A Matter of Enchantments
Chapter 5 of 11
nagandsevAstoria realizes she is in too deep now, and Lucius reaffirms his power over her.
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Standing up fully soap-sudded and nude, Draco panted heatedly and, glaring at his father, demanded, "What the bloody fuck do you think you're doing?"
Lucius gave Draco a cold stare, not answering.
"How in the bloody fuck can you think to come barging into here...into our privacy?" yelled the outraged younger Malfoy.
Lucius gave a darting glance towards Astoria, and then coolly answered, "If you wish to have privacy, might I suggest a ward on your door? They do come in handy when one wishes to indulge in marital bliss." He smirked. "If your mother wasn't commandeering the house-elf, it would be informing you of her unexpected arrival and impatience to see both of you rather than me... So, do finish up your activities and dress for dinner as soon as you can, um, collect yourselves." And with that, Lucius turned and left.
Waiting to make sure her father-in-law was gone, Astoria rose and gently hugged Draco from behind, understanding far too well how unnerved and humiliated he must be feeling.
He snapped around and grabbed her, holding and kissing her, murmuring, "I'm sorry. I'm so, so sorry."
Shaken by Lucius' presence as well, but overcoming her jittery feeling and wishing to comfort Draco more, she reassured him, whispering in between kisses, "It's nothing, Draco. I'm used to Lucius...we're used to him. He has always been inconsiderate, overbearing... rude. Possessive. Don't let him get to you, my love. Draco, Draco..."
Her hushing and cooing soothed his nerves, and soon they were in heavy foreplay again.
Astoria felt Draco's hardness against her inner thighs, and then without preamble, he led her out of the bath and into the bedroom. As he swooped her up and tossed her playfully onto the four-poster bed, he said, "Let's do this properly this time." Accioing his wand, he warded their door and hastily returned to Astoria and proceeded to make love to her, slowly and thoroughly.
As she moaned in satiated, delighted pleasure, she rhythmically arched her back in sync with Draco as he thrusted deeper and deeper inside her. In the midst of undulating, she threw back her head, fingernails digging into Draco's back, and gazed through half-closed lids in languorous abandonment into the overhead mirror, enjoying the sight of Draco fucking her. She bit her lower lip in concentration, trying to hold back the oncoming wave leading to an explosive climax swelling up inside her as his cock hit rhythmically, again and again, an electric hotspot deep inside her. "Oh! No, oh, no!" she gasped loudly, but not in climax...rather in reaction to what she beheld above in the ceiling mirror: for the first time, she seemed to be able to look through the mirror as if seeing into another space...Lucius' bedroom!
"Oh, oh, no!" she cried out again, freezing as if Petrified, clutching Draco for dear life. For she saw Lucius come into the mirror and lay down, half-clothed and stretch out languidly across his dark-green duvet, his bare chest and blondish-white hair accentuated against the dark Slytherin colour as it was splayed out against the cushioned pillows. Lucius slowly began to undo his trousers and even more leisurely to take them off, followed by his silk underpants, leaving his full nudity on display for her to see.
Because Astoria's reaction occurred near the peak of Draco's passion, in his flagrante delicto delirium, he took Astoria's cries and clutching as her climaxing and instinctively spent himself, coming deep within her.
As Draco lay on top of Astoria, catching his breath and whispering sweet nothings in her ear, she watched, wide-eyed, as Lucius stroked himself. Then, abruptly, the elder Malfoy gazed directly at Astoria, pokerfaced, before languidly rising and walking out of the mirror's scope.
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All through the following dinner, Astoria could barely eat a bite. Lost in a whirlwind of sensations, her thoughts and focus flitted from image to image of the day's events as well as the family members' faces around her: Draco to Lucius, Narcissa to Draco, Lucius to Narcissa. But the outrageousness of Lucius' audacity to encroach upon her and Draco's privacy so voyeuristically kept blaring at the forefront of her muddled thoughts. Lucius has enchanted the mirror...that's what he was doing in our room...a two-way enchantment: I can see him, his bed, and he...he can watch us!
But her brooding was continually being interrupted by heated disagreements between Narcissa and Lucius, putting the elder Malfoy in an utterly foul mood, and other terse retorts leading to Lucius turning to the unpleasant, delicate topic of her and Draco's failure to conceive. Equally chilling was Lucius' seemingly complete ignoring of and disdain towards Astoria, speaking about her rather than to her.
