Chapter 5
Chapter 6 of 18
flaminia_xHarry is asked to investigate a series of suspicious attacks, but soon the suspicion is turned toward Harry himself. Can he clear his name?
August rolled by. Robards continuously plagued me for new information on the Malfoy case, but there simply was nothing to go on. The opinion that it had been a magical assassination was just that an opinion and aside from the sheer lack of evidence pointing to a Muggle bomb, there was nothing to use to determine who could have done it. Unlike Teddy's situation, there were too many people who might be happy to see the Malfoys dead just for being Malfoys and plenty of people who could tangentially profit from their deaths, so motives abounded. But without the physical evidence to trace magical signatures, it was all but impossible to determine what kind of spell was used to blow up the car. The only odd thing about the entire situation was the fact that they were in a car to begin with.
I tapped the tip of my wand against my teeth. If there wasn't enough car left to examine, maybe it was high time that I started working things from the other end, so to speak. Maybe it was high time I began acquainting myself with Draco Malfoy.
I spent the next week gathering every single shred of information I could find on the post-war Malfoy family. It wasn't much; they had mostly kept to themselves once the trials were over, but anything I could use to construct a character profile would help. What I found surprised me, but then again, I suppose never having known him well, anything would have surprised me.
It seemed as though Draco had married Asteria Greengrass the year after she graduated from Hogwarts, and in 2006, she had given birth to their son. That much was easily obtained from newspapers. Asteria apparently had been something of a housewife; at least, I had never found anything to suggest that she had held a job outside of the home. But Draco, interestingly, had gone into potions work. I remembered quite well that he had always succeeded in Potions class, but I always remembered it as him having curried favor with Snape, not that he had been particularly apt at the subject. I suppose I had been wrong. But rather than teach at Hogwarts and it appeared he had actually been offered the position once by Professor McGonagall before her death he opted to go into research, expanding the laboratory at Malfoy Manor and working from home. His developments had been implemented both at St. Mungo's and in the greater medical field. Perhaps Asteria had been his assistant, or maybe partner, I thought to myself.
He was fairly respected in the field and made a decent living, but it was nothing compared to the wealth that the Malfoys had flaunted prior to the war. They had barely been able to hang onto the Manor after the trials left Lucius and Narcissa practically impoverished, so it was a bit of a surprise to learn that Draco had saved enough to buy back the family estate in southern France only last year. For all I knew, it may have been the first time Draco had ever been able to take his family there to visit.
Lucius and Narcissa had retired to the Manor after the war, rarely being seen in public. They barely socialized, not deigning to make social connections outside of their former circles, yet unwilling to keep associations with those who had received the more public punishments during the trials. Since the accident, only Lucius had been seen, and even then it was only the occasional excursion to Diagon Alley. Narcissa, it seemed, was devastated by the loss and had completely cloistered herself at the Manor.
But as interesting as the lives and times of the Malfoy family were turning out to be, they simply did not explain why anyone would target Draco, or rather, give any leads as to who might have killed him and his family. He didn't have the Malfoy wealth, his son and heir was killed with him, and his career wasn't a threat to anyone. The potions work he had been doing was largely theoretical, and those who made use of his findings were doing so in the hopes of developing experimental cures for diseases and disorders, not for developing poisons or weapons.
I reported all of this to Robards, of course, and while he was also interested at first, even he had to admit after a few weeks had passed that none of it was the grand clue we had all hoped for. And more frustratingly, there was absolutely no change in Teddy's condition. Tonks had long since returned to work, trying to distract herself from the lack of new information, but I knew her too well to believe for a second that it was working.
So, it was a bit of a shock to me one morning in late September, almost two months after Teddy's poisoning, when Tonks stormed into my office and slammed something down in front of me on my desk.
"There! There!" she fumed, pointing to the paper. Grabbing my lit cig out of my hand, she puffed furiously on it, stopping only long enough to let out a giant hacking cough. Her hair was a vibrant, furious red.
"Sit down, Tonks, before you hurt yourself," I said, snatching the paper off of my desk and scanning it. My eyes widened.
"Tonks, where did you get this? And why on earth are you giving it to me?" I exclaimed, cursing silently under my breath and dropping the paper to my desk. Shite. Shite. Shite.
"It was slipped under my door this morning. Harry, I have wards. I have wards that only recognize a handful of people. Someone was there ... someone knows how to get to me," she said, her words falling over each other in their effort to get out.
The paper clearly said, "I know where to find you. One day all you have will be mine."
