Convolutions
Amita30 Reviews | 30 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
Granger and the Malfoys and the Great Spider War. A comedy: sins forgiven; virtue rewarded; the brave and true triumph.
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You have a definite gift for witty banter and dialogue! I am enjoying this humorous little fic immensely.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad to her the first three chapters are entertaining since they are the set-up chapters that introduce the characters with their summer personalities, which are different from how they are viewed at Hogwarts. The next two chapters are experimental episodes that take chances.
Thank goodness you arenot a ''narrator of sensitivity''.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Well, somewhat. I had to type this chapter with my eyes shut.
Ok, that was wrong on so many different levels, I'm still trying to catch my breath { from laughter }.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
It was perfectly wrong for three witches and unsatisfactorily correct for one witch. It seems the chapter aimed at the libido and hit the funny bone.
Wow, Bellatrix is so different from the character in the series that I hardly recognize her!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Yes, the intent was the show the other side of Bellatrix: Bellatrix amongst friends and family. She's still a saucy lady. Besides, can we trust a portrait of her written by her opponents?
Well, I admire the tone you struck in this first chapter - it's whimsical and bursting with energy, which makes the exposition move right along. We're in good hands here.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. In the later chapters, however, all kinds of things burst out, not all of them whimsical.