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Chapter 3 of 10
MelaNote: I owe many thanks to WriterMerrin for her help and corrections (and there are dozens of mistakes for her to correct).
Chapter III
Rose Weasley usually spent her afternoons in the Hogwarts library. She enjoyed reading and studying very much. In her extended family, her mother and she were the only ones who loved reading. Thus, it was very rare that she would encounter any of her cousins within the library walls. That explained why she was so surprised to spot Lily in the library for the second time within the same week. The thought passed through her mind that she should offer to help Lily with her studying, to encourage this new habit of hers, but she quickly dismissed it. People already gossiped about her, frequently calling her a nerd. She did not need to be seen socializing with a much younger student, and one of another House to add to the insult. None of her classmates would understand why she would spend any time talking to a younger student. So she just greeted her cousin and returned to her own studies.
Lily noticed Rose, returned her greeting with an absent-minded 'hallo' and promptly found an empty seat at a corner table of the library to sit. She had slept like the dead the previous night, almost missing the morning wake-up call. Despite being tired, she was happy to have come out of the first session with her fanged tutor unharmed. If she was honest with herself, she would also admit that she had indeed learnt something, even if that something was a totally useless potion. So, she opened her Potions book and started reading the first chapter, one that she should have learnt by heart a couple of weeks ago.
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Harry Potter looked over his morning paper at his wife. She sipped her tea while going through a fashion magazine. All three of their children were away at Hogwarts. Ginny and he were still young, and they could enjoy having the house to themselves if they wanted. Not that they ever did anymore. He loved his wife. He truly did. Sometimes, though, he wondered if they had anything other than their children in common.
Most of their talk focused on the children, as they both adored all three of their kids. James was their firstborn, their pride. Albus Severus, the most easygoing of their children, was their joy. Lily, their little girl, had had them wrapped around her little finger since she was born. Harry's thoughts turned once again to his children, and he pondered how different they were from each other.
He worried about all three of them. James was going through puberty and was prone to involve himself in trouble. Albus Severus was a quiet one, but tended to imitate his brother as much as possible. Lily was the one that worried him most. She was less forthcoming than her brothers, and she was often secretive. He still remembered that when she was five, she had managed to keep a frog as a pet for three months before they knew about it.
He frowned at the memory, but Ginny was so engrossed in her magazine that she missed his frown. When he rose to leave for work some minutes later, she kissed him absentmindedly and wished him to have a good day at work.
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Right after her last class for the day, Lily returned to the underground laboratory. The one day respite had helped alleviate her tiredness, but had done little to ease her trepidation regarding the next lesson. She entered the room and immediately pulled to a stop. Gone were the table and cauldrons. The only thing that remained the same was the blackboard. She quickly read the instructions on it and groaned. It seemed that today's lesson was going to be about Charms and not Potions.
"I so hate foolish wand waving," she murmured.
Had Severus Snape considered himself to be capable of feeling, he would have smiled at the girl's words. As it was, he did not even smirk.
He moved forward for the girl to notice him, and immediately afterwards he started the lesson. He was as severe as ever, but he also took care not to overtax her.
At the end of the hour-long Charms tutoring session, Lily decided that it would be much better for her if she was a better student in class and managed thus to avoid these tutoring sessions. Whereas it was true that in just under one hour she had learnt how to perform a perfect "Lumos", it was also true that the lesson had been an extremely unpleasant one.
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Draco kissed his wife tenderly. They had been married for fifteen years, and she was his light. He sometimes wondered at the miracle of the fact that she still loved him. He was no longer handsome, and he was well aware of his receding hairline and the pouch in his middle. And still, his beloved wife looked at him with stars in her eyes. The only thing that had ever caused them any grief in their marriage had been their inability to have other children after Scorpius.
Astoria returned the kiss of her husband, aware that something was on his mind. It had always been like that between them. She was always able to tell when something troubled him. She loved him, and she was as much in love with him as at their wedding. Fifteen years had done nothing to dim the strength of their relationship. She knew all her husband's secrets, even the one that he had once feared might dim her love for him.
