Chapter 15
Chapter 16 of 18
flaminia_xHarry is asked to investigate a series of suspicious attacks, but soon the suspicion is turned toward Harry himself. Can he clear his name?
A minute later found us all tumbling out of my Floo. Ten minutes later found me showered, dressed in clean clothes, and sitting down on my couch in front of a huge plate of sandwiches, cold chicken, and Butterbeer. I laughed when Teddy took his first sip and choked, spraying it across Ron's arm.
“Alright, the three of you. Start from the beginning,” I commanded, shoveling a ham and cheese into my mouth.
“Well, I think the first thing to say is that thank goodness Ron and Hermione came to visit me in hospital,” Tonks said. “It took all three of us to figure this one out.”
“Go on,” I mumbled around a mouthful of chicken.
“Swallow first, Harry,” Hermione laughed. “The first clue was when Ron and Tonks figured out that the Weasleys, not you, would inherit the money. So, that alone would probably have been enough to clear you if only for insufficient motive.”
My mouth was full again, so I just nodded for her to continue.
“But when I came to visit you, you pointed out that someone out there didn't know that. Whoever was doing this didn't know about, or didn't remember, the Weasley connection to the Black family,” she went on.
“Right,” Ron interjected. “Hermione told me about that, so the three of us started brainstorming, going on the assumption that the fortune was the real goal. Between me and Tonks, we had a pretty good idea about the Black family tree, so we started looking for others that could stand to inherit.”
“And what we found out was really quite interesting,” Tonks continued. “Basically, the family fortune passes down by bloodlines first. Blood trumps all other claims to inheritances. But when other types of relationships are taken into consideration, then the legality of inheritances gets … fuzzy.”
“So, I started doing some research,” Hermione said. “And the two main types of relationships that can interfere with inheritances are marriage, of course, and official godfather or godmother status. Problems usually arise when someone related to a family by marriage challenges someone related to a family by god-status, but Harry, as both Sirius's godson and Teddy's godfather, you have double the ties to the family, and your claim would technically win out over someone who was just related through marriage.”
“You're saying,” I said, swallowing hastily, “that someone out there who's only related to the Blacks by marriage thought that by eliminating me, he or she would then be the only inheritor?”
“Exactly,” Ron said. “You know who it is yet?”
“Not a clue, mate. I'm baffled,” I said. “Keep going while I keep eating.”
“Well, Tonks came to the conclusion that if whoever it was discounted the Weasley relationship to the Blacks, they probably were a pureblood, someone who would perhaps never have known that the Weasleys were related because we're blood traitors,” Ron said matter-of-factly. “So, we were looking for a pureblood who was related to the Blacks by marriage ...” He waited expectantly.
“Don't make me guess, Ron,” I growled, grabbing another sandwich. “I'm exhausted and famished and utterly delighted to be home and if you would just tell the bloody story – oops, sorry, Teddy – then I'd be a happy, happy man.”
“Fine,” Ron sighed teasingly. “But I thought Auror Potter would have gotten it by now.”
Hermione elbowed him in the ribs. “Don't take the mickey out of him, Ron. He's been through enough,” she said. “Harry, at Draco's funeral, didn't you and Ron notice something odd?”
“Yeah, well, Ron did, anyway; Narcissa Malfoy wasn't there,” I said, popping open another Butterbeer. “Thought Lucius had said she was practically an invalid because of the stress of the loss.”
“Right,” Hermione continued. “But the problem is, Harry, she's not been seen since and it's been months.”
“So what? I know how much she loved Draco, and if she loved Scorpius half as much, she had every right to be devastated,” I said.
“Sure, Harry, that's true,” Tonks said. “But we were looking into anyone that could possibly inherit the money, and in particular, anyone that would consider you a threat.”
“And you thought it could be Lucius?” I asked, mulling it over. “Well, he's a pureblood, and he's related to the Blacks through his marriage to Narcissa, but that still doesn't make sense because wouldn't Narcissa inherit the money? What would Lucius have to do with it?”
“You're right, Harry. Narcissa would inherit the money ... as long as she were alive,” Ron said.
“But she's not been seen in months,” I said, my brain whirling. “So, what you're trying to tell me is that she's dead?”
“Not exactly,” Tonks said grimly. “We began investigating him the next day, though.”
“Harcourt and I went to the Manor under the pretense of alerting Lucius to some new information from France,” Ron said. “We asked to be able to extend our condolences once again to Narcissa in person, but he wouldn't let us, saying that she was too weak to accept visitors. But he did allow us to speak with the house-elves.”
