Odd Man In
Chapter 3 of 10
AmitaChapter 3: Odd Man In
"Who's the damn genius responsible for this?"
"Didn't you ever want to play Wild Indians when you were young?"
"No."
"You could have been their Medicine Man."
Severus sent three arrows into the center of the target.
"You're witching them, old chap. Try aiming," said Lucius.
"Yes, like us lesser mortals," said Bellatrix.
"I don't appreciate taking up the slack for your damn husband, either," said Severus.
"You're getting part of the land as an investment in return," chimed in Narcissa.
"Visions of wealth are dancing in my head," said Severus.
"We were thinking of deeding you the peach orchard," said Bellatrix. "It fits, don't you think, you veritable peach of a man?"
"Don't rile him, sister dear," said Narcissa. She turned to Severus. "Should we get a crossbow for the cross?"
Severus notched an arrow.
"At least no one is asking you to be a spy this time," said Narcissa.
"Yeah, disguised as a Death Spider," said Bellatrix.
Severus let fly an arrow that split the one already in the center of the target.
"You're still witching them, old bean," said Lucius.
Hermione listened to all this while being appalled that they were teasing a professor and jealous that she couldn't join in. And she was adjusting to working with Bellatrix Lestrange. Draco had informed her that she could be become a member of the hunting party if she swore to keep its secrets, and for reasons she didn't yet understand, she had agreed.
Now, Draco winked at her as if to say, "They're only adults. Let them play."
They changed to moving targets.
"How intelligent are spiders, anyway?" asked Severus. "Do they use cover? Do they have tactics? Will they try to ambush us?"
"We should ask the centaurs," said Bellatrix.
Hermione was proud of her professor.
The next morning, Severus and Hermione joined the others at Barracks-Malfoy, and the group proceeded to the Forbidden Forest where the centaurs had laid out a three mile walk through rough terrain for conditioning. The trek had been followed by two hours of target practice. Afterwards, Severus and Lucius declared they deserved a spot of relaxation, showered and dressed, and left for lunch and an afternoon at The Club.
"Care for a hot tub?" Narcissa asked Hermione. "I know you're hungry, but we can have a glass of wine while we soak."
Hermione merely nodded. The aristocracy was proving more energetic than she had expected. She followed Narcissa to the kitchen, watched her open a bottle, accepted a glass, and took a sip. The sip was followed by a healthy quaff. Hermione grinned. "That was good."
Hermione thought Narcissa looked benign and motherly when Narcissa said, "It's quite a change from books to field sports, but you're young, and I suppose all those stairs at school keep you fit." Narcissa refreshed the girl's glass, took a sip herself, and said, "If your muscles are sore, I can give you a short massage before we climb in the tub."
Hermione flexed her shoulders. "My arms are getting stiff. I'm not used to the longbow."
By the time they reached the outdoor hot tub, Hermione had finished her wine and was feeling mellow. She stripped and stretched out on a pile of fluffy towels. Let look who may. The massage went from her neck to her shoulders, to her upper back, to her arms, and to her entire back. She had to be helped up and into the tub. The two girls soaped and scrubbed each other.
"The boys are talking about spears," said Narcissa when the two were finally ensconced by the lake on a quilt, wearing silk robes, and with another bottle of wine and the lunch hamper.
"Spears?"
"As a last line of defense," said Narcissa.
"Boys just like to poke things," said Hermione, giggling. She shook her head. "What a way to go: under a horde of spiders with one of them impaled on my spear."
Hermione looked up to see Narcissa looking concerned.
"Promise me you won't be foolish," said Narcissa. "Coming with us is braver than you have to be."
Hermione reached up and stroked long blonde hair. "I won't be foolish."
Hermione raised herself and sealed the agreement with a kiss on thin aristocratic lips. "I promise."
Unknown to Hermione, her face was one of invitation as she lay back on the quilt, and she was only mildly surprised when Narcissa leaned down. Hermione resumed stroking the older woman's hair. Their breaths intermingled; their breasts touched; their legs nestled; their lips met. Hermione's body weaved as it cried out for contact. The nuzzling began softly, gained in intensity, and slowly subsided as their psyches found peace in their companionship. Hermione had not known, had not imagined, the pleasure to be found in holding someone special.
Meanwhile, back at the manor, Bellatrix greeted Draco as he stepped out of the shower and said, "Your mum and your friend took a lunch basket down to the lake."
He grabbed a towel and held it in front of him.
"I'll turn my back, okay?' she said. "Although you'd think you'd be proud enough to show off."
"I'm the very model of propriety, I am," he said as he tied his bathrobe. "What would you like for lunch?"
"Besides you?" she asked.
"What about leftover steak-and-kidney pie and fried tomatoes?" he asked.
"No wonder people complain about British cuisine," she said.
After lunch, Bellatrix said she would check on Draco's mum and his friend to make sure they weren't spelling each other's hair into twine ... or snakes. She decided there was no danger of that when she arrived in the middle of their intertwining. She departed unseen, found Draco on the couch in the reading room, and informed him that the two appeared to be getting along very well.
"That's great," he said, looking up from his book.
"What are you reading," she asked, sitting beside him.
"Hermione lent me some of her old favorites," he said. "I'm on the second volume. Care to look at the first?"
She picked up 'Nancy Drew and the Secret of the Old Clock' and began reading. She found it interesting enough but not as interesting as the person next to her. She moved closer and read some more. She moved again, and her thigh was against his. He looked at her, gave her a small smile, and put his arm across her shoulder. They went back to reading. Eventually, he was stroking her hair, and her head was on his shoulder. They continued to read. At the end of a chapter, he put his book down to rest his eyes.
"Did your mum ever show you how we used to dance when we were young?" she asked.
He shook his head no.
She showed him how to tap out the rhythm on the coffee table. She stood, pushed the rug aside, and was barefoot on the marble floor. Her left foot swept in front of her; her right foot swept in front of her. Her body did a left shimmy, then a right shimmy. Her hips began to sway. The dance slowly grew. Draco had a sudden image of Sirius banging out the rhythm as the three Black sisters did their enticing best. Now, his aunt's hands were over her head, and her dark tresses framed her face. She turned and swayed and weaved. He could barely picture his two aunts and his mum in full adolescent heat in the privacy of the old mansion twirling and swirling and provoking. Now his aunt was dancing for him, for him alone, showing how she would gladly move for him.
The dance was over.
"Very good, Auntie," he said.
She put the rug back in place, arranged herself on the sofa, embraced Draco in a quick smooch, and lay down with her head in his lap. She raised her leg and let her bathrobe slide up.
He watched the rise and fall of her breasts, admired her display of leg with glimpse of knickers, and decided Nancy Drew lived in a more innocent world.
Narcissa had seen Hermione off and had returned to the house to catch the last of her sister's dance and her arranging herself in Draco's lap.
Great, thought Narcissa. My sister is vamping my son, and I'm snogging my son's friend who happens to be a girl. She thought about Lucius and Severus going to The Club for lunch and the afternoon. It amused her to think that if they were after women of questionable virtue, then they would have done better to have stayed at the manor.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Convolutions
30 Reviews | 9.0/10 Average
And they all have a happy ending.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Yes, and thanks for reviewing.
'' No there's nothing left for me here '' says it all really.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks for reading. Yes, it sums up the current situation and Narcissa's state.
A very interesting chapter.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. It attempts character and relationship development both on and off the basttlefield - especially Severus and Narcissa.
It makes one wonder, what Severus and Lucius are up to at the club.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Trading gossip, sipping whisky and soda, and catching up on the financial news - one would imagine. The story is sliding into the darker side of the characters. The next chapter has a different style of humor.
Draco's thank you note was a masterpiece .
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. Capturiing the essence of their relationship, that's what it was doing.
I'm with Hermione, I got a fit of the giggles about Lucius and Draco and the blue balls.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Lucius and Draco were inspired to play their best - a ball busting game one might say.
i love the mental image of severus sitting with an unbuttoned white shirt and black silk boxers…
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Great. And it produced the desired response in the story too.
ngaw, so cute =)i was meant to review all of he chapters but i just got so caught up in the story =Dcan't wait for the next chapter!!! =)
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad to hear the story is holding together since the outrageousness of the character development chapters might have lost the plot line.
Response from LoveFenrir (Reviewer)
haha, i think it's part of this story's charm =)
I love the subtle development of sexual tension =D
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. By now, you know the tension explodes as the witches form the femslash version of the Sacred Band.
im so confused and yet so turned on
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks for the feedback. It seems to be a wild summer for everyone.
Still interesting, still a little weird and still making me burst out laughing in places. Well done.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad it's interesting, and humor is difficult. No response to weird except all the characters are aristocrats in one way or another.
Highly enjoyable so far—I'm only sorry I didn't notice this one earlier. Good work.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. It's a question of the story handling all the warnings in an entertaining manner.
Well done, Amita! :)
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. It's a partial-coming-of-age story during one wild summer.
What a wonderful story keeping the theme of convolutions vivid and throbbing throughout--loved all of the twists and turns, all of the coiled up passion and inticacies bringing them all together in each unique way, coupling, and pairing, along with the Centaurs and Spiders at long last existing in peace--and each of the wizard/witches reaching some plateau of peace and happiness--lovely work!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Glad you followed it and enjoyed all the twisty stuff. It was difficult having each of the pairs be unique. As afterthoughts: the cool relationship between Severus and Narcissa may be the permanent one, the life of the centaurs is much improved by the varied bounty of the conquered land, and Severus and Hermione have had their lives transformed.
Mmm, nothing like a voyeuristic Narcissa watching a ménage à troi consisting of Lucius, Bella, and Draco--enticing erotica! Glad she seems to now be able to move on and not look back, knowing that there's nothing there for her--great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
That particular scene ws intended to illuminate the emotional relationships, in particular, how atached the couples were to a single partner. And it did confirm to Narcissa that she had made the right decision.
Enjoying all of the romping and discovery between the couples--this Spider campaign has had quite an effect on them all, bringing about events which most surely might not have ever happened, but it seems that they all are quite content that they have happened, affecting each one is ways he/she could not have imagined. Severus seems, in particular, to have warmed up to and embraced his new partner quite fully--all of this summer frenzy is settling down and panning out well for those involved--enjoying the ride!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Good observation: the Spider War is a catalyst; its emotional intensity propelling them into a new life. Glad the slow warming of Severus came through.
The attack on the spiders has a curious Wizarding-world-anthroplogical layering to it with the witches being quite ferocious, more so than the males--a nice contrast to their courting strategies and mating rituals. I agree with Narcissa, raco and Bellatrix seemd to be quite good for each other; Severus seems slightly tepid about having Narcissa be with him, shall see how this pans out--intriguing, engaging chapter, as always!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Another thoughtful review. I believe it was Kipling who had some opinions on the female of the species. Courting is going, I hope, according to each couple's psychology. Severus is cautious.
Love the characters being paired off and each couple's interaction, from Severus and Narcissa's smooth connecting, to Bellatrix and Draco's intense and needy discovery and yearnings of each other (loved each one's perception of the other and this/her need, not the mere incest is best coverall that many writers glaze over a depiction with), to Lucius and Hermione's impromptu getting together--Yes, loved Lucius' song being adapted from Panzerlied--HA! Maybe 'So stoßen wir tief in die feindlichen Reih'n' could be incorporated, paraphrased soon if he and Hermione are left alone much longer, as I quite see Lucius pushing deeper into enemy/incognito territory, aka Granger very soonAnd I meant to meantion in the former chapter as well: Nancy Drew--OMG, brings back memories from a long time ago--great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
I admire your ability to follow all the different pairings with their different styles. The story should have included more of Panzerlied although Hermione might be considered the one deep in enemy territory. Lucius, as one might imagine, admires the German General Staff, and the campaign against the spiders is based on van Falkenhayn.
Wow, what a deliciously, fantastical, naughty wild romp--thoroughly enjoyed it! 'Sisterhood is great'--lol! Yes, Hermione has landed in the company of those who are changing her life, I feel, forever--many new awakenings appear to be in store for her. Loved Narcissa as the Fenrir-Beast-stud sharing with Hermione via Occlumency & Legilimency the shared erotic sensations--brilliant, titillating chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
An experimental chapter that pushes narrative way beyond good taste. And it describes things that decent women would never do or even think of - at least, not very often.
Thank Merlin's hairy balls that Draco finally got to ejaculate--I was suprised he could even walk with all of the build up and *encounters* he had had thus far Enjoyed the interaction and depiction between him and his mother, Parvati, and Luna--love the second by second description and innate human need being expressed. The waggish humour/wit and impromptu happenings between the characters are wonderful. However, some part of me wishes for Draco to receive some reciprocation from someone or some others as well. Reading on!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. The intent was to write a masquerade with Draco disguised as a mature male who brought out more inner feelings from the girls than they would normally express. Ironically, he does this with everyone except his date who is left with ambiguous feelings about his behavior. And, yes, it is one sided and the boys know it will be and they come prepared with booze and porn for their after-the-ball recovery.
There's something in the summer air, relaxing and carefree; it seems everyone is slowly, decisively letting any guards they might have down... This can lead to... anything, human nature being so unpredictable as it can be. Can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Yes, this was a development chapter. The team has gathered and beginning to relate to each other.
Enjoyed Draco's hunt and capture of his wild Auntie Bella... It seems one avenue of possibilities has opened up, something understood between the two of them beyond the social 'norms'. The lustful Draco may have a better chance of getting some sexual relief with Auntie rather than Hermione, but he can always try both Great chemistry and unresolved *tension* in the air, and of course, love the witty banter and style--brilliantly written with the cherry on top in the form of the 'thank-you note'!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Thanks. Of course, Bella initiated the chase by biting his nose - what a playful girl. Draco does manage to pour his soul into the thank-you note.
Blue balls... But luckily it appears that Lucius and Draco have dispersed with them by the end of the match;-) Hmmm, Hermione's last line about duplicity and the matter of becoming exinct, or not, is profoundly intriguing (along with the chemistry between the ladies...). So happy that I've finally came across this tale!
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
Prhaps you are making a connection between - observing the duality of - blue balls and extinction, but nevermind, glad you are enjoyig the story.
Can't wait to see what Lucius has to say.
Response from Amita (Author of Convolutions)
He is focused on the campaign and is likely to say, "We're forming the hetero version of the Sacred Band."