"Is there something, you want to share with me?" she asked him softly.
Draco looked up at his wife and smiled. "Yes, there is. I have a task for Scorpius, but subtlety is required in the asking."
"It might be better then, if I asked him to do whatever it is you require. After all, he never says no to his mother," Astoria commented.
"You are right as always," Draco acknowledged.
"Then tell me, husband dear, what is it that we want our son to do, but are afraid to ask of him?" Astoria asked.
And he answered.
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It was during the weekend that Lily finally had some time free. That was when she realized that she had no further clues regarding her tutor's identity. She had not found any time to read more about magical creatures. She briefly thought about looking into it, but then decided that there were better ways to spend the weekend.
Scorpius looked at the younger girl playing exploding snap with some other girls from her year. She was a plain one, despite her famous last name. He recalled his mother's letter and her request and wondered at it. Nevertheless, if his mother wanted him to do it, he would. He had always been close to his parents, and he would never knowingly do anything to sadden his mother. Well, other than smuggling fireworks into Hogwarts when he was eleven years old, sampling his father's firewhiskey when he was twelve, smoking one of his father's cigars when he was thirteen, and stealing a kiss from one of the waitresses at Rosmerta's the previous week.
Every first-year Slytherin knew that Scorpius Malfoy was their House's rising star. He was in his third year, but had such exceptional good looks that girls of all years swooned at the sight of him. He was intelligent and fiercely loyal. He was an excellent student and an even better Quidditch player. Thus, it was no surprise that all four girls turned red and hastened to welcome him when he sat next to them. The girls abandoned their game and immediately turned their attention to him. Scorpius asked them a few questions about their classes and pretended to listen to their inane answers. He did not fail to notice his classmates looking at him strangely for having voluntarily approached the silly first-year students. He chose to ignore the quizzing looks and turned this focus to the girls, and to one of them in particular. Lily Potter was more reserved than the others. His first impression was that she was an unexceptional, quiet girl. She was definitely better mannered and less arrogant than her brother James. Scorpius talked with the girls for a few more minutes, and then he left them, so as not to lose face for fraternizing with younger students.
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Fifteen days later Raymond Hamilton attended the monthly teachers' session. The purpose of the meeting was to discuss the progress of the students and to note any abnormal occurrences. He found these meetings boring but necessary. They often served as an early warning system in cases of problems. Just last year Roger Bragg's marks had slipped in all his classes. It had been pointed out in one of these meetings, and his Head of House had soon afterwards found out that he had started doing drugs. In this meeting, however, the news was the exact opposite. Apparently, Lily Potter had suddenly, in the course of just one month, turned into a stellar student.
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30 Reviews | 6.87/10 Average
GOD I love your story...
I hope you keep on writing.
You can't just abandoned it especially after things is started to heating up between lily and severus...
Hope you update soon.
I like the way you write this story in so many different scenes, providing so many different angles. Keep up the good work!
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Thank you! Most of the time I have a hard time keeping track of everyone in the story. Not to mention that some minor characters had a will of their own and demanded their own story to be told!
That was very sweet and quite realistic for a first time, even one so well planned out. Poor Harry.
awww how sad! poor Harry! And well, Lily got her hopes crushed. I wonder how she's going to react about the news? who will she side with? so many questions :( great chapter, i loved it
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Thank you! Lily's reaction will be in the next chapter.
I don't remembr if I have reviewed before. I like your story very much. I loved the way Draco saw the flaws in Dumbledores plan, your Lily is so cute. Sorry that Harry and Ginnys marriage is not fulfilling
thanks for the update!!! Whatever will happen to dear Lily, to H&G's marriage. How will S react to his world being brought to the light?
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
The main plot is written, Lily and Severus have a specific future. The question is what do you want to happen with the sub-plots, H&G and the rest?Thank you for reviewing!
They are all so sad.
I'm worried about the state of the Potter's marriage... there could be quite the little side story there if you so choose.
what an interesting change inlily. love the way you've characterized draco and astoria. i look forward to the next installment. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies.
