7-Apr
Chapter 4 of 6
shatteredroseTragedy happens on Hermione and Severus' wedding night. Inspired by the song "The Englishe Lady and Her Knight" sung by Loreena McKennitt. Now complete.
ReviewedAfter the celebration had ended, Severus and Hermione Apparated back to Spinner’s End. Since Hermione, Severus had remodeled it to be lighter, and it no longer held the same painful memories as it once had.
Hermione kissed Severus as they crossed the threshold of their home. The kiss lasted until both were breathless. Breaking apart, Severus said, “Hermione, my wife! Run along upstairs, I will join you momentarily, but I must make sure the stasis spell is still active on Remus’ Wolfsbane.” He gave her an apologetic smile.
“Of course, love! I’ll just get things prepared, so to speak!” Hermione said saucily, enticing a growl from her husband.
As Severus turned towards his potions lab, Hermione made a quick stop in the kitchen to grab a pair of wine glasses. Tonight of all nights warranted the elf made wine that Ron had presented her with. As she climbed the stairs to their room, she made sure to drop her lacy, white underwear at the top of the stairs for Severus to find on his journey to her.
Sitting on the bed, Hermione hummed to herself, and she released the spell that held up her hair, then opened the bottle of wine to let it air. Smoothing down the folds of her wedding gown, she reflected on their wedding and how happy she was to finally be Hermione Snape. Thinking of her husband, she realized that he was taking longer than expected and thought there was no harm in her having a glass of wine to start out the evening with.
She was dangling the quarter full wine glass between her hands when Severus appeared in the doorway. Leaning casually against the door frame, Severus lifted the underwear he’d found with one finger. “I believe, madam, that these belong to you,” he drawled sensually.
Leaning over to the bed stand, Hermione placed her wine glass there before standing. She swayed slightly, before laughing, “The wine must be more potent than usual! Trust Ron to try and get me drunk on my wedding night!” She started to walk towards Severus, but stumbled and fell towards him.
Catching her, he chuckled and helped her upright. Hermione immediately fell again, forcing Severus to catch her once more. He looked at her with worry. Hermione’s eyes were dilated.
“Severus, I … can’t really see you.” Hermione said, her voice suddenly dry.
He sank to the floor and felt her forehead with one hand. “You’re burning, Hermione!”
As he said her name, Hermione was wracked with coughs. Blood spattered onto Severus’ shoulder where she was propped up. He quickly brought his hand to the corner of her mouth where blood was now slowly flowing from. “Hermione!” he cried hoarsely.
She was no longer coughing and weakly brought a hand up to her chest. “I can’t breath,” she gasped out.
Severus kissed her forehead. “Stay with me, darling, just hold on. We’ll get you to Pomfrey. You‘re going to be alright.” He put both arms underneath her and lifted her from the ground, smearing her blood from his jacket onto her white dress. She began hoarsely coughing again as they rose, sending more blood onto both of them.
“Sev--” Hermione tried to speak but could not finish before another fit of the coughs began. Severus looked at her face with a panicked expression. Her eyes were back to normal, but there was a horrifying amount of blood on her. Her eyes started to drift closed, and he collapsed back onto the floor of the bedroom.
“No! Hermione!” he cried out, sobbing. Hermione struggled to open her eyes. She managed to bring a hand up to touch his face with a serene look.
“I love you, Professor,” she said happily, her eyes no longer focused on anything present. Severus pulled her to him and, as she coughed weakly again, kissed her repeatedly.
“No, Hermione, please I beg you, don’t do this,” he begged her. “You’re going to be okay, just hold on! Damn it just hold on.” Tears dripped from his large nose onto her pale cheek. She suddenly grasped his shoulders with surprising strength, no longer coughing, and began gasping for air, her head thrown backwards. Severus screamed out, clutching her towards him, sobbing. She fell back against him, her head resting once more upon his shoulder but still this time.
Severus burrowed his face into her curls, sobbing and begging her not to do this. He stayed like this for some time, rocking back and forth gently, clutching her to him. Finally he looked up and reached for his wand from his sleeve pocket. He sent out his Patronus that had changed to match Hermione’s otter.
Authors note: Let me know what you think! There are still 3 other parts to go. And I promise they will be uploaded much more quickly than before.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Lady and Her Knight
23 Reviews | 8.0/10 Average
You know, I really thought you'd find a way to save her. Now I'm terribly afraid to have rightly guessed what he's going to do next.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I was thinking about taking it that way, but the song that inspired me to write this story for them didn't quite end that way. I hope you aren't terribly disappointed.
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Terribly sad is more like it. And some blood (Ron's preferably) to avange them. Severus can even kill him (painfully of course) before...
Hi there,
I have a question about Ron's plan.
If Ron gave her the wine why would she blame Severus
when she got sick from it ?
Pansycat
I love how you've written the despair in your story!
oh damn update update!!
I knew that! Bad author to make such evil cliffie! Is there hope for her or should I fetch a box of tissue ?
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
If you've heard the song, you might want to grab a box of tissues. However, I do promise a bittersweet happy ending.
Why am I under the impression that they really shouldn't try that wine?
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Probably because they shouldn't try it. :D
Can Ron really not make a fool of himself? I doubt it.
That's such a nice scene. But I fear given the summary that, soon, things are not going to be so sweet.
Dang.
Oh this is so tragic! I hope Severus gets revenge on Ron.
Arrrggghhhh! Ron's gift of wine has poisoned Hermione on her wedding night. I guess he figured that if he couldn't have her, no one would have her.I hope Severus can figure out what was done and an can find some way to make Hermione well again. I'm so afraid that she will die if something can't be done soon.Please update soon!Beth
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I'll be uploading the next two chapters ( I decided to condense them from 4) as soon as my beta sends them back to me. Then it is up to the admins with how quickly it gets posted. Hopefully it won't be too long though!
What a beautiful wedding they had. I've always thought the Black Lake would have made a lovely site for getting married. I'm happy that their friends seemed so happy for the newly weds, but Ron's gift of the elf wine is scaring me a little... well, a lot. I've gotta to catch the next chapter to see what happens.Beth
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I must agree with the Black Lake being a great spot to get married. I wish it existed (with the giant squid) so that I could marry there myself!
What an idiot. Stupid, stupid boy. I'm surprised that Severus was able to control himself.
As sad as this ending is, it is very well done when I consider the song that inspired you to write it. Well done!
Beth
Stupid Ron! I hope he rots in Azkaban. Or gets the Dementor's kiss.
Beth
This was really sad but a fitting end to such a tragic story.
Somehow, I knew this would end like that. I wouldn't have want any other end but it's still very sad.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Yes, but I did toss in a bit of happiness with them together in the end, even if they are dead. I promise that my next story is actually going to have a happy ending. Maybe that'll make up for killing them off in this story.
A beautiful, if heartwrenching tale. Nicely done. I suppose Ron living with himself for the rest of his life is punishment enough? Probably not, but one can hope.
Well she's marked Ron as her brother, but that doesn't necessarily mean owt.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Strange way to propose.I'm hoping the story's not going to move in parallel to the song!
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Unfortunately that is the goal. I hope its not too upsetting that I chose a bittersweet ending.
Ack - that song has such a sad ending! I am hoping you have an alternate version in mind.
Interesting start. Would like to see more before I develop any real opinion. ^_^
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Well the next two chapters are in queue! Thank you for reviewing.