Chapter 10
Chapter 11 of 18
flaminia_xHarry is asked to investigate a series of suspicious attacks, but soon the suspicion is turned toward Harry himself. Can he clear his name?
We popped in to see Tonks but she was thankfully asleep. Her face was a mess of cuts and bruises, though, and an egg-sized lump was clearly visible on her left temple. Whoever attacked her had been brutal.
Outside for a quick smoke, I turned to Ron. “The thing I don't understand is how she escaped. She's got no cuts or scrapes or torn fingernails to suggest she fought back, so it doesn't make sense for her to have gotten away from her attacker and have escaped through the Floo.”
“Yeah, I thought about that too,” he answered thoughtfully. “I'm wondering if maybe the attacker hit her so hard that instead of waking up, she was knocked unconscious, and then when she woke up and realized what had happened, she left then?”
“But is that likely? With injuries like that, to have been unconscious only for such a short time, and then wake up mobile?” I asked.
“Not sure, but we can check with the mediwizards,” he said.
We trudged back inside and met with Healer Lovelace, the mediwizard overseeing Tonks. “Healer Lovelace, we were wondering if you would be able to tell us anything you think that could help us understand how Tonks got here,” Ron asked.
“All we know is that she Flooed here under her own power, severely beaten and barely conscious. She was able to tell us she was attacked while she was asleep, then she called out the name of her son and a Harry before falling unconscious,” Healer Lovelace answered.
“That corroborates what we know, but sir, what we don't understand is what could possibly explain how she got away. Is it possible that the attacker thought she was dead and escaped, only for her to wake up and Floo here?” I pressed.
“It's certainly possible,” the man said. “Or perhaps she knew her attacker, and so she wasn't immediately afraid of him. I'm terribly sorry; I'm late for rounds. If you'll excuse me?”
After he walked away, Ron and I exchanged dark glances, knowing instantly what each other was thinking. This information certainly wouldn't make me look better in Robards's eyes.
“Harry, you know I have to tell him,” Ron said quietly, his eyes holding mine.
“Yeah,” I said, nodding. “I know. You're just doing your job.”
Ron exhaled. “Look, if you need anything … maybe you should take a leave of absence, just for a little while. I know you; you've got tons of vacation days stored up.”
“I can't go anywhere. Not unless this whole thing is solved,” I spat.
“Not saying you have to take a holiday, Harry, just lay low for a while, stay out of Robards' way. I'm sure he doesn't really think it's you, but you know these sorts of things have to be handled properly unless we want the bastard doing this to walk on a technicality,” Ron said.
“No, that we don't,” I said mechanically. “Fine. I'll go back with you and get some stuff from my office.”
I talked to Robards briefly. I thought he seemed relieved to have me gone for a while, and to be honest, I was too. I could do better work if I wasn't under constant supervision. Grabbing a small box, I hastily threw papers and files into it – anything that I thought was related to Tonks's case, Teddy, or the Malfoys. Everything else could bloody well wait. Shrinking it down and putting it in the pocket of my robes, I stopped quickly by Ron's office to tell him I was on official leave. He nodded, lips tightening, and promised to keep me informed. Thank Merlin for small favors.
Once home, though, I sank onto the couch, mind whirling. There was too much information in my head, and none of it pointing me in the right direction. But I swore to myself that leave or no leave, I wouldn't rest until I knew what was going on.
Three days passed by, three days of constant cigarettes and little bathing, of eating cold leftovers from dinners past and half a bottle of Firewhisky, and of absolutely no new ideas. Tonks wasn't awake enough yet to talk, and frankly, I wasn't sure how she would react to me being there. The box from my office sat untouched in the pocket of the robes that I hadn't bothered to hang up. And so, I sat and kindled a fire in the evenings only to watch it burn to ashes, and then I would start it all over again.
