Chapter 2
Chapter 3 of 18
flaminia_xHarry is asked to investigate a series of suspicious attacks, but soon the suspicion is turned toward Harry himself. Can he clear his name?
Ron and I attended the funeral – hidden in the back, of course. Nothing seemed amiss, although Narcissa Malfoy was curiously absent. Lucius acted the properly grieving father. Ron overheard him explaining that Narcissa had taken the loss of her only son and grandson very hard and was now unable to leave her home. Few others bothered to show up – certainly no one who appeared out of place.
Another week went by with no further information. I sat at my desk, feet propped up on one corner and a cig in my hand, poring over the crime scene photos for the millionth time. I had seen grislier images in my lifetime, to be sure, but there was something about seeing a one-year-old child lying dead in the street that shook me to my core. Malfoy or no Malfoy, no child deserved to die like that.
A knock at my door startled me. “Come in, Robards, but I've got nothing new for you,” I called.
But it wasn't Robards at the door.
“Tonks!” I said with some surprise. I rarely got to see her anymore; I could barely tell you when I last saw Remus. It had been … hard … for me when they split up after the war, but I should have made more of an effort to see them. To see Teddy. My lip curled in self-reproach.
“Harry,” she sobbed, rushing in. “Harry, he's ...” She sank to her knees next to me, her unusually dull brown hair contrasting with a face red from crying.
“Teddy,” I whispered, reaching out and gathering her into a hug. “What happened?”
“He's at St. Mungo's,” her voice caught in the back of her throat. “They think he was poisoned – they're not sure if he's … Harry, he's my baby!”
I had felt fear in my life, but it had been years since I had felt my heart pound, my muscles constrict, my pulse race like that.
“Start from the beginning,” I ordered.
Between sobs, Tonks told me that she had come home from her shift a bit earlier than normal only to find Teddy lying unconscious on his bedroom floor. She had grabbed him and Apparated to St. Mungo's, and then, once she had known he was stable, she had come here. “Harry, you've got to help me – I've got no one else to turn to,” she cried. “Who would want to kill my baby?”
“And you're sure they said it was poison? He couldn't have gotten into something around the house, nothing that he could have accidentally eaten, drunk?”
“No, no, he's nine years old. He knows better, and you know him – he's smart as a whip. He wouldn't take something from someone he didn't know, and for most of the day he has a sitter with him. He was at home for Merlin's sake! Someone had to come into my home!” Tonks was shaking in fury in my arms, rage and fear emanating from her in waves. The lights in my office flickered.
“Yeah, I know,” I said. “We'll figure it out, Tonks. I promise.” The Malfoy case would have to wait. No one hurts my family and gets away with it.
I visited Teddy that night in hospital. He looked so small in the oversized bed, his hair a dull replica of his mother's. The mediwitches had confirmed their earlier suspicions that evening – he had, in fact, ingested a lethal dosage of poison, and if Tonks hadn't found him when she did, he probably would not have survived.
I sat outside with Tonks after they told us. For once, she accepted my offer of a cigarette, and from afar it would have seemed to any passerby that we were just two friends having a smoke. But one look at her face told a different story.
“Someone tried to kill my son, Harry. What kind of bloody fucking toerag of a wizard would want to kill my son? Why? What possible threat is he to someone? He's never been in trouble a day in his life, never pissed anyone off. Everyone loves him – everyone,” she ranted, her face contorted with anger. Underneath the pale glow of the street lamp, I could see her hair flickering, changing colors with blinding speed.
“Maybe it's not about him,” I said, gazing steadily at her.
“You ... you think this is about me,” Tonks said.
“You can't think of anyone that would want to get back at you by hurting him?” I asked.
“You can't possibly think that ... that Remus did this!” She gasped, going still.
To tell you the truth, that thought hadn't occurred to me, but it said something that it had occurred to her, so I let her finish. “Couldn't I?” I asked.
“Harry, things may have ended pretty bloody painfully, but that was years ago. I'm over it. I thought he was over it too. And as far as I can tell, he's been a bloody good father to Teddy,” she grated.
“So, you don't think he could do this, then,” I said quietly.
