Chapter Three
Chapter 3 of 5
labrt2004A father recounts a series of meetings with a black-robed emissary. Written for Kribu during the Summer 2010 SS/HG Exchange.
ReviewedAuthor's Notes: Tremendous thanks goes out to my incredibly capable and persistent beta, mw48, who truly did not let me get away with ANYTHING. She plugged scores of plot holes, disdained my excessive use of hyphens, and made me strive to be better. Also, thank you to Annietalbot for holding my hand and giving this piece a look through and mrs_helenesnape for being one of my biggest cheerleaders! And finally, thank you, Exchange mods for putting up with my endless excuses and whinging; you all truly are amazing!
Kribu's Prompt: The Grangers meet Snape. Could be a "parents meet daughter's new boyfriend," could be a series of meetings for random reasons, could be them meeting Snape-as-Hermione's-friend (or colleague) and mistaking him for something more, could be them walking in on something, etc.
The second time I met the man was more than a year later.
I, of course, had spent many mornings after his first visit waking up and hoping that it had all been just a nightmare. There were times I would have given anything for Jeanie to not be a witch, for no strange man to have appeared at my door, and for the three of us to carry on just like any other family. It wasn't until after we had sent Jeanie off for her first year at Hogwarts that I finally got used to it. I'd seen her reading her new "books" if you could call them that. As far as I was concerned, they were just bound volumes of blank parchment, but Jeanie assured me that their contents were only invisible to me because I was Muggle. I took her word for it, but to my shame, Mr. Snape's prediction that we would have sent Jeanie to the asylum leapt back to mind as I watched her stare for hours on end at those empty books.
The second year was much easier than the first year. By then, I had really begun to believe that she was like any other child returning to boarding school. Almost. She did travel with quite the odd assortment of paraphernalia, but mostly, we thought we were over the worst of the surprises.
Until he showed up again.
I suppose it's to his credit that he had bothered to actually notify us this time of his impending arrival. That is, only if you counted a wrinkled piece of paper stating, "Drs. Granger and Anderson, expect me to arrive tonight with regard to an urgent matter, S. Snape, Hogwarts" as ample notice. I had the hyperactive owl that had descended upon me while I was at the clinic to thank for the forewarning. At least I knew what to do with the flapping fiend after more than a year's worth of magical correspondence with Jeanie.
When he arrived, drenched from a rainstorm, I showed Mr. Snape into the house immediately. His expression was grim. Jane and I sat and watched him fearfully, trepidation tugging at our hearts, for what would have sent this strange man back to our doorstep in such a rush if not Jeanie?
"Sir, madam," he began after peeling off his soaking garments, "your daughter has been gravely injured. She has been Petrified and is currently in the Hospital Wing at Hogwarts."
The pit of my stomach plummeted to the floor as I was overcome by nausea. "Wh-what does that mean? Is it critical?" I managed to ground out.
"It means her body has been cursed into a state of frozen stillness, not unlike a statue. And no, not critical, though very serious."
"So, is she in a coma?" Jane asked worriedly.
"No. The brain is not affected and should recover when the curse is reversed," came the level reply.
"Oh, it can be reversed!" I exclaimed, relieved.
Mr. Snape held my gaze. "Only with time," he said. "The antidote is a potion. It requires as an ingredient mature Mandrake plant, all of which are in their adolescent stage right now. I will be overseeing the formulation of the potion myself."
"How long will it be, then?" I immediately asked.
"It can range anywhere from a few weeks to a few months."
We sat in shocked silence, trying to imagine our daughter lying still in a bed for all that time. I reached out and pulled Jane closer. I squeezed her trembling hand if only to stop myself from trembling.
"She was cursed into this Petrification state?" Jane repeated. "As in..." she gestured about vaguely, "an evil spell?"
"It is possible to incant a Petrification spell, but we believe in this case that it was caused by a dangerous creature known as a Basilisk."
"Dangerous creatures? What exactly do you have going on at this school of yours?" I demanded, hearing my own voice ratchet up several decibels. My mind was reeling.
"I assure you, this is highly atypical. Hogwarts has not seen students injured on this scale in fifty years."
"Students?" said Jane, plucking the thought straight from my own mind. "So, Jeanie was not the only one?"
"I am afraid not. Others were also harmed. You should know, however..." The professor stopped suddenly and cleared his throat, seemingly frustrated.
"Yes?" I prompted.
"Dr. Granger, we believe it is quite possible that your daughter intentionally sought to engage the Basilisk"
"You blame Jeanie?" I interrupted coldly.
He held up a hand. Then in harsh tones, he began speaking again. "You will please assume that Miss Granger is an adolescent girl rather than a responsible adult. It is not out of the question that she should take some foolhardy risks. After observing the occurrences around her, she grew curious." He paused and appeared to have difficulty finding his next words. "Your daughter possesses... remarkable intellectual aptitude. She succeeded in finding the answer just in time, not only to save her own life but also that of a fellow classmate, Miss Clearwater."
My breath suddenly drained from me. "She could have died?"
