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Snow Day
OpalJade209 Reviews | 6.51/10 (209 Ratings, 0 Likes, 203 Favorites )
A snowstorm forecast changes the dynamics between Professor Granger and Professor Snape forever.
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OpalJade
Member Since 2007 | 7 Stories | Favorited by 102 | 311 Reviews Written | 726 Review Responses
Hi all!
Currently, I am off work to take care of my son who is ill. I read, write and draw Harry Potter fanfiction to distract myself.
Thanks for taking a peek at my stories! :) Comments are much appreciated and eventhough I have moved on to a different fandom (for now) I come here often to read your kind words.
Reviews for Snow Day
Of course it would all start over a book and Snape learning Hermione something, but great initiative Hermione. I'll have to remember that one, because apparently we all have a bit of magic inside us. I look forward to their next 'session' if there is one of course ??
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Yes, there are more 'sessions' coming up (with a lot less academia!) Thank you for your lovely review,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
. I really appreciate it.And, yes, I do believe we have untapped magical abilities inside of us! ;D
cant wait for the next chapter please hurry!
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Oh,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
, it pleases me so much to know that you're excited for the next chapter!I'm doing my very best to get it finished asap!Thank you for your enthusiasm! (((hugs)))OJ
Nice touch with the books; typical reaction on his part, but the proceeding foreplay was worth it I believe.Brilliantly done, can only imagine what happens in the next chapter!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thanks
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! I'm so glad the books and foreplay worked for you! :DYour review has made me so happy. :D
silly silly snape and granger...they both want the same thing.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
They do!!! It won't take much longer for them to realize it! ;DThanks for reading and reviewing!:D
LOL. Oh this is gonna be fun!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Grins* I'm glad you're enjoying this!
He was stunning in the way that an abstract painting could be, when one decides to accept the hard angles and shapes for what they are without trying to make sense of them. That was gorgeously worded.Hot, hot, hot! And this is why sshg works in my mind--because magical ontology would be damn sexy, and of all the Potterverse, they're likely the only two whose discussion of such a thing could constitute foreplay. Again, I say, "hot!"
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Beams* You have no idea how happy your review has made me, emmeline! I'm thrilled that their conversation felt like foreplay!!! And you found it hot too!!! Yay! :DThanks again for your kind words. I'm so glad this worked for you. (((hugs)))OJ
Oh, my. Well, he's going to stick to the letter of their agreement, because that is Severus.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Yes, he was rather cold in that last scene. He might warm upin the next chapter! ;DThanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review,
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. I really appreciate it! :D
that was brilliant! wonder what's gonna happen next?!?! =D
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*Twirls
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
* Thank you so much for your kind words! *grins*What's going to happen next? Well, everything comes together! (no pun intended! ;D)
This is a terrific chapter! Plenty of intellect, plenty of sex, a little sauciness...for next round Hermione ought to Transfigure her lingerie pink, straddle his ticklish hips, and tell him exactly where he can put his magical theories.This is a well written story. I like the way you are drawing it out, the pacing is nice. Thank you!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Grins from ear to ear* Thank you for your fabulous review, Jahover! (I read it three times in a row because it made me so happy!)I'm beyond thrilled that the pacing worked for you!!Thanks again!!! :D
Well sweetie this was more than worth the wait. Please update soon.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Dear
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
, Thank you SO much for saying this chapter was worth the wait. You have managed to ease my heartburn. ;D((hugs))OJ
Excellent. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you very much
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! (great username, btw!)I'm glad you enjoyed this! :D
Do not apologize for taking the time you did to post this chapter, especially when it's this good!!!I found it very telling that Severus was irked with this attractive witch in her "slightly off-the shoulder black top with a pair of cream-coloured trousers and black heeled shoes that were more easily heard than seen due to the length of her pants. He was no fashion expert, but he knew she looked... nice." It's not like he was paying attention.... Oh nooooOOOOoooo.
That "she had taken away his chance to change into his other black trousers" seems like Mister-I-Am-Always-In-Control had it all planned out how he was going to WOW her when she came to his door at nine o'clock. No matter, he WOWED her (and every fangurl reading this story) when he changed from his teaching clothes to his "I'm gonna make her scream my name" attire.
What really pleased me and gave me a good feeling for their future is that they were reading the same scholarly tome. Ya know, I've always thought the best sex starts between your ears. After all, great physical sex alone will only carry a relationship so far, but great physical sex and a shared passion for other interests can make life very sweet indeed. *mumble-mumble-but-maybe-I-just-march-to-the-beat-of-a-different-drummer-mumble-mumble*
That Hermione's first attempt at wandless magic unbuttoned his shirt really took Severus by surprise, but it didn’t take long for both of them to act on the thoughts they’d both been thinking since he closed the door to his quarters. And a fine reaction it was. Mind blowing, in fact. And then her stomach growled... and he left the room... for the time being...
