Iris Sanguinea, The Blood Iris
Chapter 6 of 11
nagandsevGiven a dubious ultimatum, Astoria realizes that her deception has plummeted her over the edge to a point of no return, and Lucius has her just where he wants her.
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Narcissa! She could've caught us... What is Lucius thinking? This is insanity! Astoria's heart was thumping hard in her chest, and she could only slump against the cool manor walls for several seconds, collecting her thoughts.
Shaken and confused more than ever by Lucius, Astoria slowly made her way to the nursery conservatory.
The late morning sunlight was weak and grey, faintly penetrating through the greenhouse section. Astoria threw herself into her work, attempting to immerse and distract herself fully from thinking about Lucius. Unsuccessfully.
As she attempted to methodically snip and tweak, catalogue and test purities with a clear mind, thoughts of what had just transpired on the stairway flitted to and fro, and she shuddered at the membrance of Lucius fiercely shaking her and threatening, You don't think you can be replaced? She teared up as she recalled his severe warning, You will lose everything!
It had been a while since she had witnessed Lucius and his unique menacing air, which he reserved especially for 'final warnings'. Throughout her life, she had seen him enact it on Draco, on various members of the inner family circle as well as the inner Death Eaters who had inevitably been intertwined in various gatherings, esoteric and otherwise.
But this was the first time she had so closely experienced it herself the target. The promised underlying violent energy he could exude raked her nerves unbearably.
And then, there was the passion. The uncontrollable, volatile chemistry between them.
He wants to be in control of my pleasure? I don't want him to be in... I don't want him to... I don't... I... The simultaneous confusion and need he caused in her was overwhelming and frightening.
So she frantically plucked various leaf and petal samples, forcing herself to test each one's sap density and continue cataloguing them. After half an hour or so, finally lost in classifications, she was oblivious to the fact that Lucius had returned and entered the nursery.
Watching her absorbed figure, the elder Malfoy stealthily approached her workplace nook.
Suddenly, Astoria felt another presence. His presence. She turned and looked over, seeing her father-in-law. By his intense stare, she recognised that he was both miffed and aroused.
As Lucius walked stiffly and slowly towards her, a heaviness filled the air. He stopped a few feet away from his daughter-in-law, giving her a look up and down. "My meeting finished early." And I still have unfinished business here...
Appreciating her dressed still in a morning robe, Lucius then spied a plush settee in front of them near her work table.
Crossing and looking shrewdly around in the open space in front of her workplace, he commented in a lazy drawl, "Quite a renovation... A potions laboratory? Herbology greenhouse?" His heavy-lidded eyes slowly lingered on her. He referred to an object of interest near her. "A settee? A very interesting addition." He smiled coyly. "How convenient. How quaint. Like you, my dear."
"When I tire, I can take rest, or..." Her voice faltered as Lucius slowly approached even closer, now standing mere inches away from her. She started to move away. However, her L-shaped work table and shelved plants and bottled samples, enclosed snugly around and behind her, didn't allow for much distance. Avoiding his piercing, grey eyes, she only had an instinct to keep speaking to keep him at bay. "The annexation it was for blending my two favourite disciplines: Potions and Herbology. They're very complementary of each other, very intertwined studies and properties..."
"Yes, I'm sure they are," drawled Lucius in a bored tone; his forced smile didn't reach his eyes. "I'm sure you were one of Snape's prize students..."
"He was a brilliant professor..."
"Snape was many things," cut off Lucius in a strained voice. "An accomplished wizard, and as a man, he was..." The blond wizard's voice trailed off.
With an unusual air of duplicity surrounding him, Lucius gazed slowly around at the myriad of plants filling the space. The deep purple of the nearest flower potted on a lower shelf of her immediate work table unexpectedly caught his eye.
"Lovely... so lovely," he murmurred and reached out, feather-lightly touching one petal.
Taken aback by his gentle gesture, hesitantly, Astoria offered, "An iris."
