Thank goodness! And Livia captured herself an immortal as well. Job well done!

I'm really hoping for a happy ending here - this is just so sad!

Oh poor Hermione! There has to be a way out of this!

Urgh, that Clíona! She's not making this easy!

Ooh, there's a lot to resolve!

If anyone can save her, it'll be him!

Well, if the goddess commanded it... Bit worried about Granger, heading to next chapter!

Queen of the Banshees, eh? I wonder if Seamus was so terrified of them for a reason...

Very tricky that Livia snared an immortal by freeing Hermione. Figured she wouldn't do it purely out of the goodness of her heart. Nice to see the two of them were able to work through their past misunderstandings and finally enjoy each other.

Interesting on Lucius having a sister. Hopefully she can help where Severus has been unable to.

Severus really does need to expel Cliona, doesn't he? Her mind games are really starting to get to him.

LOL I love his bargain. Though I think he might find he won't get much more time with Hermione after that little manuever.

I'm going to bet that he's not going to have pleasant dreams after reliving how he bolluxed up a whole potential relationship. I can see why there was anger at the wedding now. Of course, he still needs to find some good news on the front of getting Cliona out of Hermione.

Very cool start. I love seeing various mythologic beings worked into fic.

Like everyone else, I'm wondering what Livia  is going to do with cliona. I'm so glad that Severus and Hermione get to be together in this world, and don't have to move on to the next to know happiness.

PS I wish there were more stars, but they only allow five.  

Lucius' twin sister! well that explains the attitude, I hope she finds what she' s looking for, and that it can help.    

Oh Severus, but then again what was he supposed to think?

When dealing with a Slytherin, ALWAYS, ALWAYS  read the small print.

Pride and misunderstanding are the basis of so much pain, no wonder they tore into each other when they met again.  

If anyone can create such a potion, it's Severus. The fact that he knew it wasn't Hermione right away, shows just how much he loves her,

Severus will not be happy when he wakes and finds Hermione gone. The U S T between them is great, and I' m enjoying the friendship between Ron and Hermione, it's very sweet.  

I'm just as curious to Severus as to what she's been doing to attract the banshees. Sounds like he's in for a long week.

Great backstory in this chapter and now I'm very curious as to what's going on with the mermaid grabbing Hermione.

I really enjoyed this super unique story, especially the little tidbits of backstory sprinkled here and there.  Made me want more!  Thanks so much for sharing.

Great ending! I have really enjoyed this story.  Thank you for posting!