Plotting Exposure
Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
Chapter 11 of 17
MsTreeHermione returns to Hogwarts to teach Potions and finds something dark and mysterious in the forest. (This is a continuation of Velvet Song's original story archived here at TPP.)
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters in this story belong to JKR. The original plot and story belong to Velvet Song. Any resemblance to anything living or dead is purely coincidental.
Author's Note: This is a continuation of Velvet Song's story "Damsels & Dragons", which she has graciously allowed me to adopt. You will find the first thirteen chapters of her story here: http: //www. thepetulantpoetess.com /viewstory.php?sid =18337 (remove the spaces first). I might suggest you read her story first in order to understand what has been happening.
Virtual chocolates and velvet hugs to Fizzabella and writermerrin for the beta of this chapter. The story is completed and will be posted as each chapter is beta'd.
Plotting Exposure
"If we are going to expose Scrimgeour as a Death Eater," Lucius said, "it is imperative we find where he has taken the contents of that vault." He looked over to Bill. "I am fairly certain he wouldn't have put them into his personal vault. That would be subject to Ministry confiscation after he's been exposed."
Bill nodded. "Griphook told me if anything came back on Gringotts from the information I'm about to give you, the onus would be on my head. I agreed because he was risking everything by giving it to me." He looked around the table and grimaced. "Scrimgeour has nothing of any particular value in his personal vault. I would have to conclude he has another place to keep what he took."
"I concur," Lucius said. "I also see a major problem. Scrimgeour has any number of places he could have taken his ill-gotten gains."
"His house and the Ministry," Harry snorted. "That's only two places."
"Which house, Mr Potter?"
"Huh?"
"To the best of my knowledge, Scrimgeour has a townhouse in London, his manor in Dorset, and a beach cottage in Cornwall," Lucius said, tapping the table to emphasize each point. "There is also his Ministry office, I will give you that, but..."
"He has access to almost every part of the Ministry by virtue of having been the Minister of Magic," Arthur spoke up. "Even if he doesn't hold the post any longer, there are still rooms that would allow him entrance."
Hermione shook her head. "I don't think it's the Ministry," she said, holding up her hand to stop Harry from arguing. "Think about it, Harry. He's not the Minister anymore. Why would he hide something in a room that someone anyone else could enter?"
"Hermione's right," Minerva said. "I think his office is out as well. Too many people in and out of it all day and possibly part of the night as well. Arthur, does the Ministry have any secret safes or rooms that you might know of?"
If he knows, then they're not secret.
Arthur opened and closed his mouth a few times. "To the best of my knowledge, I'd have to say no, Minerva. But then, if I knew about them, they wouldn't be a secret now, would they?"
Hermione had to laugh. "Severus just said the same thing," she hastened to explain as everyone glanced over at her. "Two minds with a single thought."
How insulting.
Hermione ignored Severus' grumbling. "Maybe it's like Poe's story, 'The Purloined Letter'," she mused. Harry and Arthur quickly caught her line of reasoning, while the other teachers looked bemused.
"That could be it," Harry crowed. "Why look for a safe or secret room when it's hiding in plain sight?"
"Yes," sighed Arthur dreamily. "I always did enjoy that particular story." He shook his head to clear it. "So we need to search all those places Lucius mentioned? That could take weeks."
"I think we need to make him reveal himself to us," Minerva said. "We could then have him turn over everything to us before we notify the Ministry."
"Why, Minerva," purred Narcissa. "You're speaking of blackmail." She beamed at the older witch. "I didn't know you had it in you."
Quickly stifled laughter rippled around the table as Minerva gave a cat-like smile. "My dear Narcissa, blackmail is such an ugly word. I prefer 'extortion'," she purred, then turned to Lucius. "You said the mark wasn't visible. How would we know for sure?"
"I think I know," Hermione said, interrupting Lucius' answer. He closed his mouth and nodded for her to continue. "You said your Mark goes soul-deep. That's how I recognized Severus." She grinned and tapped her left forearm. "So even if Scrimgeour's Mark isn't visible, there would still be a Mark on his soul, right?"
"Oh, my," Filius said. "If that's the case, a simple diagnostic spell should reveal his affiliations."
Lucius shook his head. "It's not that easy," he said. "Simple diagnostic spells are used at St. Mungo's. That would mean possible exposure every time an unmarked Death Eater had to see a Healer." He stood up and started to pace. "No, there was another method the Dark Lord used to communicate with them, but I can't recall..."
Like us, they were called by the Dark Mark itself, but separately so as to maintain their so-called cover.
