Convolutions
Amita30 Reviews | 9.0/10 (30 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Granger and the Malfoys and the Great Spider War. A comedy: sins forgiven; virtue rewarded; the brave and true triumph.
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And they all have a happy ending.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Yes, and thanks for reviewing.
'' No there's nothing left for me here '' says it all really.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks for reading. Yes, it sums up the current situation and Narcissa's state.
A very interesting chapter.
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Thanks. It attempts character and relationship development both on and off the basttlefield - especially Severus and Narcissa.
It makes one wonder, what Severus and Lucius are up to at the club.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Trading gossip, sipping whisky and soda, and catching up on the financial news - one would imagine. The story is sliding into the darker side of the characters. The next chapter has a different style of humor.
Draco's thank you note was a masterpiece 
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Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. Capturiing the essence of their relationship, that's what it was doing.
I'm with Hermione, I got a fit of the giggles about Lucius and Draco and the blue balls.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Lucius and Draco were inspired to play their best - a ball busting game one might say.
i love the mental image of severus sitting with an unbuttoned white shirt and black silk boxers…
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Great. And it produced the desired response in the story too.
ngaw, so cute =)i was meant to review all of he chapters but i just got so caught up in the story =Dcan't wait for the next chapter!!! =)
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad to hear the story is holding together since the outrageousness of the character development chapters might have lost the plot line.
Response from LoveFenrir (Reviewer)
haha, i think it's part of this story's charm =)
I love the subtle development of sexual tension =D
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. By now, you know the tension explodes as the witches form the femslash version of the Sacred Band.
im so confused and yet so turned on
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks for the feedback. It seems to be a wild summer for everyone.
Still interesting, still a little weird and still making me burst out laughing in places. Well done. 
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad it's interesting, and humor is difficult. No response to weird except all the characters are aristocrats in one way or another.
Highly enjoyable so far—I'm only sorry I didn't notice this one earlier. Good work.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. It's a question of the story handling all the warnings in an entertaining manner.
Well done, Amita! :)
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. It's a partial-coming-of-age story during one wild summer.
What a wonderful story keeping the theme of convolutions vivid and throbbing throughout--loved all of the twists and turns, all of the coiled up passion and inticacies bringing them all together in each unique way, coupling, and pairing, along with the Centaurs and Spiders at long last existing in peace--and each of the wizard/witches reaching some plateau of peace and happiness--lovely work!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad you followed it and enjoyed all the twisty stuff. It was difficult having each of the pairs be unique. As afterthoughts: the cool relationship between Severus and Narcissa may be the permanent one, the life of the centaurs is much improved by the varied bounty of the conquered land, and Severus and Hermione have had their lives transformed.
Mmm, nothing like a voyeuristic Narcissa watching a ménage à troi consisting of Lucius, Bella, and Draco--enticing erotica! Glad she seems to now be able to move on and not look back, knowing that there's nothing there for her--great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
That particular scene ws intended to illuminate the emotional relationships, in particular, how atached the couples were to a single partner. And it did confirm to Narcissa that she had made the right decision.
Enjoying all of the romping and discovery between the couples--this Spider campaign has had quite an effect on them all, bringing about events which most surely might not have ever happened, but it seems that they all are quite content that they have happened, affecting each one is ways he/she could not have imagined. Severus seems, in particular, to have warmed up to and embraced his new partner quite fully--all of this summer frenzy is settling down and panning out well for those involved--enjoying the ride!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Good observation: the Spider War is a catalyst; its emotional intensity propelling them into a new life. Glad the slow warming of Severus came through.
The attack on the spiders has a curious Wizarding-world-anthroplogical layering to it with the witches being quite ferocious, more so than the males--a nice contrast to their courting strategies and mating rituals. I agree with Narcissa, raco and Bellatrix seemd to be quite good for each other; Severus seems slightly tepid about having Narcissa be with him, shall see how this pans out--intriguing, engaging chapter, as always!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Another thoughtful review. I believe it was Kipling who had some opinions on the female of the species. Courting is going, I hope, according to each couple's psychology. Severus is cautious.
