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The Unconditional Vow

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The Unconditional Vow

Agnus Castus

61 Reviews   |   61 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )

Drama Psychological Hogwarts Castle 126,073 Words 14 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Fawkes Original Character Severus Snape Augusta (Gran) Longbottom Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Antonin Dolohov Bellatrix Lestrange Charity Burbage Draco Malfoy George Weasley Nymphadora Tonks Remus Lupin Selwyn (Death Eater) Yaxley (Death Eater) Alecto Carrow Amycus Carrow Argus Filch Ginevra Weasley Horace Slughorn Luna Lovegood Minerva McGonagall Mrs. Norris Neville Longbottom Phineas Nigellus Black Rubeus Hagrid Anthony Goldstein Filius Flitwick Firenze (Centaur) Michael Corner Sibyll Trelawney Harry Potter Ronald Weasley Professor Binns Professor Sinistra Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Nagini Terry Boot

Albus Dumbledore had a plan to protect Severus Snape after the fateful night on the Astronomy Tower. During his final year as Headmaster, Snape has a chance to come to terms with his past and find peace, before his life draws to its inevitable close. Canon-compliant. TPP Featured Story May/June 2010.

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Chapters (14)

Chapter 1: One

Chapter 2: Two

Chapter 3: Three

Chapter 4: Four

Chapter 5: Five

Chapter 6: Six

Chapter 7: Seven

Chapter 8: Eight

Chapter 9: Nine

Chapter 10: Ten

Chapter 11: Eleven

Chapter 12: Twelve

Chapter 13: Thirteen

Chapter 14: Fourteen


About Agnus Castus

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Agnus Castus

Member Since 2008  |  10 Stories  |  Favorited by 26  |  24 Reviews Written  |  278 Review Responses

I’m a 50-something British woman, residing in the Pendle area of north-west England. I’m a former pharmacist and a counsellor. My penname, Agnus Castus, is a herbal remedy for women’s hormone problems. I also co-write with The Snapettes.


I can also be found in the Facebook group "Muffliato!" for folks who appreciate SS/OC fanfic.


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Sycophant Hex: Occlumency, FanFiction.net, Archive Of Our Own

Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

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0/10

angelus

Fantastic start, can't wait to read more.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the story.

10/10

star_girl

Yay! I am pleased the admins let you bulk post. It's a treat to be able to read the chapters in a block :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Yes, hopefully posting the completed story will be much quicker. The story is told in volumes, anyway, so hopefully it will work well. Thanks for leaving a note

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star_girl

It's so nice getting to read this all over again! Dumbledore is very much in character here. And the touches with Fawkes are lovely.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Hehe. Dumbledore and Fawkes: two of my most favourite Harry Potter characters! You're reading my story all over again? Wow. I'm flattered!

10/10

ClayPotter

I don't usually read Snape fics that don't pair him up with Hermione, even though I have written one myself, but this one called out to me for some reason. I'm relieved that he found a friend in Fawkes. The bird would not have simply flown off to live in the wild, he would have attached himself to someone else. Snape (not Harry) is the logical choice, IMO. Dumbledore owed him that much, and so much more. I'm sure he would not be able to order the bird to do so, but Fawkes would have willingly gone to someone worthy at Dumbledore's request.I anxiously await your next chapter.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thank you for reviewing,

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

, and I'm glad my story caught your attention. I was delighted to include Fawkes in my story, as I was sad to see him leave at the end of the HBP. I too believe Dumbledore owed much more to Snape, and my story attempts to remedy that imbalance. The next chapter is in the queue, and all seventy chapters will be posted, as time and fate allow. I hope to hear from you again!

10/10

star_girl

I am so pleased you decided to post here, it gives me a chance to read and enjoy this story all over again! I hope many others will find it and enjoy it as much as I did. Where did you find that beautiful picture, by the way? It reminds me so much of one of my own stories, called "Expiation."

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Hi

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

! Thanks for reviewing again on TPP. I've now included a link underneath the fanart - it really is a beautiful picture, isn't it?

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nagandsev

Lovely recollections of Lily and him; so sad as it occurs to me that he's probably used his/their memories one too many times to soothe/relax himself into sleep, poor man. Along with all the chapters, really enjoyed Contessa and Robert Selwyn scene, and her Ravenclaw sense of just fairness for the boy. Poor Contessa - what a faux pas - her idea! the wound is raw and open as ever.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Such is the power of his feelings for Lily; his love for her is kept alive by the healing balm of her memory.  Meanwhile, Contessa tries to find some kind of fulfilment, blissfully oblivious to Severus's unspoken needs.

