Curses, Spoiled Again
Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
Chapter 14 of 17
MsTreeHermione returns to Hogwarts to teach Potions and finds something dark and mysterious in the forest. (This is a continuation of Velvet Song's original story archived here at TPP.)
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters in this story belong to JKR. The original plot and story belong to Velvet Song.
Author’s Note: This is a continuation of Velvet Song’s story “Damsels & Dragons”, which she has graciously allowed me to adopt. You will find the first thirteen chapters of her story here: http: //www. thepetulantpoetess.com /viewstory.php?sid =18337 (remove the spaces first). I can only hope I do her ideas justice.
Thanks to Fizzabella and writermerrin for the beta of this chapter.
Curses, Spoiled Again
“Thought of your version of the truth yet, Lucius?” Minerva’s smile was smug as they sorted through the books, parchments and scrolls that had been reduced and packed into the box, along with potions equipment and other items from Scrimgeour’s former vault at Gringott’s. Once enlarged to their former sizes, the contents covered the long table in the middle of the staff room.
“Father, this is one of ours,” Draco suddenly exclaimed, holding up a book. “Look, the bookplate’s still intact. What gall!”
“Are there any more?” Narcissa asked, pawing through the stacks. “Bella probably had a hand in their acquisition,” she said in accusation. “Here’s another one.” She held up a smaller book and looked at the title. “Journeys of Discovery,” she read out loud. “This is one of the books I was looking for earlier.”
Minerva looked at the stacks of books and parchments in front of them. “We’ll sort them out,” she said. “Put your books and such over there by the hearth.” She indicated a study table sitting against the wall. “Anything that has a bookplate or any way of identifying the owner, put over by the door.” She pointed at another table. “Mr Phelps, if you see something that belongs to your library, speak up so we can set it to one side. Those are to be returned to your institution forthwith. Anything else that has an identifying mark or bookplate will be returned to its proper owner if possible.”
“What about what we can’t identify, Minerva?” Hermione asked, stroking the rare volume she held in her hands. “This doesn’t have any marks at all.”
“Has it anything to do with the Dark Arts, dear?” Minerva asked gravely, trying to see the title.
“I don’t think so,” Hermione answered. “Narcissa, would you know?”
“The Proper Place of Witches?” Narcissa read the title and wrinkled her nose. “I remember that book. My mother made me read it before I married Lucius. She thought it would remind me that my husband owned me once our vows were said.” She smiled at her husband. “I don’t think it worked out as she thought it would.”
Lucius grinned. “If anyone owns anyone else, my love, you definitely own me.” He reached out and took her hand, dropping a kiss on it before letting go. “Do you want that book, Hermione?”
Hermione frowned. “Definitely not. But what would Voldemort have been doing with it?”
“He believed greatly in the moral superiority of wizards over witches among his other beliefs,” Lucius said dryly. “He was probably using it to help form his doctrines for when he won the war.”
“Well, we know how that turned out,” Harry said with a snort as he picked up a piece of parchment. “This is a weird language. Hermione, do you know what it is? Looks a little like runes, maybe?” He held out the parchment for her to look at.
She frowned over the marks on the parchment. “They do look like runes, don’t they, Draco?” She passed the parchment over her shoulder, where he stood trying to read them as well.
Taking the parchment, Draco looked closer. “Some of these could almost be Old Norse, but they’re formed a bit differently,” he ventured. “Mr Phelps, could you look this over, please?”
Phelps looked up from the books and scrolls he was collecting to return to the British Wizarding Library. “What’s that?” he asked. “Runes?”
“Or letters,” Hermione said. “We’re not certain what it means.”
“Indeed. Indeed. Why don’t I take a look?” He took the parchment and laid it in a clear spot on the table, then pulled out his reading spectacles and placed them on his nose. “Hmmm. Yes. Of course.” He removed his spectacles, holding them in his hand, as he looked towards Minerva. “Headmistress, I believe these young people have found your counter-curse.”
“Are you sure?” Hermione yelped, making a grab for the parchment.
