Lol i loved the ending, putting on a show for Ron's sake. Cute story, they both seemed totally in character, which i always appreciate. It seems like all too often Snape can become a quivering ball of goo when he tries to show any feelings. You kept him smart and snarky as he fell, so much appreciated!

I adored this story from start to finish, and you've written such a heartfelt and warm tale, that I think it will stay with me for some time. :)

Hermione's anguish in the previous chapter and their hesitant and heartfelt confessions to each other were gorgeously observed, along with thei ropen secret relationship. As romantic proposals go, Severus didn't need the hoopla. I'm thinking thatSeverus would have been quite happy to see Ron's encore instead. :D

Loved it!

It's a hard pick at the moment, but I'm not sure who I want to smack first, Harry or the Harpy. can I smack both of them for interfering?

Hermione's anguish and fears have all come tumbling down and now it's her turn to lash out at Severus just as they were growing closer.

Hmm, I'm just guessing but I would think that Ron and the 'harpy' will have spread the word that Severus and Hermione were holed up alone together in the dark in the library. ;)

Mind you, if Hermione swoons at a kiss on the hand, she should  perhaps be horizontal for the kiss on the lips. :p /wishful thinking

I do like your laconic Snape. He may be a man of few words, but he wields them like a knife edge. At times acerbic, but more often than not taking the piss out of whatever he finds amusing in that moment. ;)

The fact that scaring Hermione speechless was a side benefit with his flying skills - priceless. :)

Severus' strength of character has always amazed me. His ability to seemingly divorce himself from the horror around him less the acerbic and cutting words he used to keep people at their distance from him. You've illustrated that so well - I was completely drawn into the weave of it, though next time they might find a warmer spot.

I predict they're both going to have numb bums out of this. ;)

Ah, so Severus is still very much isolated. Liked by his colleagues, tolerated by many and loathed by quite a few more it would seem. Now, if the pair of them could just get over their own pasts as student and teacher, they might migrate to actually calling each other by name. ;)

Hmm, I wonder just what Harry might have put in his letter to Severus?

I've come back to finish reading what I had meant to finish so long ago. I'm really enjoying the story and the idea of Hermione doing something for herself. her relationship breakdown with Ron was far more adult than many writers choose to protray it, but it rings of truth rather than a spot of Ron!Bashing.

The idea of Severus making the suggestion about Hermione's employment, but seeming not to, is very cunning of him, and I can't help but wonder if Hermione's 'funny five minutes,' is not something that has been affecting Severus for far longer.

I've read your story some time ago on another site but I had to read it again because it was so good! Thank you!

Well done.

Somebody needs to lock those two in a room, and not let them out until they have come to an understanding of some sort.  They are being so difficult!  I hope resolution comes soon.

They are both being idiots.  And Harry should still be shot.

Gee whiz.  A little communication, guys! :)

So much drama, angst, and mis-communication.You're killin' me here!

Hannah!  I love this story to pieces.  But uh, seriously?  You leave me with wanting more!  NOT NICE!  LOL!Eagerly looking forward to your update!

Oh, gosh! I hope he goes after her. I NEED you to update soon. I am so in love with this story. She should just tell him. Silly girl. She's making this harder than it needs to be.

Their relationship is just painful, darn Harry and Ginny for telling him.  Tell me the next chapter is in queu please!  ~snicker~  I'm a little emotionally invested, eh?  Poor Severus.  Thanks for the wonderful update.

awww *sniff*  i can empathize with her.  haven't we all made a fool of ourselves at one time or another?  terrific update.  thanks and mucho smoochies

This chapter leaves me with such a heavy heart. Why did Harry have to butt in? I know he was just trying to look out for his best friend, but REALLY??!!I guess it wouldn't be a good SS/HG fic without some major angst, right?

Damn that Harry Potter for sticking his nose where angels fear to tread.  Bummer, could it get any worse?  Will tune in next time to see if our fearless leader will bite and snarl at all with in reach or reach out and touch HP with intent.  :)  Wonderful chapter Hannah, I loved reading it.

I hate cliff hangers! But this story is so good, I will let it go. Please update soon and I hope that Hermione's mother has some good advice.

Well she really mucked things up, didn't she.  I was pleased that he stopped her, and disgusted with her answer.  Although, she hadn't prepared herself to see him, so she didn't have a speach in place.  Still, if Harry hadn't interfered, she wouldn't have felt the need to run away.  He did it with her best interests in mind, but he just needs to butt out.  Maybe her mother will give her some good advice.

Hermione is as insecure as Severus.  I think Harry should be hit with a shovel.  I really dislike that kind of "kindness."

Poor Severus.  He will have NO idea what's going on inside her head. :)