"I always figured someone had hurt Teddy to get to me, but now ... now it's real, Harry. Someone's after me and I don't know why," she said, her voice escalating until she was practically screaming.
"Tonks, who else knows about this letter?" I asked firmly, sliding the paper carefully into an empty folder with the tip of my quill.
"No one. I came straight here. Apparated here immediately," she responded.
"Good," I exhaled. "The first thing we do is show it to Robards. He needs to know that you're being threatened. We'll get some Aurors to guard you at all times. And for now, at least, you'll need to go on leave. It's not safe for you to be out in the field," I stated.
"I ... I don't want to go back there," she muttered. "I can't."
"Then you're coming home with me," I said. "No ifs, ands, or buts about it."
We briefed Robards, who agreed that she shouldn't work until whoever was threatening her was caught. He assigned Ron and another Auror named White to be her own personal guards and sent the letter off for testing. But as soon as we were done talking with him, I took her arm. "Come on, let's go back to your place."
"Harry, I told you, I don't want to go back there," Tonks stated flatly.
"I know that, but we need to get your things. I'll be right there with you. And besides, we need to make sure that we double-check the premises, see if anything else was left there, and change your wards, alright?" I reassured her.
"Yeah, I suppose so," she nodded and sighed. "Now or never, eh, Harry?" A split second later we were standing in her kitchen.
I quickly glanced around her house. "Anything look out of place?"
"No, everything seems just as I left it. Sorry for the mess, though. Haven't had much energy to ... do things lately," she said, hurriedly sweeping a pile of dirty dishes into the sink.
"Alright. I'm going to reset your wards, and then I think you should go pack up whatever you think you might need for a week or two. I'll be right down here waiting for you," I said.
"Thanks, Harry." She walked past me to head upstairs, stopping to press a kiss to my cheek.
Muttering a few diagnostic spells, I saw that her wards had in fact been breached, but why no alarms had gone off was a mystery to me. Quickly I changed her wards to a variant of my own, setting them to allow only Teddy, Tonks, myself, Ron, and Auror White. If she decided she was more comfortable staying here, then only those who were supposed to protect her could come in. Anyone else would set off an alarm that would wake the dead. I smiled grimly.
"Ready, Harry," Tonks said, holding a small trunk.
"Okay, then. Hold on tight," I said. Grabbing her arm, I Apparated her home with me.
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Now that was just downright mean to stop there!!!!! I anxiously await MORE!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Hahaha - chapters in queue, I promise! Thanks for reading!! :)
Ah, so the Black family fortune makes an appearance, if only in Robards' speculation. I was wondering about that portkey as well. Could it have been activated remotely once Remus was murdered, so it wouldn't act as a portkey until the right moment? What if Harry hadn't looked in the box to find it? Although it rattled - presumably to catch his attention at the right time . . . And Ron is finally and firmly on Harry's side! Yay!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay indeed! As if one could doubt Ron's loyalty, though! Perish the thought! I do think the answers to your speculations will surface soon enough ... stay tuned! Thanks for reading and commenting!! It's greatly appreciated!
Oh, poor Remus. You never actually said why he and Tonks had a fallout.I wonder ... just for how long had that portkey been in this box? I mean, Remus was dead just for less than an hour, and the portkey brought Harry to the place of the murder.I noticed Hermione's absence in this fic. Not that I suspect her, but I just noticed it.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love seeing guesses and speculations and seeing what folks notice!! I can't wait to hear your reactions to the upcoming chapters!!
Poor Remus! Although there went my primary suspect. I am enjoying the buildup of suspense and have no idea at this point how you will get Harry out of this. (Unless you plan to go the route of "The Murder of Roger Ackroyd!)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I do hope the ending lives up to your expectations! :)
Oh poor Remus. Things aren't looking good for Harry, too many coincidences.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Poor Remus indeed! I do like him, but ... alas. Stay tuned to see what happens with Harry!
Oh no, poor Tonks! Very suspenseful chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! Should be up soon - keep your eyes peeled! Glad you're liking it thus far!
