7-Mar
Chapter 3 of 6
shatteredroseTragedy happens on Hermione and Severus' wedding night. Inspired by the song "The Englishe Lady and Her Knight" sung by Loreena McKennitt. Now complete.
ReviewedI am so sorry for the delay of getting these next chapters up! Real life went crazy for a while. I moved twice, went back to college, and I lost nearly all my writing files in the move. Luckily this was still in my email's inbox. So with the usual disclaimer-- here is part 3 of 7!
The wedding was as small as the whole Order and all the Weasleys would allow. Everyone had shown up to witness the marriage of Slytherin and Gryffindor. The ceremony was held on the Hogwarts grounds, with the couple standing on the shoreline of the Lake. Hermione wore a strapless gown that had a fitted bodice but flowed into a long train from her waist. Silver beading embellished the bodice and created a pattern of mystical swirls and twists along the end of the gown. Her hair had been tamed just enough to create a tail of curls sprouting from a bun on the top of her head.
Severus wore a formal frock coat of black cashmere with deep hunter green buttons, over an equally black silk shirt. His well-tailored black wool pants rested perfectly atop his newly polished dragon hide boots. For the occasion, Severus had loosely tied back his hair with a silk ribbon, the same color as his buttons, but allowed for a few strands to fall free and frame his face.
Minerva McGonagall was their officiate, and Ginny stood for Hermione while Draco stood for Severus. The service was simple, with the exchanging of vows and rings and Minerva conducting the magic that would join Severus and Hermione for the rest of their lives. The couple was encouraged to kiss to seal the bond, and as they did so, the crowd irrupted into applause and cat calls.
Severus and Hermione pulled apart slowly, both of their faces shining and flushed. Holding hands, they walked down the aisle of guests for the first time as husband and wife.
At the reception in the Great Hall, guests were speaking to the couple and giving their gifts. After an ebb in the tide of well-wishers, Ron approached. Severus, humoring his new bride, extended his hand. After a moment’s hesitation Ron clasped his hand.
“Congratulations, Snape.” Ron turned towards Hermione and extended the bottle of wine that was in his other hand. “I didn’t want to get you another book, so I thought you might like this.”
Hermione accepted the bottle of red wine with thanks. It was her favorite elf wine and rather expensive, so she rarely indulged herself with it. “Thank you so much, Ron!” She gave him a fierce hug and whispered in his ear, “Thank you for accepting this.”
Ron just nodded once before turning and joining the rest of the guests in dancing.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Lady and Her Knight
23 Reviews | 8.0/10 Average
You know, I really thought you'd find a way to save her. Now I'm terribly afraid to have rightly guessed what he's going to do next.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I was thinking about taking it that way, but the song that inspired me to write this story for them didn't quite end that way. I hope you aren't terribly disappointed.
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Terribly sad is more like it. And some blood (Ron's preferably) to avange them. Severus can even kill him (painfully of course) before...
Hi there,
I have a question about Ron's plan.
If Ron gave her the wine why would she blame Severus
when she got sick from it ?
Pansycat
I love how you've written the despair in your story!
oh damn update update!!
I knew that! Bad author to make such evil cliffie! Is there hope for her or should I fetch a box of tissue ?
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
If you've heard the song, you might want to grab a box of tissues. However, I do promise a bittersweet happy ending.
Why am I under the impression that they really shouldn't try that wine?
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Probably because they shouldn't try it. :D
Can Ron really not make a fool of himself? I doubt it.
That's such a nice scene. But I fear given the summary that, soon, things are not going to be so sweet.
Dang.
Oh this is so tragic! I hope Severus gets revenge on Ron.
Arrrggghhhh! Ron's gift of wine has poisoned Hermione on her wedding night. I guess he figured that if he couldn't have her, no one would have her.I hope Severus can figure out what was done and an can find some way to make Hermione well again. I'm so afraid that she will die if something can't be done soon.Please update soon!Beth
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I'll be uploading the next two chapters ( I decided to condense them from 4) as soon as my beta sends them back to me. Then it is up to the admins with how quickly it gets posted. Hopefully it won't be too long though!
What a beautiful wedding they had. I've always thought the Black Lake would have made a lovely site for getting married. I'm happy that their friends seemed so happy for the newly weds, but Ron's gift of the elf wine is scaring me a little... well, a lot. I've gotta to catch the next chapter to see what happens.Beth
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
I must agree with the Black Lake being a great spot to get married. I wish it existed (with the giant squid) so that I could marry there myself!
What an idiot. Stupid, stupid boy. I'm surprised that Severus was able to control himself.
As sad as this ending is, it is very well done when I consider the song that inspired you to write it. Well done!
Beth
Stupid Ron! I hope he rots in Azkaban. Or gets the Dementor's kiss.
Beth
This was really sad but a fitting end to such a tragic story.
Somehow, I knew this would end like that. I wouldn't have want any other end but it's still very sad.
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Yes, but I did toss in a bit of happiness with them together in the end, even if they are dead. I promise that my next story is actually going to have a happy ending. Maybe that'll make up for killing them off in this story.
A beautiful, if heartwrenching tale. Nicely done. I suppose Ron living with himself for the rest of his life is punishment enough? Probably not, but one can hope.
Well she's marked Ron as her brother, but that doesn't necessarily mean owt.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Strange way to propose.I'm hoping the story's not going to move in parallel to the song!
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Unfortunately that is the goal. I hope its not too upsetting that I chose a bittersweet ending.
Ack - that song has such a sad ending! I am hoping you have an alternate version in mind.
Interesting start. Would like to see more before I develop any real opinion. ^_^
Response from shatteredrose (Author of The Lady and Her Knight)
Well the next two chapters are in queue! Thank you for reviewing.