Chapter Four
Chapter 4 of 5
labrt2004A father recounts a series of meetings with a black-robed emissary. Written for Kribu during the Summer 2010 SS/HG Exchange.
ReviewedMy apologies to anyone who was watching this story on TPP...I'd completely forgotten that this wasn't complete here (it was posted elsewhere as complete). Here is the rest!
Author's Notes: Tremendous thanks goes out to my incredibly capable and persistent beta, mw48, who truly did not let me get away with ANYTHING. She plugged scores of plot holes, disdained my excessive use of hyphens, and made me strive to be better. Also, thank you to Annietalbot for holding my hand and giving this piece a look through and mrs_helenesnape for being one of my biggest cheerleaders! And finally, thank you, Exchange mods, for putting up with my endless excuses and whinging; you all truly are amazing!
Kribu's Prompt: The Grangers meet Snape. Could be a "parents meet daughter's new boyfriend," could be a series of meetings for random reasons, could be them meeting Snape-as-Hermione's-friend (or colleague) and mistaking him for something more, could be them walking in on something, etc.
In keeping with tradition, the third meeting was even more bizarre than the second. I recount it here only after lengthy reflection and a painstaking effort to piece together the eyewitness accounts of others. You see, I did not recall this meeting until long after it had occurred. I learnt that to live in Jeanie's world was to become the unwitting subject of magical intervention.
"Wendell, get the door, please. I'm up to my elbows in potato peels."
I set down the newspaper down and headed for the door, inhaling deeply as I did so. Savory scents drifted from the kitchen; Monica was putting her considerable culinary talents to use again, concocting some delicious wonder for dinner. After years of waiting for the right opportunity to move from England, Fortune had finally smiled upon us. The significantly upgraded kitchen, with its new appliances and sprawling counter spaces, was just one of the perks of our new Australian home.
It took a moment for my eyes to adjust properly to the nighttime darkness when I opened the door and another moment to make certain that I wasn't seeing things. A wan, hollow-faced man with startling black eyes stood before me, his body draped oppressively in thick, heavy clothing in spite of the boiling summer heat.
"Good evening, Dr. Granger. Evidently, you have not received any of my correspondence, as it has taken me quite a while to locate you. Regrettable, though understandable, for one cannot be too careful these days."
His words were as strange as his appearance, and in confusion, I replied, "I am very sorry, sir, but I'm afraid you've got the wrong man. There is no Dr. Granger here."
His eyes narrowed, though no other thoughts were evident upon his guarded visage.
"You are not David Granger? Is your wife not Jane Anderson?"
"No, indeed not," I affirmed. I was inexplicably glad that I was not this David Granger, whoever he was. Something about this stranger was disturbing, and I had the vague feeling that David would have objected to his presence. "Perhaps the man you seek used to live here; my wife Monica and I have only lived here for the past few months, though I can assure you that I've never dealt with anyone by the name of Granger when I bought the place."
"It is certainly very odd," the dark-robed stranger agreed. I realized he was now assessing me in a rude, impertinent fashion, his eyes gazing frankly into mine with unwarranted familiarity. A flash of unnaturally intense heat overcame me. Bristling, I glared at him, intending to put an end to the intrusion, but he himself had already jerked his eyes away, brows furrowed and nonplussed.
"Sweet Merlin, Granger, a Class C Obliviate?" he muttered.
Before I could ponder the meaning of that, my wife joined us. "Wendell, who is it?" Her voice carried before her as she entered from the kitchen. She took in our black apparition and raised her eyebrows.
"He is looking for someone who doesn't live here," I explained.
Monica inspected him shrewdly. "Well, it would be a shame for you to have come all this way for nothing. Come have a bite with us before you leave. If you're lucky, the temperature may drop down a few degrees." She eyed our guest's insulating layers pointedly.
I gaped at my wife, scanning her face for an indication of why she might have invited a complete stranger to dine with us. "Monica, dear, perhaps..."
"Oh, relax. It's just dinner. If he really wanted to kill us, we'd all be dead by now. Why have this great big house if we're only going to keep it to ourselves? Besides, look at him, he is exhausted and distressed."
Exhausted and distressed? I was sure he wasn't anything besides sour and unfriendly. But I gave our guest another look, and only then did I observe the stress lines creeping from the corners of tired eyes, the unhealthy hue of sallow skin, and a bandage upon his left hand. Leave it to Monica to see everything where others saw nothing.
The man bowed his head and murmured, "No, madam, your offer is kind, but it will not be necessary. I have imposed on you enough."
"Stay," I insisted, guilt and curiosity intermingling to bring me into agreement with my wife. He had the appearance of a bloke who had fallen on hard times, to say the least. I was willing to overlook our rough beginning. "You must have journeyed from somewhere far away, if your clothes are speaking the truth. Have something to eat, and perhaps if you tell us about this David Granger, we could help you locate him."
