Caught in a Snare
Chapter 2 of 11
nagandsevSuch easy prey... Lucius just can't help taking advantage of the situation.
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Yesterday morning, Astoria had finished her morning work in her private botanical conservatory, which had been annexed to the manor's original greenhouse along with a potions laboratory as a wedding gift from Draco. She then hurried to go to her boudoir to bathe and change. Eagerly looking forward to going to Diagon Alley to meet Draco for a leisurely lunch, she stopped before going upstairs and made a detour first to the smaller, inner-drawing room of the manor, designated just for the family, where any mail was delivered and left. She was impatiently awaiting an owl from St Mungo with Draco and her fertility tests.
Expectantly, she glanced quickly over the softly-lit fireplace and hearth-rug to between the cushiony settee and sofa chair where an ornate, polished side table laid bare: No post!
Disappointed, she then hurried up the black marble stairs to give herself more leisurely time to bathe and primp, preparing herself especially to please Draco. She chose an ankle-length, satin black skirt, but for the blouse she hesitated before making a final decision. Hmm... the emerald-green bodice with the black laced plastron, one of Draco's favourites... just a low enough décolleté, the way he likes it.
After finishing her preparations, Astoria sauntered back down to the cosy drawing room, and to her delight, she saw that some owl posts had indeed arrived and been laid out on a side-morning table. Eagerly searching through them, her heart racing, expecting to find a bearer of good tidings among the parchments, she quickly became frustrated.
"Are you looking for this, perhaps?"
Startled, she turned around from where the question came.
It was Lucius. He was holding a posted letter in his hand.
"From St Mungo's. Your and Draco's fertility test results, perhaps?" There was an odd glint in his eyes.
Astoria walked slowly to Lucius and took the proffered envelope. "Yes, thank you."
She tried to suppress her shock. "It's been opened?"
"Of course. What concerns Draco and you, my dear, concerns me as well. Your business is my business." Ignoring his blatant breach of their privacy, Astoria's heart plunged knowing by Lucius' tone, not all was well with the fertility results. It's me... oh gods... what will happen? Will Lucius demand our marriage annulled?
She crossed around and sat on the plush sofa, bracing herself for the worst. Snatching the parchment open, reading her result first, she gasped softly. "I'm... I'm ... healthy... fertile." She slowly looked up and met Lucius' fixed gaze. Her eyes darted to the remaining part, but she closed them, reluctant to have the truth confirmed. No... no... this will devastate Draco. No, it can't be true!
She felt the virile presence of Lucius sitting beside her, his decisive taking of the parchment and thrusting it in front of her, forcing her to read the result. "Here!"
Sample 4: diagnosis: infertile +
"No, no," she whispered.
Devasted, Astoria's mind was racing. Draco mustn't know! She impulsively ripped the parchment into pieces and, jumping up, ran over to the fireplace and threw it in. She watched as the evidence was consumed by flames, temporarily giving her relief.
"That solves nothing," commented Lucius darkly.
Astoria felt weak in the knees and held onto the mantle for support. "You don't understand. It'll destroy Draco! Utterly destroy him. It's taken him so long to recuperate from the post-traumatic stress of ..." Tears welled up in her eyes, and she began trembling. She suddenly felt Lucius' firm hands grasp her around the waist and upper arm; he guided her back to the settee.
"You mustn't say anything to him! Please, Lucius, promise me," pleaded Astoria. In her heightened distress, she forgot herself. She grabbed and squeezed Lucius' hand, touching his chest with her other, almost clinging, silently pleading.
Lucius noted her urgent touch. It lit a deep burning within him. It had been too long a time since a witch had so simply, femininely touched him. It appealed to him. She appealed to him.
Behind his neutral façade, he could not deny that he found Astoria's full lips and dewey-eyed, fair countenance appealing. Her dark hair and hazel eyes are lovely, so very pleasing, so different than what I usually find attractive... my usual preference.
He had a raw impulse to taste the silky skin on her neck. I wonder if that's her natural scent or perfume? He inhaled slowly and gave Astoria a tart smile. She is that rare flower nowadays: a true Pureblood. Blood is everything for us old, pureblood families and hers has not been mixed with filth; the Greengrasses have continually kept the faith; only interbreeding with closely related parents: our ways have not been defiled... At the thought of Astoria's pristine bloodline, Lucius' cock twitched in pleasurable, dawning arousal. Yes, the sweet Greengrass has blossomed into a captivating, little piece of witchery... Haven't you, Astoria?
