Part the Fourth
Chapter 4 of 4
Ladymage Samiko…in which everything is reseolved as it should be.
Hermione began avoiding… well, nearly everyone after her shouting match with Harry. She didn’t need— couldn’t stand —any more emotional turmoil. The Malfoys were— oddly —safe. They cared about him, they knew what they were doing— and they didn’t ask for more than she could give.
And Hermione was beginning to respect Narcissa in a way she’d never believed possible.
Another week and their preparations were nearly complete. Hermione could see herself in the mirror, face drawn, hair a bird’s nest atop her head.
“Don’t worry,” Narcissa murmured in her ear. “We’ll fix you up properly when the time comes.”
Fingers flexed experimentally, eyes blinked with exaggerated care. His mouth moved, but if he’d wanted to speak, no sound emerged. Hermione hesitantly threaded her fingers through his, looking anxiously for his expression as he registered her presence.
“In—“ he wheezed with rusty vocal chords. “In… sufferably im… patient little girl.”
But there was no bite, no anger to his words, and Hermione managed a wobbly smile. “I didn’t see why we had to wait,” she whispered.
And there was another harsh, grating sound— Severus’s laugh. “’Cleverest witch of her age.’”
“The Malfoys helped,” she murmured, reddening.
“That’s… what I mean.”
She wouldn’t let go. His hand, his robe, his hair… (A fastidious Narcissa shuddered at that last.) Hermione would not leave Severus alone. Perhaps, the older witch mused, it had something to do with her habits with Severus’s soul-box.
Or it might be sheer relief. She and her beloved Lucius, after all, just after the war… Well, it was surprising that Draco wasn’t yet to have a sibling.
But explanations were in order. The ‘good’ wizards were present to hear them. Narcissa glanced sidelong at the couple; it was their story, their right to tell it in their own way.
Snape allowed Hermione to recount her version of events; his own was for no other ears but hers. Besides, his voice was still recovering from months of being buried.
When she had finished, Minerva wore her most disapproving look, and Potter was— unsurprisingly —livid.
“Necromancy,” Minerva said severely, “is expressly forbidden.” She avoided meeting his eyes. Disgust for a ‘revenant’? Or guilt?
“Necromancy is disapproved of because it meddles with souls beyond the Veil,” Narcissa interjected smoothly, “which is far from what we accomplished, Professor. It was simply a matter of healing the body and returning Severus’s soul to it.”
Potter became a very queer— and rather delightful —shade of green. “That’s what you were doing that night? When you came back all muddy?”
Hermione shrugged with admirable nonchalance. “Wards prevented me from digging up his body magically, and unlike some people, Severus didn’t rate a mausoleum with a monument,” she replied with asperity.
“That’s just… sick.”
“It’s not like I fucked his corpse,” Hermione snapped back. “Would you rather I found someone else’s body to put him in? Severus was in two pieces; we merely put him back together.”
“He’s dead! He shouldn’t be in anyone’s body at all!”
“If you wish me dead, Potter, you’ll have to kill me yourself.” His rasping, metal-on-slate voice caused the others to wince. “That goes for you, too, Professor McGonagall, Professor Flitwick. My soul is in my body. Which moves and breathes of its own accord. I am more alive now than I have been at any point in the last thirty-eight years.” Hermione had draped herself, cat-like, along the arm and back of his chair, and he deliberately tilted his head back against her. “I refuse to simply lie down and die because you don’t approve of my continued existence.”
“Feel free, if you must,” Severus goaded them. “Here I am, without my wand. Avada me into the next world if it suits your sense of morality. My soul is at peace; it wouldn’t bother me. It might,” he allowed as Hermione tightened her hold, “bother her.” He could practically feel the girl’s glare over his head. Potter and Flitwick turned red; Minerva still refused to ‘see’ him. “So if you consider me simply a reanimated corpse, then by all means.” He spread upraised hands. “Do it.
“Do precisely what you’ve wanted to do for the past year, my friends.”
“Still too difficult?” he spat. “Then allow me to make it easier for you.” Snape pulled himself to his feet, struggling with a body that now felt composed of solid lead. He turned, offering them his back, his arms suspended in empty air to either side. He quelled Hermione’s movement with a sharp, sidelong glance. “There. Now you don’t even have to look me in the face. It’s just a robe, here, on a stand. Surely you can knock down a robe.”
“Severus Snape, cease these childish histrionics immediately.”
“Ah, I see I do exist in your universe, Minerva. Finally.”
“You’re being deliberately obstreperous, Severus.”
“And you were deliberately ignoring me, Professor McGonagall. But I was also being deliberately honest. I don’t mind being dead; Miss Granger took care of that quite nicely. But for her sake, I won’t give up living just because it’s less troublesome for you.
“The truth is, you’re upset that Granger is precisely what you’ve groomed her to be: intelligent, compassionate, and self-sacrificing. Admittedly, I’m an odd choice for compassion, but there you are; Granger doesn’t discriminate.
“She is also considerate— she asked if I was willing to return —and more stubborn than a mule.”
“Granger cares,” Severus murmured, his hand reaching to ghost over her hair, cup her cheek. She gazed back at him, her eyes full of her emotions. “And for me of all people. It is a strange, new thing in my life.