“Why?” I asked.
“Well, you see, the 'evidence' we had pointed to a rogue house-elf at their French manor,” he continued.
“A rogue house-elf?” My voice dripped with cynicism.
“Hey, at least he bought it,” Hermione said. “Go on, Ron.”
“So, we were talking to their house-elves, and of course, they were being very secretive, afraid of retribution,” Ron said. “But the one, she kept telling us she had to go, that it was 'time for Mistress's special tea.' So, I asked her about it, saying how much Hermione here loved tea, and would she give us the recipe for it. House-elves everywhere know Hermione, and fortunately this one apparently just loves the famous Miss 'Mione Granger, so she was more than happy to provide us with a sample of the secret ingredient,” Ron concluded.
“What was it?” I asked, wiping my mouth and stifling a belch. Blimey, but I could have eaten another tray of sandwiches. Maybe some pudding …
“It was a watered-down version of the same thing the mediwizards had found in Teddy's system,” Tonks said, looking protectively over at her son, who was playing pretend Quidditch in the next room. “It was basically keeping Narcissa in a comatose state, just like Teddy's, only it was pretty much keeping her alive.”
“You mean, Lucius poisoned his own wife?”
“We're not sure, actually. It could be that she really did fall ill, or had some sort of accident. The point is that it was keeping her just enough alive that she could still legally inherit the fortune through blood lineage if all the other candidates had been eliminated,” Ron said.
“But ... that makes no sense,” I said. “If you're telling me he was keeping Narcissa alive but comatose with poison so that she could be the one to inherit the money, then you're telling me he is also the same one who was after the rest of us. But that doesn't explain why he killed his own family!”
“Sure it does,” Hermione said. “You see, after the war, part of the condition of his and Narcissa's freedom was that they rescind all rights to inheriting any of the Black money unless Narcissa was the sole remaining heir.”
“You mean to tell me that Lucius Malfoy … killed his own son and grandson, and Remus, and attacked the rest of us, simply so that Narcissa could claim the fortune?”
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Now that was just downright mean to stop there!!!!! I anxiously await MORE!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Hahaha - chapters in queue, I promise! Thanks for reading!! :)
Ah, so the Black family fortune makes an appearance, if only in Robards' speculation. I was wondering about that portkey as well. Could it have been activated remotely once Remus was murdered, so it wouldn't act as a portkey until the right moment? What if Harry hadn't looked in the box to find it? Although it rattled - presumably to catch his attention at the right time . . . And Ron is finally and firmly on Harry's side! Yay!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay indeed! As if one could doubt Ron's loyalty, though! Perish the thought! I do think the answers to your speculations will surface soon enough ... stay tuned! Thanks for reading and commenting!! It's greatly appreciated!
Oh, poor Remus. You never actually said why he and Tonks had a fallout.I wonder ... just for how long had that portkey been in this box? I mean, Remus was dead just for less than an hour, and the portkey brought Harry to the place of the murder.I noticed Hermione's absence in this fic. Not that I suspect her, but I just noticed it.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love seeing guesses and speculations and seeing what folks notice!! I can't wait to hear your reactions to the upcoming chapters!!
Poor Remus! Although there went my primary suspect. I am enjoying the buildup of suspense and have no idea at this point how you will get Harry out of this. (Unless you plan to go the route of "The Murder of Roger Ackroyd!)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I do hope the ending lives up to your expectations! :)
Oh poor Remus. Things aren't looking good for Harry, too many coincidences.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Poor Remus indeed! I do like him, but ... alas. Stay tuned to see what happens with Harry!
Oh no, poor Tonks! Very suspenseful chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! Should be up soon - keep your eyes peeled! Glad you're liking it thus far!