His cool calculating eyes then took in her sincere concern. She has some true feelings for Draco... How quaint. How utterly irresistible...
Affecting a sympathetic tone, Lucius gently pointed out, "He'll have to find out. Sooner or later, he must. When these results don't arrive, Draco will simply give another sample, perhaps without you knowing about it." Lucius fluttered his eyes thoughtfully, and emphasised, "Secretly, and then the truth will come out. These sort of things always do."
"No. No, it'll destroy him. He's... " Her voice faltered.
"Weak?" sneered Lucius. "That's not a secret, my dear. Not a new one, that is."
She protested, "He's not weak! He's... he's... It's easy to accuse someone of being weak, when you can't understand, refuse to understand what they've been through, what they have suffered! Voldemort"
She caught herself, realising too late that she had mentioned the one name no one in the household allowed to be uttered. By anyone. After all the loss, injury, harm and punishment the Malfoys had undergone from the Dark Lord, it was forbidden. Lucius forbade it.
"I'm sorry," she whispered, wincing. Meekly, Astoria offered, "You too suffered greatly. How then can you not understand?" Draco had been broken... his sense of identity and fledgling manhood broken to the core by Voldemort; after the final battle, a mere hollow shell of a young man...
But Lucius was adamantly fixated and riled beyond measure at her gall. "What do I not understand about Voldemort?" hissed Lucius vehemently. "You dare to speak his name in front of me, girl?"
Apprehension at the searing gaze Lucius was casting on her, she could only apologise again and again. "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to imply that... I don't want Draco hurt anymore... or you or anyone harmed... This, this will destroy him... he... he'd desperately hoped for a child. To become a father." Overcome with frustration, she stopped spluttering explanations.
Lucius watched as tears rolled silently down her cheeks. For the briefest second, something cracked slightly inside his hardened heart. Before he knew it, he had reached out and brushed the tears gently from her soft, moistened cheeks. As his fingertips slowly caressed her softness, he heard Astoria whisper, "Help me." Then, more resolutely, she pleaded, "Help us!"
Astoria looked up at Lucius. He was staring at her full lips, curious. Then his intense gaze snapped to peer into her hazel eyes, watching her every breath with his grey ones. Eyes which were so familiar. Draco's eyes. His whitish-blond hair, hanging sleekly, smoothly down his hardened, handsome face. The same as her husband's, only more defined. More lined with bitterness. The family genes were so very predominantly strong. It hit her hard how Draco's main characteristics were truly the same. Like father, like son... A rash, wild impulsive thought dawned on her. "Then, help us... help your son. Help me."
Lucius arched an eyebrow in answer, saying nothing.
"A sample. Your sample. Please." Impetuously, Astoria whispered, "Accio phial!" Within seconds, a laboratory phial appeared in her grasp. Her hand, trembling, held out the summoned container to Lucius.
Gazing at the object, pokerfaced, Lucius enquired curiously, "What, pray tell, is that for?"
Clinically, she bluntly told him, "Your sperm. Please. One sample is all." Astoria thrust the empty ampoule at him. "I'll take it directly to St Mungo's. I'm to meet Draco for lunch; I can drop it off beforehand for a second testing. The results will come back: positive," she analytically listed in one long breath.
Lucius started to point out the multitude of flaws in her impulsive idea. But didn't. Instead, he leisurely sat back, taking in Astoria's excited state which she was so poorly disguising. She's brimming with passion underneath her façade of primness. His eyes flitted appreciatively down to her décolleté. Something worn just for Draco, no doubt. He mused and reflected on the unexpected, delightful, opportunistic situation he now found himself being presented with; his eyes wide open. What a lovely, useful conniving little brain she has...
In her anxious state, Astoria chest began to undulate, breathing heavily, unnerved by Lucius' ambivalent stare boring through her and his seemingly relaxed unresponsiveness. If he refuses?
At long last, he finally commented, "Very well."
A warmth of relief gushed through her. "Oh, thank you, thank you." Again, Astoria proffered the phial, but he didn't take it. In fact, Lucius remained sitting very resolutely still, stone-faced, observing her.
"What is it? You just said you would..."
