What a perfect chapter for this pair! Washing the hair in a pensieve *rofl* - brilliant idea.
I love the line with Dumbledore, the rasperry jam and the death of Severus.

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for this lovely review!

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters too. :)

 Ewwww, raspberry poos! :0

Luna is so awesome. :)

So is Aunt Fickle really Luna's aunt, or is (was) she known as "Aunt Fickle" by everybody who knew her?  I'm really hoping that she's actually family, because it just seems like the sort of family that Luna would have and because it would also mean that there would be no problem for the two of them to continue to stay at the mansion.Washing Sev's hair in a Pensieve!  I love it!  I'm interested to find out if it does indeed loosen up any ideas in his twisty little Slytherin head, and also to discover more about his and Luna's relationship to each other.  His ranting just sails serenely past Luna, so she's either quite used to it by now or she just refuses to take him all that seriously.  I can't wait to find out which!

That was a ludicrously short chapter!  Write more!  Please.

LOL.  very good.  Poor Snape.  Luna is never phased by anything, though.  I expect her calm in the face of pretty much everything and anything is exactly what Snape needs, though.

Original, intriguing, beautifully written and very probably unique - you really have got a style all of your own, and it never seems contrived in any way. Your writing really stands out from the crowd.

Again, such delightful and inventive details! Using a wormhole is brillant! And the Harpyria and for what she is used, or rather what she produces... priceless! :o))) Poor, poor Severus, WHAT a fate! I CAN'T wait to read an and se that he - hopefully? is ok!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the details - I had a lot of fun with them.

As to Severus' fate... the next chapters are in the queue!

What a lovely start into a wonderful story! All these details yo put there together are very promising indeed.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapters are ready and I hope you'll enjoy them too.

LoL! Keep going!  I'll be your cheerleader!

Oh NO, poor Severus with weird magical bird crap up his nose and matting his hair and probably a bump on the head.  Agg, that's a bit of a cliffy.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!

This has me intrigued.  I will read more!  Luna is a wonderful character.  She accepts everyone and apparently has no malice at all.  She's quietly brilliant but possibly covers this with her slightly odd behavior so people conveniently underestimate her.  Seems like she could do well with Snape.

How incrediblely original and imaginative.  You have woven a compelling  begining to this tale.  I have to Favourite it so I may read more! 

Okay.  Good start, keep going.

How did she ever find him? :)

Luna is one of my very favorite characters in the HP books, and I adore reading about her with just about anyone of the male persuasion.  Fickle Mansion sounds utterly delightful; if the grounds are that amazing, what must the interior be like?  I can just imagine a place like that having been in Luna's family for generations--it's exactly the sort of thing Xenophilius would have owned, but just considered it too big for only Luna and himself living there.I look forward to reading more, especially of how Luna managed to wear down Severus' grouchy demeanor!

Your writing is beautiful and original - I'm really looking forward to reading more.

This is the first Snuna I've read, and what a delight it is!  A story that's all description, history and observation, written with precision and gorgeous images.  I just wish I could join Snape and Luna at Fickle Mansion.  Some favorites:  the idea of Snape sneaking out into Muggle London but never wizarding territory; "boring, reassuring routine entwined with renewed surprise."  I'd love to hear how Snape and Luna came to be in possession of the house.