The stranger considered us wearily, the simple decision appearing to weigh greatly upon him. He looked from my wife back to me again, then closed his eyes and pinched the bridge of his nose. I did not understand this display of undue reluctance, but this only served to pique my interest in him.
Finally, he acquiesced. "I thank you both for your hospitality."
Several minutes later found us all seated around the table. "At least tell us your name," I prompted as we began tucking in.
"Douglas," he said simply. He chewed absently, oblivious to the excellent casserole.
"All right, Mr. Douglas, what is your occupation? And what brings you here to Australia looking for Mr. Granger?" Monica encouraged. I let her take the reins. She was always better at teasing information out of prickly types.
Mr. Douglas set his fork down with precise, careful movements, a preoccupied expression clouding his features. "I am a teacher," he responded slowly. "David Granger and his wife, Jane Anderson, have a daughter who was, until recently, a pupil at my school."
"Ah," Monica murmured. We both listened attentively.
"A number of months ago, the daughter went missing," he continued mechanically, eyes fixed upon his plate, "along with two of her friends. They were last seen at a wedding where... violent intruders appeared and incited a chaotic riot."
"Oh, how awful!" my wife gasped.
The man nodded. "Much effort was undertaken to find her... them. Meanwhile, we were having trouble locating the whereabouts of her parents. It seems they had... moved without leaving a forwarding address."
"Well, that's a truly asinine thing to do," I remarked, "especially given the fact that these people had a girl in boarding school!"
Mr. Douglas actually smirked, though it did not reach his eyes. "Yes, most unfortunate."
"So, you are looking for them in order to tell them that their daughter is missing? What horrible news to receive," said Monica with a shudder.
"Correct, hence my erroneous call here," the man replied. "However," he began in a changed tone as he finally met our gazes, "the nature of the news I bear has changed greatly, as I am now seeking them in order to inform them that their daughter has been found."
"Oh, good," Monica sighed.
"What had become of her?" I inquired.
"She...and her friends...had gone to great lengths to conceal themselves in an encampment in the forest. It took us a long while to determine their whereabouts." As he explained the details, his eyes became progressively more somber and his voice quieter. "They had realized immediately that it was they who had been the target at the wedding..."
"So, they hid in the woods?" I asked, frowning. "Didn't you say they were just students? Could they not be protected by the authorities?"
A bitter look crossed his face. "We are currently without the rule of law where we are."
I endeavored to think of some lawless places from whence this man, Douglas, might have come. "The Middle East?" I ventured. "Though why on earth would this Granger fellow send his daughter to boarding school in such a hostile environment?"
Mr. Douglas paused, and Monica quickly filled the silence. "Perhaps he would rather not say where he's from, dear," she said sympathetically. "Maybe he himself is in some sort of danger, if it's truly such a horrible place that everyone has to fend for themselves."
"So, you found her in the forest and brought her back to the school? Was she injured?" I asked in an attempt to steer Mr. Douglas back into his narrative again.
"No...," he replied, voice suddenly strained. "I...left her there. I left all of them, that is."
"WHAT?!" both my wife and I choked out.
"I ascertained that she was well. But it was impossible, given the circumstances, to remove her. There is a reason why she and her friends wander through the wilderness, related to why they were attacked in the first place. They must fulfill a certain objective before they may return." The man's eyes were shadowed.
"That is just... barbaric!" Monica exclaimed, appalled.
"But what I don't understand is this," I cut in. "This is a hell of a lot of effort you're putting in, Mr. Douglas, to find these parents, only to tell them that their daughter was lost and is, er... still lost. Why bother telling them at all? I'd imagine it would distress them unnecessarily. Perhaps you should just wait until she's definitely safe again."
"I would have thought the reason was quite obvious!" said Monica as she lightly speared at her vegetables. "He's in love with her."
"Pah," I scoffed, turning to Mr. Douglas.
Startled alarm briefly crossed his features before they were instantaneously cloaked behind a cold, impassive mask.
You can imagine that our repatriation after the war finally finished was an awkward and confusing affair. Our memories were restored to our minds as easily as one replenishes an empty candy dish. But there was a pervasive feeling for me that something was wrong, not the least of which was Jeanie herself. She bewildered us with her complete and total transformation into a grown woman. I suppose she had been progressing into adulthood all along. Nevertheless, every parent understands the distress that occurs when children are inevitably borne away by time. For us, the change was unaccountably sudden; Jeanie had left home a bubbly teenager, the last vestiges of childhood still evident in a round, content face and a bouncing gait. She returned to us a paragon of sedate dignity, her will steely, her expressions brooding.
We were almost immediately at odds with each other. Even before she had left home a child and returned an adult, she had already started keeping secrets. But after her return from her seventh year, it seemed she had closed off her entire heart to us, and there was not a piece of her soul which we could call our own.