“As I imagine you’re well aware of, Potter,” he added caustically. “I’ll have that vial returned, if you please.”
His voice gentled again, but kept a hard edge of determination. “She cares, and I’ll not see her suffer any more for that caring than she already has. She deserves your admiration for her ability and resourcefulness, not your condemnation.”
Slowly, objections were reasoned away and resistance worn through. Minerva and Severus went for a long walk around the grounds, talking through issues both past and present. Narcissa and Lucius proved (perhaps unsurprisingly) capable advocates, arguing points of law and subtleties of soul magic. And when Severus returned to the house, he found a Hermione transformed by a woman’s particular magic into a creature that took his breath away.
:: You’ve stolen my soul again, you brazen witch. ::
:: Only because you pinched mine when I wasn’t looking, you conniving wizard. ::
:: Truce, then? ::
:: Truce. …I love you, Severus. ::
:: I love you, Hermione. ::
ANs:Well, there you are. A drabble series complete in four parts. I hope it has proved satisfying for your HGSS needs. I worried a bit about wrapping it up a bit too abruptly, but at the time, I was a little more worried about having it drag on too long, so I made the executive decision. As always, tokens in the little box below are appreciated, be they positive or critical. Thank you to those who have made their donations so far.
Story Actions
To follow, favorite, like, and more either log in or create an account.
Leave a Review
Log in to leave a review.
Latest 25 Reviews for Dented and Tarnished
37 Reviews | 3.51/10 Average
Wow quite a concept and well told. I enjoyed it.
The idea of reanimating a body after months under ground kind of squiks me out, but I guess it's not much different from him being in a coma for all those months - if the soul magic somehow kept his body from deteriorating.
Sorry, I tend to analyze too much. It was a lovely story. Anytime HG gets to nurse SS back to health and he learns to love her for it always gets a smile from me.
this is dark.
bringing back his burried body.
*shudder*
must get used to this thought first.
glad this only happens in wizzarding world.
oh Harry, she is not hurting herself. she is just feeling most intensely, more than ever again in her whole life.
What she was going through must be like a decent suicide for the sake of being with the beloved one that is dead already .just with the difference that she has intense contact to the soul of that person.
how to let go.
so hard to answer.
hard to go through.
intersting that again the malfoys did help.
I like your way of describing Mrs Malfoys style and behaviour.
and your explanation, why Snapes soul transforms in a silver box. rare, precious, but only few will know its value, worn, unpolished, and closed to everyone who doesn't know how to open.
shut away as he always had to be.
wow !
this is exciting
the silver box. still funny. but why not.
and now she is unconscious.
they meet and have a "Conversation" together?
the two souls meet in her body then?
where are they now. why is she unconscious.
its interesting that the malfoys should be there for help and assistance.
how to heal and free a soul.
you are quite interesting.
quick to the next chapter
how in the world did you get to this Idea!
this is just grant
a bit strange first, but your explanation holds, I think.
interesting for me anyhow.
all's well that ends well, by any means necessary. potter is stubbornly bullheaded. im most disappointed in snapes colleagues. they know what he went through. i guess its too much to ask of their narrow minds to finally wish him happiness.
oh! that potter goes too far. he should go and dally w/ginevra a bit. *whatever* he needs a chill pill.
harry is a wild card. in this case, i think hes onto something.
intriguing.....think ill stay and have a cuppa.
Beautiful. Just beautiful!
And quite a unique premise in this ship. That is a rare and precious thing!
I enjoyed all of this.
I loved it! It's perfectly perfect, to steal a phrase.
Somehow, this is a little to weird to me. Not the story...this.
The other day I was in the cubbyhole that is underneath the eave inside my bedroom. I opened the door (always a bit like Alice down the rabbit hole, going in one of those things. I've lived in three houses with one of those- but anyway) I was making room to hide Christmas presents, when all of a sudden, I heard a clank, and there in the dim (because there is no light switch in there) was my antique reproduction sterling silver box staring me in the face. I don't know how it got out of the storage container, but it was sitting there on top of it, all tarnished, but not too worse for wear.
And then, to come upon this story today...ironic, huh?
I'm so glad there is a happy ending. Thanks for a lovely and very original story.
Brava! What a terrific little jaunt. Enjoyed it immensely.
A very interesting take on necromancy. I think the Malfoys are well drawn in this drabble series - they are not often portrayed as either sympathetic or neutral, and less often as intelligent, capable wizards. (I think they are supposed to be intelligent and capable in canon.)
I do agree with you that the ending is a little abrupt. You describe Snape's body as feeling "...solid lead." But there's no indication if he got better or worse.
I always enjoy your drabbles. They're funny and poignant. Thank you!
Can't wait for the next chapter..
I really hope she's n her way to find a way to be with him. I would prefer n life better than in death but if it has to be. Severus deserves the happiness. And she, too.
Poor Harry just wouldn't understand. Not in this, but yes, I do suppose the Malfoys would.
What? I'm interested to see Harry's explanation of that!
It's more than interesting, it's taken my breath away and I don't how I'll survive 'til next chapter. !i want to know what will happen next more than anything.
Ah. The penny drops. This truly is fabulous.
Gosh your clever. I likey.
It certainly was as good as the first. I hope there's a happy ending for them somehow.