Blinking, as if remembering a long ago memory, he uttered, "A 'Blood Iris'. Iris sanguinea, precisely, yes?" Lucius snapped his head to her, catching her startled look at his knowledge. Lucius smirked. "Subgenera: Scorpiris..." Pleased her full lips had opened in surprise, he stepped closer, intent on touching her. Intent on embracing her.
"So contrary, and you accuse me of contrariness, my dear Astoria? Or is it that you enjoy being pursued by me? Hmmn?"
"I've never accused you of..."
"No, but you think it, don't you, my dear, in that lovely, scheming brain of yours..."
She opened her mouth to protest against his comment, but quickly shut it, knowing there was more than a grain of truth regarding her being capable of 'scheming'. Nonetheless, Astoria was irked by his reminding her of any commonality between them in that way.
Lucius reached out to touch her, and she flinched, unsure of what exactly he would do next. Unsure of herself.
With very light fingertips, Lucius caressed her cheek and spoke in a low voice, "My little Slytherin schemer doesn't want my touch? But you quite opened up to me in the Ministry yesterday, and just this morning... Your lovely sex, just like this beautiful iris' petals, a lovely deep purple, Astoria..."
He stepped closer to her, leaning forward to nuzzle in her hair and nip the soft flesh of her earlobe. "Have you decided to lose everything?" he asked softly. His contradictory gentleness in tone made his horrid implication, disguising his ultimatum, devastating.
"To lose everything?" gasped Astoria, horrified at his continued cruel implications. Was she willing to risk who-knew-what all to defy Lucius on any level? But how dare he imply that I would commit adultery with anyone besides... besides... Her thoughts faltered. She had committed adultery with her husband's father, so she was capable of scheming and possibly much more than she ever knew. The situation frightened her. She frightened herself. Lucius was quickly leading her down a path of licentiousness which she'd never known she was capable of.
But this is different... This is to save... Draco..., she desperately told herself. Who knew what Draco would do in the stillness of the night if Lucius revealed their indiscretion? If the Malfoy patriarch demanded that Astoria be 'replaced'? In a lone moment of darkness, in desperation, or branded humiliation, what would be the options?
For Draco, the means would never justify the end...Astoria knew this for certain about him. If he knew his father was fucking his wife, whether to conceive an heir for the larger scheme of things or not, either violence or death would prevail, leaving nothing and no one left unscarred. The possibilities were too devastating to consider.
In the midst of all these maddening possibilities, Astoria knew that she could not live without Draco; he was a part of her, and therefore, she could not live without things remaining 'as is'. And things could not remain 'as is' without Lucius' full cooperation and participation. Astoria trembled in resignation, knowing she was in far too deep with Lucius.
As Astoria realised that her deception had already plummeted her over the edge to a point of no return, she gave a pitiful cry. She had failed. She had failed Draco. Failed their marriage. Failed everything she had been striving for with their life together. Failed herself. And now, she was left dependent on Lucius' good will.
Lucius watched as she cracked in front of him. As the brutal threat and reality of him ready and capable of using all of his power against her sunk in and broke her down, piece by piece, realization by realization. His mind-fucking was working. His steel-grey eyes gleamed as the tears rolled down her face. I have her just where I want her...
As Astoria felt Lucius gently touch her, slowly gathering her in his arms, she began to weep in earnest. Whatever he wants... whatever Lucius wants... She made her final, irreversible decision, saying to herself like a mantra: I don't want anything to change... I don't want to lose Draco ever... I'll do whatever I must to keep things the same... Our lives must stay the same even if it's a façade on the surface... everything must stay as is!
She gave a cry of defeat.
"Shhh... Shhh," her father-in-law hushed softly. "Astoria... Astoria... My delicate, exquisite flower."
Lucius smiled to himself. He had broken her. And now, he would remold her to fit him. To fit his needs. She will be mine utterly... She is mine...
Thus, to seal the deal.
First, to sire an heir.
So, he changed his strategy.