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nagandsev

The tension of Severus' repressed emotions and insecurities with Contessa's discomfort of her emotions regarding him and their situation is powerfully mounting/growing; the depictions of his repressed nature and inability to allow himself even the idea of another possibility/aspect of himself to be experienced with Contessa is so pronounced. The looming atmosphere and tension of the goings on in the Castle are building; poor Neville.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

I'm glad you're experiencing the emotional side of the story and the complexity of both characters' feelings at this point. There are many things left unsaid between them, and so much self-denial. Thanks for reviewing.

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nagandsev

Again, a wonderfully filled interim of description and details from the Malfoy Mansion to the eve of them returning to Hogwarts; moreover, the layering on of intimacy between Severus and Contessa.  

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

They've made some progress, now it's time to see what happens when they are apart from each other.

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nagandsev

So much wonderful work - the Tiger's Eye rings, taking care of baby Fawkes, Dumbledore being Dumbledore, and of course, the wonderful 'new memory' to keep Voldy happy should he come a plundering Contessa's mind, and that haunting element of Severus' self-denial and rigid discipline when regarding Contessa, so effective, so sad... There seems to be a foreboding attached with 'tomorrow' - reading on to find out what that busy day will bring!

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

I'm glad you noticed Severus' self-denial and rigid discipline; my heart ached for him when he shut down his emotions so quickly. It's almost habit for him. Thanks again for reviewing!

10/10

Bettina

The old meddler--we can already assume that neither of them is ready to admit failing for lack of intelligence of all things. You style is captivating. While reading I feel I'm standing next to them in Tess's living room. As this is my second read, I admire several nicely constructed details that I won't list here to not be a spoilsport for others!

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

When I began this story over four years ago, I knew very little about the art of writing, so it's good to know I managed to sow the seeds of the story so effectively from the beginning. I'm touched that you're reading again, it's a real compliment. Thank you! 

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

When I began this story over four years ago, I knew very little about the art of writing, so it's good to know I managed to sow the seeds of the story so effectively from the beginning. I'm touched that you're reading again, it's a real compliment. Thank you! 

9/10

Bettina

You've packed masses of information into such a smooth narration here! The Ravenclaw Revolutionary being just one of them, although an essential one.

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thanks! Exposition is always a difficult thing to get right. Hope you enjoy this story second time around

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thanks! Exposition is always a difficult thing to get right. Hope you enjoy this story second time around

10/10

loreen77

You really have my attention. I can't wait to learn about the Ravenclaw Revolutionary. 

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thank you. Back when I wrote this story, I didn't know much about writing and went with my instinct. Good to know I caught your attention early on. Thanks!

10/10

loreen77

Sad and beautiful beginning, I am glad Fawkes was sent to Severus. 

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Fawkes was one of my favourite characters, so I was glad to send him to Severus in his hour of need. Thanks for reviewing.

0/10

sunny33

So much hope.  Now, to beat that damned snake. :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

The first real glimmer of hope for both of them. Beating the snake would be a mean feat...

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sunny33

Perhaps no-one but the Carrows will give detention?

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Contessa is in for something much worse than detention!

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sunny33

Whew.  As tough as it was to face, he needed to do it. :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

I agree. My heart ached for him when I wrote this section.

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sunny33

Contessa getting one over him was priceless! :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Why, thank you! Snape's a tough one to fool; it was a challenge for me to write. 

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sunny33

Oops.  Not very sensitive there, was she? :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Her sensitivity was overridden by other feelings in the Headmaster's office. I think she recovered admirably with the parkin cake, though ;)

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sunny33

Communication is not Severus's strong point, is it? :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Communication and emotional intelligence are two skills which Severus lacks. Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

sunny33

They have more in common than they thought. :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Yes, they figured it out in the end.

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sunny33

And so the plot thickens.  What is this new task she has lined up? :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Could it involve a certain castle in the Scottish Highlands, I wonder?

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sunny33

He can clean, and he can cook.  That's a good start for a housemate. :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

He can clean... when he wants to! Hehe.

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sunny33

What is it with Dumbledore and Unbreakable Vows? He should have been a Slytherin the way he manipulates people! :0

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Someone once said: "There's a little bit of Slytherin in everyone." 

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sunny33

A Ravenclaw.  Interesting stuff! :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

We never saw enough of Ravenclaw House in canon, but fanfiction remedied that long ago!

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sunny33

Insightful start. Love the pic. :)

Response from Agnus Castus (Author of The Unconditional Vow)

Thank you. And yes, the pic is a real beauty.

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