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Chapter 5 of 10
MelaLily finds out what kind of creature her tutor is
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Chapter V
Lily held the small book reverently. It had just arrived via owl mail. She had spent an entire month’s allowance to purchase it. She hoped that it would be worth it. She had spent the last two and a half years trying to figure out the enigma that was her mysterious tutor. She had studied every single book on non-humans in the Hogwarts library. She had discreetly asked Hagrid. She had even tried asking her tutor. He had frowned and flashed his fangs. She had thought to talk with the Merpeople on the subject, but the Giant Squid had had a different opinion. It was fortunate that Scorpius had managed to extricate her. There was also that other time when she had thought that the Creatures hunter passing through Hogsmeade might know the answer. She had been lucky once again to have been saved by Scorpius. Her venture to the Forbidden Forest to search for her tutor had also proved futile. She avoided remembering her other attempt that had ended before the Mirror of Erised. Seeing an older version of herself dressed in white next to a very handsome Scorpius Malfoy had shaken her.
After that incident, she had decided to keep her distance from Scorpius. It would not do for him to guess her infatuation with him.
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Severus Snape slipped into Hogwarts. It was not for one of his tutoring sessions with the girl.
His past as a spy had taught him the value of good information. Since he had decided to involve himself in her life as a tutor and protector, he needed to know everything about her environment.
He had often justified his action to himself by thinking that he was doing this for the love of her grandmother. He was not delusional enough to also believe this. Lily Evans was nothing more than a sad memory anymore.
The aim of his visit this evening was to find out more about Scorpius Malfoy. The boy had seemed to be predominant in young Lily’s mind.
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Draco fixed the covers over his sleeping wife. With tenderness he straightened a blond tendril that had fallen over her eye and nose. She was the best part of him. She had still been in school when they had first met at her sister's wedding. She had never held his past against him, not even back then. Even though there had been no legal sanctions against his family after the war, the first few years had been difficult. Still they had been better than the two years before the final battle. In his nightmares he could still hear the threats that Voldemort had made should he fail in his task. He had played them all so well. Threatening him with his parents’ wellbeing and his parents with their child’s.
People had often thought that his regret was for his role in Dumbledore’s demise. That was not true. He was sorry for many things and for his role in the war, but he had never forgiven the old man enough to feel sorry for his death. In his mind Dumbledore had been as bad as Voldemort. Dumbledore had used children in the war. Even the Muggles knew that this was reprehensible and forbidden. And those he had not used as his pawns and soldiers, those he had left to their fate. Dumbledore had known of his task, and yet for a whole year he had done nothing to help him out of the predicament. Had the old man approached him with a plan to hide his whole family, they would have willingly gone. He had known, but he had not helped, leaving him and many of his classmates to Voldemort. Once upon a time, becoming a Death Eater had been a choice, a bad one to be sure, but a choice nevertheless. In those last few years though, it was never a choice. It was blackmail. Just that. If you cared for your family, you did what the Monster dictated.
There were only two others who had ever understood. One dead one alive. Severus Snape and George Weasley. Poor George had never been able to forgive Dumbledore. The twins had been his most faithful soldiers. And in the end, they had been betrayed. Many had fought in the war against Voldemort, but the twins had fought for Dumbledore. Their faith and trust had been absolute. And yet, this wound was one that George had never shared with his family. They would not have understood. Arthur had simply shrugged the revelations about Dumbledore with a ‘we are all just humans, with human weaknesses’ comment. Draco had been the only one privy to George’s inability to forgive Dumbledore, since he shared it.
Astoria sighed in her sleep, and Draco placed a kiss on her cheek. He closed his eyes and returned to sleep.
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Severus Snape finished his glass of blood. Vladimir would appreciate his experiments for improving the nutritional value of bottled blood.
His recent foray at Hogwarts was not without consequences. He had slipped into the Headmistress’ suite while she slept. She looked old and frail. The Bloody Baron had informed him that, while she wanted to retire, she had been unable to find a suitable replacement. He understood. Being Headmaster of Hogwarts meant holding the responsibility for the future of the wizarding world in your hands. This responsibility could easily be neglected or abused. He had decided to help ease her load until she was able to find her replacement.
Instead of just looking into the school files for information on Scorpius Malfoy, he had spent the night dismantling the protective wards of the school and then creating new ones supported by his life force instead of Minerva’s.
Theoretically, that should have not been possible, but the School recognized him as Head of Slytherin House and former Headmaster. He had also managed to take a look into Scorpius Malfoy's transcripts. He had feared that the boy would be as spoilt as his father had been.
However, young Scorpius seemed to be an excellent student and one his teachers adored. The only detentions he had ever got were for skirmishes with the Potters and Weasleys. He was angry to see that in many of these cases the boy had ended to the Hospital Wing hexed with malicious curses. Seeing this, it puzzled him why he was so kind to Lily. If the boy thought to take out his revenge on her, he would regret it. Severus Snape would make sure of it.
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“Harry, what are you doing here so late? You have a wife back home. With all the children at school, you should be enjoying your evenings with your wife,” Kingsley commented lightheartedly to his friend.
“There is this case that I need to follow closely,” Harry replied.
“There is always a case. Go home to your wife,” Kingsley advised.
Harry avoided looking at the other man. Kingsley was one of his best friends. But he had never told anyone of how he felt nowadays regarding his marriage. There was nothing wrong per se. Sex was still good, but after twenty years with the same person, one required something more in a relationship than just a good fuck. He wished they would talk more about meaningful things. He was not interested in the latest gossip or the newest trend. But discussions on political reforms, religion, or international relations left his wife bored, and she refused to participate in them. And even after so many years, he still felt that she wanted something more from him. She had his heart, his body, his children. What more could he give her?