But on the fourth morning, I woke up a little more clear-headed. Stretching and yawning, I rubbed my eyes blearily and wondered when I'd last showered – a real shower and not a quick Cleansing Charm – or even brushed my teeth. I trudged upstairs and tried to relax under the warm stream of water, then donned fresh clothes. The downstairs was a mess. Not for the first time, I thanked Molly Weasley silently for her knowledge of household charms and set the place to rights with a few muttered words. Today was Halloween, and it was time to get back to work.
I unearthed the tiny box of papers from my office and took it to my desk. Wand at the ready, I sent papers flying. In one corner went all the files from the Malfoy case, in another everything related to Teddy, and in the center all the information I had on Tonks. Fixing myself a pot of strong tea, I took it and some reheated sausages back to the library, resolving to read everything over yet again. Maybe there was some small detail I had missed. Unlikely, given that I practically had everything memorized, but worth a shot.
Morning turned into afternoon, and afternoon turned into night, and I had taken breaks only to grab another greasy carton of Chinese takeaway and for a quick piss or three. Still, nothing was coming to mind. Nothing seemed new, nothing was showing any promise. Frustrated, I kicked the box that I had brought with me from the office and jumped out of my skin when it rattled.
That's funny, I thought to myself. I thought all I had grabbed were my papers … I bent down and righted the box, startled to see a Muggle pen fall out. Must have been one of those pens Ron and I were using when we were in France investigating Draco's death. I grabbed it to throw it up onto my desk, but with a sickening swirl, I was yanked into myself.
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Now that was just downright mean to stop there!!!!! I anxiously await MORE!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Hahaha - chapters in queue, I promise! Thanks for reading!! :)
Ah, so the Black family fortune makes an appearance, if only in Robards' speculation. I was wondering about that portkey as well. Could it have been activated remotely once Remus was murdered, so it wouldn't act as a portkey until the right moment? What if Harry hadn't looked in the box to find it? Although it rattled - presumably to catch his attention at the right time . . . And Ron is finally and firmly on Harry's side! Yay!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay indeed! As if one could doubt Ron's loyalty, though! Perish the thought! I do think the answers to your speculations will surface soon enough ... stay tuned! Thanks for reading and commenting!! It's greatly appreciated!
Oh, poor Remus. You never actually said why he and Tonks had a fallout.I wonder ... just for how long had that portkey been in this box? I mean, Remus was dead just for less than an hour, and the portkey brought Harry to the place of the murder.I noticed Hermione's absence in this fic. Not that I suspect her, but I just noticed it.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love seeing guesses and speculations and seeing what folks notice!! I can't wait to hear your reactions to the upcoming chapters!!
Poor Remus! Although there went my primary suspect. I am enjoying the buildup of suspense and have no idea at this point how you will get Harry out of this. (Unless you plan to go the route of "The Murder of Roger Ackroyd!)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I do hope the ending lives up to your expectations! :)
Oh poor Remus. Things aren't looking good for Harry, too many coincidences.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Poor Remus indeed! I do like him, but ... alas. Stay tuned to see what happens with Harry!
Oh no, poor Tonks! Very suspenseful chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! Should be up soon - keep your eyes peeled! Glad you're liking it thus far!
Since I love to speculate, I have lots of questions. (Not that I expect answers that would give anything away!)First of all, where is Remus? Shouldn't he have come to see his son?Teddy was poisoned by an unknown poison, and coincidentally, his cousin Draco was working with theoretical potions. Is that important? Draco would certainly have recognized if one of his theories/potions had been used or mis-used, or might have recognized what Teddy was poisoned with. And with Draco out of the way, does Tonks by any chance become the Black/Malfoy family heir?"One day, all you have will be mine." Odd wording - one day. Someone planning far off in the future? What will Tonks have "one day?" What does she have besides Teddy? And is it important that Harry spent a lot of time with Tonks after her mother died? Is someone jealous? Does that person hate Harry enough to frame him? To quote The Grinch, I have been puzzling and puzzling til my puzzler is sore.I eagerly await the next installment!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love speculation! I am glad you're picking up on some of these things - perhaps they'll be answered in the future chapters! I'm terribly sorry your puzzler is sore, though! Hopefully the rest of the story will un-hurt your puzzler! :)
I like the way the mystery is developing - although, poor Teddy! Hmm, I wonder if there is a connection between the cases . . . looking forward to more!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, glad you're looking forward to the next chapters! All forthcoming. :) Poor Teddy indeed. Stay tuned!
wow, the story is developing really well!i'm curious to see if there's a connection between the 2 cases... ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the plot development! Keep your eyes peeled for the next chapter!