“He's the father of my child,” she spat. “As many times as we've fought with each other, maybe even hated each other at times, he could never do this. Not to Teddy. And not to me.”
I nodded carefully. “I didn't think so, but I had to ask.”
“I know, Harry,” she sighed. “I'm an Auror too, remember.”
“That's kind of what I was trying to say a minute ago,” I responded. “Any recent cases go pear-shaped, anyone you've convicted get out of Azkaban lately? Anyone that would want a bit of revenge on you?”
She sat there thinking, her cig burning down to ash in her uncaring fingers. A gust of wind ruffled her hair. I reached up to fix it.
Her empty eyes came to stare back at me. “I can't think of anyone, Harry. You know I deal mostly with the little stuff these days. Didn't want to risk getting hurt on the job as long as I had Teddy at home full-time. No one's going to come after me because I caught them stealing candy in Hogsmeade, and no one from the … old days … is around anymore. Not really.”
I sighed. Maybe she was right, but something just didn't sit well with me. “Alright then. We'll start fresh in the morning. You need to come home with me and get a good night's sleep. Tomorrow I want you to go through everything in your house. Anything Teddy could have touched, eaten, drunk, smelled, looked at – anything that seems out of place – you bring that to me, and no one else. Here, give me your babysitter's name and information. I'll look into them tomorrow too.”
Tonks nodded wordlessly, writing down the name and address of one Cecily Abbott, Hannah Abbott Longbottom's niece. Slowly, we stood up, every joint in our bodies popping simultaneously from a day's worth of tension, and walked back inside St. Mungo's to Floo home.
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Now that was just downright mean to stop there!!!!! I anxiously await MORE!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Hahaha - chapters in queue, I promise! Thanks for reading!! :)
Ah, so the Black family fortune makes an appearance, if only in Robards' speculation. I was wondering about that portkey as well. Could it have been activated remotely once Remus was murdered, so it wouldn't act as a portkey until the right moment? What if Harry hadn't looked in the box to find it? Although it rattled - presumably to catch his attention at the right time . . . And Ron is finally and firmly on Harry's side! Yay!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay indeed! As if one could doubt Ron's loyalty, though! Perish the thought! I do think the answers to your speculations will surface soon enough ... stay tuned! Thanks for reading and commenting!! It's greatly appreciated!
Oh, poor Remus. You never actually said why he and Tonks had a fallout.I wonder ... just for how long had that portkey been in this box? I mean, Remus was dead just for less than an hour, and the portkey brought Harry to the place of the murder.I noticed Hermione's absence in this fic. Not that I suspect her, but I just noticed it.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love seeing guesses and speculations and seeing what folks notice!! I can't wait to hear your reactions to the upcoming chapters!!
Poor Remus! Although there went my primary suspect. I am enjoying the buildup of suspense and have no idea at this point how you will get Harry out of this. (Unless you plan to go the route of "The Murder of Roger Ackroyd!)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I do hope the ending lives up to your expectations! :)
Oh poor Remus. Things aren't looking good for Harry, too many coincidences.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Poor Remus indeed! I do like him, but ... alas. Stay tuned to see what happens with Harry!
Oh no, poor Tonks! Very suspenseful chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! Should be up soon - keep your eyes peeled! Glad you're liking it thus far!
Since I love to speculate, I have lots of questions. (Not that I expect answers that would give anything away!)First of all, where is Remus? Shouldn't he have come to see his son?Teddy was poisoned by an unknown poison, and coincidentally, his cousin Draco was working with theoretical potions. Is that important? Draco would certainly have recognized if one of his theories/potions had been used or mis-used, or might have recognized what Teddy was poisoned with. And with Draco out of the way, does Tonks by any chance become the Black/Malfoy family heir?"One day, all you have will be mine." Odd wording - one day. Someone planning far off in the future? What will Tonks have "one day?" What does she have besides Teddy? And is it important that Harry spent a lot of time with Tonks after her mother died? Is someone jealous? Does that person hate Harry enough to frame him? To quote The Grinch, I have been puzzling and puzzling til my puzzler is sore.I eagerly await the next installment!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I love speculation! I am glad you're picking up on some of these things - perhaps they'll be answered in the future chapters! I'm terribly sorry your puzzler is sore, though! Hopefully the rest of the story will un-hurt your puzzler! :)
I like the way the mystery is developing - although, poor Teddy! Hmm, I wonder if there is a connection between the cases . . . looking forward to more!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh, glad you're looking forward to the next chapters! All forthcoming. :) Poor Teddy indeed. Stay tuned!
wow, the story is developing really well!i'm curious to see if there's a connection between the 2 cases... ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! =)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the plot development! Keep your eyes peeled for the next chapter!
