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Blood and Vows
nagandsev74 Reviews | 5.64/10 (74 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
Shame almost befalls the Malfoy name when Draco is revealed to be infertile. So up steps Lucius—after all: 'The pureblood lineage must continue... at any cost...'
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A fellow Muffliato member, The Snapettes: The Four-House Tournament, The-Ship-That-Shall-Not-Be-Named, The Restricted Section, Seeking Severus Snape, Lovers of the Potions Master & Where the HP Boys Are. Also, a DeLucius member, as well as sneaking around, exploring other ships as the Muse allows... Love my favourite werewolf as well as a certain candyfloss-haired, eccentric wizard... The Draco/Astoria/Lucius banner was a gift to me by the one and only star_girl, and the Nagini and Severus Tale one by the lovely apisa_b The truly unique and rare gem Juniperus made the wonderful & inspirational The Twists of Fate banner, the One Riddle More, The Verboten One and 10th Anniversary one--I am so honoured! The one and only hexgirl made the wonderful Hermione & Xeno banner for me: all of you wonderful ladies, thank you!
Reviews for Blood and Vows
Oh, this is so delicious! And what a place to stop!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you for the read & feedback--I know, but when Narcissa calls, Lulu *jumps*; and Astoria needs a breather--her Malfoy men are keeping her waaaay too occupied *grumbling 'lucky witch'* - lol! Thank you again!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you for the read & feedback--I know, but when Narcissa calls, Lulu *jumps*; and Astoria needs a breather--her Malfoy men are keeping her waaaay too occupied *grumbling 'lucky witch'* - lol! Thank you again!xx
Ha, there's no escaping Lucius :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*sighing* No, he wants what he wants, how he wants, when he wants--if you won't come out to play, then he'll come and find you - lol! Some wizards *shaking head* ! But, Lulu did have a valid point--leaving the door unwarded was equivalent to a 'come on in and play' sign- lol!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*sighing* No, he wants what he wants, how he wants, when he wants--if you won't come out to play, then he'll come and find you - lol! Some wizards *shaking head* ! But, Lulu did have a valid point--leaving the door unwarded was equivalent to a 'come on in and play' sign- lol!xx
I once again bow down to your smut writing skills. I'm breathless, my dear!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, Thank you for leading me down the straight and narrow-path-of-writing-smut--believing I could 'play nicely'! Thank you for the lovely review & feedback *blushing and getting sentimental*= it was my innocent self coming across a couple of divine writers with divine smut writing skills, the one and only sevs_starsisters, that bewitched me and brought me into their worlds--again thank you!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, Thank you for leading me down the straight and narrow-path-of-writing-smut--believing I could 'play nicely'! Thank you for the lovely review & feedback *blushing and getting sentimental*= it was my innocent self coming across a couple of divine writers with divine smut writing skills, the one and only sevs_starsisters, that bewitched me and brought me into their worlds--again thank you!!!
I'd like to extract his pollen too! Well, so much for that sample, although I can't blame her for getting over excited!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*nodding head vigorously up and down!* Yeah, I'd be on that so fast, way too fast for anyone's good... lol! Thank you for the *read*-- along with everything else-- see what you've gotten us into, you wonderful
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
you!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*nodding head vigorously up and down!* Yeah, I'd be on that so fast, way too fast for anyone's good... lol! Thank you for the *read*-- along with everything else-- see what you've gotten us into, you wonderful
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
you!
Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up with the reviews. But I love this story, I love how you have taken the prompt and ran with it, breathing life into it and making it more complex and wonderful than I could have ever dared to imagine. xx
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Oh,
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... Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
... my gratitude to you, in so many, many ways is 'as boundless as the sea'--whatever constellations of the heavens have crossed our paths in this wonderful fanfic universe, I am eternally grateful!!! I love that you thought of me for your incredible, stimulating plot bunny and felt that I could do 'our' Lulu baby proud - lol! You definitely *nudged* me past my comfort zones and helped me to broaden my horizons--thank you!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
... Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
... my gratitude to you, in so many, many ways is 'as boundless as the sea'--whatever constellations of the heavens have crossed our paths in this wonderful fanfic universe, I am eternally grateful!!! I love that you thought of me for your incredible, stimulating plot bunny and felt that I could do 'our' Lulu baby proud - lol! You definitely *nudged* me past my comfort zones and helped me to broaden my horizons--thank you!!!
oh my... this was worth the wait. poor, poor Astoria. yea, right... lucky girl. Another great chapter. Thanks!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, lovely! Thank you soooo much for reading and leaving some feedback! 'poor, poor Astoria. yea, right...' - hahaha! Yes, I do want us DeLucius girls to be rolling our eyes at her *uncomfortable* dilemma - LOL! Poor, poor thing... and Lucius seems to be suffering too, poor randy boy...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, I really appreciate you leaving some *love* for poor Lulu! xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, lovely! Thank you soooo much for reading and leaving some feedback! 'poor, poor Astoria. yea, right...' - hahaha! Yes, I do want us DeLucius girls to be rolling our eyes at her *uncomfortable* dilemma - LOL! Poor, poor thing... and Lucius seems to be suffering too, poor randy boy...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, I really appreciate you leaving some *love* for poor Lulu! xxx
The Malfoys are a very twisted family, aren't they? Poor Astoria. Wonder she hasn't gone mad yet.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Very twisted, very human, and very tenacious family... Yes, Astoria will be getting to the edge very soon... Thank you so much for reading & the encouraging support/feedback,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
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Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Very twisted, very human, and very tenacious family... Yes, Astoria will be getting to the edge very soon... Thank you so much for reading & the encouraging support/feedback,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
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I would be that she's hoping that once she's sired an heir, he'll leave her alone, but something tells me that he won't.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
I agree, I think that when she has some time to think about the situation more clearly, long term, once she's conceived and will have the child, she's hoping that her and Draco will finally be able to have a separate life, away from Lucius... but I'm also not sure that Lucius will let his particular connection with her go... Thank you for the wonderful, stimulating feedback,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
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Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
I agree, I think that when she has some time to think about the situation more clearly, long term, once she's conceived and will have the child, she's hoping that her and Draco will finally be able to have a separate life, away from Lucius... but I'm also not sure that Lucius will let his particular connection with her go... Thank you for the wonderful, stimulating feedback,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
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He always gets his way, doesn't he? I wonder if this is a secret she will be able to keep from Draco?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
One way or another, yep... I'm also wondering if she'll be able to keep this from Draco or... if it'll all just get too much... Thank you for reading and the thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate it!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
One way or another, yep... I'm also wondering if she'll be able to keep this from Draco or... if it'll all just get too much... Thank you for reading and the thoughtful feedback--truly appreciate it!xxx
He's such an arrogant bastard, isn't it? Not to mention dangerous.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Absolutely, one hard core arrogant bastard *gah* And I agree, dangerous--I felt he wasn't Voldemort's slippery friend/lieutenant by his charming looks only... If he needs to get physical, he quite capable of it on any level, especially the violent or the threat of serious violence... Thank you for reading and the stimulating feedback!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Absolutely, one hard core arrogant bastard *gah* And I agree, dangerous--I felt he wasn't Voldemort's slippery friend/lieutenant by his charming looks only... If he needs to get physical, he quite capable of it on any level, especially the violent or the threat of serious violence... Thank you for reading and the stimulating feedback!xxx
Well, that was a poorly timed interruption - and a tad rude, to boot. I do like Draco's regained self-esteem.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Lucius knows no shame... and feels overly entitled, even to others privacy *gah* Yes, poor Draco, it's nice to see him being his own man and feeling good and hopeful about things, considering what he's been through--thank you again for reading & the feedback!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Lucius knows no shame... and feels overly entitled, even to others privacy *gah* Yes, poor Draco, it's nice to see him being his own man and feeling good and hopeful about things, considering what he's been through--thank you again for reading & the feedback!xxx
Oh, poor young Astoria. She really is caught in the middle here. And perhaps Lucius can regain some of his humanity in his interactions with her, though I won't hold out hope.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, I think the cad is enjoying indulging himself too much, taking liberties of Astoria and the situation, immediately to suit his needs at the moment... Hmmn, regaining some humanity in his interactions with her--depends on the level of self-gratification/selfishness he needs fulfilled and his sense of power--whether he'll moderate his actions, or not *shrugging-and-also-not-holding-out-much-hope* He's always struck me as quite use to getting his way regardless of the effect on others... Thank you for the thought-provoking feedback!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, I think the cad is enjoying indulging himself too much, taking liberties of Astoria and the situation, immediately to suit his needs at the moment... Hmmn, regaining some humanity in his interactions with her--depends on the level of self-gratification/selfishness he needs fulfilled and his sense of power--whether he'll moderate his actions, or not *shrugging-and-also-not-holding-out-much-hope* He's always struck me as quite use to getting his way regardless of the effect on others... Thank you for the thought-provoking feedback!