Since I love to speculate, I have lots of questions. (Not that I expect answers that would give anything away!)First of all, where is Remus? Shouldn't he have come to see his son?Teddy was poisoned by an unknown poison, and coincidentally, his cousin Draco was working with theoretical potions. Is that important? Draco would certainly have recognized if one of his theories/potions had been used or mis-used, or might have recognized what Teddy was poisoned with. And with Draco out of the way, does Tonks by any chance become the Black/Malfoy family heir?"One day, all you have will be mine." Odd wording - one day. Someone planning far off in the future? What will Tonks have "one day?" What does she have besides Teddy? And is it important that Harry spent a lot of time with Tonks after her mother died? Is someone jealous? Does that person hate Harry enough to frame him? To quote The Grinch, I have been puzzling and puzzling til my puzzler is sore.I eagerly await the next installment!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love speculation! I am glad you're picking up on some of these things - perhaps they'll be answered in the future chapters! I'm terribly sorry your puzzler is sore, though! Hopefully the rest of the story will un-hurt your puzzler! :)
I like the way the mystery is developing - although, poor Teddy! Hmm, I wonder if there is a connection between the cases . . . looking forward to more!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, glad you're looking forward to the next chapters! All forthcoming. :) Poor Teddy indeed. Stay tuned!
wow, the story is developing really well!i'm curious to see if there's a connection between the 2 cases... ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the plot development! Keep your eyes peeled for the next chapter!
Interesting...I wonder where this is going?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I know it's a bit of a teaser prologue, but much more to come! Thanks for reading!
This continues to be quite intriguing! I have been speculating on what connection there could be between the two cases, and can only come up with Andromeda Black Tonks, which seems awfully far-fetched. So will speculate some more . . . . .
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I don't know whether to hope that you figure it out or that I fool you completely!! I'm so glad you are continuing to read and I can't wait to hear what you think about it when all is said and done! :)
too abrupt. needs one chapter before this poetic ending... very well-written and original though!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Sorry you didn't care for the pacing at the end, but glad you enjoyed the rest of it!! Thanks for the review!
Nice start! I like the "hard-boiled detective" flavor, and look forward to more.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay, hard-boiled! Thanks! I'm definitely aiming for the film noir feel, so I am glad that was the vibe you got from it. Plenty more coming - can't wait to see what you think!
Great start on this story. My first thought was why would Draco be in a car? Glad the investigators thought that too. Is this being told through Harry?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes, everything is from Harry's point of view - sort of a film noir story (or at least I hope so). Keep reading - more chapters to be posted soon! Can't wait to hear what you think!
I bit of Raymond Chandler going on here. I always enjoy an original take on the potterverse.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Why thanks! So glad you think I've got a bit of something new here. Can't wait to see what you think as the story develops! :)
It's a little hard to believe that Lucius killed his own son and grandson just so Narcissa could inherit money. But if he is the culprit, how did he get through Harry's wards????
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Such good questions!! :)
Hmmm, how long has that porkey been among the papers?I wonder if someone polyjuiced as Harry would get through the wards?The mystery deepens. Looking foward to more!!!!!(Chapters 8 & 9 seem to be out of order.)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh bless you for noticing! They had gotten submitted backwards and I hadn't realized they had also been posted backwards. It's fixed now! Also, love your ideas! I love to see readers' guesses about what's going on! Keep reading - all questions will be answered, I hope!!
A classical theme - suspended detective investigates, but not after having wallowed appropriately in his grief / guilt / whatever. Funny to see Harry act the part.So the pen was a portkey? But your description doesn't quite match up - "... yanked into myself." HmmmmI briefly thought that one of the persons the wards was set to, had come back from the future to assault Tonks. But what reason would any of them have for doing it?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Well, I think being yanked into oneself is sort of like Portkeying - at least in the sense that it creates a horrific vertigo or sense of disorientation, and being yanked at the navel by a big hook, as the books say. I love the idea about the future person ... we'll see if you're right and what happens in the upcoming chapters!
Well, well - friendship is growing into more here. I still can't see any connection between the two cases - apart from Tonks and Draco being related. Maybe Narcissa doesn't want to see her sister's lineage going on when her own had been destroyed? That still wouldn't explain Draco's death (assuming he is really dead), though.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I do love guesses! It's interesting to see what readers think or guess or pick up on, because as the author I had a certain plot in mind, so I'm anxious to see whether anyone figures it out, or if they didn't, what they thought might have happened instead! You have very interesting ideas, and that's all I'll say! ;)
Lots of cigarettes in this story so far - well, hard-boiled detectives always seemed to smoke in the film noir genre.(I just wonder - I can't recall that in canon a single cigarette was mentioned ...)A very interesting set up. So far I have not enough clues to guess anything, so I#ll continue reading :-)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Haha - thanks! Glad you're enjoying it thus far, and yes, more shall be revealed later on. I don't really think Harry's a smoker, but I can picture it, and I was definitely pulling out lots of film noir tropes, so it just seemed that cigarettes were necessary for that feel. Hope you enjoy the rest of it!