Slowly, he drawled, "If you think for one moment that I'm going to wank off like a Gryffindor schoolboy to fill that precious phial of yours, you're quite mistaken."
Shocked by his candid reference, but more so by the slow realisation of what Lucius was alternatively implying, reinforced by the smooth movement of uncrossing his legs, spreading them provocatively with the slightest tilt upward of his pelvis, Astoria was at a lost for words.
Seeing the comprehension of his body language dawn on Astoria's face, he smugly invited, "If you want it, come and get it, my dear girl."
Aghast, she struggled to form words. "You can't mean you don't mean..."
"Oh, but I do."
Her face scorched red, and her chest tightened; she could barely breathe. She scooted away from him unable to speak.
Silence ensued. They stared at each other. Stalemated.
But Lucius knew that only he held the winning card. Only he had what she wanted. What she needed. He sniffed, and then sentimentally observed, "Poor Draco, not only will he find out he's infertile, but, as is the case for many wizards, this sort of news renders one temporarily impotent; sometimes with permanent effects. Your cousin Rodolphus, for example, was such. Drove Bella quite mad."
Astoria turned away from him, staring into the burning embers of fire.
Patronisingly, he mused, "Draco's always been too sensitive for his own good; gets that from his mother's side. The sensitive type. But, judging by your intimate relations, or lack of, you already know full well his inability to perform as he should."
Astoria began sputtering incoherently. "He is not... He's been under incredible stress how can you insinuate how dare you?"
"Well, when you've calmed down a bit, when you're able to think through all of this more rationally," Lucius hand grazed slowly over the pronounced bulge of his crotch to rest on his thigh. "My offer will still stand. Quite stiffly stand, I should say." He smirked.
Astoria's facial muscles flinched; she was flustered, bewildered and panicking all at the same time. What am I to do? Draco was expecting her for lunch. She'd destroyed the results from the old sample; she needed Lucius' sperm I can leave it at St Mungo's before meeting Draco at the Ministry. She sighed frustrated, ruminating how she would only be able to stall for a day or two if....
She contemplated her worst nightmare: What if Draco goes to St Mungo's and insists on seeing the results? Only to be told they've already been sent? I have to act immediately! Even if I swore I never received them... It'd be so easy for him to ask for another copy or give another sample and wait personally for the result... That was the cruel reality awaiting her at some point, either tomorrow or the next day the truth was inevitable.
Draco would be devastated. Beyond repair. Utterly broken, once and for all: permanently damaged. In his post-depressive state, only the thought and prayer of rebuilding his life, reinventing himself in the post-war world with Astoria as his partner had given him strength, returned his belief in himself. Draco's only remaining wish was a child to fill in the missing piece to the puzzle. A child to whom he would give his love and dreams to.
The thought and prayer of future redemption with and through his own family to heal the mistakes of his past. This is what we both promised each other to have and make...
"All right," she hoarsely whispered. "All right. When can I do 'it' when can I get the sample?"
A pleasurable rush coursed through Lucius' veins. His cock twitched, excited. I've won.
"Now is as good a time as any. I believe for your purposes, the sooner the better? Lunchtime isn't far away," replied Lucius coolly.
"Now?"
"Yes. Now." His eyes glinted with a hint of amusement, as he saw her shocked, hesitant manner of where and how to begin. To his immense surprise and pleasure, Astoria's awkward, embarrassed reserve was arousing him quite feverishly. He could feel his muscles tensing as the pleasurable, adrenaline flooded through his veins like lightening; he hadn't felt such a rush in a very long time. His arousal pulsed more pronouncedly. He heard himself impatiently coerce, "Come, come, no need to be shy... Just think of me as a biological specimen. Pollen needing extraction from one of your plants in your nursery."
Unable to look at him, she cast her eyes down and whispered tersely, "No need to mock me!" She felt dizzy, realising what was about to happen. What I must do!
"No mocking intended. This is not just about you. Or me. This is for Draco... for our Draco... for the future of our family: the pureblood lineage, the Malfoy lineage."