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Lily closed the book. It had indeed held an answer. It seemed that her tutor was a vampire. That was surprising indeed. She would have guessed earlier, but everyone knew that vampires were close to extinct. It have been fifty years since the last sighting of a vampire. She would soon inform him that she knew what he was.
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30 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
GOD I love your story...
I hope you keep on writing.
You can't just abandoned it especially after things is started to heating up between lily and severus...
Hope you update soon.
I like the way you write this story in so many different scenes, providing so many different angles. Keep up the good work!
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Thank you! Most of the time I have a hard time keeping track of everyone in the story. Not to mention that some minor characters had a will of their own and demanded their own story to be told!
That was very sweet and quite realistic for a first time, even one so well planned out. Poor Harry.
awww how sad! poor Harry! And well, Lily got her hopes crushed. I wonder how she's going to react about the news? who will she side with? so many questions :( great chapter, i loved it
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Thank you! Lily's reaction will be in the next chapter.
I don't remembr if I have reviewed before. I like your story very much. I loved the way Draco saw the flaws in Dumbledores plan, your Lily is so cute. Sorry that Harry and Ginnys marriage is not fulfilling
thanks for the update!!! Whatever will happen to dear Lily, to H&G's marriage. How will S react to his world being brought to the light?
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
The main plot is written, Lily and Severus have a specific future. The question is what do you want to happen with the sub-plots, H&G and the rest?Thank you for reviewing!
They are all so sad.
I'm worried about the state of the Potter's marriage... there could be quite the little side story there if you so choose.
what an interesting change inlily. love the way you've characterized draco and astoria. i look forward to the next installment. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies.
Still odd, though. I really just want to hug poor Lily Luna.
Good for Lily! She's becoming a better student. Does she wonder what has prompted Scorpius to suddenly take an interest in her and her friends from first year?
Looking forward to your next update!
Beth
Lily was pretty quick (or lucky) to figure out how to narrow the choices for which potion she brewed.
I wonder what Scorpius is thinking? He is understandably confused and not a little put off by the Bloody Baron's protection of Lily.
Beth
Sigh. You would hope that the next generation would learn tolerance, but no, they keep the horridness going.
Perhaps as a ghost Severus will finally learn compassion, at least for students.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Hallo. He is not a ghost.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I meant vampire, I don't know why I said ghost. Hell, you even mentioned red eyes. I guess you can chalk it up to a hectic week and trying to catch up on stories late at night.
I just came upon this story and I am totally intrigued. I love all the different characterizations and all the different interactions. I cannot wait to read more of this story. Keep up the great work!!!
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
thank you very much. The next chapter will be up soon.
Well, this is cool. Does anyone other than the Bloody Baron know Severus still exists?
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
I don't think so. (But you never know :-)
This is a great beginning, and I can't wait to see where you take this story. I wonder what Lily will think of this man with the red eyes who has so thoroughly frightened her. Is she afraid of monsters? I want to see where Lily and Severus' relationship goes and whether she becomes a willing student of brewing Potions. I wonder how she and her brothers interact at Hogwarts, and if they ever come to understand why she was sorted into Slytherin.Will she ever tell anyone about the red-eyed man who has set himself the task of teaching her the "the subtle science and exact art of potion making?"Gracious, I really have a lot of questions, don't I? Can't wait for your next update!Beth
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Everyone is afraid of monsters. Lily will have to grow up a lot (nine years and a couple of chapters) before she can have any relationship with Severus. She will tell someone about the red-eyed man, but not for a while. Thank you for reviewing.
Interesting first chapter. I look forward to any and all updates.
This is really interesting. I don't always find next generation fics I like.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
thank you. I hope, that you will enjoy the next chapters too.
Dear Mela. A most promising beginning, I must say. I am definitely intrigued, and can't wait to see where you take this. Am feeling a little bit sorry for poor Severus, though. To escape death only by becoming, well, undead, is probably not an outcome he ever envisioned or desired. I sincerely hope that he finds some kind of peace in this new "life" of his. He certainly deserves it. But as I said: I am intrigued. Keep writing, please.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
I think that he might come to enjoy this afterlife.
that was an excellent point about dumbledork. he knew and did nothing for draco. the more i think about him the less i like him. great update. good for lily for figuring it out. thanks and mucho smoochies
Severus has found a fondness for Lily Luna that goes beyond whatever he has decided it was based on. And I don't think Scorpius will harm her, not after being asked to look after her. Harry. He should have known he and Ginny were not well suited. I can't feel too bad for him.
i can't quite think of a review that can truly encompass what i'm feeling right now....the only thing i do know to say is that you, madam, have just stolen the place of my absolute favorite #1 story from someone else. :D lol in normal words u r my total FAVE author now. be proud of urself :D i LOVE it! if my writing skill was half of what you have in your pinkie....i would be the happiest chick in the WHOLE world :D lol awesome story, you have me totally hooked. lol
Oh, my.
Lily certainly seems to have a penchant for being smack-dab in the middle of whatever rule breaking is going on. Maybe as he is looking in on his House, Severus will see what she is up to, and point her in a different direction. Something tells me she will give him a run for his money.Scorpius is taking his role as the "Protector of Lily Potter" very seriously, much to the chagrin of his girlfriend. I can't help but wonder if he will take a more personal interest in Lily before all is said and done.I'm intrigued by what is happening in George's life. Who is the only person who understands him, and why could he never be George's?Thank you for a very interesting chapter!Beth
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Yes Scorpius will take a more personal interest, but not yet.