Still odd, though. I really just want to hug poor Lily Luna.
Good for Lily! She's becoming a better student. Does she wonder what has prompted Scorpius to suddenly take an interest in her and her friends from first year?
Looking forward to your next update!
Beth
Lily was pretty quick (or lucky) to figure out how to narrow the choices for which potion she brewed.
I wonder what Scorpius is thinking? He is understandably confused and not a little put off by the Bloody Baron's protection of Lily.
Beth
Sigh. You would hope that the next generation would learn tolerance, but no, they keep the horridness going.
Perhaps as a ghost Severus will finally learn compassion, at least for students.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Hallo. He is not a ghost.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I meant vampire, I don't know why I said ghost. Hell, you even mentioned red eyes. I guess you can chalk it up to a hectic week and trying to catch up on stories late at night.
I just came upon this story and I am totally intrigued. I love all the different characterizations and all the different interactions. I cannot wait to read more of this story. Keep up the great work!!!
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
thank you very much. The next chapter will be up soon.
Well, this is cool. Does anyone other than the Bloody Baron know Severus still exists?
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
I don't think so. (But you never know :-)
This is a great beginning, and I can't wait to see where you take this story. I wonder what Lily will think of this man with the red eyes who has so thoroughly frightened her. Is she afraid of monsters? I want to see where Lily and Severus' relationship goes and whether she becomes a willing student of brewing Potions. I wonder how she and her brothers interact at Hogwarts, and if they ever come to understand why she was sorted into Slytherin.Will she ever tell anyone about the red-eyed man who has set himself the task of teaching her the "the subtle science and exact art of potion making?"Gracious, I really have a lot of questions, don't I? Can't wait for your next update!Beth
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Everyone is afraid of monsters. Lily will have to grow up a lot (nine years and a couple of chapters) before she can have any relationship with Severus. She will tell someone about the red-eyed man, but not for a while. Thank you for reviewing.
Interesting first chapter. I look forward to any and all updates.
This is really interesting. I don't always find next generation fics I like.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
thank you. I hope, that you will enjoy the next chapters too.
Dear Mela. A most promising beginning, I must say. I am definitely intrigued, and can't wait to see where you take this. Am feeling a little bit sorry for poor Severus, though. To escape death only by becoming, well, undead, is probably not an outcome he ever envisioned or desired. I sincerely hope that he finds some kind of peace in this new "life" of his. He certainly deserves it. But as I said: I am intrigued. Keep writing, please.
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
I think that he might come to enjoy this afterlife.
that was an excellent point about dumbledork. he knew and did nothing for draco. the more i think about him the less i like him. great update. good for lily for figuring it out. thanks and mucho smoochies
Severus has found a fondness for Lily Luna that goes beyond whatever he has decided it was based on. And I don't think Scorpius will harm her, not after being asked to look after her. Harry. He should have known he and Ginny were not well suited. I can't feel too bad for him.
i can't quite think of a review that can truly encompass what i'm feeling right now....the only thing i do know to say is that you, madam, have just stolen the place of my absolute favorite #1 story from someone else. :D lol in normal words u r my total FAVE author now. be proud of urself :D i LOVE it! if my writing skill was half of what you have in your pinkie....i would be the happiest chick in the WHOLE world :D lol awesome story, you have me totally hooked. lol
Oh, my.
Lily certainly seems to have a penchant for being smack-dab in the middle of whatever rule breaking is going on. Maybe as he is looking in on his House, Severus will see what she is up to, and point her in a different direction. Something tells me she will give him a run for his money.Scorpius is taking his role as the "Protector of Lily Potter" very seriously, much to the chagrin of his girlfriend. I can't help but wonder if he will take a more personal interest in Lily before all is said and done.I'm intrigued by what is happening in George's life. Who is the only person who understands him, and why could he never be George's?Thank you for a very interesting chapter!Beth
Response from Mela (Author of Life After)
Yes Scorpius will take a more personal interest, but not yet.