Oh, my. That didn't go at all like she planned. of course he wouldn't want to say anything at a time like that, more than happy to have another chance to provide a sample. He's so devilishly manipulative.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
He is, isn't he? I'm sure he'd like her to try and try againHeeeee!Thank you for reading & the specific lovely feedback--devilishly manipulative--that's our Lucius through and throughxxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
He is, isn't he? I'm sure he'd like her to try and try againHeeeee!Thank you for reading & the specific lovely feedback--devilishly manipulative--that's our Lucius through and throughxxx
Oh, poor Draco. And poor Astoria caught in the middle. And this is definitely a different look at Lucius. I like how prison didn't really break him, but made him colder and harder.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback! Yes, they each have a situation neither is fully aware of--and without Voldy around and all the unfulfilled ambition Lucius had, and what he had to pay for, I wanted to start him off as a survivor who's been very hardened by his particular disappointments in life... Again, thank you for the lovely thoughtful feedback--it helps spur on the Muse and to know that the characters are coming across as intended--thank you!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback! Yes, they each have a situation neither is fully aware of--and without Voldy around and all the unfulfilled ambition Lucius had, and what he had to pay for, I wanted to start him off as a survivor who's been very hardened by his particular disappointments in life... Again, thank you for the lovely thoughtful feedback--it helps spur on the Muse and to know that the characters are coming across as intended--thank you!xxx
Oh you little tease!! :-)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*squeeee* and evil cackling--heeee! Thank you for the read & support!xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
And here I was, thinking your response would be: "Sorry, mistress. Will write more right away, mistress." :p
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*grovelling* Sorry, mistress. Will write more right away, mistress.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Good lass. Have a cookie.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Heeeee! *yum*
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*squeeee* and evil cackling--heeee! Thank you for the read & support!xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
And here I was, thinking your response would be: "Sorry, mistress. Will write more right away, mistress." :p
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*grovelling* Sorry, mistress. Will write more right away, mistress.
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
Good lass. Have a cookie.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Heeeee! *yum*
Oh my, Neville! The cad! Did Narcissa set him up or is just a player?
And just what is Lucius going to do about it?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
I wouldn't put anything pass Neville... or Narcissa... heeeee! Lucius will deal with this in his own unique way Thank you so much for all of the support & feedback, reading this tale, truly appreciate it!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
I wouldn't put anything pass Neville... or Narcissa... heeeee! Lucius will deal with this in his own unique way Thank you so much for all of the support & feedback, reading this tale, truly appreciate it!xxx
Yum! This possessive, oddly nurturing Lucius is a sight to behold.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
He does have some nurturing in him, doesn't he? Hehehe! One just has to be in the right position to experience it
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
He does have some nurturing in him, doesn't he? Hehehe! One just has to be in the right position to experience it
I can't imagine that she's going to say no...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*whispering* neither can I! heeee! I mean, what's a witch to do in that situation? Thank you so much for the read & feedback!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*whispering* neither can I! heeee! I mean, what's a witch to do in that situation? Thank you so much for the read & feedback!
I'm wondering how much of Lucius' softer side you're going to explore. If they really are going to have a child together then his tender emotions might be the most dangerous part of this whole thing...Also, still very hot!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, Seer
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, as you have foreseen, Lucius' tender emotions will be the most... unpredictable/dangerous, as most, including himself, are used to his entrenched dominating side as opposed to the other unchartered ones... Thank you so much for the lovely feedback and support!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, Seer
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, as you have foreseen, Lucius' tender emotions will be the most... unpredictable/dangerous, as most, including himself, are used to his entrenched dominating side as opposed to the other unchartered ones... Thank you so much for the lovely feedback and support!xxx
Lucius interruptus? You think he'd knock...
I'm guessing the plot is going to thicken significantly before we're through? Astoria is playing a very dangerous game!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*shrugging shoulders* It is his manor and as he said, they should have warded their room off *evil cackling* Yes and yes, plot will thicken a wee bit, and Astoria doesn't quite yet realize the depth of the game and how dangerous it is with these players, how she'll be effected by her and their actions, as well... Thank you for reading!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
*shrugging shoulders* It is his manor and as he said, they should have warded their room off *evil cackling* Yes and yes, plot will thicken a wee bit, and Astoria doesn't quite yet realize the depth of the game and how dangerous it is with these players, how she'll be effected by her and their actions, as well... Thank you for reading!
Goodness, this really shouldn't be this hot! That's some amazing writing!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Anoesis, thank you so much for the encouragemant & support--truly, deeply appreciate it! Regarding any hotness, blame it on Lulu--he sometimes brings it out of a witch He seems to know juuust what to do... *whistling innocently* xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Anoesis, thank you so much for the encouragemant & support--truly, deeply appreciate it! Regarding any hotness, blame it on Lulu--he sometimes brings it out of a witch He seems to know juuust what to do... *whistling innocently* xxx
Interesting to see that Lucius isn't half as complacent as he seems. That's a gorgeous banner, btw :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Heeeee! Yes, Astoria found a way to make him, um, responsive--lol! The banner--yes! star_girl is an artistic banner goddess-- so happy you like it; it always makes me *smile* and more;-) Thank you again for reading!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Heeeee! Yes, Astoria found a way to make him, um, responsive--lol! The banner--yes! star_girl is an artistic banner goddess-- so happy you like it; it always makes me *smile* and more;-) Thank you again for reading!xxx
Uh oh! Something tells me Lucius won't be particularly delicate about it if he finds out. what an impossible situation!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for the read and feedback--I agree, Lucius' reaction to something so fundamental to his sense of the family lineage wouldn't be taken well... only if he could, um, rectify the matter in some way Thanks again, truly appreciate it!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for the read and feedback--I agree, Lucius' reaction to something so fundamental to his sense of the family lineage wouldn't be taken well... only if he could, um, rectify the matter in some way Thanks again, truly appreciate it!xxx
Quite the chapter: preparing for a flashback, presenting the dilemma, and offering character sketches. Astoria trying to do the proper thing but torn by external problems and internal conflict. She has restored Draco, but has trouble defending herself. Draco is loyal. He defends Astoria and tries to be a dutiful son, but the two are not compatible. Lucius is an autocratic patriarch, and defeat and imprisonment have made him even more inhumane. Narcissa remains a puzzle. She is mouthing platitudes and performing token acts of charity that please the authorities while meaning nothing to her.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the feedback; this was initially written in response to a request to a specific prompt for a tailored storyline and, warning, a request for the exploration of as much smut as possible per chapter within the scenarios (so may come across as pretty one-levelled for most of the content), but since then has slowly taken on other subplots, however it will stick to and end as requested, eventually--lol! I needed to plunge on into and set up the relationships in this post-war setting, dilemmas, and a selected take on characterizations for this one. Narcissa's attitude and participation will slowly be more explicit and involved. Thank you again for the read, truly appreciate it!