As he saw her disposition relax a minuscule bit, Lucius smiled to himself, knowing he would get his unforseen carnal satisfaction, unfettered, by playing to her feelings for Draco. Nor was he going to point out the obvious flaw: My semen in your little phial? Yes... but only my seed deep within you, buried and planted in your fertile womb is what is truly needed, my sweet dear... He stroked his upper thigh languidly, musing. Why indeed spoil what was presenting itself as a titillating prospect? The promise of further, unexpected pleasures to fill up his boredom and bide his time until he would be reinstated: trusted, respected and active in the wizarding community again.
This was too much to pass up. Such easy prey. Astoria being too beside herself to think things through clearly only added fuel to his fire.
He huskily pointed out, "We're quite alone. Narcissa won't return from her travels until tomorrow. Draco is at the Ministry all day; the filthy little house-elf daren't show its snout unless called. We have the whole Manor to ourselves."
He watched as she processed the information, and now that the tabooed proposal had been accepted, a myriad of sensual scenarios danced before Lucius' musings. With a new keeness, he noted her curves and expression. He gave himself permission to now admire and appreciate the multitude of pleasing, provoking details of Astoria's couture and the physical lines and curves the clothing covered. It amused him highly to anticipate what he would uncover. What a luscious piece of arse he'd be sure to discover. Very soon. Patience, Lucius. Patience.
Astoria couldn't look at Lucius. Her cheeks were burning and blood racing. She couldn't stop to think rationally; her emotions had taken over, and all she knew was that she needed his sperm, and she needed it now. Let me get this over with! Pushing aside her embarrassment and anger, channelling her concentration, she placed the phial down on the side table and leaned over his lap; she started unbuttoning the lower part of his long waistcoat, clumsily pulling his shirtails out, then awkwardly plucking his trouser's waist hooks open.
"No need to be so rough... no need to hurry..." teased Lucius wryly.
Refusing to have any eye contact with him, she shushed tartly, "Don't!" A thousand things rushed through her mind, and her fingers began trembling.
"Don't what?" The threat of his potential uncooperation laced his tone.
Astoria had stopped. The moment of truth appeared as she fixated on his twitching, tenting cock pressing against his silken underpants. Gods, what am I doing? She closed her eyes and whispered, "Don't you realise what we're doing?
"Saving Draco's life, saving the house of Malfoy," came the hoarse, throaty whisper from Lucius accompanied by his fingertips gently placed on and exploring the fullness of her hips. "It shows the depth of your love for him that you'd do this; I do so admire you, Astoria you are a true pureblood witch of the utmost degree." His hand had travelled down her half-bending form and felt under her satin skirt to discover the svelteness of her silk stockings covering her defined calve, caressing it. I wonder if the stockings are thigh high? "You must truly love him to do this for him for your future family... your future life."
She tuned his crooning rhetoric off. Just do it!
Having unbuttoned his trousers completely, her fingertips reached out and ever so lightly traced his stiffened cock which throbbed at her delicate touch. She stroked it gently through the silken material, but as she heard a sharp hissing inhalation from Lucius, she took the plunge and lowered his underpants, urgently and with an unforeseen excitement.
Lucius hastily raised his hips and helped push his underpants and trousers completely down to his ankles, swiftly kicking them off and away.
At the boldness of this initial action, a primeval impetus took over and Astoria forgot all else and began to stroke his throbbing, hardening cock in earnest, feeling its erect, swollen full length, burning in her hand. The tip was glistening and beckoning her to taste his pre-cum.
Which she did.
Having only expected a quick hand job, Lucius felt her warm, wet mouth envelope his knob's head, licking its center staff slowly, and let out an ecstatic groan.
The taste, touch and sound of him responding to her, made Astoria's libido kick into overdrive and she forgot everything but pleasuring him with her tongue and touch. She began to slowly swirl and suck his member, around and around, whilst keeping her rhythmic stroking tight on his shaft's base, firmly increasing the swelling pressure.
Lucius gasped and huffed, relishing her stroking and pumping.
And heavenly sucking... It's been so long...
His breathing became irregular, and then he felt his balls tightening up.
Lucius became rigid, trying to hold off, not wanting to blow his wad so soon; but nevertheless, Astoria felt his hot seed shooting out to the back of her throat. She swallowed hard. Momentarily lost in satisfaction. Lost in aroused oblivion.
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A/N: My greatest gratitude to the one and only, mentor, beta and *nudger* extraordinaire: star_girl!
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looking foward to more... great story!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the kind, encouraging feedback, truly appreciate it! So happy that you're enjoying it, thanks again!