"Severus says Riddle used his Dark Mark to call them," Hermione said. "Can you do that through your Mark?"
"No," Lucius growled. "I wish I could. A lot more of my so-called friends would be in Azkaban if that were the case." He sat down heavily and rubbed a hand across his face.
"I have an idea," Draco said, flashing a decidedly evil grin. "He was in Gryffindor, wasn't he? What if we tell him we found something of the Dark Lord's hidden here at Hogwarts? We want to turn it over to the Ministry, but would prefer to give it to someone we know hates the Dark Lord as much as we do so he can take care of it?"
"In other words, we lie," Harry said.
Draco shrugged. "Works for me."
"What sort of something?" Harry asked in a brusque manner. "Wouldn't he be suspicious?"
"Not necessarily," Lucius interjected. "It's a good idea, but I think I have a better one."
"Do tell, Lucius." Minerva leaned forward in her chair, clearly interested. "How would you go about summoning Scrimgeour to us?"
He slowly smiled. "Scrimgeour considers himself a connoisseur of fine wines and whiskies." Hermione and Remus sat up straight and listened very closely at the mention of whisky while Lucius nodded at them. "I happen to know where a bottle of Ogden's Old Hundred Year Reserve Firewhisky is located."
THAT'S MINE!
Hermione winced as Severus' roar reverberated in her head. While most of the others looked fearfully out the window at the Forbidden Forest, Lucius grinned at Remus and Hermione.
"I guess you know what he thinks of that," she said ruefully, shaking her head to clear it. "You might want to try something else."
"Whatever for, dear?" Minerva said craftily. "I happen to have two bottles of my own carefully put by for a rainy day." She glanced at Lucius. "I could certainly spare one for a good cause."
"That's most kind of you, Minerva," Lucius said, giving her a bow. "Filius, how soon could you come up with a charm to make his Dark Mark visible?"
"Er..." Filius hedged. "I'm not sure. With Mrs Bones-Malfoy and Miss Granger's help, a few days... maybe? Might be as long as two or three weeks?" He looked over at the two women, who smiled reassuringly. "Er, yes. Perhaps a few days." He pulled a piece of parchment towards him and summoned a quill to start writing down the elements of the necessary spell. Looking up at Lucius, he asked, "May we use you and your family to test our theories?"
"Whatever you need, Filius," Narcissa said, agreeing for her husband and son, who nodded. "Whatever you need."
I am willing, as well.
Hermione sighed. "It might just come to that." She quickly relayed his words to the rest of the group.
"Excellent." Filius rubbed his hands together. "One way or another, we will get this done. How did you plan to lure your victim here?" He looked at Lucius.
"Perhaps a dinner invitation?" Lucius mused. "A mention of how I managed to discover a rare whisky, and I thought perhaps he might like to join me and my family." He gave a malevolent look. "The man is a back-stabbing sycophant. I'm sure he would want to be in the good graces of a Malfoy if there were a chance of something for himself in it."
Quite.
Hermione just smiled.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons
102 Reviews | 7.36/10 Average
Brava! I have been hoping to get to Damsels & Dragons by Velvet Song and this story, the completion of what she had begun. I'm so very grateful that the two of you were able to collaborate so beautifully on this remarkable story. Together you two have given the SSHG fandom a lovely gift.I adore your sense of humor, and having Severus and Hermione telepathically connected had me laughing throughout my reading. And now I have a sequel to read......something about dragons in the dungeon, I think? Beth
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It was a joy to write. The sequel is not a collaberation, so I can only hope you enjoy it as much as the first story. ^_^
So far I have to say you do a tremendously amazing job with continuing this story of Velvet Song, beginning with her exceptional writing style, and not least by bringing in Severus' thought-speach here. Did you have some plot ideas from her where this should go?
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
This particular story is completed and posted. Velvet Song and I discussed a sequel and she gave it the go-ahead. That story is also completed and has started posting here at TPP. However, I suggest you complete this one first before starting the sequel so you aren't confused about situations in the sequel. ^_^
Good job continuing the story. I'm glad Velvet Song let you complete it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. With her permission, I've written a sequel. It's in the process of being beta'd, but I will soon start posting the chapters. ^_^
Response from FruGal (Reviewer)
Glad to hear that. I'll look for it.