Draco beat her to it by seconds, picking up the sheet and trying to read the contents. He grimaced at the garbled sounds he made, then handed it back to Phelps. “What does it say?” he demanded.
“Draco, manners!” his mother scolded.
“My apologies, sir,” he responded. “What does it say, please?”
“Quite all right,” Phelps said and proceeded to read the spell in its original Gothic.
“In English, if you please, Mr Phelps,” Minerva chided him. “Please remember that, with the exception of your friend, Mr Coombs, none of us speak or understand Gothic.”
“Of course, of course,” he agreed readily. “Old habit, don’t ya know. This is just a rough translation, certainly not word for word.”
“From dragon to man,
be ye large or small.
This I command,
That you be all.
One time for year,
Until year ten.
Speak this fair,
Be man again.”
“‘Speak this fair’?” Harry repeated. “What does that mean?”
“I’m more interested in the first part of that verse,” Bill mused. “Would you agree with me, Filius?”
“Oh, most definitely,” the little wizard said. “That could pose a problem.”
“Why?” Harry demanded. “If this is the counter-curse, then all we need to do is learn how to say it.” He looked around at the other teachers, then glanced at a frowning Hermione. “What? What did I say?”
“Professor Flitwick—” Susan started to say.
“Dear me, yes,” Filius said, giving into his old habit of lecturing. “It’s all very well and good to say ‘learn the words and swish the wand’, but it isn’t that easy.”
“If I understand that last verse correctly,” Bill explained, “someone is going to have to repeat the spell eight times—”
“Eight times!” Hermione gasped. “That’s—”
“—once for each year Severus has been a dragon,” Bill concluded. “Wouldn’t you say, Filius?”
“Oh, yes. Indeed.” Filius closed his eyes and shook his head. “If there was pain in the first Transfiguration, imagine how much pain there would be times eight.”
It would be worth it.
“Severus, you could be driven insane!” Hermione gasped. “Nothing’s worth that!”
My life is.
“What’s he saying, Hermione?” Lucius asked. “If I were to guess, I’d say he thinks the pain is worth being human again?”
Hermione nodded numbly. She turned to the window facing the Forbidden Forest and, chewing on her lower lip, stared outward, seeing nothing.
“As for your question, Mr Potter,” Filius said. “Speak this fair is an old way of saying you must speak the spell properly for it to work. Say one word wrong and the entire spell is negated.”
Harry winced. “That leaves me out, then,” he said, half joking. “Languages were never my best subject.” He grinned in a half-hearted attempt to lighten the mood. “I’ll just stay back and watch.”
“I’ll do it,” Hermione suddenly said, turning back to the room. “I’m the one he left all his possessions to. I’m the one he talks to. I’m the one—”
“—who’s too close to the problem,” Lucius broke in. “You’re liable to stop in the middle if you think he’s in too much pain. As his best friend, I believe I should do it.”
“That won’t be necessary, Lucius,” Minerva said. “I can handle it just as well as you can.”
“And you have the same problem as Hermione,” Remus pointed out. “You’re too close to him. I think—”
Severus’ roar shook the castle’s windows. I think I am the one to decide!
Hermione winced as his shout reverberated in her head. “Not so loud,” she complained. “I’m the only one who can hear you, and that hurt.”
My apologies.
“So, Lucius,” Minerva said with a smirk, changing the subject. “Have you figured out which version of the truth we will give to the Wizengamot yet?
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Latest 25 Reviews for Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
102 Reviews | 7.36/10 Average
Brava! I have been hoping to get to Damsels & Dragons by Velvet Song and this story, the completion of what she had begun. I'm so very grateful that the two of you were able to collaborate so beautifully on this remarkable story. Together you two have given the SSHG fandom a lovely gift.I adore your sense of humor, and having Severus and Hermione telepathically connected had me laughing throughout my reading. And now I have a sequel to read......something about dragons in the dungeon, I think? Beth
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It was a joy to write. The sequel is not a collaberation, so I can only hope you enjoy it as much as the first story. ^_^
So far I have to say you do a tremendously amazing job with continuing this story of Velvet Song, beginning with her exceptional writing style, and not least by bringing in Severus' thought-speach here. Did you have some plot ideas from her where this should go?