Since I love to speculate, I have lots of questions. (Not that I expect answers that would give anything away!)First of all, where is Remus? Shouldn't he have come to see his son?Teddy was poisoned by an unknown poison, and coincidentally, his cousin Draco was working with theoretical potions. Is that important? Draco would certainly have recognized if one of his theories/potions had been used or mis-used, or might have recognized what Teddy was poisoned with. And with Draco out of the way, does Tonks by any chance become the Black/Malfoy family heir?"One day, all you have will be mine." Odd wording - one day. Someone planning far off in the future? What will Tonks have "one day?" What does she have besides Teddy? And is it important that Harry spent a lot of time with Tonks after her mother died? Is someone jealous? Does that person hate Harry enough to frame him? To quote The Grinch, I have been puzzling and puzzling til my puzzler is sore.I eagerly await the next installment!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love speculation! I am glad you're picking up on some of these things - perhaps they'll be answered in the future chapters! I'm terribly sorry your puzzler is sore, though! Hopefully the rest of the story will un-hurt your puzzler! :)
I like the way the mystery is developing - although, poor Teddy! Hmm, I wonder if there is a connection between the cases . . . looking forward to more!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, glad you're looking forward to the next chapters! All forthcoming. :) Poor Teddy indeed. Stay tuned!
wow, the story is developing really well!i'm curious to see if there's a connection between the 2 cases... ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the plot development! Keep your eyes peeled for the next chapter!
Interesting...I wonder where this is going?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I know it's a bit of a teaser prologue, but much more to come! Thanks for reading!
This continues to be quite intriguing! I have been speculating on what connection there could be between the two cases, and can only come up with Andromeda Black Tonks, which seems awfully far-fetched. So will speculate some more . . . . .
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I don't know whether to hope that you figure it out or that I fool you completely!! I'm so glad you are continuing to read and I can't wait to hear what you think about it when all is said and done! :)
too abrupt. needs one chapter before this poetic ending... very well-written and original though!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Sorry you didn't care for the pacing at the end, but glad you enjoyed the rest of it!! Thanks for the review!
Nice start! I like the "hard-boiled detective" flavor, and look forward to more.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay, hard-boiled! Thanks! I'm definitely aiming for the film noir feel, so I am glad that was the vibe you got from it. Plenty more coming - can't wait to see what you think!
Great start on this story. My first thought was why would Draco be in a car? Glad the investigators thought that too. Is this being told through Harry?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes, everything is from Harry's point of view - sort of a film noir story (or at least I hope so). Keep reading - more chapters to be posted soon! Can't wait to hear what you think!
I bit of Raymond Chandler going on here. I always enjoy an original take on the potterverse.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Why thanks! So glad you think I've got a bit of something new here. Can't wait to see what you think as the story develops! :)
It's a little hard to believe that Lucius killed his own son and grandson just so Narcissa could inherit money. But if he is the culprit, how did he get through Harry's wards????
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Such good questions!! :)
Hmmm, how long has that porkey been among the papers?I wonder if someone polyjuiced as Harry would get through the wards?The mystery deepens. Looking foward to more!!!!!(Chapters 8 & 9 seem to be out of order.)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh bless you for noticing! They had gotten submitted backwards and I hadn't realized they had also been posted backwards. It's fixed now! Also, love your ideas! I love to see readers' guesses about what's going on! Keep reading - all questions will be answered, I hope!!
A classical theme - suspended detective investigates, but not after having wallowed appropriately in his grief / guilt / whatever. Funny to see Harry act the part.So the pen was a portkey? But your description doesn't quite match up - "... yanked into myself." HmmmmI briefly thought that one of the persons the wards was set to, had come back from the future to assault Tonks. But what reason would any of them have for doing it?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Well, I think being yanked into oneself is sort of like Portkeying - at least in the sense that it creates a horrific vertigo or sense of disorientation, and being yanked at the navel by a big hook, as the books say. I love the idea about the future person ... we'll see if you're right and what happens in the upcoming chapters!
Well, well - friendship is growing into more here. I still can't see any connection between the two cases - apart from Tonks and Draco being related. Maybe Narcissa doesn't want to see her sister's lineage going on when her own had been destroyed? That still wouldn't explain Draco's death (assuming he is really dead), though.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I do love guesses! It's interesting to see what readers think or guess or pick up on, because as the author I had a certain plot in mind, so I'm anxious to see whether anyone figures it out, or if they didn't, what they thought might have happened instead! You have very interesting ideas, and that's all I'll say! ;)
Lots of cigarettes in this story so far - well, hard-boiled detectives always seemed to smoke in the film noir genre.(I just wonder - I can't recall that in canon a single cigarette was mentioned ...)A very interesting set up. So far I have not enough clues to guess anything, so I#ll continue reading :-)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Haha - thanks! Glad you're enjoying it thus far, and yes, more shall be revealed later on. I don't really think Harry's a smoker, but I can picture it, and I was definitely pulling out lots of film noir tropes, so it just seemed that cigarettes were necessary for that feel. Hope you enjoy the rest of it!