An Unexpected Complication
Chapter 7 of 7
BulletTimeScullyA situation arises that neither Severus nor Hermione are prepared for.
"Falsehood is cowardice, the truth courage."
- Hosea Ballou
Hermione awoke to the smell of cooking. Looking around, she realized that she was still lying on Severus' couch, but that Severus himself was no longer there. She rubbed a hand over her face, trying to scrub away the numbness of deep sleep. She stood slowly, remembering her last attempt at a quick rising.
Her muscles protested as she stretched, working out the kinks that came from spending the night on a sofa instead of in a bed. She took a deep breath, and her mouth watered at the smells coming from the kitchen. Padding quietly to the doorway, she leaned lazily against the jamb and took in the sight before her.
Severus was standing in front of the stove, working a spatula in a stainlesss steel frying pan. He still wore the same black sleep pants from the night before, but had managed to throw on a plain, gray t-shirt as well. His dark hair looked freshly washed and his face looked clean-shaven. A stray thought tugged at Hermione's subconscious: how many women had been privy to this side of such a private man? She could not possibly be the first, could she? No... it was naive to think so, and naivety was something she'd left behind a long time ago.
She started a bit when he spoke, not bothering to look up from his pan. "Are you going to stand there all morning, or would you like to help?"
With a slight frown, Hermione pushed away from the door and walked up to inspect the contents of said pan. "What would you like me to do?" she asked, peering hungrily at the mound of scrambled eggs sizzling against the hot metal.
He gave the eggs one final toss and turned the heat off, setting the pan aside. "Are you capable of making coffee?"
She smiled tightly and ran a hand through her sleep-tousled hair. "Sure. I could use a cup myself." She looked around. "Umm..."
"Middle cabinet, top shelf," he said, nodding his head towards the other side of the kitchen.
Hermione nodded and set about making a large pot of rich, dark coffee. She had just turned the timer on when she chanced a glance at her wrist watch: 7:30 a.m.
"Oh, fuck!" she shouted. "I'm late for work!" She looked around frantically. "Severus, where's your phone? I have to call the restaurant and let them know..."
"Already taken care of," he replied casually.
"I'm sorry?"
He took a deep breath and let it out. "I have already contacted your employer and informed them that you are incapacitated this morning. I believe you have a stomach bug." He pulled two plates out of the cabinet, oblivious to Hermione's look of utter horror.
"You called my boss and told him that I was sick?"
He nodded as he divided the eggs onto the plates, adding a piece of fresh toast as well.
Hermione was slightly taken aback. "Why? And how the hell did you get the number?"
"You have quite a few matchbooks in your purse," he replied offhandedly as he set both plates on the table.
Her mouth dropped open in outrage. "You went through my things? How dare you!"
He took a seat at the table and started in on his breakfast. "When you're through with your tantrum, your eggs are getting cold."
Tempered by his lack of response, Hermione simply glared at the back of his head for a moment before slowly sitting down. She picked thoughtfully at her plate. "Did they ask who you were?" she asked around a bite.
"Yes... they did," he replied, keeping his gaze lowered to his plate.
She waited. "And?"
He gave a long-suffering sigh. "And I told them I was... merely a concerned friend."
She eyed him thoughtfully while she chewed. "And are you?"
"Am I what?" he snapped.
She swallowed. "A concerned friend?" she asked quietly. She could see the tight set of his lips and the deep furrow of his brow. He was either angry or greatly disconcerted. She assumed the latter.
After a long moment, he looked up. "Does it matter?"
"Yes, it does. If I'm going to be stuck with you, I'd like to know that you'll at least try to be civil."
After giving her a long, calculating look, he nodded. "I suppose there is no use in trying to ignore the proverbial elephant in the room, is there?" he asked.
"I should think not." The coffee maker chose that moment to beep, so she stood and made her way to the counter. "How do you take yours?" she asked.
He glared at the back of her head before deciding against pelting her with the acerbic comment sitting on the tip of his tongue. Swallowing back the insult, he simply said, "Black," and went back to his eggs. Hermione nodded, unsurprised, and poured two large mugs, one straight black and one with two creams and two sugars.
After sitting the steaming mug in front of him, she settled back into her chair. "So... what are the facts?"
He took a long sip of the black liquid, both hands wrapped around the cup as he mentally sneered. Still the studious Gryffindor... despite the fact that she's nothing more than a pair of tits to most people these days.
Finally, he sighed. "First and foremost, we know that I owe you... a life debt. Secondly, we know that you are unable to get more than a block away from me..." He suddenly trailed off and sat his cup down.
"What?" Hermione asked, watching his face.
"Interesting," he mumbled.
"Severus, what?" she asked again.
He looked up, his eyes flashing. "Stay there." He pointed a finger at her.
She started to protest, but he threw her a look that suggested it would be to her benefit if she did what he asked. She heard him cross the living room and then heard the jingle of keys and the shuffling of his shoes before the door slammed as he exited the flat.
Shaking her head in exasperation, she turned back to her breakfast.
~*~*~*~
Twenty minutes later, she heard the door slam again, and a moment later Severus reentered the kitchen, a light sheen of sweat on his brow and an unreadable look upon his face.
"Well?" Hermione asked from her position at the sink where she was washing up the breakfast dishes. She did not see Severus' questioning look as she scrubbed the frying pan.
He cleared his throat. "It appears that this is more complicated than even I realized."
"How so?" She set the clean pan on the sideboard and dried her hands before turning to face him.
"For starters, I was able to get almost two blocks from here... almost back to the Doll."
Hermione crossed her arms over her chest. "How is that possible? I barely made it one block."
He paused for a moment as he considered her question. "I think it has to do with intent. I had no intention of trying to 'get away from you,' as it were, so I was able to go farther than the other night when I could barely get fifty feet from you."
Hermione's brow bunched together as her mind starting putting the pieces together. "So... because I was intent on running, the magic only let me get a block away before stopping me. Why did I get farther than you were able to when you were trying to get away from me?"
He mirrored her stance, arms over his chest, a gesture which she was fast coming to recognize as one of his trademark defense mechanisms. "I believe it is because it is I who owe you and not vice versa."
Hermione leaned absently against the counter. "So, let me get this straight: as long as I'm not intending to run away from... this... then I can probably get farther than two blocks?"
There was a moment's pause before Severus nodded.
Hermione nodded her understanding. "Right." She paused, bringing one hand up to tap against her lower lip, which was currently trapped between her top and bottom teeth. Suddenly, she looked back at him. "What if I change my mind? What if I get far enough away and decide to run for it? What then?"
Severus sneered. "I do not think that either of us would want to test that theory. However, we do know that I cannot get more than about fifty feet from you if my intent is to avoid things. We also know that you cannot get more than one block from me if you intend to avoid things. We have also just learned that I can get almost two blocks away, but only if I intend to come back. That leaves you." He gestured towards her.
"So... what? You want me to start walking until I can't go any further?"
He raised an eyebrow at her.
Shit... he was serious. Hermione sighed. "Fine, but I'm driving, not walking."
"Suit yourself," he shrugged.
She simply glared at him and stormed from the kitchen. A smirk crossed his face as the door slammed in her wake.
~*~*~*~
Half an hour later, Severus was sitting at his desk when the knock he was waiting for sounded on his door.
It was Hermione... looking fairly disturbed.
He let her in and went back to his work. "Well?" he asked as he reached for his pen.
Hermione drew a shaky breath and walked past him to the kitchen. He heard her keys clink on the countertop and then the opening and closing of a cabinet door followed by the sharp clink of glass on glass.
Severus leaned back in his chair and peered over the top of his reading glasses. He watched as Hermione downed several shots of liquor in rapid succession. Only when she finally set the glass down and stood against the counter, her long hair obscuring her face, her body shaking, did he rise.
He discarded his glasses on the desk and walked slowly into the kitchen. Gently, he took the bottle of whiskey from her trembling fingers and replaced it in the cabinet.
She did not move, but her breathing was harsh and shallow.
"Hermione..." he spoke softly.
If he had not been somewhat expecting it, he would have been startled, but when Hermione screamed in rage and threw the crystal tumbler across the kitchen, where it shattered against the far wall, Severus simply stood his ground. Sparkling shards sprayed across the room, tinkling along the marble countertops as they flashed in the early morning sunlight. Several larger pieces slid silently across the tile floor, coming to rest at their feet.
Hermione sank to her knees and buried her face in her hands. She did not cry, but simply sat, her mind and body too overwhelmed to do anything else.
"Tell me," he demanded softly.
She remained silent.
Damn her... he thought. He knelt beside her, careful to avoid the glass shards, and leaned in close. "Tell me, Hermione, or I will be forced to find out for myself."
There was a heartbeat's pause before she looked up at him, her face contorted in rage.
Calmly, he continued. "You know I speak the truth... our situation allows no room for falsehood."
Underneath her anger, she knew he was right. She dipped her head again. "I only got about ten miles."
He nodded. "Much farther than I thought you would get."
"That's not the fucking point, Severus! My flat is nearly fifteen miles away!"
It took about half a second for the realization of what she had just said to hit him. The blood drained from Severus' face as he took a deep breath and exhaled slowly. "That is a problem, isn't it?"
She let out a short bark of laughter. "No shit."
He was silent for a moment before clearing his throat. "Well, any suggestions as to how we are supposed to deal with this particular... setback?"
Hermione laughed bitterly. "Either way you look at it, I suppose that one of us... has acquired a new roommate."
"Indeed," was his strained reply, his expression darkening as he scowled at the far wall.
Oblivious to Severus' growing anger and discomfort, Hermione simply stared blankly at the floor, shaking her head in utter disbelief.
~TBC
A/N: Man, it's been awhile, hasn't it? I feel okay about this short chapter, since it's mostly for transition. I needed something to get the story moving ahead, and this is what came out. Anyway, I hope you enjoy and thank you so much for reading! Also, concrit is always welcomed and appreciated!
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33 Reviews | 5.85/10 Average
Interesting story. I guess I don't understand why Hermione seems to have left her magic and the wizarding world behimd just because of some mad Weasleys.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks for the comments! I see it more as Hermione left because she was just... tired. She has done so much for this world, a world that she has tried from the beginning to fit in to, and now everything she knows is being ripped out from under her one piece at a time; her parents, Severus, her friends... She has seen so much death, loss, and destruction because of magic, that I think losing Harry and Ron -- her only real positive footholds in that world -- was simply the last straw. I know it's probably a bit OOC for Hermione to just give up like that, but I wanted her spirit to be broken, as it plays into the rest of the story later on. Thanks again for the concrit! I do hope you continue to read.
I need more, soon please. Great work.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks very much! I hope you continue to enjoy!
I am so in love with this story, I can't believe I only have 1 more chapter to read. I hope the next update is coming soon.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! It shouldn't be too long it it's not there already.
That first night they spent together was beautiful, I can't wait to read more.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it... I was very nervous, seeing as how it's such a big part of their past. :)
I can't wait to hear more about their past and see what the future holds for both of them.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
The past will definitely come back to haunt them... but hopefully the future is brighter... :)
This is incredible, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much! You just made my day... or night, as the case may be!
I'm sorry I didn't review the first chapter but I was so into the story that I didn't want to stop reading just then. I will keep this short so I can get back to reading. I have no idea were this is going but I know I have to go along for the ride. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
That's quite alright... any review is greatly appreciated! I'm thrilled that you're liking the story, and I hope that I can continue to keep you interested!
I've noticed the story has become much lighter within the last chapter or so. Is that deliberate? Also, I wonder what Hermione's is going to do about work long-term? Is Severus going to sit in the club all night while she works like some significant others really do? Somehow I can't see him being too happy about that discovery!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hi and thanks for the R&R! The lightness wasn't all deliberate; it just came out that way, and I figured it wouldn't hurt for just a touch of it, considering the darkness of most of the story... but don't worry... things will turn dark again very soon. Hermione has to return to the Doll eventually... Severus may be there too. There is, after all, the little matter of who Imperiused Hermione to deal with... I hope you continue to enjoy!
Woo hoo! Yee haw! I am jumping and cheering and squeeeing my head off. I cannot tell you how delighted I was to come here to TPP and see that you had posted a new chapter!This little problem they have on their hands can easily turn out ot be a blessing or a curse. I think it all depends on how they choose to see each other.Thank you for this fabulous new chapter! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks Beth! I'll admit, it's been hard to write lately, what with RL and all taking up ALL my time. I was concerned that this chapter didn't fit well with the feel of the story, but you've made me feel 100% better about it. :) I don't know if either of them will be too happy about it at first... hence Hermione's reaction, but hopefully they can come to cohabitate peacefully. Of course, there's sure to be some arguing and fighting... plenty of room for drama and angst! ;)Thanks again and I hope you continue to enjoy it! *Just a little sidenote for ya: I have another chapter of Faith of the Fallen finished. It's with my beta and should be posted very soon! :)
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I love Faith of the Fallen as much as I love The Subtle Nature of Sin. You are an awesome writer!
This chapter is so lovely. I hope I'm not getting too far ahead of the story, but I think there has been a bit of healing and a reawakening of the passions they once felt for each other on that night at Spinners End so long ago. In an awkward moment I can imagine both of them telling themselves that it's only the life debt, but I think they really do have a lot of real caring and concern for each other, and I hope they will not beat themselves or each other up too much over what happened fifteen years ago.You've written a very good chapter glowing with tenderness and compassion. Well done.Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
As always, thank you for your wonderful, insightful review Beth. :) I think you're right... they do still harbor something for one another. Whether or not they can work past the hardships that life has dealt them in order to realize that is the real question. Hopefully, the past will be overcome and they'll be able to eventually move forward together. Thanks so much for reading and for the great review! *hugs*
IM NOT LOST ANYMORE BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! LOL
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hehe... thanks so much! The next chapter is nearing completion. :)
You wanna know what I think? I think there is no way in hell that you can update fast enough to suit me.I am hooked! I can't wait to find out the back story of all that happened at the end of the war, what has happened to each of them during the last fifteen years, and what is going to happend to them. I hope all those plot bunnies you have threatened to trap are firmly focused on "The Sublte Nature of Sin."This is smashing!!!!! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Wow! Thank you so much! I currently have three stories that I'm working on, but my Muse - so to speak - has currently been focused on 'Sin.' I'm writing from my head as I go, but I do have a pretty clear picture of how I want things to progress. I hope I can continue to make it a good read! Thanks again!!
Good God A'mighty this is some kind of wonderful!Very nicely done. Five Stars are not nearly enough.Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my Severus and Hermione!
Wow. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you so much! The second chapter is in the queue! :)
I think it's wonderful! I don't even care if you never explain why she's stripping in the first place. Just can't wait to find out what happens next!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks very much! I have two more chapters finished, so they should be up soon. :)
Starting out good. I'm hooked. Though I'm not too keen on the suicide warning.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far! As far as the suicide warning is concerned, all I can say is that it will be something that has happened in the past, instead of something that will happen later on in the story. I don't plan on offing anyone. :) Thanks for the R&R!
I almost turned away when I saw the lyrics in the song, but I'm glad I stuck around. This definitely looks promising ^^
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hehe... thank you so much! I'm glad you weren't turned off by the Gaga lyrics! :) I thought of this chapter while I was listening to it... but I doubt it'll make a reappearance... so don't worry! Thanks again!
Response from MomoDesu (Reviewer)
It wasn't the fact it was Gaga, since I am head over heels for that woman, it was the lyrics in general. Just a pet peeve of mine, haha.
I haven't worked on *MY* "hell chapter" of my WIP in three years. So don't feel so bad. :p
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
That is a long time... :) I hope you finish it! Thanks so much for reading!
This chapter is delicious and sad, wonderful and joy filled, painful and sublime, and extremely powerful. Well done!Hermione's warrior stance with the slack asses at St Mungo's was right on the mark. Severus did deserve better care that those make-believe toy Healers were giving him. When Hermione placed her well aimed wand squarely between the eyes of that smug little mediwitch and gave her her marching orders I wanted to shout out loud myself. Humph! She should be grateful that she got off with only " batting frantically at her delicately plucked, now-smoking eyebrows." I might have simply snatched them off her face and been done with her sorry arse. The back story we see here is such a mess of Fate creeping in where she wasn't needed or wanted. But that is a prime example of how shitting real life can be. I can only hope that their lives can come back together stronger than ever before.There's no way I could find the words to tell you how marvelous this chapter is, and I can seem to find an Oscar for the best script among the emoticons, so I am awarding you The Beffey for this extraordinarily written piece of work. So without further adieu, it is my distinct pleasure to present you with your very own... ta-da The Beffey with Distinctions for such fine writing. The song really does say it all. And I thank you with all my heart for sharing this prodigious talent you have been given with the likes of me. Well done. And well done!When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tearsWhen you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fearsAnd I held your hand through all of these yearsBut you still haveAll of me
You used to captivate meBy your resonating lightNow I'm bound by the life you left behindYour face it hauntsMy once pleasant dreamsYour voice it chased awayAll the sanity in me{{{squishes you}}}Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much Beth! *hugs* This chapter was one that really scared me, to tell you the truth. It was so hard to write, but only because I felt like what had happened between them wasn't... monumental enough... you know? But I think life is like that... the smallest things can have the biggest effect on how the rest of our lives turn out. "For want of a nail..." and all that.I'm glad you like the song choice. I had always intended to use it somewhere, and it seemed to pretty much sum up the entire point of 'Sin.' Thank you so much for the Beffy! It's wonderful! I'm so glad you enjoyed 'the chapter from Hell', as I've started calling it... lol! I think that they will start to come closer together soon. They still have a lot of baggage, but nothing that can't be overcome... I hope. ;)Thanks again Beth! Your reviews always brighten my day! *squishes back*
I'm soooo glad you've finally updated this! I've been wondering what would happen next, and where you'd take these two. Please update soon!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much! This chapter was SO hard to write... but I've got another two finished and with my beta, so the wait shouldn't be as long this time. Thanks again for the R&R!
Thank you for answering so many of my questions about how Severus and Hermione both ended up at The Diamond Doll and living lives that neither found satisfying. As I read this chapter I was struck by the complete mish-mash their lives had become because he ran out to take care of an errand, and she awoke before he had come back. The following paragraph is an eloquent description of regret: "Severus sighed. He felt a pang of sadness for her – for a life so wasted because of a single, fucking misunderstanding. If only he had woken her before he stepped out that fateful morning… where would they be now? It was obvious now that neither had intended to reject the other all those years ago. Sadly, Fate had not intended their paths to be quite so easy, and in the end they had each assumed the worst of the other. Well, Severus knew first hand what was said about assuming…" Even though Fate had not intended their paths to be easy, it seems that about one year ago Fate decided that it was time for them to face their past and look toward their future... no matter how difficult finding their way through their shared history might be. And thus, Severus nearly fell through the floor at Spinner's End and found himself a new home within walking distance of The Diamond Doll.It's so ironic that after Ron and Harry had turned their backs on her, she once again sought out Severus and he happened not to be at Spinner's End as she waited on the steps for hours for him to return. In their case, Fate is indeed a cruel mistress.I hope that some how, some way, they will be able to mend this breach of more than a decade and find the healing that will make their lives better. I know that there are many pitfalls ahead of them, but I have to hope that a way can be found.I wonder what will happen when Hermione wakes. Will she be too late for her shift? Will she lash out at Severus? Will she give up? This is such a wonderful story, and I can't wait to read your next update! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
You're very welcome, and thank you, once again, for your wonderful review Beth. Fate is indeed a cruel mistress for poor Hermione and Severus. It is going to be a difficult road for them both, but one that I'm sure they can travel if they can get through the pain and anger of the past and look to each other.Fate (and the life debt) is indeed bringing them together once more... no matter how much they may detest it at the moment. All your questions will be answered soon... I hope you continue to enjoy things! Thanks again for the wonderful comments and for taking the time to read! :)
You explained so much, thank you for the update.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
You're very welcome! I'm glad you're still enjoying things. Thanks for the R&R!
I am loving this story. Please update when you can!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you! I'm still working on it, even though it's been a long time since I've updated. My other story has taken over at the moment. :)
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you! I'm still working on it, even though it's been a long time since I've updated. My other story has taken over at the moment. :)
I don't understand what the problem is between them and what they've been 'denying' for fifteen years. Obviously the life debt is playing some kind of role but I guess I don't see why Hermione - the debtee - would be so down on her luck because of it, and if not because of the life debt, why she'd be so down on her luck at all? You're right in that I'm intrigued. I hope the next chapter gives us a little clarity on this odd situation.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks for R&R! You're right in assuming that the life debt is playing some sort of role... I have an inkling of why she's so down on her luck... I'm working on the next chapter right now, so you shouldn't have to wait too long! Thanks again!
Well all I can say is "What is going on?!?" Can't wait to see what this is all about.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I hope I won't keep you waiting too long...