiful but more than that, it was awesomely spiritual; but what would make a person's heart feel like bursting all of the sudden without warning? I did feel the presense of The Living God in that place. There are not words to discribe my feelings. It was only after the first burst of emotion that swept over me just entering the sanctuary that I was able to be awed by the fact that I was standing where so many rare and podigious others had stood, in who's footsteps I'm not fit to trod. There is something different and special about that particular cathedral. And I'm happy to say that after almost having a heart attack from walking up the many stairs to the bell tower in awe of the worn steps where so many other priests and pilgrims had trod for hundreds of years, I was able to reach out and touch a gargoil. It was fantastic! I also don't think I had ever been that high before, if you don't count jet liners. There is definitely something different and special about that place.
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
It sounds like your visit to Notre Dame brought you a touch of Grace, which is a very great thing to experience - one that will be remembered forever. And yes, I have been there. I'd done a project on Notre Dame when I was in high school, so it was with a peculiar sense of familiarity with which I explored the cathedral in real life over a decade later. Something that did bring me great joy (and Petrus too, when he read the news) was that after I started writing this story, eight new bells were cast for Notre Dame, along with a new Great Marie to reside in the south bell tower, and their voices tuned to sing with Emmanuel. To hear Notre Dame in full voice while within its walls... What words could describe it?
Let me know if the follwing link doesn't work out of TPP. It's the inauguration of the new bells. In the video of the ceremonies, the bells begin to sing at 58:02 beginning with Emmanuel himself, who seems to call the other bells to wakefulness. There surely can't have been a dry eye in Paris!
You are exciting and wonderful in this chapter! I love the dragons and I love the Kozacs interaction with Hermione. Great battle scene! It's so wonderful that our beloved Severus is able to garner the entire wizarding world's strength by his honor and relationship to Merlin. He is humble though. So is Kingsley. Great wizards, they are. And Hermione doesn't realize she's probably going to go down in history for her battle from the back of a dragon and being the mate of Merlin's heir in the battle of the Dementors rather than Harry Potter's best mate. I like it! I love the revelation that Sister Clarise is Eileen Prince-Snape. How long do I have to wait for the rest of he story, my noodle?
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
And thank you again! Glad you enjoyed it :o) I dare say Hermione will feature in many songs and legends of the future (especially among the Kozaks, to whom tales and legends are a vital part of life).
“I have three precious things which I hold fast and prize. The first is gentleness; the second is frugality; the third is humility, which keeps me from putting myself before others. Be gentle and you can be bold; be frugal and you can be liberal; avoid putting yourself before others and you can become a leader among men.” Lao Tzu
First, Yehy for Ronnald!!!!! YOU GO BRO! Regarding the bells, there is a youtube video with the "Harry Potter Theme" (Hedwig's Theme) played on the Univeristy of Rochester Carillon bells. It could be the background music for the battle but times it by 10. I love house elves! Toby has no idea how lucky he is to have little Tocky as his friend for life! Hermione will just have to adjust to the fact that he serves the Snape Family. Severus is so brave to stand still for the attempted dementor attack. Are you ever going to tell us the origin of Petrus?
Response from noodle (Author of A Place in the World)
Yeah, I think Ron gets a bit of a pasting in Fanfiction. He's not that bad, really, and I think he'll grow up to be a very good and decent man... but he's just not the one for Hermione ;o) Perhaps Hermione has come to terms with the fact that house-elves really do need to serve - it's their nature after all - but they should never be mistreated.
In every life, in every story, there are perhaps the things that should remain the mystery, non?