I like it! Do you mean to say there's more? :D

Enjoying this so far.  Unique concept.  Can't wait to see where you take it.

I'm looking forward to where this might go. Although hopefully it's not going to morph into angst or horror.

Quite unique and dying to know where you take this.

I adored the concept, and the idea of his soul being dented, tarnished and needing care which only Hermione is going to be bloody minded enough to provide was fabulous. Really enjoyed reading this.

Ooh - I love this premise. I can easily see why it ran away with you: it's an amazing idea. I always enjoy your work, ma'am, and I thank you for posting it. Rock on, Cat

I love the plot and I'll be looking for the next chapter very curiously and impatiently. I hope it won't take too long.

Necromancy ... but not quite...his soul was still on this side of the Vail. But what Hermione did was a bit yucky even though I can understand her so well and I think everybody would try to save their loved ones. I know I'd do it...

Great story! It made me think about what's important and what's moral...Thank you.

"And, as he has always done, he leaves in place a single bond that stretches elastic-taut and fragile between them" He has such a delicate soul :(

This is not what she wanted...hope all will be well.

Great idea. Hope she'll find a way to make not only Snape but her too, happy.

and how many of us would sacrifice for one we love.  heart touching.  thanks so much