I think I may have read this before (and if I didn't leave you a reply then, shame on me), and it is still wonderful! :D I like that you focused specifically on one POV in each chapter, and you balanced their desperation & generosity.
Thanks for sharing!

Very hot.

Ah, pain vs pleasure ... or pain becoming pleasure.  That certainly is an interesting discovery.  Any more steamy chapters like this one and I may just melt.

I should have been the first to review.  Shame on me.  This was excellent.  You mentioned there being more chapters?  I am really looking forward to reading more of where that came from.  Thank you for posting on my site.

*wipes brow* whew... That was steamy!  I enjoyed his pov in first person. Nice touch.

Wow, I have been a fan for over a year, but that was something special.  More please.