Another very nice story from you. Harry `potter is an arse in this fic and Ron not far behind although he came right in the end. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely and diferent. Refreshing. 

So glad so see this story up. Wish I had a knight in shining armour like Hermione has! Can just hear Severus' silky voice saying that rescue speech!

Thank goodness Severus was there to protect his wife and children.  George Santiago is a good name, but I'll bet Hermione comes up with a nickname for him.  I think it's in her blood.  LOL!I wonder if Arthur and Molly were aware of what Harry was doing when he went to the Burrow?  It's good that Arthur and George were there to help when Harry came.  It could all very easily have gone wrong.  I don't know if Harry can ever be helped.  His anger and need to blame Severus seems to be inexhaustible.  Being host to a part of the Dark Lord's soul for so long appears to have damaged him.Now I hope Severus, Hermione and their children can live long and happy lives without always having to look over their shoulders.  It's time for joy!Thank you for this story and for Where In the World.  It's good to see everything come full circle.Hugs you lots,Beth

I'm glad that Hermione forgave Ron.  Even though I first thought he didn't deserve it, the more I read the more I realized how much he had changed and grown while in Azkaban.  Besides, forgiveness is a gift you give yourself... carrying around all that resentment and hate just seems to eat away at whatever joy may come your way.  Good call, Shell.I'm tickled pink that Severus and Hermione have a daughter!  She has her daddy's hair and eyes– or maybe it's her daddy's hair and her mother's eyes– either way she's joy to them and that's what's important.I'm off to see how you've concluded this lovely story.Beth

Quite the dark descent for Harry.  I do hope he gets the help he needs.  Lovely to see Severus and Hermione happy and moving forward. 

Aww, how sweet this chapter was.  I was glad to see Ron ease up and realize all he'd done.  I've got high hopes for a full recovery from him.  Harry, of course, is another thing.  Perhaps Ron can help in some way.  Loved the reunion, especially Ginny's part in it.

I just read all through your whole double-story -- WOW, very well knitted together and so reduced, yet maintaining a clear plotline AND developing some of your characters. You chose all these characters very well. I'm disappointed of Kingsley, but he was disgusted of himself, too. So easy to believe that a hero would not ever fail. Ron was nearly drowning himself in a hatred that wasn't even his own. Finally he has developed a backbone!  I hope we'll see a solution fro him. Sadly, Harry is very much in character too. So stubborb and ready to twist the truth while pretending to be defending justice. I do not believe he can be changes at this stadium. What a fate for Ginny and their children!  She was entirely right to initially stick to him and work from within, but then it was too much. I admit that I'm missing Hermione's trademark habits here. She would have studied or developed something, would she not? Now I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

At least Ron seems to have recovered his senses. But that last makes me think that Harry's still determinedly plotting against Severus. BTW, I think I have an inkling about what might happen when Harry is finally released from Azkaban...

Poor Ron.  I'm glad he is sincerely remorseful and seemingly on a better path.  Severus and Hermione are certainly beginning their christmas in a lovely way!Excellent story!

JKR pretty much made the same comparisons between Harry and Tom in her books. I'm glad Ron saw the error of his ways. Hopefully, Harry can be helped. Part III? Anytime soon? ^_^

Thank you for giving us this wonderful story, it has been a wonderful read. Way to seldom Harry is taken to task for his violent temper and confronted with his own prejudices. That done here, sprinkled with a happy ending for Severus and Hermione and the Weasleys on the rigth side in stead of Harrys, made it all a great story .

Yup, that's pretty much what I figured would happen, an obsessed Harry tracking down the Snapes, resulting in a scene not unlike when Voldemort came for Harry and his parents. Albeit with a much improved ending. Hopefully the healers at St. Mungo's can help Harry see just how far he's fallen and help him find his way back.