Love the characters being paired off and each couple's interaction, from Severus and Narcissa's smooth connecting, to Bellatrix and Draco's intense and needy discovery and yearnings of each other (loved each one's perception of the other and this/her need, not the mere incest is best coverall that many writers glaze over a depiction with), to Lucius and Hermione's impromptu getting together--Yes, loved Lucius' song being adapted from Panzerlied--HA! Maybe 'So stoßen wir tief in die feindlichen Reih'n' could be incorporated, paraphrased soon if he and Hermione are left alone much longer, as I quite see Lucius pushing deeper into enemy/incognito territory, aka Granger very soon
And I meant to meantion in the former chapter as well: Nancy Drew--OMG, brings back memories from a long time ago--great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
I admire your ability to follow all the different pairings with their different styles. The story should have included more of Panzerlied although Hermione might be considered the one deep in enemy territory. Lucius, as one might imagine, admires the German General Staff, and the campaign against the spiders is based on van Falkenhayn.
Wow, what a deliciously, fantastical, naughty wild romp--thoroughly enjoyed it! 'Sisterhood is great'--lol! Yes, Hermione has landed in the company of those who are changing her life, I feel, forever--many new awakenings appear to be in store for her. Loved Narcissa as the Fenrir-Beast-stud sharing with Hermione via Occlumency & Legilimency the shared erotic sensations--brilliant, titillating chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
An experimental chapter that pushes narrative way beyond good taste. And it describes things that decent women would never do or even think of - at least, not very often.
Thank Merlin's hairy balls that Draco finally got to ejaculate--I was suprised he could even walk with all of the build up and *encounters* he had had thus far 
Enjoyed the interaction and depiction between him and his mother, Parvati, and Luna--love the second by second description and innate human need being expressed. The waggish humour/wit and impromptu happenings between the characters are wonderful. However, some part of me wishes for Draco to receive some reciprocation from someone or some others as well. Reading on!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. The intent was to write a masquerade with Draco disguised as a mature male who brought out more inner feelings from the girls than they would normally express. Ironically, he does this with everyone except his date who is left with ambiguous feelings about his behavior. And, yes, it is one sided and the boys know it will be and they come prepared with booze and porn for their after-the-ball recovery.
There's something in the summer air, relaxing and carefree; it seems everyone is slowly, decisively letting any guards they might have down... This can lead to... anything, human nature being so unpredictable as it can be. Can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Yes, this was a development chapter. The team has gathered and beginning to relate to each other.
Enjoyed Draco's hunt and capture of his wild Auntie Bella... It seems one avenue of possibilities has opened up, something understood between the two of them beyond the social 'norms'. The lustful Draco may have a better chance of getting some sexual relief with Auntie rather than Hermione, but he can always try both Great chemistry and unresolved *tension* in the air, and of course, love the witty banter and style--brilliantly written with the cherry on top in the form of the 'thank-you note'!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. Of course, Bella initiated the chase by biting his nose - what a playful girl. Draco does manage to pour his soul into the thank-you note.
Blue balls... But luckily it appears that Lucius and Draco have dispersed with them by the end of the match;-) Hmmm, Hermione's last line about duplicity and the matter of becoming exinct, or not, is profoundly intriguing (along with the chemistry between the ladies...). So happy that I've finally came across this tale!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Prhaps you are making a connection between - observing the duality of - blue balls and extinction, but nevermind, glad you are enjoyig the story.
Can't wait to see what Lucius has to say.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
He is focused on the campaign and is likely to say, "We're forming the hetero version of the Sacred Band."
I am so glad to see that Hermione has found out, that there is more to life than stirring soup.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks for the review. Hermione is discovering a number of things. Think of stirring the soup as a metphor for what all the witches are doing.