If you let Severus argue, he may be as Dragon forever.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
He's stubborn, but Hermione's just as bad. ^_^
I never thought, I would hear those words , from a Malfoy.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I know. Scary, ain't it? ^_^
Obliviate? is that all? he deserves to suffer, a lot more.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, his turn's coming. ^_^
I would be more afarid ,of Minerva And Narcissa together, than the Dragon.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Two rather intimidating witches, n'est pas? ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
You know where you are with a Dragon, but if those two get together, thay could rule the world.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Add Hermione to the group and that would be a definite possibility. ^_~
Corruption in the MoM, unbeliveable!!!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Isn't it, though? ^_^
If Remus isn't careful, he will find himself playing the Death-Eater game, { the drop from 300 ft and catch just before you hit the ground game } I love Athair/Severus.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I do, too. That's why I asked to finish this when Velvet Song couldn't do it anymore. ^_^
Back to Hogwarts, Phelps will have fun with the house-elfs.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Or the house-elves will have fun with him. ^_^
I love my books, and talk to them, sometimes I have to scold them, for spiting out their bookmarks, and losing my place. Luicus and Remus had best keep hold of Hermione, or she will wander off, into the stacks, and never beseen again.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, yes. My precious. I talk and argue with my books all the time. My mother tends to look at me rather funny. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
It's sad when the family don't understand, the love of your life.
Love the image , of house-elfs as meerkats.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Well, they had to be able to make sure they were seeing what they thought they saw. ^_^
MMMMMMMMMMM Thickned Plot, what a lovely desert. this just keeps, getting better.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Rather like a rich gravy that tastes better the thicker it gets. ^_^
Love the relationship, building between, Severus, and Hermione. Athair, talk to Hagrid, it would make his decade.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I don't think Severus could communicate with anyone except Hermione or he would have talked with Lucius and his family before this. ^_^
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I know he can't "talk" to Hagrid, but if he would sit still, and let Hagrid talk, he would be made up.
AWWWW I love that Hagrid didn't have to be told, he just knew. Now the real work begins.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
I think Hagrid is just naturally intuitive. ^_^
The books seem to cover, a wide range of , curses, spells and other things it is best not to contemplate. Not knowing exactly what, Riddle woud do, Severus tryed to cover, all the bases he could, with the books. A pity she has to read all that dark stuff, but needs must.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Very icky reading indeed. ^_^
Thank you, for finshing this great story. Yes, yes,yes, happy dance, she knows. =
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, I think? And of course she knows. Severus made sure of it. ^_^
Absolutely wonderful!!! A sequel?! I can't wait!! I'm practically dying to see how the relationship develops between Severus and Hermione, since we know he's already in love with her from earlier chapters.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Working on it. Or at least trying to. *grin* Hermione, Severus and Athair seem to have minds of their own, however. I don't know how this will turn out. Hopefully, I'll be able to start posting sometime after the first of the year. ^_^
I'm so glad they manage to bring him back. I hope they will all be well after a bit of rest. I wonder if Heverus and Hermione's connection will last. that could be a lot of fun.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Heverus? Who's Heverus? It's a great name, though. *grin* One more chapter to go and it's been sent to my beta. With Velvet Song's permission, I've begun a sequel but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
*grin back* These are great news!
Yay, they did it! Boo for leaving it there! And boo for taking so long to update! Just because the sshg exchange is going on and there's loads of sshg to read doesn't mean I don't look for an update from you daily. Brava, Ms. Tree. Hermione and 'William' saved the day.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Blame my beta for the delay. She's involved in the exchange. *grin* One more chapter to go for this particular story and I've sent it to my beta. Velvet Song has given permission for me to do a sequel and I've started it, but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Great chapter.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. ^_^
yay! You did it! :D
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Yup. Yup. Only one chapter to go and it's with my beta right now. At least I sent it to her. *grin* I'm in the process of producing a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
Oops, talk about being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Scrimgeour won't do that again! :)
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
*grin* It would be rather hard to do that when he's in Azkaban. Thanks for reading. ^_^
Better three patients than a dragon. That was nice and tense.
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
Glad you liked it. One more chapter to go and that will wrap up this part of the story. I've started a sequel--with Velvet Song's permission--but I don't know when it will be finished. ^_^
WOW! That was incredible! Remarkable too how we find out that the curse hasn't just tied the two of them together mentally, but physically as well - and no better example of how strong the tie is, but as the countercurse was activated. God Bless you too, for finding a Gothic translation as well! I imagine having a devil of a time researching that! You did it justice, my friend!
Response from MsTree (Author of Velvet Song's Damsels & Dragons)
The translation was probably the hardest part of the chapter. I had it written out in English probably by the second chapter I wrote, but it took longer to figure out the translation. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. One more chapter to go. *phew* ^_^