I've been reading this at AFF - which I hate because they don't send out update notices. Now I discover it's posted here - which is irritating because they no longer send out update notices. Could I get you to post it to your AO3 account [yeah, I looked there, too.] Please, please, please. This is not a pairing I usually read, but your story has my attention now and I'd love to know when the next update is going to be!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear Darque Heart, thank you so much for continuing to read, and happy that you took a chance on a rare pairing though it's not your usual preference, truly appreciate it!I think if you tick the 'Add/Update Bookmark icon' near the top of a chapter's page, the system should send you an update notice, or tick the 'add fav story'--but if you just tick the update bookmark icon, that should do it--however, since I don't know when I'll be able to post at AO3 (sorry, I lost my password, etc.--haven't had much free time to write, and haven't been on that site, unfortunately, for years), if you'd like, I could send you an email when I update via your TPP account, if that's okay? If not, I'll try to explore AO3 again when I have some holiday days off from work this summer (plan to catch up on all things fandom) Thanks again for your continued interest!
Dear author. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this beautiful story. Usually I read only SS/HG stories my favorite pairing. You open my eyes with this incredible pairing. I like Lucius character. He is a bit darker than Severus with very slytherin but interesting motives. I can't help but wish to see Astoria's pregnant with Lucius' child and how they will deal with it even if I feel bad for Draco. Being cheated by his own father is awful but the conflict between one' interests and the family's one is intriguing. What is more important? The Family's line? Individual hapiness? Truly this story is captivating with characters well built. You hook me hard and fast.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so very much for reading this even though it is about a different pairing other than what you usually prefer--truly, deeply appreciate it!Also, thank you so much for your thoughtful, insightful feedback--so glad to know that Lucius is coming across as intended, as well as Astoria and Draco (trying to keep the empathy/sympathy for Draco, as I feel for anyone in his predicament) --I'm trying to keep but explore Lucius being Slytherin as well as other, human, areas of him, etc. You've touched on the major dilemmas of each of the characters that will be continued to be explored and wrestled with--one's interests versus larger/family ones, the Family's line, etc., and the innate motivations of Astoria, Lucius, and Draco, and all involved. Again, thank you so much for reading, and I'm so happy that you are enjoying this tale and for your consideration!
In the previous chapter, Astoria was taking herself to the depths with the aid of Lucius, and many things were revealed. One revelation is that Lucius believed he could give a measured amount of Astoria to another, but he discovers he is possessive about her. The review's conjecture was that the characters were at the bottom of the pit as in Dante’s Inferno with the betrayers and, after this, they would claw their way up. The earnest, but human, Neville and the scheming Narcissa also appear. It ends with Astoria and Lucius giving in to their growing attraction and Astoria realizing she will come to him and respond to him as Narcissa does.
But in this chapter, it’s not clear things have reached the bottom. How much will Draco have to be involved in any resolution? At the moment, he is not included, and he is suspicious of his wife, of the business deal, and his father’s activities. Lucius, acting to neutralize a threat, has crossed the line. It is not clear how much Narcissa knows; she appears absorbed by her efforts to restore the family’s position.
On the other hand, a legitimate commercial arrangement looks feasible, and the Malfoys appear to care for each other. A resolution is possible based on the aristocrat view that conventional standards do not apply to them. Except there has been deceit, and that will make things more difficult.
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Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for your very thoughtful and generous feedback! Draco will have to be involved in some resolutions, and in reference to Dante's Inferno, even though she is definitely not an Uncommitted, Narcissa is selective for various reasons and past experience, more about her and her point of views a bit later on.Hmmm, on reflecting about the last review and this one/the characters are at the bottom of the pit... I'm not sure if all of them will be able to claw their way up and out, to a new dawn--thank you for giving me more to think about... They may be wallowing a bit longer in the bottom circles:-) ... for it seemed for a while that Lucius had become quite adapted to all the circles and the rings of hell/life, but maybe, even for him, there could be a different restoration to life and participation of sorts in it.A bit more character exploration of how all involved, albeit aristocrats (and the definite entitled belief that conventional standards do not apply to them), will deal with the deceit and various choices presenting themselves, etc. What started out as a smut fic for a fanfic friend quickly turned into something much more--still not quite sure what, lol! Again, thank you so much for your observations and commentary, truly appreciate it!