Unlike in her office at the Ministry, his rough and disconcerting forcefulness, Lucius gently cupped her face between his hands and began ever-so-gently kissing her salty, wet cheeks. His lips moved upwards, and as if she were a child, he kissed her forehead.
Astoria then felt the feather-light brushes of his kisses on each of her closed eyelids. Uncontrollably, she trembled as the pressure of his lips continued lower, more intensely, as he trailed back to her mouth. Lunging, he kissed her feverishly, opening her mouth, and his sharp tongue entered decisively, deep and needy.
Lucius heard her muffled moans and felt her energy shift from passively resisting to intensely focusing on him, on their mouths exploring each other. Then, it clicked. She reciprocated fully the pressure, the plunging, the need. Raw need. Hmm... now I have her... Now it begins...
But the Malfoy patriarch had still not decided how slowly or fast he would take her. From his viewpoint, he considered that he'd never forced himself on her in any way...he'd never needed to...she came to him first. She started it all... But, she needs to be reminded who is in charge now. Make the witch beg... Make her truly believe it is indeed her idea... So Lucius broke away from her mouth, allowing his lips to explore the silky flesh leading to her cleavage and full breasts. Persuade her yes. Coax her yes. Seduce her I've already succeeded in ensnaring her... Her sweet blow job and other ministrations yesterday have proven that now only to claim her, to mark her completely as mine, and then... She'll be a lovely vessel to service my needs...
A further thought of amusement occurred to him, remembering how she hadn't understood him clearly regarding being in charge of her sexual pleasure. Mmmn, she must be taught... His facial muscles tensed in shrewdness, and he reflected further, Yes, first, she must willingly give herself to me. She will submit to me; she will beg me to take her...
Smugly, he raised his head from a nipple he had just begun to suckle, and he observed her waiting and watching him with bated breath. He reached to her side, abruptly giving his attention to the flower again and touching it.
I'll just be claiming what's already been offered... Intensely aware of Astoria watching his every move, he savoured every shallow, panting breath she took, her dilated pupils beckoning him back. Lucius stroked the iris' petals, gently caressing them as he pointed out, "So lovely. The inflorescence is fan-shaped, six-lobed, unlike the human two-lobed petals..."
Her needy touch on his arm caused him to swoop back, and his lips caught hers again. A soft gasp escaped her lips as she felt his fingers slowly gathering her skirt up, the tell-tale signal of further irretraceable foreplay beginning.
Lucius paused, waiting for her to possibly protest, waiting for any remonstrations, verbally or physically. For this time, once he began, there would be no interruptions, no going back.
Receiving none, he continued to languidly touch her. Now, I can enjoy her at my leisure.
"The sepals are recurved." His fingers had found the soft, curvaceous flesh of her upper thighs and hips, and he gently made circular patterns to between her legs. Finding and strumming her outer labia folds, he whispered, "They droop downwards, outwards, preparing for and awaiting pollination."
Astoria felt one hand knead and cup the fullness of her buttocks while the tingling sensation of his other hand probed and strummed around her silky mound, finding and spreading her nethermost lips. She jerked and pushed against his chest, only to tremble uncontrollably as he inserted first one finger, then another.
"Mmnn... your tuft and stigmati lips are quite moist already, aren't they, Astoria?" His fingers massaged and explored her. He inhaled sharply as her soft, plump wetness gushed forth from her Venus mound's slickened slit. He rhythmically stroked, circularly pressed and fingered her; his member strained in his trousers, so hardened and aching.
By now Astoria was no longer pushing against him but clinging for dear life on his chest. Her body had betrayed her. Her mind had betrayed her. And nothing was left but need responding to need. Her thighs spread wider and wider, inviting him to explore her deeper and deeper.
With a sharp inhalation, in one movement, he lifted and placed her on the table's edge, tilting her torso backward, cradling her undulating, squirming body with one muscular arm while he opened her legs, pressing his hips between them. He continued to finger her at a perfect angle, harder and faster, her spread legs dangling and trembling around him. He paused for the briefest second and then pressed his thumb on her swollen clitoris, relishing her reaction.
