What If?
sunny3347 Reviews | 47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 41 Favorites )
Hermione's life is turned upside-down when she sees a man who disappeared three years earlier.
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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I'm not much of a Snarry fan or much of a Harmione fan, but this was fun. :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Neither am I, but it's fun to branch out occasionally. Thanks fo the review. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Neither am I, but it's fun to branch out occasionally. Thanks fo the review. :)
I did enjoy this although the lack of smut considering it's labeled as MA was very disappointing.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
I always play it a bit conservative in the ratings because I've found what would be considered fairly tame here (in NZ) some in US would consider quite racy. I'd rather rate it higher than it needs than offend anyone! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
I always play it a bit conservative in the ratings because I've found what would be considered fairly tame here (in NZ) some in US would consider quite racy. I'd rather rate it higher than it needs than offend anyone! :)
That was hot.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks. :)
That was both funny and sweet. I always wish for Severus to have something good. It's one reason I read so damned many Snape fics.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Don't we all! :)
I'm enjoying this immensely. I look forward to reading how it all turns out!
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks. :)
beautiful! I guess you can tell I'm working through a bunch of your stories that I either started reading and didn't bookmark because I was a goofball and didn't know I could or because I didn't know they existed. I tend to like longer stories and tend toward Snape stories as well. I love the way you write him now JKR has washed her hands of him. LOL. Crazy woman actually said she couldn't understand why so many women liked snape and said we liked "bad boys". NO, we like COMPLICATED boys. ROFL. Anyway, thanks for writing so many good stories. They're a huge part of how I relax and have a laugh in order to deal with a pretty stressful life.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
I'm so pleased my stories help you relax. :D
Please, stop writing such enticing stories. I have work to do and can't spend all my time reading your hot (very hot!) plots.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
*whistles innocently* who me? :p
I'm loving this story!! Please post more soon!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
The last chapter will be up in a few days when I get bacck from a trip away. :)
Man, that girl has some serious self control! And as much as it pains me to say it, she definitely made the right decision. I was pleased that things didn't stay awkward long upon Severus' arrival, and after dinner they got right to the heart of the matter. The scene after dinner on the couch was too cute. Who knew Severus and Harry could find themselves so easily united in a common goal? And how lucky is Hermione to be the common goal? *makes jealous, angry eyes at her, and big smiles and thumbs up to you*
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks! :D
I understand her sensible reasonning but IS SHE CRAZY OR WHAT?????!!!!!! How could she refuse to spend the night with Severus. Clearly wine has addled her brain. *shakes head*
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Especially when he's being so cute. But their time will come. ;)
I really hope she won't have to chose between the two. That would be too heart breaking. Plus Severus needs to feel he is welcomed, loved, and cared for and two people are not too much for the task.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
True. :)
That waitress is of good advice. Really the best way for them all is the three together. *grin*
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
She's on it! :)
Absolutely amazing, as usual with all your stories... I can't wait to see what happens the morning after and with the plot altogether. This is such an interesting turn to most of HG/SS stories I've read... Keep it up and update soon :-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
There's only one more chapter to come which will be posted next week. Thanks for your review. :D
Wonderful banter between Harry & Hermione, and a real bittersweet mood of longing, too. Really lovely, soft but poignant moments shared between Severus and Hermione throughout, but especially the ending. Really lovely.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thanks. :)
Really enjoy the zesty banter between Hermione and Harry! And love how Hermione is slowly luring in Sev- latte with sugar indeed
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Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Hehe. Thanks! Just looking at your name. Have you read Memoirs of a Lady? It's all about Nagini and Sev. :)
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
OMG! Thank you! I've just read it and left a review there!
Sigh! Severus kissed her hand! Squeee! Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you. :)
Ack! How'd I ever miss this gem of a story? 
Anyway, I'd say that Severus has already won as far as Hermione's concerned, but that's partially Harry's own fault. Fortunate that he's seemed to realize that already. At any rate, it kinda seems to me that most of what was happening between Harry and Hermione involved sexual frustration, two attractive people in close quarters, and the fact that they feel safe with each other, you know?
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Could be. Can't tell you too much. ;) Thanks for your review.
I agree with Hermione. Just the thought of Harry and Snape. *shivers* I can't imagine anyone less compatible, not even Harry and Hagrid.It's nice to see him thawing though. 
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
*scrubs images of Harry and Hagrid from brain* But she said they'd be hot! Cute icon!:D
Well, Mr Potions Master, Muggle coffee has developed considerably since you might last have consumed some. I'm sure it has in Germany, and the UK not being a true coffee-country, a Latte is probably loads better than any Snape knew from earlier. How embarrassing to be told so by the know-it-all. Harry picked a lousy timing for his new idea, but of course this is what we want! Looking forward to these two blackheads meeting, whether as in Hermione's dream or in any other precarious/juicy situation.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
LOL. Thanks for your review,
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
. :)
Anonymous
Chatter boxes, the lot of them.
Author's Response: All talk and no action... :P
Anonymous
You didn't let me beta this? But... there's so many exclamation points... and stuff.
Author's Response: You know you're secretly in love with exclamation points Go on. Admit it!!!!! :P
This is fun. I can't wait to see what happens. Harry's already lost her to Snape but it seems he might already be aware of it on some level.
Response from sunny33 (Author of What If?)
Thank you. :)