Please consider completing this. It is a wonderful story.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so very much for your kind comments, truly appreciate it! I've almost got the next chapter finished and will work on it tonight and tomorrow and hopefully get it posted soon afterwards. The ending is finished, just have to connect the dots with full narrative, etc. :-) Your comments are just the nudge I needed, thanks again, so happy that you are enjoying it.
A complex chapter, but it might best be described as first traveling to the lowest depths of the Inferno, where we find the betrayers, and then beginning the climb out the other side.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and getting through all of this and for kindly leaving some feedback--yes, for Astoria, as well as for Lucius, in his own way, experiencing what's she's experience will help her to focus in the uncertain current state of affairs; Lucius will make further precarious decisions, protective ones from his point of view, but risky-- yes, each will help the other to climb up and out of this quagmire, one way or another. Thank you again for reading and the review, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A chapter revealing the multi-faceted Lucius. He is imperious, but he is jealous of Neville, and he reminds the catty women that Astoria is special. He remains imperious, but assures Astoria she is above responding to Pansy and Daphne, and he declares he wants to please and worship Astoria who realizes this is her attitude toward Draco.In a reversal, Astoria comes to him and takes what she wants.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the detailed and thoughtful feedback, truly, deeply appreciate it! Lucius is reclaiming his role in the post-war wizarding world, slowly but surely; yes, he is reminding the others of their place in his inner circle, as well as discovering, deciding, and declaring Astoria's meaning to both himself and how the others are expected to treat her. Astoria is questioning and discovering further aspects of herself, and Lucius; and yes, in a cliched in vino veritas depiction, she is letting the truth set her free and arousedly act in the moment. This will perhaps be a new path for her to continue on, sans cordial; thank you again for reviewing!
Good description of their passion and her yearning. Lucius, at this point, is interested in sex, domination, and heir, but he evinces no romantic feelings.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, Lucius is pursuing fully his interests and pleasure; well, their interests and pleasure; he is in agreement with her to fully engage and enjoy some sexual activity and to now sire an heir together, however, he is withholding romantic feelings from her, whether this is on purpose or because he is incapable or because it would make even him too vulnerable, etc. Thank you again for affirming what is coming across!
Lucius in full bloom. His lust, desire to dominate, and wish for an heir have found someone who is vulnerable to all three.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, in this opportune situation, all of his intense interests and needs are in full drive--he has nothing to lose and a pleasurable amount of indeterminable involvement to gain--he's plunging forward and is determined that she willingly embraces him and the situation fully, equally, well, as equal as he allows--thank you again for the read!
Lucius alternates between treating Astoria with disdain and expressing raging, possessive jealousy even though acting kindly and respectfully toward her when the family is present would make life easier for all of them. He cannot find his balance. Perhaps because he is in the grip of his emotions, and the loss of his usual total control has undone him. It may be that Astoria senses this on some level, and his wild behavior touches her deeply.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and for the generous feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, trying to capture Lucius in an erratic phase, in this unexpected turn of events, he is volatile, and approaching her from every angle and testing her limits and reaction to him, his conditions, his terms. However, a wildness has been unleashed within him, and yes, it seems that it has touched and tapped into a wildness within Astoria, which will be explored, as unforseeable as it is for her in her previous ignorance of her own nature. But perhaps Lucius' sense of self, his unbalance at this time as you pointed out, is because he will also be undergoing an unknown experience to some point in his effort to regain full control and balance in his life, etc. I'm struggling with trying to capture them having this irrational but undeniable chemistry between each other along with everything else going on. Thank you again for your feedback, it helps me understand what is coming across, again, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A depiction of Astoria's dilemma: the intense emotional and physical attraction of Astoria and Draco contrasted with her lust for Lucius, a future of deception, and an intrusive Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria and Draco's past and present, current attraction is presented, and the different levels and lust discovered in and with Lucius has presented itself. A future of deception is a heavy burden to bear for Astoria, she will struggle with whether she is able to handle it or not--an intrusive Lucius will no doubt help her to dig deeper and enlighten her, using and polishing up various Slytherin attributes. Thank you so much for reading this and the generous feedback of what is coming across in between the ginormous amount of pwp--truly, deeply appreciate your perceptive, exacting commentary! Thank you again!