"We're here for you." Jane and I had tried soothing her during the first few weeks, hoping that she would unburden herself to us. Our only rewards were the sad smiles and the same haunted silence.
Oh, we knew some things, of course. For example, even though she was already finished with the last year of her magical education, she decided to stay at Hogwarts for an extra year, though she never gave us any explanation for her extra schooling. She disappeared for long intervals with her friends, Harry Potter and Ron Weasley, and frequently returned from her outings with even deeper sorrow upon her face than when she had left.
"Hermione, for the love of God!" I snapped at her one day in frustration.
She reacted to the use of her name with a raised eyebrow.
"Whatever it is that happened to you in school last year, bottling it up inside you isn't going to alleviate it. Your mother and I want to help you, but we can't if you won't even talk to us!"
At first, there was no response save the usual carefully wary expression. Then the thinnest of cracks appeared in her stony façade. Guilt colored her troubled gaze, making it doubly heartbreaking, before she swiftly turned away.
A year came and went. Jeanie remained stubbornly angry, her mind secluded in a distant world filled with unnamed bitterness. Jane and I prayed daily for the strength to leave her be, for no amount of our parental prodding, cajoling, or pleading was having any effect. Then, unexpectedly, a year after she had come home a withered shell of her former self, I returned from work to find her sitting at the kitchen table, a pensive look upon her face. Jane was still at the office, and Jeanie always kept to her own room until both of us were home. It was a strange sight. I paused in the doorway.
She turned to me and smiled faintly, yet it had been so long since she had smiled at all that I sucked in my breath and inquired, "Jeanie?" I went to her and placed an encouraging hand upon her shoulder.
"Daddy," she began, then paused and chewed on her lower lip. Finally, with a resigned sigh, she said ruefully, "I'm sorry, I really am, I hope you'll understand some day."
She pulled out that infernal magic wand of hers and pointed it at my temple.
"Restituo Memoria."
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I love that her dad is willing to threaten a wizard over her safety! Go daddy Granger!
It was lovely to see this unfold from such an unsual pov
“I would have thought the reason was quite obvious!” said Monica as she lightly speared at her vegetables. “He’s in love with her.”
Wonderful! No wonder the poor man looked so surprised!
I'm pretty impressed that they even thought to inform her parents - nice that Snape is trusted with brewing her to safety :)
Hee! I love the idea of Snape being the one sent to tell unbelieving Muggles about magic! He's pure charm..
It's really nice to see her dad's pov for once! Fascinating bit of back story!
Very nicely done seeing things from dr. Granger's point of view. And I can definitely see him having reservations about a relationship with someone like Severus.
I've always felt so sorry for Hermione's parents having no clue about her world or really understanding what she went through
Vey nice beginning and I love how you explain the naming.
I love how Muggles can't read the books. Makes perfect sense. And her poor parents unable to see her even if they could do nothing for her.
Oh my! Who decided Snape should be the one to break the news to Muggle families? I love how Hermione had riddled some of it out
The first chapter alone prompted me to add this to my favorites list. You've written an exquisite and endearing background about the parental Grangers that is a treat to read. The addition of the small SSHG romantic details seals it all up nicely. I'm so happy you've shared!
A really unique perspective. Loved it!
Awwww. Excellent!!!
Well that was a rather heart-wrenching chapter. But a good one.
He asked Severus to take care of her. Despite his grumpiness, I'm sure that touched him.
You instilled such life in nearly non-existent canon characters. I almost just want to hear more about them!
And I love it being told from her father's point of view.
Lovely job.
I agree with jenidralph. More please! :)
This was one of my favorite stories from the last exchange. I'm absolutely delighted to see you posting it here, so I can read it again. This first chapter was/is brilliant! I adore the narrative voice and perspective, and I love the way you've fleshed out these practically non-existent canon characters.
I love this from her father's point of view. It's really interesting. His description of Jane was wonderful!
Absolutely lovely. You've done a good job of portraying the father's perspective throughout this, while nicely keeping both Hermione and Snape in character as their unconventional relationship developments.
What an amazing conversation between father and suitor. It was absolutely perfect. I'd read twenty more chapters of Dr. Granger's observations if I could. Well done!
This chapter was especially moving. Her sadness after the war as well as Severus' concern for her and her parents during the "seventh year". Lovely.
He asked Severus to take care of her. He trusts him, as I suppose he would have to. He is their main tie to the magical world of his daughter.
This is beautiful!!
I love how perceptive young Hermione was. She even surprised Snape.
I love your characterizations and the back-story you've created for the Grangers and their meeting Severus. These are wonderful parents who deserved better treatment in canon, and they certainly deserve a better son-in-law than Ron. Severus respects them despite their being wandless Muggles, and I like that Hermione values her parents instead of being a Weasley-phile. They cherished their only child, and I think they would cherish Severus also, giving him the love and acceptance he has always needed. Thanks for posting here!