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
This particular story is completed and posted. Velvet Song and I discussed a sequel and she gave it the go-ahead. That story is also completed and has started posting here at TPP. However, I suggest you complete this one first before starting the sequel so you aren't confused about situations in the sequel. ^_^
Good job continuing the story. I'm glad Velvet Song let you complete it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
If you let Severus argue, he may be as Dragon forever.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
I never thought, I would hear those words , from a Malfoy.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Obliviate? is that all? he deserves to suffer, a lot more.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
I would be more afarid ,of Minerva And Narcissa together, than the Dragon.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Corruption in the MoM, unbeliveable!!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
If Remus isn't careful, he will find himself playing the Death-Eater game, { the drop from 300 ft and catch just before you hit the ground game } I love Athair/Severus.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Back to Hogwarts, Phelps will have fun with the house-elfs.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
I love my books, and talk to them, sometimes I have to scold them, for spiting out their bookmarks, and losing my place. Luicus and Remus had best keep hold of Hermione, or she will wander off, into the stacks, and never beseen again.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Love the image , of house-elfs as meerkats.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
MMMMMMMMMMM Thickned Plot, what a lovely desert. this just keeps, getting better.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Love the relationship, building between, Severus, and Hermione. Athair, talk to Hagrid, it would make his decade.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
AWWWW I love that Hagrid didn't have to be told, he just knew. Now the real work begins.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
The books seem to cover, a wide range of , curses, spells and other things it is best not to contemplate. Not knowing exactly what, Riddle woud do, Severus tryed to cover, all the bases he could, with the books. A pity she has to read all that dark stuff, but needs must.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Thank you, for finshing this great story. Yes, yes,yes, happy dance, she knows. =
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Absolutely wonderful!!! A sequel?! I can't wait!! I'm practically dying to see how the relationship develops between Severus and Hermione, since we know he's already in love with her from earlier chapters.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Working on it. Or at least trying to. *grin* Hermione, Severus and Athair seem to have minds of their own, however. I don't know how this will turn out. Hopefully, I'll be able to start posting sometime after the first of the year. ^_^
I'm so glad they manage to bring him back. I hope they will all be well after a bit of rest. I wonder if Heverus and Hermione's connection will last. that could be a lot of fun.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Heverus? Who's Heverus? It's a great name, though. *grin* One more chapter to go and it's been sent to my beta. With Velvet Song's permission, I've begun a sequel but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
*grin back* These are great news!
Yay, they did it! Boo for leaving it there! And boo for taking so long to update! Just because the sshg exchange is going on and there's loads of sshg to read doesn't mean I don't look for an update from you daily. Brava, Ms. Tree. Hermione and 'William' saved the day.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Blame my beta for the delay. She's involved in the exchange. *grin* One more chapter to go for this particular story and I've sent it to my beta. Velvet Song has given permission for me to do a sequel and I've started it, but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Great chapter.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. ^_^
yay! You did it! :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Yup. Yup. Only one chapter to go and it's with my beta right now. At least I sent it to her. *grin* I'm in the process of producing a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Oops, talk about being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Scrimgeour won't do that again! :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
*grin* It would be rather hard to do that when he's in Azkaban. Thanks for reading. ^_^
Better three patients than a dragon. That was nice and tense.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Glad you liked it. One more chapter to go and that will wrap up this part of the story. I've started a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
WOW! That was incredible! Remarkable too how we find out that the curse hasn't just tied the two of them together mentally, but physically as well - and no better example of how strong the tie is, but as the countercurse was activated. God Bless you too, for finding a Gothic translation as well! I imagine having a devil of a time researching that! You did it justice, my friend!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
The translation was probably the hardest part of the chapter. I had it written out in English probably by the second chapter I wrote, but it took longer to figure out the translation. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. One more chapter to go. *phew* ^_^