Things are proceeding. Draco is being a dutiful son while still trying to protect Astoria from Lucius and trying to keep his father from his old ways. Lucius has lost enough that he cannot be reasonable or understanding. Astoria is trying to find a way through all of this, but succumbing to her own wild needs. There are hints that she will soften Lucius as she steeled Draco.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Draco is trying to hold firm with his current loyalties to the new order, his role and sense of authority that accompanies this, and protecting his family members from being further harmed--reminding his father of his erring ways to be checked and controlled, susceptible to his dubious habits, etc. Everyone is trying to disassociate themselves from the dark past; they may or may not be successful with this, and some things may merely manifest in other ways. Lucius will need much more time, if he is even willing to sincerely attempt and control himself, truly; he may be unable/unwilling, as his bitterness runs deep, scarred for life.Astoria's little secluded world has been invaded, and she has had and will continue to react/interact in ways she's never experienced before, in the process discovering new things about herself and the world beyond her borders. Yes, she will continue to affect both of her Malfoy men in exactly the way as perceived. Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, for your kind and generous time and detailed feedback to this tale--truly, deeply appreciate it! It has inspired and given me clarity and motivation in how I'll, eventually, finish this tale (I have the ending, but the last remaining chapters' scribbled notes can now be developed and filled in towards it, etc.). Thanks again!
The chapter begins with Astoria at the end of her rope. She only wants to hide under the covers.Narcissa appears, and she is as mysterious as ever. Perhaps she knows what her husband is doing and still indulges in passion. But Lucius believes he is getting no affection from her. Perhaps she is flirting with Harry and Neville. Perhaps she is playing a role and getting out of it what she can.Lucius appears and Astoria is stricken. He does not make her comfortable or happy.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria is having a bout of intense anxiety; in her aloneness, she knows not what else to do. More clarity on Narcissa a bit later on, as the story unfolds; she is and also has been a survivor of many a thing, and her motivation and objectives will be more explicitly revealed. Lucius' unexpected appearance, reminds Astoria that she is not her own woman, and his penchant for being unpredictable, friend or foe, whether he will be civil or threatening unnerves her momentarily. Her world, their world, has staunchly changed.Thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the detailed feedback, truly appreciate it!
From the way the characters were depicted inthe first chapter, the story could become either tragedy or character development. Lucius's focus is still on continuing the family line, and he changed his strategy with the new revelation, but he is developing feelings and admiration for Astoria. Astoria, despite all her misgivings, may be finding an anchor in Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the feedback. I was trying to capture and set up the Malfoys in murky territory, and from this point, have them struggling on to survive and sustain and reclaim, and slowly move forward. Continuing the family has plunged Lucius and Astoria into the same stream, and both must accommodate the other in mutual interests--yes, out of this interaction will be mostly character development and exploration. As keenly insightful as always, she will indeed find an anchor in Lucius, despite either one being, perhaps, satisfied with the terms, etc. Lucius' change in how he is viewing Astoria will allow him to relate to her differently than he has ever before, and yes, feel differently about her, slowly but surely, including but beyond the mere sexual, etc. Thank you again for reading, truly, deeply appreciate it!
Glad you have updated this tale, its very good!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the supportive feedback, truly appreciate it!So happy you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter, New Year's resolution: to finish this baby (this year)--lol! Thanks, again!
Someone needs to make this into a film!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Please, ma'am, I'd like some more. Now! :-)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Thank you! This chapter might just have saved my sanity. I am deeply in love with your Lucius!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Oh you are so mean to leave me hanging right there. What a hot and sweaty little story you have going here. Looking forward to more. I love the way you write Lucius!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Oh I am sure she is going to say much more than just please....
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Lucius, you naughty, naughty boy!! Laughed out loud on the bus at him making an entrance. People are looking at me strangely. Oh, if they knew...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
*splutter* Now I know why you told me to NOT read this on my way to work. This requires a very, VERY cold shower. What a delicious prick he is!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
OH I am quite confident she will say PLEASE!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
I never even thought that Narcissa might encourage Astoria to cheat to continue the Malfoy line. That is sick. And I do mean that as a compliment. Would it be wrong to confess that I hope it takes a while for Lucius to get Astoria preggers?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
I wonder how long he was standing there? I expect he will have more than one snide comment about boring Draco and his missionary position.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx