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What If?
sunny3347 Reviews | 6.66/10 (47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Hermione's life is turned upside-down when she sees a man who disappeared three years earlier.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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Oh dear. Poor Snape.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
He can't catch an even break, can he? Thanks for your review. :)
What a little sugar doesn't a sweeter Potions Master make? Ah darn. This was a cute chapter. It will be interesting to see which road Hermione goes down. Harry or Severus or both. I know, I know this is an SS/HG fic. But I thought I would through a little smutty goodness in this review.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
You'll find out. ;)
"My disposition does not improve with sweetners, I assure you." Too funny! (But some of us do like our Snape, er, coffee, black, no sugar!). And of course Hermione is obsessing about Snape - who wouldn't? I have to say, though, you make an excellent case for Harry/Hermione. Their banter is fun and they seem sweet together.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Yes, a sweet Snape is not a Snape at all! :)
Nice chapter. *grin* From friends to possibly 'friends with benefits', eh? Will Severus be making it a threesome? ^_^
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
You'll see... ;)
Interesting first chapter. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks! :D
Interesting start to the story. Too funny Hermione and Harry playing off one another, especially Hermione petting Snape's nose!
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
! :)
Thank goodness the Know-It-All was unsatisfied and will make it her business to find out about Snape! As sad as his life is, it seems a very realistic outcome. I can easily see the Wizarding World being suspicious and antagonistic towards Snape, wanting to see nothing beyond the fact that he murdered Dumbledore.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you. The wizarding world doesn't appear very forgiving to me. :)
Really enjoy Hermione and Harry living together, it feels so right, as well as Severus -- love how he did, indeed, notice Hermione in the Muggle cafe :), and his futile, poignant reflections/perceptions of his life. Thank you!
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
He doesn't miss much. :)
I like this very much- I hope Both Hermione and Severu s get better jobs and some happines in life
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you. Things will improve for them both. :)
SW_69 is a lucky witch to get such a gift. I like that you have Harry and Hermione as roommates and 'friends with no privileges'. They always have been more like brother and sister. I really hope you plan a love interest for Harry as well in this story. *grin* Now, where is the next chapter. *looks at watch and taps foot impatiently* ^_~
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
LOL. You might be surprised. :)
Wow...I really really like where this seems to be going...I guess the title means "What if" Severus had lived? Keep going, I'll sure be reading & reviewing.HLH
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Welcome aboard! Another chapter will be posted next week. :)
It's a good thing I work in a dark room this morning because noone is there to see my dreamy gaze and ask embarassing questions. I'm already wishing for your next brilliant work to be written.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you. :)
Yay! Hot monkey sex, and love, and a happily ever after? What a treat. And I found this chapter to be very funny. One month, five decent meals, twenty-three bottles of fine wine, twelve Hangover Potions, two really bad movies, one hundred and sixty-seven innuendos, and three almost-shagged-but-chickened-out moments later, Severus, Hermione, and Harry were draped in relatively mild degrees of inebriation over the furniture in the sitting room at Grimmauld Place.Ha! They are so brave in facing down Voldemort, but it takes them so long to finally hook up. And then they have to check reference books to see what and who goes where. I'm pretty sure doing that research had Hermione if foreplay heaven, LOL.Very nicely done. Can't wait to see what you've got coming our way next!
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you! :D
That't quite exciting. I wonder who will she choose in the end. Perhaps both?
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
You'll see. ;)
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.1)Severus and Hermione2)Harry and Hermione3)Severus and Harry4)All three mixed together in a Sunny creationIn your professional opinion, can one die of extreme joy? I fear I might be the first.*drools on keyboard... a lot*
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
I don't know about extreme joy, but if you short-circuit that keyboard with drool you may electrocute yourself! And for such a lovely review, if you want to give me a prompt, I'll write a story just for you. :D
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
*squeals with delight* That offer is like winning the fanfic lottery! Let me think on it a bit, and I'll let you know :)
i think that menu might be overdoing it for a first dinner. harry had the right of it! wonderful update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
You can get a bit obvious, can't you? She's such a Gryff! :)
A threesome? Really? Is that the direction you're taking this? Awesome! ^_^
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
LOL. Why should she have to choose? ;)
I've never read a SS/HP fic as guy on guy just doesn't do it for me, but as I thought this was originally going to be a SS/HG fic you caught me fair and share lol. Interesting story overall, and the naked severus scenes are always a bonus. The naked/drunk Harry scenes were pretty funny too.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
I really shouldn't be grinning madly at sucking you in to the vortex! :D
Methinks Snape has a fetish for witches who have a nose fetish lol. Or maybe just for anyone who's nice to him with no ulterior motives..
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
:D
Haha, I love the interaction between H and H, even before he suggested they become more than friends. I keep waiting to see how Hermiones obsession with Snape is going to change her relationship with Harry one way or the other.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Gets her thinking along the right lines, I suppose. :)
Dearest Sunny,Though I stand by my Weasley-Granger-Snape family, you've made me a believer in Potter-Snape-Granger, too.Seriously sweet in the beginning, and seriously hot in the end. I tremble before your greatness.Tea
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Aww, thank, Tea. BTW, have you read Carrot Tops and Unspeakable Plans? It is Weasley-Granger-Snape! :)
Response from TeaOli (Reviewer)
I am now!