Interesting...I wonder where this is going?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I know it's a bit of a teaser prologue, but much more to come! Thanks for reading!
This continues to be quite intriguing! I have been speculating on what connection there could be between the two cases, and can only come up with Andromeda Black Tonks, which seems awfully far-fetched. So will speculate some more . . . . .
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
I don't know whether to hope that you figure it out or that I fool you completely!! I'm so glad you are continuing to read and I can't wait to hear what you think about it when all is said and done! :)
too abrupt. needs one chapter before this poetic ending... very well-written and original though!
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Sorry you didn't care for the pacing at the end, but glad you enjoyed the rest of it!! Thanks for the review!
Nice start! I like the "hard-boiled detective" flavor, and look forward to more.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Yay, hard-boiled! Thanks! I'm definitely aiming for the film noir feel, so I am glad that was the vibe you got from it. Plenty more coming - can't wait to see what you think!
Great start on this story. My first thought was why would Draco be in a car? Glad the investigators thought that too. Is this being told through Harry?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes, everything is from Harry's point of view - sort of a film noir story (or at least I hope so). Keep reading - more chapters to be posted soon! Can't wait to hear what you think!
I bit of Raymond Chandler going on here. I always enjoy an original take on the potterverse.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Why thanks! So glad you think I've got a bit of something new here. Can't wait to see what you think as the story develops! :)
It's a little hard to believe that Lucius killed his own son and grandson just so Narcissa could inherit money. But if he is the culprit, how did he get through Harry's wards????
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Such good questions!! :)
Hmmm, how long has that porkey been among the papers?I wonder if someone polyjuiced as Harry would get through the wards?The mystery deepens. Looking foward to more!!!!!(Chapters 8 & 9 seem to be out of order.)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Oh bless you for noticing! They had gotten submitted backwards and I hadn't realized they had also been posted backwards. It's fixed now! Also, love your ideas! I love to see readers' guesses about what's going on! Keep reading - all questions will be answered, I hope!!
A classical theme - suspended detective investigates, but not after having wallowed appropriately in his grief / guilt / whatever. Funny to see Harry act the part.So the pen was a portkey? But your description doesn't quite match up - "... yanked into myself." HmmmmI briefly thought that one of the persons the wards was set to, had come back from the future to assault Tonks. But what reason would any of them have for doing it?
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Well, I think being yanked into oneself is sort of like Portkeying - at least in the sense that it creates a horrific vertigo or sense of disorientation, and being yanked at the navel by a big hook, as the books say. I love the idea about the future person ... we'll see if you're right and what happens in the upcoming chapters!
Well, well - friendship is growing into more here. I still can't see any connection between the two cases - apart from Tonks and Draco being related. Maybe Narcissa doesn't want to see her sister's lineage going on when her own had been destroyed? That still wouldn't explain Draco's death (assuming he is really dead), though.
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Ooh, I do love guesses! It's interesting to see what readers think or guess or pick up on, because as the author I had a certain plot in mind, so I'm anxious to see whether anyone figures it out, or if they didn't, what they thought might have happened instead! You have very interesting ideas, and that's all I'll say! ;)
Lots of cigarettes in this story so far - well, hard-boiled detectives always seemed to smoke in the film noir genre.(I just wonder - I can't recall that in canon a single cigarette was mentioned ...)A very interesting set up. So far I have not enough clues to guess anything, so I#ll continue reading :-)
Response from flaminia_x (Author of The Set-Up)
Haha - thanks! Glad you're enjoying it thus far, and yes, more shall be revealed later on. I don't really think Harry's a smoker, but I can picture it, and I was definitely pulling out lots of film noir tropes, so it just seemed that cigarettes were necessary for that feel. Hope you enjoy the rest of it!