How can he treat me with such contempt after we've been... we've been..., she struggled to put her thoughts together, 'intimate' with each other?
It was this confusion and distress, along with Draco and Lucius getting into a heated discussion of her fertility results, that she could stomach no longer, and excusing herself, she fled to the solace of their bedroom to reflect on the past days' events.
Feeling hot and bothered, squeezing her pillows, Astoria stared searchingly at her reflection in the mirrored ceiling above the bed again, daring and expecting to see beyond it; but this time only her distressed, confused reflection appeared.
Lucius! He has me imagining things; he has me yearning for... him!
Tears of confusion and guilt flowed freely. For Draco had been her one and only. Not only was he sexually her first and only partner, until Lucius that is, but emotionally he was her first and deepest emotional relationship as well. The strange emotions which Lucius evoked out of her were painful and wild, torrid and dark. She had never had a reason or occasion to experience them before. She'd never had anyone else to compare Draco to until, again, Lucius. The effect was dizzying. Feeling lost, she felt herself falling into murkier and murkier emotions.
Exhausted with these ambiguous and dubious ruminations of both Draco and Lucius, she fell asleep into troubled and uncharted dreams.
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In the morning, she awoke in her husband's arms. Feeling her movement, Draco pressed her against him and whispered, "I'll try to get home earlier this evening, since I have to travel in the morning...and don't forget the fundraising luncheon with mother tomorrow, just in case you plan to be at your office at the Ministry all day." He gave her a kiss and a teasing smirk. "Try to survive as best you can without me. When I get back, I'll make it up to you."
Draco dressed and left for the Ministry. Astoria lay and watched him, not feeling like getting out of bed, not wishing to leave their bedroom, or at least not get up and about until everyone else in the household had left for their various obligations.
Astoria craved to be alone in order to clear her thoughts. Working in the conservatory will help... I need to put myself to use away from the Ministry and occupy my thoughts with something else besides Draco... and Lucius! She groaned in frustration. Lucius!
She waited a good while, fixated and brooding on her father-in-law, before deciding she'd waited long enough for everyone to leave the manor. A feeling of oppression upon her, she languidly dressed in a robe and slowly made her way down to force herself to work a bit in the nursery.
Halfway down the stairway, Astoria stopped.
Simultaneously, spotting her, Lucius halted in the hall below.
They stared at each other.
Seeing Astoria frozen in place, Lucius crossed and slowly walked up the stairway to stand in front of her and look down into her hazel eyes. Caustically, he commented, "See you've slept in. Late night? Were you and Draco celebrating something?"
From deep within her, an unexpected burst of feistiness and a feeling of entitlement flared up, and she coolly snapped, "That is our business." Remembering the enchanted mirror, she was spurred on to point out, "Just as the intimacy of our bedroom is our business...not yours."
Eyes glinting in curt amusement, Lucius merely commented, "Ah, I see."
He will not get the best of me... "You will remove any enchantments from our mirror immediately."
"I haven't the least idea what you're talking about, my dear. Enlighten me on how it is enchanted." Lucius gave her a lascivious smile. "Details, please."
Astoria saw that he was thoroughly amused and waiting eagerly for her to spell out graphically the situation. You can watch us fuck, and I can watch you...you...stroke your cock... In a huff, she answered, "No! Just...just undo the enchantment!" Don't let him get to you! Resolved to not let Lucius unnerve her further, she made to continue downward, heading for the nursery.
Stepping in front of her, he enquired, "Is that the only demand you wish to make of me, dear Astoria?"
"It's the only decent one, at this time, to say the least!"
But Lucius put a stop to her brushing by him by abruptly grabbing her upper arm, stopping her. "Decent?" His lips curled on the ends, giving her a satiric leer which caused a tingle to burst through her, head to toe.
"So, you think now that you've got what you've wanted from me, temporarily, that you don't need my services anymore? That you can ignore what has happened between us? Discard me?"
For some reason, at the word 'ignore', an explosion of anger issued forth from Astoria, and she hotly challenged him, "Ignore you? You? And what would you call your treatment of me?"
