The Consequences of Avoiding the Inevitable
Chapter 2 of 7
BulletTimeScullyThe beginning...
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Thanks, Delilah, for the unending support and encouragement!
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"There will come a time when you believe everything is finished. That will be the beginning."
-Louis L'Amour
Staring back at him, her eyes clouded with something he couldn't place not lust... something darker was a face that he had not seen in ten perhaps even fifteen years.
Hermione Granger.
He would know her if it had been fifty years instead of a mere decade or so.
His reaction was instant and involuntary. He jerked upright and tucked himself back into his pants in a flurry of hands and buttons. "What's wrong, Tobias? Not going soft on me are you?" he heard her say in that decadent, husky voice. She started to crawl back into his lap, but he shoved her aside roughly. He shot from the couch and quickly retrieved his duster, preparing to leave. He wanted to put her and everything she represented far behind him.
As his hand was reaching for the curtains, he was once again overwhelmed with a helpless compulsion towards the woman lying on the floor. He bowed his head. He would not allow this to take control of him! Pushing violently through the curtains, he stormed towards the exit. He didn't get far. He had taken less than five steps when he was pulled up short, unable to move forward. It was like trying to walk through a brick wall.
Fucking shite! he swore to himself. He tried several more times to make it to the door, but his attempts were unsuccessful. A few people had even turned to stare at his odd behavior: one step forward, two steps back, as it were. He ground his teeth together in frustration before spinning around and storming back into the private room.
Hermione was still sitting where she had fallen, holding herself up with both arms. He could see that she was breathing rapidly. Her bare legs were stretched out to the side, and her head was bowed. Her long wavy hair hung nearly to the floor as it obscured her face.
She looked... helpless defeated.
It was pathetic and it made him furious.
He walked slowly to her side and looked down at her with a disgusted sneer. When he spoke, his tone was soft, but there was something else: an edge cold, hard, and merciless. "How the mighty have fallen. Wouldn't you agree... Miss Granger?"
She didn't move, but he saw a shudder pass through her nearly nude form.
"Well?" he continued, becoming angrier with each passing second. When she didn't answer, he sighed heavily. "I knew this day would come... no matter how hard I fought against it." He knelt on one knee and leaned over to speak into her ear. His voice was cold, bitter and scathing. "I knew knew that our paths would meet again, despite my best efforts to the contrary."
He sneered at her once more as he let his eyes roam over her body. "What does it matter... my life has never been truly mine. Why should things have changed?" He pressed his fist to his forehead. There was a moment's pause before he spat: "Fifteen years?! Fifteen fucking years and it happens now?!"
Still she remained motionless, her heavy breathing the only indication that she was even alive. His rage had come to the boiling point. "Look at me, girl!" he spat, spittle flying from his mouth. When she was still unresponsive he snatched her by the hair. "I said 'look... at... me!'"
Hermione let out a small whimper of pain as she came to her knees under the strength of his hold. Her eyes rolled back to meet his as he pulled her head back harshly. His rage tempered as his blood went cold. Her face was inches from his, and only now did he realize the full scope of the situation. The eyes he remembered soft brown, dotted with flecks of gold, full of compassion and intelligence were empty. Her gaze was as emotionless as that of a porcelain doll.
He stood, pulling her by her hair. "Get up!" he growled.
She complied, tripping over her own feet and falling against him. He heard her laugh deep in her throat just before she slid her arms around his neck and kissed him. Her mouth was warm and soft against his his grip on her hair lessened. She groaned against him as her hands found their way underneath his open shirt, swirling through the dark hair on his chest before encircling his waist. He reinforced his grip on her hair as she slid her nails softly up his spine. He pulled her lips harshly from his, but not before her nails raked sharply down his back - she thrust against him again.
God, she felt so fucking good!
Again came her emotionless, throaty chuckle, "Is that how you like it? Rough?" She nipped his earlobe. A hand crept down his stomach and into his partially buttoned trousers. "Dirty?"
He gasped as her hand closed around him. He felt himself harden again. For one languid, desperate moment he debated letting her continue. An instant later he cursed himself for being so weak-minded.
Drawing upon all his willpower, he took her roughly by the arms and pushed her back down on the couch. She giggled. "Is it my turn?" And spread her legs invitingly. She licked her lips as she stared at him with those eerie, blank eyes. Furious beyond description, the man everyone knew as Tobias looked upon the girl no, woman before him and cursed himself inwardly as he redid his trousers.
After so many fucking years...
"God dammit!" he growled to himself as he finished with his buckle.
He threw his jacket back across the chair and paced the room several times. He mumbled to himself, gesturing violently. Finally he stopped, clasping at his hair as if struggling with some life-altering decision.
"Fuck it!" he said with finality. Turning slowly, he narrowed his eyes at the woman lying spread-eagle on the couch. Her lower lip was twisted between her teeth as she beckoned to him with a manicured index finger. He had to look away. He must not think of her like that! It was... is... forbidden. Closing his eyes, he steadied his resolve. There was a pregnant pause as he held his breath. He let it out quickly as he waved one long-fingered hand sharply in Hermione's direction. His voice was laced with contempt as he softly spoke two words he had not used for more than a decade: "Finite Incantatum!"
With a violent jolt that arched her back and made every muscle in her body rigid as steel, Hermione Granger was released from the confines of the Imperius Curse. He turned back to her and watched as her eyes slowly bled back to normal. When she finally looked up, the blood drained from her face as she found herself once again staring into the cold, black eyes of the last man she had ever thought to see again: Severus Snape.
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Hermione Granger was a smart woman. At least she used to be.
She remembered eating dinner alone at her flat. She remembered feeding her cat before she left for work earlier that evening. She remembered driving to work. Most of all, she remembered seeing him... sitting in the crowd, staring at her like all the rest. Strangely, she had been overwhelmed with a compulsion to let him know who she was. So, she had shown him her tattoo. He was a smart man, or had been surely he would figure it out.
She shook her head, confused. The last thing she remembered was seeing Jack walk towards her as she was securing her earnings from her last performance. Then... nothing.
Until now.
As she slowly came out of the fog, she saw him again, staring down at her. His face was different than it had been earlier. Where before it had held a bit of softness longing even it now held a cold loathing a hatred so deep that his eyes glittered with the heat of it.
She raised her chin, unashamed. "Professor," she greeted.
He narrowed his eyes at her as he began buttoning his shirt. "I think, Hermione, that since you were about to suck my dick, as it were... that we can do away with the pleasantries." He finished with his shirt and grabbed his duster. Reaching down, he hauled her up from the couch by her upper arm. "We're leaving," he said with finality.
"What?!" she shrieked as she snatched her arm away.
"Are you deaf as well as daft? I said 'we're leaving'!" He grabbed her again and dragged her through the velvet curtains into the chaos of the club. Nothing stopped him this time. He knew exactly the reason, as she even now struggled against him. His grip was like iron, and her efforts did nothing but bruise her skin.
"Let go, you arsehole!" Hermione screamed at him. She tried to pry his fingers loose with her free hand.
She was causing quite a commotion, and people were starting to stare. Severus really couldn't give a rat's arse. He continued to drag Hermione nude Hermione roughly towards the exit. He could see two big brutes starting to slowly move in on them as he drew closer to his destination. He still couldn't give a fuck. What were they going to do? Forcibly remove him? He snorted at the absurdity of it all.
"My things, Professor! I can't go about in public like this!"
He stopped short as she almost broke away. He reaffirmed his grip and snatched her closer. "It's what you get paid for, is it not?"
He barely had time to register the look on her face before her palm met his cheek. The resounding 'crack' had several more heads turning their way.
"Fuck you!" she snarled, pointed a manicured finger underneath his nose.
He closed his eyes as he let the pain from her slap subside. When he turned back to her, she was seething with a rage that equaled his own. He stepped closer. In a low voice, he whispered so only she could hear: "If you ever... hit me again... you will regret it."
This only served to make her angrier. "Will I? What will you do... sir? Punch me? Slap me? ... Rape me?" This caught his attention. The fucking bitch! Did she actually think... ?
"If I remember correctly," he sneered, "it was you who offered yourself to me, not the other way around."
"I was obviously forced! It would have been rape!" she screamed in his face.
He simply glowered at her.
"Let me go," she said. Her naked breasts heaved against him.
"I think not. We have much to..." he let her see him leer at her chest, "discuss, you and I."
"I know that, you fucking bastard, but if you think I'm leaving here without my things or my pay you're insane. Besides, now that you've found me so to speak I doubt either of us will be able to get very far without the other." Her eyes searched his. She really did need to get her money. She was broke. She needed it to get through the week. When he didn't say anything, only continued to glare at her, she sighed wearily. "Please..." she whispered desperately.
He glared at her for another pregnant moment before releasing her. She rubbed her arm where pale bruises were already starting to form. "Thank you," she bit out. She turned and started away. "Wait for me at the side entrance. Then we can go someplace and talk," she called back over her shoulder.
Severus watched her go, her skin shimmering in the lights of the club, and cursed inwardly. Things were quickly getting complicated.
He pulled another fag from his pocket before moving towards the exit. As he took his first drag, he spotted the two henchmen that had been waiting to kick his arse just moments earlier. They narrowed their beady eyes at him, committing his face to memory in case of any future encounters. He raised an eyebrow at them and gave them the finger before sweeping out into the night in a cloud of cigarette smoke, his black duster billowing behind him.
As he headed to meet Hermione, the only thought running through his mind was that his life had just gone tits up literally. The question was... what was he going to do about it?
~TBC
A/N: Once again, thanks so much for reading! Let me know what you think!
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33 Reviews | 5.85/10 Average
Interesting story. I guess I don't understand why Hermione seems to have left her magic and the wizarding world behimd just because of some mad Weasleys.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks for the comments! I see it more as Hermione left because she was just... tired. She has done so much for this world, a world that she has tried from the beginning to fit in to, and now everything she knows is being ripped out from under her one piece at a time; her parents, Severus, her friends... She has seen so much death, loss, and destruction because of magic, that I think losing Harry and Ron -- her only real positive footholds in that world -- was simply the last straw. I know it's probably a bit OOC for Hermione to just give up like that, but I wanted her spirit to be broken, as it plays into the rest of the story later on. Thanks again for the concrit! I do hope you continue to read.
I need more, soon please. Great work.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks very much! I hope you continue to enjoy!
I am so in love with this story, I can't believe I only have 1 more chapter to read. I hope the next update is coming soon.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! It shouldn't be too long it it's not there already.
That first night they spent together was beautiful, I can't wait to read more.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it... I was very nervous, seeing as how it's such a big part of their past. :)
I can't wait to hear more about their past and see what the future holds for both of them.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
The past will definitely come back to haunt them... but hopefully the future is brighter... :)
This is incredible, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much! You just made my day... or night, as the case may be!
I'm sorry I didn't review the first chapter but I was so into the story that I didn't want to stop reading just then. I will keep this short so I can get back to reading. I have no idea were this is going but I know I have to go along for the ride. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
That's quite alright... any review is greatly appreciated! I'm thrilled that you're liking the story, and I hope that I can continue to keep you interested!
I've noticed the story has become much lighter within the last chapter or so. Is that deliberate? Also, I wonder what Hermione's is going to do about work long-term? Is Severus going to sit in the club all night while she works like some significant others really do? Somehow I can't see him being too happy about that discovery!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hi and thanks for the R&R! The lightness wasn't all deliberate; it just came out that way, and I figured it wouldn't hurt for just a touch of it, considering the darkness of most of the story... but don't worry... things will turn dark again very soon. Hermione has to return to the Doll eventually... Severus may be there too. There is, after all, the little matter of who Imperiused Hermione to deal with... I hope you continue to enjoy!
Woo hoo! Yee haw! I am jumping and cheering and squeeeing my head off. I cannot tell you how delighted I was to come here to TPP and see that you had posted a new chapter!This little problem they have on their hands can easily turn out ot be a blessing or a curse. I think it all depends on how they choose to see each other.Thank you for this fabulous new chapter! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks Beth! I'll admit, it's been hard to write lately, what with RL and all taking up ALL my time. I was concerned that this chapter didn't fit well with the feel of the story, but you've made me feel 100% better about it. :) I don't know if either of them will be too happy about it at first... hence Hermione's reaction, but hopefully they can come to cohabitate peacefully. Of course, there's sure to be some arguing and fighting... plenty of room for drama and angst! ;)Thanks again and I hope you continue to enjoy it! *Just a little sidenote for ya: I have another chapter of Faith of the Fallen finished. It's with my beta and should be posted very soon! :)
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I love Faith of the Fallen as much as I love The Subtle Nature of Sin. You are an awesome writer!
This chapter is so lovely. I hope I'm not getting too far ahead of the story, but I think there has been a bit of healing and a reawakening of the passions they once felt for each other on that night at Spinners End so long ago. In an awkward moment I can imagine both of them telling themselves that it's only the life debt, but I think they really do have a lot of real caring and concern for each other, and I hope they will not beat themselves or each other up too much over what happened fifteen years ago.You've written a very good chapter glowing with tenderness and compassion. Well done.Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
As always, thank you for your wonderful, insightful review Beth. :) I think you're right... they do still harbor something for one another. Whether or not they can work past the hardships that life has dealt them in order to realize that is the real question. Hopefully, the past will be overcome and they'll be able to eventually move forward together. Thanks so much for reading and for the great review! *hugs*
IM NOT LOST ANYMORE BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! LOL
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hehe... thanks so much! The next chapter is nearing completion. :)
You wanna know what I think? I think there is no way in hell that you can update fast enough to suit me.I am hooked! I can't wait to find out the back story of all that happened at the end of the war, what has happened to each of them during the last fifteen years, and what is going to happend to them. I hope all those plot bunnies you have threatened to trap are firmly focused on "The Sublte Nature of Sin."This is smashing!!!!! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Wow! Thank you so much! I currently have three stories that I'm working on, but my Muse - so to speak - has currently been focused on 'Sin.' I'm writing from my head as I go, but I do have a pretty clear picture of how I want things to progress. I hope I can continue to make it a good read! Thanks again!!
Good God A'mighty this is some kind of wonderful!Very nicely done. Five Stars are not nearly enough.Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my Severus and Hermione!
Wow. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you so much! The second chapter is in the queue! :)
I think it's wonderful! I don't even care if you never explain why she's stripping in the first place. Just can't wait to find out what happens next!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks very much! I have two more chapters finished, so they should be up soon. :)
Starting out good. I'm hooked. Though I'm not too keen on the suicide warning.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far! As far as the suicide warning is concerned, all I can say is that it will be something that has happened in the past, instead of something that will happen later on in the story. I don't plan on offing anyone. :) Thanks for the R&R!
I almost turned away when I saw the lyrics in the song, but I'm glad I stuck around. This definitely looks promising ^^
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Hehe... thank you so much! I'm glad you weren't turned off by the Gaga lyrics! :) I thought of this chapter while I was listening to it... but I doubt it'll make a reappearance... so don't worry! Thanks again!
Response from MomoDesu (Reviewer)
It wasn't the fact it was Gaga, since I am head over heels for that woman, it was the lyrics in general. Just a pet peeve of mine, haha.
I haven't worked on *MY* "hell chapter" of my WIP in three years. So don't feel so bad. :p
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
That is a long time... :) I hope you finish it! Thanks so much for reading!
This chapter is delicious and sad, wonderful and joy filled, painful and sublime, and extremely powerful. Well done!Hermione's warrior stance with the slack asses at St Mungo's was right on the mark. Severus did deserve better care that those make-believe toy Healers were giving him. When Hermione placed her well aimed wand squarely between the eyes of that smug little mediwitch and gave her her marching orders I wanted to shout out loud myself. Humph! She should be grateful that she got off with only " batting frantically at her delicately plucked, now-smoking eyebrows." I might have simply snatched them off her face and been done with her sorry arse. The back story we see here is such a mess of Fate creeping in where she wasn't needed or wanted. But that is a prime example of how shitting real life can be. I can only hope that their lives can come back together stronger than ever before.There's no way I could find the words to tell you how marvelous this chapter is, and I can seem to find an Oscar for the best script among the emoticons, so I am awarding you The Beffey for this extraordinarily written piece of work. So without further adieu, it is my distinct pleasure to present you with your very own... ta-da The Beffey with Distinctions for such fine writing. The song really does say it all. And I thank you with all my heart for sharing this prodigious talent you have been given with the likes of me. Well done. And well done!When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tearsWhen you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fearsAnd I held your hand through all of these yearsBut you still haveAll of me
You used to captivate meBy your resonating lightNow I'm bound by the life you left behindYour face it hauntsMy once pleasant dreamsYour voice it chased awayAll the sanity in me{{{squishes you}}}Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much Beth! *hugs* This chapter was one that really scared me, to tell you the truth. It was so hard to write, but only because I felt like what had happened between them wasn't... monumental enough... you know? But I think life is like that... the smallest things can have the biggest effect on how the rest of our lives turn out. "For want of a nail..." and all that.I'm glad you like the song choice. I had always intended to use it somewhere, and it seemed to pretty much sum up the entire point of 'Sin.' Thank you so much for the Beffy! It's wonderful! I'm so glad you enjoyed 'the chapter from Hell', as I've started calling it... lol! I think that they will start to come closer together soon. They still have a lot of baggage, but nothing that can't be overcome... I hope. ;)Thanks again Beth! Your reviews always brighten my day! *squishes back*
I'm soooo glad you've finally updated this! I've been wondering what would happen next, and where you'd take these two. Please update soon!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks so much! This chapter was SO hard to write... but I've got another two finished and with my beta, so the wait shouldn't be as long this time. Thanks again for the R&R!
Thank you for answering so many of my questions about how Severus and Hermione both ended up at The Diamond Doll and living lives that neither found satisfying. As I read this chapter I was struck by the complete mish-mash their lives had become because he ran out to take care of an errand, and she awoke before he had come back. The following paragraph is an eloquent description of regret: "Severus sighed. He felt a pang of sadness for her – for a life so wasted because of a single, fucking misunderstanding. If only he had woken her before he stepped out that fateful morning… where would they be now? It was obvious now that neither had intended to reject the other all those years ago. Sadly, Fate had not intended their paths to be quite so easy, and in the end they had each assumed the worst of the other. Well, Severus knew first hand what was said about assuming…" Even though Fate had not intended their paths to be easy, it seems that about one year ago Fate decided that it was time for them to face their past and look toward their future... no matter how difficult finding their way through their shared history might be. And thus, Severus nearly fell through the floor at Spinner's End and found himself a new home within walking distance of The Diamond Doll.It's so ironic that after Ron and Harry had turned their backs on her, she once again sought out Severus and he happened not to be at Spinner's End as she waited on the steps for hours for him to return. In their case, Fate is indeed a cruel mistress.I hope that some how, some way, they will be able to mend this breach of more than a decade and find the healing that will make their lives better. I know that there are many pitfalls ahead of them, but I have to hope that a way can be found.I wonder what will happen when Hermione wakes. Will she be too late for her shift? Will she lash out at Severus? Will she give up? This is such a wonderful story, and I can't wait to read your next update! Beth
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
You're very welcome, and thank you, once again, for your wonderful review Beth. Fate is indeed a cruel mistress for poor Hermione and Severus. It is going to be a difficult road for them both, but one that I'm sure they can travel if they can get through the pain and anger of the past and look to each other.Fate (and the life debt) is indeed bringing them together once more... no matter how much they may detest it at the moment. All your questions will be answered soon... I hope you continue to enjoy things! Thanks again for the wonderful comments and for taking the time to read! :)
You explained so much, thank you for the update.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
You're very welcome! I'm glad you're still enjoying things. Thanks for the R&R!
I am loving this story. Please update when you can!
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you! I'm still working on it, even though it's been a long time since I've updated. My other story has taken over at the moment. :)
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thank you! I'm still working on it, even though it's been a long time since I've updated. My other story has taken over at the moment. :)
I don't understand what the problem is between them and what they've been 'denying' for fifteen years. Obviously the life debt is playing some kind of role but I guess I don't see why Hermione - the debtee - would be so down on her luck because of it, and if not because of the life debt, why she'd be so down on her luck at all? You're right in that I'm intrigued. I hope the next chapter gives us a little clarity on this odd situation.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks for R&R! You're right in assuming that the life debt is playing some sort of role... I have an inkling of why she's so down on her luck... I'm working on the next chapter right now, so you shouldn't have to wait too long! Thanks again!
Well all I can say is "What is going on?!?" Can't wait to see what this is all about.
Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of The Subtle Nature of Sin)
Thanks! I hope I won't keep you waiting too long...