Interesting...I wonder where this is going?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I know it's a bit of a teaser prologue, but much more to come! Thanks for reading!
This continues to be quite intriguing! I have been speculating on what connection there could be between the two cases, and can only come up with Andromeda Black Tonks, which seems awfully far-fetched. So will speculate some more . . . . .
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I don't know whether to hope that you figure it out or that I fool you completely!! I'm so glad you are continuing to read and I can't wait to hear what you think about it when all is said and done! :)
too abrupt. needs one chapter before this poetic ending... very well-written and original though!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Sorry you didn't care for the pacing at the end, but glad you enjoyed the rest of it!! Thanks for the review!
Nice start! I like the "hard-boiled detective" flavor, and look forward to more.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay, hard-boiled! Thanks! I'm definitely aiming for the film noir feel, so I am glad that was the vibe you got from it. Plenty more coming - can't wait to see what you think!
Great start on this story. My first thought was why would Draco be in a car? Glad the investigators thought that too. Is this being told through Harry?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes, everything is from Harry's point of view - sort of a film noir story (or at least I hope so). Keep reading - more chapters to be posted soon! Can't wait to hear what you think!
I bit of Raymond Chandler going on here. I always enjoy an original take on the potterverse.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Why thanks! So glad you think I've got a bit of something new here. Can't wait to see what you think as the story develops! :)
It's a little hard to believe that Lucius killed his own son and grandson just so Narcissa could inherit money. But if he is the culprit, how did he get through Harry's wards????
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Such good questions!! :)
Hmmm, how long has that porkey been among the papers?I wonder if someone polyjuiced as Harry would get through the wards?The mystery deepens. Looking foward to more!!!!!(Chapters 8 & 9 seem to be out of order.)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh bless you for noticing! They had gotten submitted backwards and I hadn't realized they had also been posted backwards. It's fixed now! Also, love your ideas! I love to see readers' guesses about what's going on! Keep reading - all questions will be answered, I hope!!
A classical theme - suspended detective investigates, but not after having wallowed appropriately in his grief / guilt / whatever. Funny to see Harry act the part.So the pen was a portkey? But your description doesn't quite match up - "... yanked into myself." HmmmmI briefly thought that one of the persons the wards was set to, had come back from the future to assault Tonks. But what reason would any of them have for doing it?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Well, I think being yanked into oneself is sort of like Portkeying - at least in the sense that it creates a horrific vertigo or sense of disorientation, and being yanked at the navel by a big hook, as the books say. I love the idea about the future person ... we'll see if you're right and what happens in the upcoming chapters!
Well, well - friendship is growing into more here. I still can't see any connection between the two cases - apart from Tonks and Draco being related. Maybe Narcissa doesn't want to see her sister's lineage going on when her own had been destroyed? That still wouldn't explain Draco's death (assuming he is really dead), though.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I do love guesses! It's interesting to see what readers think or guess or pick up on, because as the author I had a certain plot in mind, so I'm anxious to see whether anyone figures it out, or if they didn't, what they thought might have happened instead! You have very interesting ideas, and that's all I'll say! ;)
Lots of cigarettes in this story so far - well, hard-boiled detectives always seemed to smoke in the film noir genre.(I just wonder - I can't recall that in canon a single cigarette was mentioned ...)A very interesting set up. So far I have not enough clues to guess anything, so I#ll continue reading :-)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Haha - thanks! Glad you're enjoying it thus far, and yes, more shall be revealed later on. I don't really think Harry's a smoker, but I can picture it, and I was definitely pulling out lots of film noir tropes, so it just seemed that cigarettes were necessary for that feel. Hope you enjoy the rest of it!