Lucius raised an eyebrow in cool speculation, observing another impassioned side of his daughter-in-law he had never seen before.
Astoria's confusion and frustration at Lucius boiled over, his contemptuous treatment of her and Draco's privacy, his condescending treatment of her last night at dinner...everything and all gushed forth. "How could you treat me so...so, disdainfully last night, as if I wasn't there? As if I was nothing to you? Nothing! Just some object!"
Lucius became quite still; his steel-grey eyes gleamed intensely at her.
"And how should I treat you, my lovely Astoria, in front of my wife and my son, your husband, hmmn?" His voice became throaty as he barely whispered, "How do you want me to treat you, my sweet?"
Astoria's cheeks flushed hotly as she realised her folly; it dawned on her that she wished from Lucius that which she had no right to claim nor he had the right to give. In the recesses of her mind, she realised she wanted his affection. And the pooling wetness in between her legs anytime he was near enough to detect his unique musky scent was a physiological reminder of how this reaction was beyond her control. His mere touch, his audacious looks, either could undo her; it was indeed beyond her control. To add further to her perplexity, she suddenly comprehended that deep within her, she uncontrollably craved his true affection. More horrifying to the little rationality seemingly left in her mind was that she had a fragile, but burning, affection for him... A fledgling place in her muddled emotions responding solely to him. This revealed itself to her, gazing into his mercilessly brazen eyes, and she looked away, staring at a swirled snake-like engravement in the black marble stairway.
"Perhaps I should kiss you on your luscious, full lips in front of Narcissa and Draco," his tone had hardened, "in the same way I've kissed your succulent sex," he crudely reminded her.
She felt her face burn in embarrassment and arousal and, trying to verbalise what little normalcy was left in her, she closed her eyes and uttered in a small voice, "I think that we should maintain our respective, platonic relations, for everyone's sake..."
"And our heir?"
Astoria blinked at him, her heart pounding, and reiterated,"Our...?"
"...heir!" enunciated Lucius exasperatedly.
Suddenly, the passion and turmoil both were feeling hit her full force. The original need of seeking her father-in-law's aid in the first place washed over her like a tidal wave again: the state of Draco's sterility and the entire frustrating, distressing situation which was her life. This reality check pained her even more than the fatuous hurt she'd felt from Lucius' seeming coolness and aloofness to her. An asinine sensation of obstinacy and denial came over her, and she had a mad instinct to hurt him back somehow, deny him further access to her turmoil and vulnerability, and wildly she proposed, "There is...there is time to think about...other options..."
Stonefaced, Lucius stared at her. Then, an eyebrow was raised in high disdain. Sardonically, he mused, "You think I don't know about your lunch plans tomorrow with my dear wife and her invited male guests?"
"Male guests? Don't be ludicrous!" Astoria huffed. "It's a luncheon to discuss the upcoming ball and how they may help raise funds with influential..."
"You're a witch; you're capable of anything," snarled Lucius darkly. Abruptly, the blond wizard grabbed one of her wrists and held it in a steel grip. "Who has Narcissa chosen for you to cuckold Draco with? Longbottom the Pureblooded Serpent Slayer? Potter the Brave?" he spat out derisively. "Oh yes, no doubt the idea of the Dark Lord's presence still lingering somewhere in Potter's mixed-blooded veins gives dearest Cissy ideas..."
He leered and whispered, "Would you like that, you and Potter? Or, perhaps, Longbottom slobbering all over you like a "
A hard slap to his face cut him off.
Before Astoria had time to fear for herself, for what she had just done, Lucius smiled and fiercely pulled her into him, so that she could feel his arousal pressing against her. His nostrils flared in emotion, and inhaling deeply, he whispered, "Don't think for one moment that you can ignore me! You're mine! Don't think for one second that anyone other than I shall sire an heir to the Malfoy name and lineage..." He gave her a strong shake. "Don't think that any choice you make will not include me!"
"Choice?"
"If you dare to challenge me, dare to think for one moment that you can 'hoodwink' me, my girl, you're very, very mistaken. You will lose everything!" Lucius grabbed and held her chin roughly in place, a surge of bygone Death Eater's energy resurfacing. "You don't think you can be replaced?" He saw a flash of fear cross her face. "It's easier for all involved, more convenient for both of us, if on the surface our little family stays 'as is'... However, if you dare to threaten me, replace me with anyone, you'll regret it... beyond your worst nightmare, my dear."