The professor nodded and for the first time during his visit, averted his gaze. "The headmaster noted right before she was sent to the infirmary that Miss Granger had a mirror in her hand and a crumpled piece of parchment on which a single word, pipes, was written. We would have taken these artifacts from her for further inspection if there hadn't been so many other urgent tasks to attend to; however, even without the benefit of thorough analysis, we were able to infer from that word alone that the creature was a Basilisk dwelling in Hogwarts' pipes. Had Miss Granger met its gaze fully rather than in a mirror, she would have died."
"Then we must go see her as soon as we can!" said Jane, who had turned an alarming shade of white as the professor was explaining.
Mr. Snape sighed heavily. "Neither of you can gain access to Hogwarts Castle. I am sorry. It is certainly not safe to remove her from the Hospital Wing, and in her Petrified condition, it is unlikely she would be able to hear you."
"This is absurd!" I had finally resorted to shouting. "You come here to tell me that my daughter has been attacked by a vicious monster, and yet we are not permitted to see her. Are we simply supposed to sit here and do nothing? What kind of school are you running? Who is responsible for this creature, and why isn't it being contained? I thought you had all sorts of magic tricks up your sleeve!"
A vein pulsed in the professor's temple. "Were it for us to decide, which it is emphatically not, you would certainly be able to see your daughter. As for your other question, Hogwarts is steeped in history, some of which remains incomplete. This monster may have resided within our walls since the school's founding, thousands of years ago. It has been a hostile presence within the castle since at least fifty years ago, the last time it appeared, coinciding with a student's death then, too. We have as yet no means to expel it. "
I tried not to sink into panic as I grappled with the sensation of being so fully at the mercy of another. I stared at this Snape, my daughter's professor, who came bearing news of Jeanie from a world we could not see, of a crisis we didn't even know how to comprehend. He was too calm, too composed. His restraint was unnatural and practiced, but behind it all, I still sensed the haunted weariness of a tired man.
I slumped, turning to Jane, who was blinking rapidly, and searched her wet eyes, seeking their familiar comfort and finding in them the likeness of my daughter. After allowing myself the benefit of a few deep breaths of air, I extended my hand to Mr. Snape. "Please take good care of her."
A shadow seemed to momentarily pass through his eyes. "Her Head of House, Minerva McGonagall, is responsible for her care. She will do a fine job."
"But you'll be the one making the medicine?"
His head dipped once. "Yes."
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I love that her dad is willing to threaten a wizard over her safety! Go daddy Granger!
It was lovely to see this unfold from such an unsual pov
“I would have thought the reason was quite obvious!” said Monica as she lightly speared at her vegetables. “He’s in love with her.”
Wonderful! No wonder the poor man looked so surprised!
I'm pretty impressed that they even thought to inform her parents - nice that Snape is trusted with brewing her to safety :)
Hee! I love the idea of Snape being the one sent to tell unbelieving Muggles about magic! He's pure charm..
It's really nice to see her dad's pov for once! Fascinating bit of back story!
Very nicely done seeing things from dr. Granger's point of view. And I can definitely see him having reservations about a relationship with someone like Severus.
I've always felt so sorry for Hermione's parents having no clue about her world or really understanding what she went through
Vey nice beginning and I love how you explain the naming.
I love how Muggles can't read the books. Makes perfect sense. And her poor parents unable to see her even if they could do nothing for her.
Oh my! Who decided Snape should be the one to break the news to Muggle families? I love how Hermione had riddled some of it out
The first chapter alone prompted me to add this to my favorites list. You've written an exquisite and endearing background about the parental Grangers that is a treat to read. The addition of the small SSHG romantic details seals it all up nicely. I'm so happy you've shared!
A really unique perspective. Loved it!
Awwww. Excellent!!!
Well that was a rather heart-wrenching chapter. But a good one.
He asked Severus to take care of her. Despite his grumpiness, I'm sure that touched him.
You instilled such life in nearly non-existent canon characters. I almost just want to hear more about them!
And I love it being told from her father's point of view.
Lovely job.
I agree with jenidralph. More please! :)
This was one of my favorite stories from the last exchange. I'm absolutely delighted to see you posting it here, so I can read it again. This first chapter was/is brilliant! I adore the narrative voice and perspective, and I love the way you've fleshed out these practically non-existent canon characters.
I love this from her father's point of view. It's really interesting. His description of Jane was wonderful!
Absolutely lovely. You've done a good job of portraying the father's perspective throughout this, while nicely keeping both Hermione and Snape in character as their unconventional relationship developments.
What an amazing conversation between father and suitor. It was absolutely perfect. I'd read twenty more chapters of Dr. Granger's observations if I could. Well done!
This chapter was especially moving. Her sadness after the war as well as Severus' concern for her and her parents during the "seventh year". Lovely.
He asked Severus to take care of her. He trusts him, as I suppose he would have to. He is their main tie to the magical world of his daughter.
This is beautiful!!
I love how perceptive young Hermione was. She even surprised Snape.
I love your characterizations and the back-story you've created for the Grangers and their meeting Severus. These are wonderful parents who deserved better treatment in canon, and they certainly deserve a better son-in-law than Ron. Severus respects them despite their being wandless Muggles, and I like that Hermione values her parents instead of being a Weasley-phile. They cherished their only child, and I think they would cherish Severus also, giving him the love and acceptance he has always needed. Thanks for posting here!