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Forged in Flames
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In her final year at Hogwarts, Hermione becomes entangled with her Potions professor in a very tricky and difficult situation--one that could change not only the outcome of the war, but their feelings for each other.
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Oh thank god I found the rest on ashwinder <3
NO!! I just flew through this and realized it's been a few years since the last update :( IT'S SO GOOD
Can't wait for the next chapter.
OMG -- What an AWESOME application for her handy little charm. I liked how she was able to put things together and didn't need him to spell everything out for her. (Although he DID have to lead her a bit... but she's still young.) :) Nice update!
Hermione's inner dialogue of how the boys would react if she told them the truth about why she was tired made me laugh. It would be worth it just to see the look on their faces. I hope Snape eases up on her a little bit or their relationship won't get off the ground. Thanks.
Oh yeah - GO Hermione! I love it. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Hi, I wanted to share that you have a really good story going. Your writing is really very good. Your pacing is good. Your choices for words, sentences, dialogue, painting the scenes, even down to describing a shoulder shrug is really evidence that you are being really thoughtful about your craft. I thought you would like to know I noticed and appreciate your writing.
This poor girl must be so confused. It's good that she realized she needs to end things with Ron (which hopefully will go ok), but it is going to be much more difficult to sort things out between her and Professor Snape. I think things will be tense between them for awhile. And after that last exchange, if he continues to single her out in class, she will know that he lied to her. Fabulous, as always.
Bastard. But at least she's figured out she needs to drop poor, clueless Ron.
Haven't had much time for fanfic lately, but came back to TPP & found this & I'm glad I did, it's great, I just hope more is coming very soon:)
Oh heavens, these two have a lot on their minds. It's too bad that they are both too stubborn to talk it out. I was relieved to see that he didn't Obliviate her against her will. It will be very interesting to see what happens when she goes for her occlumency lesson.
She doesn't know that she wasn't the one he was thinking about to perform the Crucio.
Wow, that could have gone belly up in so many ways. I would have loved to have actually seen the look on Bella's face when she thought she had him trapped and he made it through with flying colors. And Hermione ... she is one gutsy girl. I do hope that this earned her a whole heapful of respect from him. He would be hard pressed to find another with such bravery and trust. Can't wait to see what 's next.
Wow. That was so powerful, because Hermione completely surprised Severus.
whew, that was close!
omg! Fun for a bit but definitely scary. I guess everyone will know he isn't impotent now. AGG! I can't wait to read more!
Oh, dear. They are really in a tight spot. Fortunately, they have the ability to break the curse without Bella knowing it. On the other hand, depending on what he finds out from Hermione, he may have to reveal the truth and then he would be forced to do unspeakable things along with the other Death Eaters. What a mess! And why did she panic when he tried to drink his tea? I'm sure if McGonagall and Dumbledore become involved in this, they are going to be furious. I cannot wait for more!
Oh this is dreadful! (the situation, not the story) I don't know if I want to know what happened there in his chambers. Who am I kidding, of course I do! Off to find out ...
This is exciting right from the beginning. I actually thought that the spell that froze Hermione was a trap Snape had set to keep people from snooping around his chambers. If only it were that easy! I hope you will update this regularly. Off to find out more ...
Ooh! Compelling.
Just the right tone.
Oh, crap. Poor girl.
Oh My GOD!! What a horrible way for them to start a relationship! I have read many stories about forced marriages, etc. but this is a much more intriguing twist.
I can hardly wait to see how they go about this.
I wonder whether things will change for our Sev, that he will be able to perform because of a certain miss granger
Oh dear. Bellatrix, you bitch.
He's being very cruel. I'm so interested in what happened and why.