His steel eyes shined, burning cold. The pain in her face from his tight hold was a searing reminder of his potential, malignant Death Eater energy, alive and well, rearing its ugly head.
"You will lose everything!" he repeated fiercely.
Something in Astoria snapped, and she spat out, "You threaten me? How dare you!" She wanted to lash out at him physically, but instead, at the last second, she jerked back and pulled away from him to flee, only to be snatched tightly back. "Let me go, let me go! You vile brute...I hate you!"
Lucius went neutral except for holding her in his steel embrace, letting her thrash and shove against him until she wearied herself from trying to break free. In quiet, muffled sobs, she pleaded meekly, "What do want of me? Just let me go..."
The hairs on her neck rose up, not in fear, but in unforeseen excitement, as his warm breath whispered in her ear causing shivers to run down her spine, "Your pleasure, Astoria."
She stood stock still as she felt soft, wet kisses being planted on her sensitive neck, around and around, lower and lower. Lucius was dissolving her anxiety and defenses with each lick and nip.
When Lucius felt her trembling in heated excitement from his ministrations, he raised his head again and flicked his tongue around and in her ear, only to abruptly stop and huskily whisper, "I want you to give me permission to be in charge of your pleasure. Your sexual pleasure, my dear." With a stoic face, he waited and let the full meaning sink in.
But Astoria only stared at him, wide-eyed and bewildered. His hot and cold treatment of her perplexed her beyond reasoning. What is he talking about...my sexual pleasure has nothing to do with siring an heir...why is he confusing the two?
Lucius coaxed, "Such sensitive and fiery passion as yours should not be wasted. And Draco, fruit of my loins though he is, will never fulfil you as I know how to fulfil a witch... But first, we must be in agreement."
"Agreement? About what?"
"That I will be in charge. Not you. I."
"I...I don't understand..."
Lucius gave her an incredulous look and began to chuckle in forced, astounded bemusement. Then, he was whispering, "Let me give you an example..." as he opened her dressing robe and raised her nightdress upward.
Astoria gasped, feeling his fingers lightly stroking upwards, and he quickly discovered that she wore no undergarments.
"Mmmn, nice," murmured Lucius, very pleased, and he felt the warm abundant wetness between her legs. Very lightly fingering her, he withdrew his hand and with his fingertips, moistened with her essence, he lightly touched his lips and then...to Astoria's surprise...he gently traced hers with the lingering wetness. He placed his index finger on her lips and whispered, "Lick."
Astoria hesitated, moving her head away, but Lucius sternly stated, "No. The game is, I'm in charge." He gave Astoria an odd look, and for a split second, the same feeling she had had yesterday when she touched Lucius' face like a lover's occurred, and his features softened as he said, "Trust me..." She did. Opening her lips, she shyly and slowly licked his finger, tasting her own essence. "More. Don't stop. Take your time," he instructed, his voice growing thicker, and before she knew it, Lucius' tongue had replaced his finger, and he was swirling and grinding into her.
A burst of need exploded within Astoria, setting off a volatile chemistry between the two, and she let herself be devoured by his hunger as well as devour back, not knowing where her mouth and body ended and Lucius' began, so melded into each other they were in undulating, grinding waves of heat.
Dully registering in the background of their heated endeavours, out from the hallowed halls of the manor, came Narcissa's voice. "Lucius, what is keeping you so long?" Edged with annoyance and impatience, Narcissa beckoned, "Come! We're going to be late!"
Abruptly, Lucius released Astoria. Without looking back, he hurried to meet Narcissa and Apparate to another clandestine meeting with Albert Runcorn.
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A/N: Greatest appreciation to the one and only star_girl for her cosmic energy and beta magic on all levels! Also, a special thanks to BeautifulSnowflake for her beautiful support, nudging me in just the right way not to procrastinate and risk making Lucius really impatient!
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74 Reviews | 5.64/10 Average
looking foward to more... great story!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the kind, encouraging feedback, truly appreciate it! So happy that you're enjoying it, thanks again!