She gasped and mewled, her eyes shut tight in abandoned pleasure.
Impulsively, his lips found the softness of her neck: he nipped and sucked at the silky skin, threatening to bite into it, while lowering and pressing her fully down on the table. "Now for the pollinator's taste of your nectar, again." He huskily confessed, "I've had a craving for your flavour ever since I first tasted you." His head lunged down, taking the place of his apt fingers. His burning mouth licked and lapped her juices. Holding her thighs spread firmly apart, her muscles pulsating in his iron grip, he rubbed the protruding delicate nub of her clitoris with his nose's tip, breathing in her essence, and swooped his lips upwards, latching on and sucking. Excruciatingly slow, he steadily increased the pressure, swirling his pointed tongue deeper into her, maneuvering her quivering, slippery sex, until he heard her moaning in wanton abandonment, climaxing, shattering utterly in his mouth and hands. He pulled back; his cum-covered mouth kissed her inner thigh, and he breathed heavily on her slick cunt, resting his head on her burning sex. She's so wet...
Then, still keeping his steely hands pressed down on her trembling thighs, he slowly rose and gazed down on Astoria, still in the throes of post-orgasm. He smiled smugly and leaned forward, untying her robe, and in one quick movement he ripped her thin, laced nightdress open.
Astoria hazily watched him from under her half-closed eyelids, heavy with desire. She felt him leisurely caress and then firmly pinch her hardened, pointed nipples, smarting in aching pain to be sucked and touched more. "Yes," she moaned in abandoned relief, grateful, as he came to her body's need. "Oh, yes!" Briskly, his burning hot mouth and searing tongue twirled and sucked each one, his long hair falling on and around her sensitized skin, tickling, causing her to writhe in a wild frenzy of arousal. She groaned, biting her lower lip in heated pleasure. Her eyes closed tight as he continued to administer pressure methodically and orally from her breast down to the sensitive flesh on her sides and rounded hips.
Lower he sucked and nipped. Lower he licked and lingered on her lower abdomen's silken skin. His hot, hungry mouth seared her inner core as his fingers spread her buttocks, massaging them deeply and firmly around and around, his fingertips grazing and teasing over and around her anus. Then, abruptly, he stopped.
Lucius raised up to his full height, breathing deep and hard.
Astoria's lips were formed in a sensual 'O' as her vaginal muscles contracted frantically in anticipation, stimulated and tense with need, waiting for him to enter her.
Lucius noted her swollen lips, her eyes full of desire, her body undulating, beckoning him to claim her. So very ready. Ready for me to fuck her, however I like...
Luxuriating in a dreamy state of arousal from his expert stimulation, she opened her eyes wider to see Lucius slowly unbuttoning his trousers, leaving her to wait in anticipatory frustration. She watched with shallow breaths of expectation at how calmly and deliberately he pushed them, along with his underpants, slowly down, stepping out of them. Very controlled, he fastidiously finished undressing and placed his clothing on the back of her work chair. As he turned back to her, she saw he was hard and so very erect. Her most intimate muscles spasmed wildly in unbridled, raw desire.
Lucius crossed back to her and stood looking down on her suppliant form, his steel-grey eyes gleaming secretively. "You're so wet, Astoria... Why are you so wet, my sweet? Hmmn?"
She couldn't think, let alone form words; she was shamelessly aching to have him inside her. Her need making her mute with yearning, she delicately reached out and touched his firm muscular hip, unable not to stare at his hard-rock cock fully erect with glistening pre-cum coating the tip.
Seeing her attention drawn keenly to his painful hard-on, Lucius took hold of the end of it and whispered, "Not so fast, my love. Not so fast..." He began rubbing her vaginal opening up and down with his cock's end, lubricating it as well as teasing her cunt's opening.
"You don't know why you are so lusciously wet, Astoria? Well, then, I'll probe your perianth for your deepest nectar, my dear, while you think about it." Firmly, Lucius pulled her down a few inches more and raised one leg and then the other up around his head, positioning his erection firmly in front of her pussy's entrance. "I'm going to probe you deep and hard, until I've emptied my seed in your nethermost core.
"But you have to say 'please' first."
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A/N: Forever thankful to the one and only star_girl for everything, especially for making the awesome banner for me on top of everything else to keep my Muse and Lucius happy! She's expanded my universe as only a Ravenclaw could!
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looking foward to more... great story!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and the kind, encouraging feedback, truly appreciate it! So happy that you're enjoying it, thanks again!
I've been reading this at AFF - which I hate because they don't send out update notices. Now I discover it's posted here - which is irritating because they no longer send out update notices. Could I get you to post it to your AO3 account [yeah, I looked there, too.] Please, please, please. This is not a pairing I usually read, but your story has my attention now and I'd love to know when the next update is going to be!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear Darque Heart, thank you so much for continuing to read, and happy that you took a chance on a rare pairing though it's not your usual preference, truly appreciate it!I think if you tick the 'Add/Update Bookmark icon' near the top of a chapter's page, the system should send you an update notice, or tick the 'add fav story'--but if you just tick the update bookmark icon, that should do it--however, since I don't know when I'll be able to post at AO3 (sorry, I lost my password, etc.--haven't had much free time to write, and haven't been on that site, unfortunately, for years), if you'd like, I could send you an email when I update via your TPP account, if that's okay? If not, I'll try to explore AO3 again when I have some holiday days off from work this summer (plan to catch up on all things fandom) Thanks again for your continued interest!
Dear author. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this beautiful story. Usually I read only SS/HG stories my favorite pairing. You open my eyes with this incredible pairing. I like Lucius character. He is a bit darker than Severus with very slytherin but interesting motives. I can't help but wish to see Astoria's pregnant with Lucius' child and how they will deal with it even if I feel bad for Draco. Being cheated by his own father is awful but the conflict between one' interests and the family's one is intriguing. What is more important? The Family's line? Individual hapiness? Truly this story is captivating with characters well built. You hook me hard and fast.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so very much for reading this even though it is about a different pairing other than what you usually prefer--truly, deeply appreciate it!Also, thank you so much for your thoughtful, insightful feedback--so glad to know that Lucius is coming across as intended, as well as Astoria and Draco (trying to keep the empathy/sympathy for Draco, as I feel for anyone in his predicament) --I'm trying to keep but explore Lucius being Slytherin as well as other, human, areas of him, etc. You've touched on the major dilemmas of each of the characters that will be continued to be explored and wrestled with--one's interests versus larger/family ones, the Family's line, etc., and the innate motivations of Astoria, Lucius, and Draco, and all involved. Again, thank you so much for reading, and I'm so happy that you are enjoying this tale and for your consideration!
In the previous chapter, Astoria was taking herself to the depths with the aid of Lucius, and many things were revealed. One revelation is that Lucius believed he could give a measured amount of Astoria to another, but he discovers he is possessive about her. The review's conjecture was that the characters were at the bottom of the pit as in Dante’s Inferno with the betrayers and, after this, they would claw their way up. The earnest, but human, Neville and the scheming Narcissa also appear. It ends with Astoria and Lucius giving in to their growing attraction and Astoria realizing she will come to him and respond to him as Narcissa does.
But in this chapter, it’s not clear things have reached the bottom. How much will Draco have to be involved in any resolution? At the moment, he is not included, and he is suspicious of his wife, of the business deal, and his father’s activities. Lucius, acting to neutralize a threat, has crossed the line. It is not clear how much Narcissa knows; she appears absorbed by her efforts to restore the family’s position.
On the other hand, a legitimate commercial arrangement looks feasible, and the Malfoys appear to care for each other. A resolution is possible based on the aristocrat view that conventional standards do not apply to them. Except there has been deceit, and that will make things more difficult.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for your very thoughtful and generous feedback! Draco will have to be involved in some resolutions, and in reference to Dante's Inferno, even though she is definitely not an Uncommitted, Narcissa is selective for various reasons and past experience, more about her and her point of views a bit later on.Hmmm, on reflecting about the last review and this one/the characters are at the bottom of the pit... I'm not sure if all of them will be able to claw their way up and out, to a new dawn--thank you for giving me more to think about... They may be wallowing a bit longer in the bottom circles:-) ... for it seemed for a while that Lucius had become quite adapted to all the circles and the rings of hell/life, but maybe, even for him, there could be a different restoration to life and participation of sorts in it.A bit more character exploration of how all involved, albeit aristocrats (and the definite entitled belief that conventional standards do not apply to them), will deal with the deceit and various choices presenting themselves, etc. What started out as a smut fic for a fanfic friend quickly turned into something much more--still not quite sure what, lol! Again, thank you so much for your observations and commentary, truly appreciate it!
Please consider completing this. It is a wonderful story.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so very much for your kind comments, truly appreciate it! I've almost got the next chapter finished and will work on it tonight and tomorrow and hopefully get it posted soon afterwards. The ending is finished, just have to connect the dots with full narrative, etc. :-) Your comments are just the nudge I needed, thanks again, so happy that you are enjoying it.
A complex chapter, but it might best be described as first traveling to the lowest depths of the Inferno, where we find the betrayers, and then beginning the climb out the other side.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and getting through all of this and for kindly leaving some feedback--yes, for Astoria, as well as for Lucius, in his own way, experiencing what's she's experience will help her to focus in the uncertain current state of affairs; Lucius will make further precarious decisions, protective ones from his point of view, but risky-- yes, each will help the other to climb up and out of this quagmire, one way or another. Thank you again for reading and the review, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A chapter revealing the multi-faceted Lucius. He is imperious, but he is jealous of Neville, and he reminds the catty women that Astoria is special. He remains imperious, but assures Astoria she is above responding to Pansy and Daphne, and he declares he wants to please and worship Astoria who realizes this is her attitude toward Draco.In a reversal, Astoria comes to him and takes what she wants.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the detailed and thoughtful feedback, truly, deeply appreciate it! Lucius is reclaiming his role in the post-war wizarding world, slowly but surely; yes, he is reminding the others of their place in his inner circle, as well as discovering, deciding, and declaring Astoria's meaning to both himself and how the others are expected to treat her. Astoria is questioning and discovering further aspects of herself, and Lucius; and yes, in a cliched in vino veritas depiction, she is letting the truth set her free and arousedly act in the moment. This will perhaps be a new path for her to continue on, sans cordial; thank you again for reviewing!
Good description of their passion and her yearning. Lucius, at this point, is interested in sex, domination, and heir, but he evinces no romantic feelings.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, Lucius is pursuing fully his interests and pleasure; well, their interests and pleasure; he is in agreement with her to fully engage and enjoy some sexual activity and to now sire an heir together, however, he is withholding romantic feelings from her, whether this is on purpose or because he is incapable or because it would make even him too vulnerable, etc. Thank you again for affirming what is coming across!
Lucius in full bloom. His lust, desire to dominate, and wish for an heir have found someone who is vulnerable to all three.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you for continuing to read and for the feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, in this opportune situation, all of his intense interests and needs are in full drive--he has nothing to lose and a pleasurable amount of indeterminable involvement to gain--he's plunging forward and is determined that she willingly embraces him and the situation fully, equally, well, as equal as he allows--thank you again for the read!
Lucius alternates between treating Astoria with disdain and expressing raging, possessive jealousy even though acting kindly and respectfully toward her when the family is present would make life easier for all of them. He cannot find his balance. Perhaps because he is in the grip of his emotions, and the loss of his usual total control has undone him. It may be that Astoria senses this on some level, and his wild behavior touches her deeply.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for reading and for the generous feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, trying to capture Lucius in an erratic phase, in this unexpected turn of events, he is volatile, and approaching her from every angle and testing her limits and reaction to him, his conditions, his terms. However, a wildness has been unleashed within him, and yes, it seems that it has touched and tapped into a wildness within Astoria, which will be explored, as unforseeable as it is for her in her previous ignorance of her own nature. But perhaps Lucius' sense of self, his unbalance at this time as you pointed out, is because he will also be undergoing an unknown experience to some point in his effort to regain full control and balance in his life, etc. I'm struggling with trying to capture them having this irrational but undeniable chemistry between each other along with everything else going on. Thank you again for your feedback, it helps me understand what is coming across, again, truly, deeply appreciate it!
A depiction of Astoria's dilemma: the intense emotional and physical attraction of Astoria and Draco contrasted with her lust for Lucius, a future of deception, and an intrusive Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria and Draco's past and present, current attraction is presented, and the different levels and lust discovered in and with Lucius has presented itself. A future of deception is a heavy burden to bear for Astoria, she will struggle with whether she is able to handle it or not--an intrusive Lucius will no doubt help her to dig deeper and enlighten her, using and polishing up various Slytherin attributes. Thank you so much for reading this and the generous feedback of what is coming across in between the ginormous amount of pwp--truly, deeply appreciate your perceptive, exacting commentary! Thank you again!
Things are proceeding. Draco is being a dutiful son while still trying to protect Astoria from Lucius and trying to keep his father from his old ways. Lucius has lost enough that he cannot be reasonable or understanding. Astoria is trying to find a way through all of this, but succumbing to her own wild needs. There are hints that she will soften Lucius as she steeled Draco.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Draco is trying to hold firm with his current loyalties to the new order, his role and sense of authority that accompanies this, and protecting his family members from being further harmed--reminding his father of his erring ways to be checked and controlled, susceptible to his dubious habits, etc. Everyone is trying to disassociate themselves from the dark past; they may or may not be successful with this, and some things may merely manifest in other ways. Lucius will need much more time, if he is even willing to sincerely attempt and control himself, truly; he may be unable/unwilling, as his bitterness runs deep, scarred for life.Astoria's little secluded world has been invaded, and she has had and will continue to react/interact in ways she's never experienced before, in the process discovering new things about herself and the world beyond her borders. Yes, she will continue to affect both of her Malfoy men in exactly the way as perceived. Thank you so much,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, for your kind and generous time and detailed feedback to this tale--truly, deeply appreciate it! It has inspired and given me clarity and motivation in how I'll, eventually, finish this tale (I have the ending, but the last remaining chapters' scribbled notes can now be developed and filled in towards it, etc.). Thanks again!
The chapter begins with Astoria at the end of her rope. She only wants to hide under the covers.Narcissa appears, and she is as mysterious as ever. Perhaps she knows what her husband is doing and still indulges in passion. But Lucius believes he is getting no affection from her. Perhaps she is flirting with Harry and Neville. Perhaps she is playing a role and getting out of it what she can.Lucius appears and Astoria is stricken. He does not make her comfortable or happy.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Yes, Astoria is having a bout of intense anxiety; in her aloneness, she knows not what else to do. More clarity on Narcissa a bit later on, as the story unfolds; she is and also has been a survivor of many a thing, and her motivation and objectives will be more explicitly revealed. Lucius' unexpected appearance, reminds Astoria that she is not her own woman, and his penchant for being unpredictable, friend or foe, whether he will be civil or threatening unnerves her momentarily. Her world, their world, has staunchly changed.Thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the detailed feedback, truly appreciate it!
From the way the characters were depicted inthe first chapter, the story could become either tragedy or character development. Lucius's focus is still on continuing the family line, and he changed his strategy with the new revelation, but he is developing feelings and admiration for Astoria. Astoria, despite all her misgivings, may be finding an anchor in Lucius.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Dear
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for continuing to read this and for the feedback. I was trying to capture and set up the Malfoys in murky territory, and from this point, have them struggling on to survive and sustain and reclaim, and slowly move forward. Continuing the family has plunged Lucius and Astoria into the same stream, and both must accommodate the other in mutual interests--yes, out of this interaction will be mostly character development and exploration. As keenly insightful as always, she will indeed find an anchor in Lucius, despite either one being, perhaps, satisfied with the terms, etc. Lucius' change in how he is viewing Astoria will allow him to relate to her differently than he has ever before, and yes, feel differently about her, slowly but surely, including but beyond the mere sexual, etc. Thank you again for reading, truly, deeply appreciate it!
Glad you have updated this tale, its very good!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you so much for continuing to read and for the supportive feedback, truly appreciate it!So happy you're enjoying it. Working on the next chapter, New Year's resolution: to finish this baby (this year)--lol! Thanks, again!
Someone needs to make this into a film!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Only if Mr Issacs agrees to revamp his role--and only if you get to help co-direct him with me, us filling in for his rehearsal partners at many a private rehearsal which I would insist on/part of the contract - lol! Thank you so much for the read and support!
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
I say: once you've finished, let's send dear Jeason a copy!! (Okay, haven't had the guts to send him a copy of Slytherin Seduction yet...)
Please, ma'am, I'd like some more. Now! :-)
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Thank you!!! Will try to get Lulu to finish his business and send the written account of it off to the naughty beta asap;-) Thank you again!!!
Thank you! This chapter might just have saved my sanity. I am deeply in love with your Lucius!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Awwww, thank you for continuing with this (hope it was read *during* one of those meetings-lol!)--and squeeing that you are enjoying this Lucius--again, thank you so much--really appreciate it!xx
Oh you are so mean to leave me hanging right there. What a hot and sweaty little story you have going here. Looking forward to more. I love the way you write Lucius!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Lulu is one to be a mean tease, isn't he? Will try to get him to finish what he's started soon!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
, thank you so much for the read and the lovely feedback--really appreciate it!
Oh I am sure she is going to say much more than just please....
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Cottontail, I absolutely agree with you! In that position/situation, she'll probably say anything Lucius wants her to say... Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!
Lucius, you naughty, naughty boy!! Laughed out loud on the bus at him making an entrance. People are looking at me strangely. Oh, if they knew...
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hey, love! Public transport--that's okay;-) As long as it wasn't in a meeting--lol! Yes, naughty Lulu, someone should spank him! *hands feather duster over to Astoria* xxx
Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)
*hands feather duster over to Astoria*? Is that a new plot line?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
LOL! Absolutely--Lulu's kinky enough for *anything*
*splutter* Now I know why you told me to NOT read this on my way to work. This requires a very, VERY cold shower. What a delicious prick he is!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Isn't he, though? Curse him (Imperio 'come hither' curse - hehe!) Thank you so much for the read and the feedback--really appreciate it!!!
OH I am quite confident she will say PLEASE!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Hmmn... I'll have to commiserate with poor Astoria and think about if I were stuck in that position, what would I do? Thank you so much for your continuing support!xx
I never even thought that Narcissa might encourage Astoria to cheat to continue the Malfoy line. That is sick. And I do mean that as a compliment. Would it be wrong to confess that I hope it takes a while for Lucius to get Astoria preggers?
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Hahaha! Not at all! I hope for Astoria's sake, it also takes a while for him to knock her up; however, pregger Astoria will find that Lulu also likes the *weight* and *feel* of a full womb on his manhood - lol! Narcissa is a very practical woman *evil cackle* So, yes, more diabolical decadency in the old Malfoy manor *nothing too new* And thank you for the compliment --Cissy's intentions as sick, absolutely! Wouldn't want them any other way - lol! Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate it!xx
I wonder how long he was standing there? I expect he will have more than one snide comment about boring Draco and his missionary position.
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of Blood and Vows)
Oh, yes, he'll be quite cynical about the fruit of his loins lacking imagination with Astoria, and knowing Lucius as we do, he'll make up for where Draco is amiss ;-) Considering Lucius' voyeuristic tendencies, he probably was there right after Draco's return, but unfortumately for Lulu, he didn't have much to watch before it was over ;-P Thanks again for continuing the read!!!xx