Impromptu Seduction
notsosaintly74 Reviews | 74 Ratings, 0 Likes, 42 Favorites )
Avoiding Mrs. Norris can be quite stimulating... a series of 100-word drabbles in nine parts.
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Damn!! stpid thing wont let me review
oh yes!
Short and sweet... I loved it :p you'd think that it would make no sense or would be ridiculous 2 make it so short, but that really wasn't, it was so good :p *hugs* I wish I could write as well as you do... *sighs* well I can try...
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Thank you. You are so sweet. Believe it or not, this series of short drabbles was as time consuming and as challenging to write as a regular one-shot. ;) But it was tons of fun.
Excellent, this last part really tied up well. Great story, drabbles are always such a challenge, but you still managed to make it unbelievable erotic.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Thanks,
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
. It was a lot of fun to do.
Phew that was hot. I love this style of writing, so much intensity converyed with so few words. Brilliantly done.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Thank you. I am letting little plot bunnies run about my noggin, hoping that I can write another of these soon. It's a great diversion.
I can't say more!
Will I see more these little stories? I hope so!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
I enjoyed doing this so much. I didn't really know the power of 100-word drabble series. The next time a little plot bunny attacks me, I'll definitely write another.
You managed to include all what's important in your words.
What for next? More closet romance?
Off to the next chapter!!
what I should say? You robbed all words from me!!
I have to show how I feel about that: 
You're so damn good!! I have to read the next chapter, be damned food!!
I knew it!!!! He planned all, sneaky Slytherin God!!!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Ah-ha!! You are exactly right. It is not always easy to get subtle plot (if you can have plot in a PWP) points across in 100 words. Severus is a Slytherin God.
what a Gryffindor answer!! "I'm seducing you, Professor" nam...I CAN feel the strength of Severus' chest holding me!!
You write so strongly the scenes that I feel myself standing with Mister Sexy in the closet...in the dark....
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
It's wish fulfillment on my part... pretending I'm actually in the closet with 'Mister Sexy.'
100 words!!! I lurve these!!!
I wonder why Severus is hiding from Mrs Norris???
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
He's a Slytherin... things aren't always the way they look. (oooh, mystery)
The last few lines - wonderful image, evokes some interesting emotions.
*snicker*And the feel of something else?
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
*lol* Exactly.
Interesting start, both hiding from Mrs. Norris.
scared that he would reject her … frightened that he would not.Wonderful line, so elegant.
I am speechless! I'm sitting here trying to type a review and thinking, each time I backspace, that words aren't adequate to express the genius with which you chose your sparse wording. Those few words painted a glorious picture!! Well done, Saint!! Mahvelous, dahling, simply Mahvelous!!!GG
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Thanks GG. Glad I made you speechless.
Perfect!! Absolutely Brilliant.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.
I got a question: Why was Snape hiding from the cat? It's not like Ms. Norris goes around and stalk teachers, right?Other than that, the story was entertaining.
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
See, in short drabbles where the point is erotica, it would be rather boring to describe how Snape had noticed her roaming the halls and attracted Mrs. Norris so that Hermione would have to hide ... and it takes some Slytherin cunning to make sure this all happens in a hallway where there's only one closet to choose, of course. Hence Snape saying he was the one to seduce her, not the other way around.
I absolutely loved this nine part 100 word seduction! Short, sexy and very satisfying! I do so love it when you gift us with these little treasures! Ahh, my favorite line,” If you lead, I will follow.” Yes, I do believe he is too delicious to resist!
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Heck, the man could put a collar around my neck and lead me anywhere. 
*PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR*~Lotm
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Liked that, did you, Kitty? *scratches Lotm behind the ears*
Ahaha...."My Sweet, you should have waited for me. When they saw you, they must have fled. I'll have them one of these days. You'll see," Filch said confidently, wishing that Snape had been about. He'd have caught the blighters!:)
Response from notsosaintly (Author of Impromptu Seduction)
Yup... That's exactly right.