I've been reading this at AFF - which I hate because they don't send out update notices. Now I discover it's posted here - which is irritating because they no longer send out update notices. Could I get you to post it to your AO3 account [yeah, I looked there, too.] Please, please, please. This is not a pairing I usually read, but your story has my attention now and I'd love to know when the next update is going to be!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear Darque Heart, thank you so much for continuing to read, and happy that you took a chance on a rare pairing though it's not your usual preference, truly appreciate it!I think if you tick the 'Add/Update Bookmark icon' near the top of a chapter's page, the system should send you an update notice, or tick the 'add fav story'--but if you just tick the update bookmark icon, that should do it--however, since I don't know when I'll be able to post at AO3 (sorry, I lost my password, etc.--haven't had much free time to write, and haven't been on that site, unfortunately, for years), if you'd like, I could send you an email when I update via your TPP account, if that's okay? If not, I'll try to explore AO3 again when I have some holiday days off from work this summer (plan to catch up on all things fandom) Thanks again for your continued interest!
Dear author. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this beautiful story. Usually I read only SS/HG stories my favorite pairing. You open my eyes with this incredible pairing. I like Lucius character. He is a bit darker than Severus with very slytherin but interesting motives. I can't help but wish to see Astoria's pregnant with Lucius' child and how they will deal with it even if I feel bad for Draco. Being cheated by his own father is awful but the conflict between one' interests and the family's one is intriguing. What is more important? The Family's line? Individual hapiness? Truly this story is captivating with characters well built. You hook me hard and fast.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so very much for reading this even though it is about a different pairing other than what you usually prefer--truly, deeply appreciate it!Also, thank you so much for your thoughtful, insightful feedback--so glad to know that Lucius is coming across as intended, as well as Astoria and Draco (trying to keep the empathy/sympathy for Draco, as I feel for anyone in his predicament) --I'm trying to keep but explore Lucius being Slytherin as well as other, human, areas of him, etc. You've touched on the major dilemmas of each of the characters that will be continued to be explored and wrestled with--one's interests versus larger/family ones, the Family's line, etc., and the innate motivations of Astoria, Lucius, and Draco, and all involved. Again, thank you so much for reading, and I'm so happy that you are enjoying this tale and for your consideration!
In the previous chapter, Astoria was taking herself to the depths with the aid of Lucius, and many things were revealed. One revelation is that Lucius believed he could give a measured amount of Astoria to another, but he discovers he is possessive about her. The review's conjecture was that the characters were at the bottom of the pit as in Dante’s Inferno with the betrayers and, after this, they would claw their way up. The earnest, but human, Neville and the scheming Narcissa also appear. It ends with Astoria and Lucius giving in to their growing attraction and Astoria realizing she will come to him and respond to him as Narcissa does.
But in this chapter, it’s not clear things have reached the bottom. How much will Draco have to be involved in any resolution? At the moment, he is not included, and he is suspicious of his wife, of the business deal, and his father’s activities. Lucius, acting to neutralize a threat, has crossed the line. It is not clear how much Narcissa knows; she appears absorbed by her efforts to restore the family’s position.
On the other hand, a legitimate commercial arrangement looks feasible, and the Malfoys appear to care for each other. A resolution is possible based on the aristocrat view that conventional standards do not apply to them. Except there has been deceit, and that will make things more difficult.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for your very thoughtful and generous feedback! Draco will have to be involved in some resolutions, and in reference to Dante's Inferno, even though she is definitely not an Uncommitted, Narcissa is selective for various reasons and past experience, more about her and her point of views a bit later on.Hmmm, on reflecting about the last review and this one/the characters are at the bottom of the pit... I'm not sure if all of them will be able to claw their way up and out, to a new dawn--thank you for giving me more to think about... They may be wallowing a bit longer in the bottom circles:-) ... for it seemed for a while that Lucius had become quite adapted to all the circles and the rings of hell/life, but maybe, even for him, there could be a different restoration to life and participation of sorts in it.A bit more character exploration of how all involved, albeit aristocrats (and the definite entitled belief that conventional standards do not apply to them), will deal with the deceit and various choices presenting themselves, etc. What started out as a smut fic for a fanfic friend quickly turned into something much more--still not quite sure what, lol! Again, thank you so much for your observations and commentary, truly appreciate it!
Please consider completing this. It is a wonderful story.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so very much for your kind comments, truly appreciate it! I've almost got the next chapter finished and will work on it tonight and tomorrow and hopefully get it posted soon afterwards. The ending is finished, just have to connect the dots with full narrative, etc. :-) Your comments are just the nudge I needed, thanks again, so happy that you are enjoying it.
A complex chapter, but it might best be described as first traveling to the lowest depths of the Inferno, where we find the betrayers, and then beginning the climb out the other side.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and getting through all of this and for kindly leaving some feedback--yes, for Astoria, as well as for Lucius, in his own way, experiencing what's she's experience will help her to focus in the uncertain current state of affairs; Lucius will make further precarious decisions, protective ones from his point of view, but risky-- yes, each will help the other to climb up and out of this quagmire, one way or another. Thank you again for reading and the review, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A chapter revealing the multi-faceted Lucius. He is imperious, but he is jealous of Neville, and he reminds the catty women that Astoria is special. He remains imperious, but assures Astoria she is above responding to Pansy and Daphne, and he declares he wants to please and worship Astoria who realizes this is her attitude toward Draco.In a reversal, Astoria comes to him and takes what she wants.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the detailed and thoughtful feedback, truly, deeply appreciate it! Lucius is reclaiming his role in the post-war wizarding world, slowly but surely; yes, he is reminding the others of their place in his inner circle, as well as discovering, deciding, and declaring Astoria's meaning to both himself and how the others are expected to treat her. Astoria is questioning and discovering further aspects of herself, and Lucius; and yes, in a cliched in vino veritas depiction, she is letting the truth set her free and arousedly act in the moment. This will perhaps be a new path for her to continue on, sans cordial; thank you again for reviewing!
Good description of their passion and her yearning. Lucius, at this point, is interested in sex, domination, and heir, but he evinces no romantic feelings.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, Lucius is pursuing fully his interests and pleasure; well, their interests and pleasure; he is in agreement with her to fully engage and enjoy some sexual activity and to now sire an heir together, however, he is withholding romantic feelings from her, whether this is on purpose or because he is incapable or because it would make even him too vulnerable, etc. Thank you again for affirming what is coming across!
Lucius in full bloom. His lust, desire to dominate, and wish for an heir have found someone who is vulnerable to all three.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, in this opportune situation, all of his intense interests and needs are in full drive--he has nothing to lose and a pleasurable amount of indeterminable involvement to gain--he's plunging forward and is determined that she willingly embraces him and the situation fully, equally, well, as equal as he allows--thank you again for the read!
Lucius alternates between treating Astoria with disdain and expressing raging, possessive jealousy even though acting kindly and respectfully toward her when the family is present would make life easier for all of them. He cannot find his balance. Perhaps because he is in the grip of his emotions, and the loss of his usual total control has undone him. It may be that Astoria senses this on some level, and his wild behavior touches her deeply.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and for the generous feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, trying to capture Lucius in an erratic phase, in this unexpected turn of events, he is volatile, and approaching her from every angle and testing her limits and reaction to him, his conditions, his terms. However, a wildness has been unleashed within him, and yes, it seems that it has touched and tapped into a wildness within Astoria, which will be explored, as unforseeable as it is for her in her previous ignorance of her own nature. But perhaps Lucius' sense of self, his unbalance at this time as you pointed out, is because he will also be undergoing an unknown experience to some point in his effort to regain full control and balance in his life, etc. I'm struggling with trying to capture them having this irrational but undeniable chemistry between each other along with everything else going on. Thank you again for your feedback, it helps me understand what is coming across, again, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A depiction of Astoria's dilemma: the intense emotional and physical attraction of Astoria and Draco contrasted with her lust for Lucius, a future of deception, and an intrusive Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria and Draco's past and present, current attraction is presented, and the different levels and lust discovered in and with Lucius has presented itself. A future of deception is a heavy burden to bear for Astoria, she will struggle with whether she is able to handle it or not--an intrusive Lucius will no doubt help her to dig deeper and enlighten her, using and polishing up various Slytherin attributes. Thank you so much for reading this and the generous feedback of what is coming across in between the ginormous amount of pwp--truly, deeply appreciate your perceptive, exacting commentary! Thank you again!
Things are proceeding. Draco is being a dutiful son while still trying to protect Astoria from Lucius and trying to keep his father from his old ways. Lucius has lost enough that he cannot be reasonable or understanding. Astoria is trying to find a way through all of this, but succumbing to her own wild needs. There are hints that she will soften Lucius as she steeled Draco.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Draco is trying to hold firm with his current loyalties to the new order, his role and sense of authority that accompanies this, and protecting his family members from being further harmed--reminding his father of his erring ways to be checked and controlled, susceptible to his dubious habits, etc. Everyone is trying to disassociate themselves from the dark past; they may or may not be successful with this, and some things may merely manifest in other ways. Lucius will need much more time, if he is even willing to sincerely attempt and control himself, truly; he may be unable/unwilling, as his bitterness runs deep, scarred for life.Astoria's little secluded world has been invaded, and she has had and will continue to react/interact in ways she's never experienced before, in the process discovering new things about herself and the world beyond her borders. Yes, she will continue to affect both of her Malfoy men in exactly the way as perceived. Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, for your kind and generous time and detailed feedback to this tale--truly, deeply appreciate it! It has inspired and given me clarity and motivation in how I'll, eventually, finish this tale (I have the ending, but the last remaining chapters' scribbled notes can now be developed and filled in towards it, etc.). Thanks again!
The chapter begins with Astoria at the end of her rope. She only wants to hide under the covers.Narcissa appears, and she is as mysterious as ever. Perhaps she knows what her husband is doing and still indulges in passion. But Lucius believes he is getting no affection from her. Perhaps she is flirting with Harry and Neville. Perhaps she is playing a role and getting out of it what she can.Lucius appears and Astoria is stricken. He does not make her comfortable or happy.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria is having a bout of intense anxiety; in her aloneness, she knows not what else to do. More clarity on Narcissa a bit later on, as the story unfolds; she is and also has been a survivor of many a thing, and her motivation and objectives will be more explicitly revealed. Lucius' unexpected appearance, reminds Astoria that she is not her own woman, and his penchant for being unpredictable, friend or foe, whether he will be civil or threatening unnerves her momentarily. Her world, their world, has staunchly changed.Thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the detailed feedback, truly appreciate it!
From the way the characters were depicted inthe first chapter, the story could become either tragedy or character development. Lucius's focus is still on continuing the family line, and he changed his strategy with the new revelation, but he is developing feelings and admiration for Astoria. Astoria, despite all her misgivings, may be finding an anchor in Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the feedback. I was trying to capture and set up the Malfoys in murky territory, and from this point, have them struggling on to survive and sustain and reclaim, and slowly move forward. Continuing the family has plunged Lucius and Astoria into the same stream, and both must accommodate the other in mutual interests--yes, out of this interaction will be mostly character development and exploration. As keenly insightful as always, she will indeed find an anchor in Lucius, despite either one being, perhaps, satisfied with the terms, etc. Lucius' change in how he is viewing Astoria will allow him to relate to her differently than he has ever before, and yes, feel differently about her, slowly but surely, including but beyond the mere sexual, etc. Thank you again for reading, truly, deeply appreciate it!
Glad you have updated this tale, its very good!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the supportive feedback, truly appreciate it!So happy you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter, New Year's resolution: to finish this baby (this year)--lol! Thanks, again!
Someone needs to make this into a film!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Please, ma'am, I'd like some more. Now! :-)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Thank you! This chapter might just have saved my sanity. I am deeply in love with your Lucius!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Oh you are so mean to leave me hanging right there. What a hot and sweaty little story you have going here. Looking forward to more. I love the way you write Lucius!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Oh I am sure she is going to say much more than just please....
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Lucius, you naughty, naughty boy!! Laughed out loud on the bus at him making an entrance. People are looking at me strangely. Oh, if they knew...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
*splutter* Now I know why you told me to NOT read this on my way to work. This requires a very, VERY cold shower. What a delicious prick he is!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
OH I am quite confident she will say PLEASE!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
I never even thought that Narcissa might encourage Astoria to cheat to continue the Malfoy line. That is sick. And I do mean that as a compliment. Would it be wrong to confess that I hope it takes a while for Lucius to get Astoria preggers?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
I wonder how long he was standing there? I expect he will have more than one snide comment about boring Draco and his missionary position.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx