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Snow Day
OpalJade209 Reviews | 6.51/10 (209 Ratings, 0 Likes, 203 Favorites )
A snowstorm forecast changes the dynamics between Professor Granger and Professor Snape forever.
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OpalJade
Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 102 | 311 Reviews Written | 726 Review Responses
Hi all!
Currently, I am off work to take care of my son who is ill. I read, write and draw Harry Potter fanfiction to distract myself.
Thanks for taking a peek at my stories! :) Comments are much appreciated and eventhough I have moved on to a different fandom (for now) I come here often to read your kind words.
Reviews for Snow Day
Oh, how lovely! Their internal monologues are pitch-perfect. Hermione's dream was wickedly funny (I'm afraid I'll always think about the clockwise/counter-clockwise instructions now) and Severus' answer to Pince was just awwww... Wonderful! May the snow be thick and the night long.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much, my dear
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! You have no idea how much I appreciate your comments!:D I'm glad you enjoyed their insights and found Hermione's dream funny! *grins*Thanks again for your support.xoxoSandie
Can't wait!!! :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*grins*The 'Snow night' is coming soon! :DThanks you for your enthusiasm, it is motivating!
Ooooooo........what a GREAT story line!!! "..., he had discovered that he couldn’t quite use Lily’s face anymore to make his blood flow." This is one of the more astute observations in HG/SS shipping. I think that would be so very true.Great job so far, I'm off to read the next chapters!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much for your kind words,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm thrilled that the plot line is working for you so far! :D
Love it, update soon please!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I hope it shouldn't be too much longer until the next chapter! :D
This is just so good...!!!MORE!!! please...
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Beams*Thanks SO much,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! Your review is much appreciated! :D((hugs))OJ
Aww you had to end it there didn't you lol. I hope more is coming soon, I can't wait!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Yes, but it will make the next chapter even more juicy (I hope!) Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment! More soon! :D
oooh! i love the story! how i wish i could be hermione.... to be able to see his very private quarter!:)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Hi! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story! :D Just wanted to let you know that Hermione will really like Snape's quarter's!Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!! :D
Response from rubyanjel (Reviewer)
and with that, i am now really looking forward for the fourth chapter..
wow! i feel like hermione in nervous anticipation for the big (haw haw) event. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
wow! i feel like hermione in nervous anticipation for the big (haw haw) event. great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Glad the ust is working for you! Thanks for your kind words and fun comments! :D
I had no idea you were such a tease, OpalJade. We have no idea if there will be enough snow to trigger the charm, plus you are in paradise currently, enjoying sun and frothy drinks with little umbrellas, watching your loyal readers squirm with anxiety!Will they or wont' they? It's just delicious torture to read their internal monologues, trying to second guess motives, still both as insecure as ever. What we really see is realization of something beyond camaraderie, beyond friendship. It's a beautiful thing.Loved Hermione's thoughts on grading her orals. I'm sure she'll be outstanding in reality.Can't wait for the games to begin.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
I'm back home... and most of the snow has melted! :DYes, sorry for being a bit of a tease! ;DI'm so glad that you're still reading! The games will begin real soon, my dear!xoOJ
AWESOME chapter.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*beams* Thank you so much,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! :D
Really enjoyed this chapter, I look forard to the next one, soon I hope :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thanks so much, gertknightlady! Glad you enjoyed it! :D((hugs))OJ
Well aren't you just pure evil, stopping where you did. You ought to be ashamed of yourself, stringing us along like this. I think I am having more anxiety and uncontrolled anticipation about snow night than they are :)I love Pomona humming Let It Snow. I will probably have to go back and reread this chapter, because I swear that after this part, my mind started filling in lyrics to that tune that were appropriate for their situation, and I'm sure I missed something along the way. This happens to me a lot. There is a name for that mental illness. I'm not sure what it is, but I've got it!I love how playful the teachers are, the closer it gets to snow night. Hopefully curfew comes soon because all semblance of supervision is about to go out the window.She dreamt that she was kneeling on the floor, nestled between Severus’s thighs, fulfilling condition number nine. This made me laugh as I'm pretty sure that particular act will forever be ingrained in my head as "condition number nine." Next time this comes up, I will probably get all giggly,and my husband will want to know what is up. I'll never be able to properly explain, but will have ruined the mood. Under pressure, I'll inadvertatnly let slip your e-mail address (it is your fault after all) at which point you will get a nasty gram. Sorry about that in advance ;)And the end, where he is totally helpless to turn her away, even though he thinks he ought to, was so perfect. They are both in way over their heads, although they have no idea... yet.Goodness, I am sure giddy after reading this story. The amount of rambling I do is directly proportional to the quality of the story. Enough said. Update now, dammit!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Dear
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
, Thank you SO much for your wonderful and amusing review! It made me so happy when I read it! I'm sorry it took so long to respond. You see, I was in the Carribeans when this chapter posted and I didn't want my hubby to get too annoyed at me for being on the computer! LOL! (I guess we both don't want our husbands to be disapointed! *winks*) Anyway, I'm super thrilled that you're enjoying reading this fic. I'm sorry I ended the chapter when things were about to get real juicy! *grins*You really made me laugh: I'm pretty sure that particular act will forever be ingrained in my head as "condition number nine". Now it's in my head as well! :DAnd what a sweet thing to say: The amount of rambling I do is directly proportional to the quality of the story. *Blush*Thanks again for your kind words and enthusiasm, my dear! I'll try to update asap!!! (((hugs)))OJ
Finally the snow is here and you've still managed to keep us hanging! LOL! Love the slow build-up but we need some action here! I agree let it snow, let it snow, lsti it snow!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Hello
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! Yes, sorry for ending the chapter when things are about to get *hawt*! :D Action coming real soon! *grins*Thanks for your fun review!:D
The levels of your teasing have reached new heights!! There will never be nakkid bits will there? You had me howling with laughter at Pamona humming Let it Snow. I also liked the inverse relationship between snow accumulation and teacher vs student behaviors. Hey that sounds terribly complicated. Go us!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
LOL! Sorry about the teasing, my friend! Don't worry, there will be lots of nakkid naughtiness in the next chapter! ;DAnd look at you making fancy inverse correlations observations in a pwp review! *smooches*Thanks for your amusing review!Sandie :D
It's snowing like all-get-out. Hooray for Severus! And I loved his defending Hermione when "the Pince" starts dissing her. He get extra points for that!I love the thoughts he has about Hermione when he is having a wank— Sex with fantasy-Granger was a bit more competitive, a bit more playful— and then later he has convinced himself that she is drawing maps to her quarters for Mr. Jackson. This bit of self-torture following such blissful thoughts is the quintessential Severus Snape.My favorite part was just after Hermione made her case to him for coming to his quarters early:“Did you bring your book?” he inquired. “Yes, of course.” He sighed heavily to indicate the depth of her imposition. “Come in, then.”Wonderful! Beth
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you Beth! I'm so grateful for your insightful review!I'm glad that you liked Snape 'speaking' up for Hermione. I've always imagined he would. :DI'm also thrilled the ending worked for you.:DThanks again for your support,my dear! xoxoOJ
She had to give him a blow job if the forecast was accurate!!! ROFL!!!! And the "gravy/juicy" bit SLAYED me!!!! :D I hope she tickles him! Heeheeheeee!!!!Another fantastic chapter, lady!!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Twirls you around* Thank you, my friend, for pointing out the parts that also made me giggle when I wrote them! What a wonderful sense of humour you have! ;DYes, Hermione must tickle Snape at some point! Thank you for your kind words and continuous support, dear TT!!xoxoOJ
How very Severus to act so put upon by the one thing he seems to really want.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
LOL! A very clever and accurate observation, miss
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm loving this. What an original idea!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Yay!I'm happy that you're enjoyingthis and think it's original! :DThanks for reviewing!
But... but... the rest of the chapter seems to be missing! Love the anticipation building up. :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
LOL! The rest is coming soon. I'm glad the anticipation is working for you!:D
YAY! I was overjoyed at the notice of this update..I love this story, and can't wait to see what happens next...Poor Severus, having to entertain Hermione...LOL! Well done!! Looking forward to the next chapter..
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Poor Severus is right! ;D
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
, I'm so happy that you're still enjoying this. Thanks so much for your kind words. I really appreciate your review. :D
Oh, I am so happy it started to snow:-))
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Yes, the snow is finally here!More snow soon... *grins*
That's a downright nasty place to stop. If it had been me I'd be sporting a smirk worthy of Snape over that one. Love the story, though. Can't wait for the next chapter. If only we had snow days here ... It's been 3 months since there last wasn't snow outside. But with a charm like that, who would mind? :)
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
It is a rather nasty place to stop, isn't? Sorry! I hope I will be forgiven after the next chapter!Thanks for your kind review. Wish I could make your snow accumulation more fun! ;D
fantastic chapter, glad snape softened a little
really enjoyed his answer to pince, 'It must be some other miss granger...lol
thanks for posting
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Squee!!! I'm super happy that you liked this chapter! I'm also glad that you enjoyed Snape's reply to Madam Pince. ;DThanks for reading and reviewing!
Holding my breath waiting for more. Great start to the night. Cant wait to see what happened next. Hope you update soon. Thanks again for the great story.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much for your great review,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this fic! I will try to post the next chapter sooner! *smiles*
Response from zucca (Reviewer)
You know i can only hold my breath for so long : ) I am still checking three times a day so please hurry