His abrupt exit at the end of this chapter did seem cold, but you know what I think? I think it took every last shred of self-discipline for him to leave that room, and I don't think that either of them has noticed that it's not even time for the Charm to take effect.Give yourself a pat on the back for a fabulously crafted chapter!!!Beth
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Dear Beth,Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I was so nervous posting this chapter... and you made me feel all better!I really appreciate your insightful observations! You are right about so many things! *grins* This made me laugh: I've always thought the best sex starts between your ears.I'm so glad that you saw what I was trying to establish with the magical theory scene... "a shared passion for other interest." Yes, indeed. Hopefully, the reasons why I wrote it this way (ie. book talk in the middle of a PWP) will be more obvious in the next chapter!Again, thank you for your kind words and support. It is much appreciated.xoxoOJ
Ohh! Discussing magickal philosophy is soooo sexy! ^_^
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*grins* I'm thrilled that you thought so! Thank you for reading and reviewing,
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! :D
Love it!!! That was worth the wait. Hope to read more soon. Thanks for this wonderful story
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
(((Hugs you))) Thank you for your kind words Zucca! I'm so sorry for making you wait. I really appreciate your support. :D
Can't wait for the next update!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
I hope it will come quicker this time! Thank you for taking the time to leave me a comment, kass! I'm flattered that you're excited for more! :D
WOW!!! Well worth the wait..I love this, I HOPE that the "CHARM" Hasn't activated yet and they will realize that they are attracted to each other without the need of the charm...I can't wait to see what happens next....Severus seriously needs to loosen up! LOL!!! WELL DONE!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much for your wonderful review,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!!! I'm soooooo happy that you liked this chapter! I have a big grin on my face. :DxoOJ
You're forgiven, especially if the next chapter is as good as this one! I've been checking several times a day to see if this chapter had been posted yet. Can't wait for the next!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
(((hugs))) I felt so bad that it took this long! Thank you for forgiving me! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm hoping that the next one will come much quicker!
*meeps* Oh, he's not going to be a complete tit about all this, is he? Highly enjoyable chapter. And I liked all the magical theory.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*grins* Yes, Snape is being a bit of a tit! (what a great expression!)I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I'm also glad that you didn't find the magical theory stuff too cumbersome for a PWP. I worried about that! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dicky! :D
That was amazing! I still would just love it if they glanced at the clock and realized that it was only 8:55.But for Snape to just stand abruptly and walk off was too cold. I know he left her feeling empty and used when he did that. Poor Hermione.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Twirls you* I'm so glad you thought this chapter was good! And, yes, Snape's exit was brutally cold. He's going to have to make up for it, won't he?! ;DThank you so much for your wonderful review,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
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I enjoyed their first coupling. I hope that by the end of this Snow Day they will find more than sexual gratification and a list of rules to follow :) This was an excellent story idea.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Beams* Thank you so much, my dear! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D
Response from gersknightlady (Reviewer)
That was supposed to read "more than a list of rules to follow" LOL
Your update was well worth the wait! It seems as if Hermione thinks it was, too. I can't wait to find out what more "sessions" bring.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Oh, thank you for your kind words,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! The next "session" shouldn't take as long if things remain stable at home for me. :D
It's too bad they didn't realize this attraction before the snow. Now they're gonna just skirt around it after their night of fun.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
You are exactly right my dear! ;DThanks so much for reading and reviewing,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
! :D
Whew... I couldn't care less about the academics of magic, but I'll be damned if that man didn't have me hanging on his every word, LOL. Leave it to Hermone to make such a statement with her first, and perfect display of wandless magic.“You call this blue?” Good to know he is all about sticking to the rules of the game. Then things got yummy! And then he had to go back to being a stickler for the rules at the end. Never fear, she will win him over by the end of the night; I have total confidence. Really want to know how things go from here!!
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic support,
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
!I'm so happy this chapter worked for you despite the magical theory! LOL! There's only one more chapter and I think your prediction will come true! ;DxoOJ
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't hate the magical theory. In fact it is quite interesting. I really was just having the feeling that he could be reading the side of the cereal box, and I would have found it entrancing. I really like the intellectual connection that they have, which will undoubtedly fuel the fire for them (as if they need any more help). And of course I was thinking, "less talk, more action." Come on guys, we've only got like twelve hours to work with. Times wasting :)
So very put out.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
"Oh, no! What are you put out about? Perhaps it was the evil cliffie? :)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Sorry, I meant Sev was. He seems so reticent, yet you know he wants to do it.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
*Giggles* I totally see what you mean now! Sorry about that! :DYes, you're right, he's just being petty, but he does want want her there!!
"Highly inappropriate to discuss snow amounts in class" snicker, snicker! Looking forward to your update.
Response from OpalJade (Author of Snow Day)
LOL! I'm glad this made you laugh, my friend! Lariope and I giggled at that same line. :DMore soon! xo