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A Beach in Ireland
Bambu53 Reviews | 6.55/10 (53 Ratings, 0 Likes, 137 Favorites )
Eight years post-Voldemort, Hermione decides to celebrate her birthday quietly at home, but serendipity takes a hand.
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Bambu
Member Since 2005 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 542 | 117 Reviews Written | 1,029 Review Responses
I have loved the written word since watching my mother’s fingers trace the lines of a book, luxuriating in riveting tales and well-turned phrases. Many a night I read until dawn, a plastic flashlight hidden under the covers to light the pages as I raced the rising sun to finish my latest must-read.
Since joining the HP fandom, I've been privileged to receive more than 50 awards, including Best Author (Quill to Parchment Awards) and Best Classic Author (Most Potente Passions). Among others, my stories have won awards for Best Hurt/Comfort (Spoils of War, Morning Has Broken), Best Novel Length (Calling Card, Guard…Check…Mate), Best One Shot (A Beach in Ireland), Best WIP (Saving a Death Eater, The Summoning), Favorite Overall Story (Complexities), and Readers’ Choice (A Quest of Paladins).
Aside from a judicious polish for formatting and egregious typos, I don't plan on revising my early work. Those stories are the stepping stones of my writing journey. Please note some stories contain adult content. None is more graphic than equivalent scenes in the television shows True Blood or Game of Thrones, and age appropriate warnings are posted.
I no longer write fanfiction prolifically. Like many fanfic authors, my focus has shifted to original work. A member of the Romance Writers of America and the Southern California Writers Association, I write under my name: Lin Thornhill.
My original story Verisimilitude published in Thoroughly Modern Monsters (Story Spring Publishing, 2013) reached the top 100 fantasy anthologies and broke into the top 10 in the UK the first month of release. Ben and Christine’s story will continue in 2016.
Fixation, my latest short story, slated for publication in J. Aldis’ anthology Immanence, with a winter 2015-2016 release, is particularly exciting as it anchors the Messengers of Inari novel series I’ve been developing for the past year.
9/2015
Reviews for A Beach in Ireland
I feel a very happy and satisfying 'buzz', as if I'd had a few rounds of good Irish stout on a beach in Ireland, where there are no snakes. But there is chocolate and wine and Severus and a bed. Perfect! Thanks for sharing with us, Bambu and Lifeasanamazon.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I always look forward to your reviews; and this time you've brought a huge smile to my face. Thank you, JuneW.
This was a wonderful read! I absolutely adore the air of sophistication that threaded throughout their dinner, both in the characters and the choice of enjoyments.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
What a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much, Lady K
Oooooh that was delicious, I enjoyed every morsel. Very romantic.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thank you very much.
“That your home library is arranged in the same fashion as Hogwarts’?”Love amongst the books! Ah, they're made for each other. This has such a gloriously tranquil mood about it. Two lonely hearts finding each other in the quiet solitude they have each sought. The landscape sprang to life for me. Indeed, I could easily visualize each scene. This is a joyously happy birthday for our Hermione!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
They really are made for each other, at least in my mind. I'm absolutely delighted you thought the mood enhanced the connection between these two, and you could 'see' the story as it unfolded. Thanks!
Oooh. I like that.
Logical and romantic and erotic. Hermione is mature and she knows what she wants. And Severus does too.
I like the concept that her parents consented to being Obliviated, because it's just too awful if she made the decision for them, without consulting them. It's bad enough that they've lost their emotional connection with their daughter. They have magic-induced amnesia, and it's never going to go away. It would be like driving the car that crashed and caused your loved-ones to lose their memory. Worse; she did it deliberately, although out of a desperate need to keep them safe from the Death Eaters.
But at least she's got Severus now. At last.
Good job.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thank you, thank you.The Grangers' memories were a weakness in book seven that has always bothered me. I've created a number of scenarios about it, but I've never really thought Hermione would take the risk without their participation. I could even see her doing it without consent, but she would have informed them first, and then done it when they objected. What she did wtih Umbridge and, separately, the canaries are proof that she's inventive and can have violent reactions, but neither of those things support the idea of Hermione abusing her parents' trust with something so ruthless (regardless of how protective.)Oops. I should get off the soap box now. Thanks, again.
Response from Guinnevere (Reviewer)
Don't bother to get off the soap box on my account! There were many weaknesses in book seven, that nearly ruined for me everything that went before. Fortunately, with time has come a certain detachment, that makes it possible to hold on to the good and let go of the rest; and my favorite fan writers are still able to tell a very good tale.Good story, Bambu.
Response from Guinnevere (Reviewer)
Don't bother to get off the soap box on my account! There were many weaknesses in book seven, that nearly ruined for me everything that went before. Fortunately, with time has come a certain detachment, that makes it possible to hold on to the good and let go of the rest; and my favorite fan writers are still able to tell a very good tale.Good story, Bambu.
This is one of the best romantic/smutty/dramatic stories I've read in a long time. The beginning seemed melancholy, hinting at her residual post-war sadness. Her self-imposed isolation seemed at once sad and comforting. But the mood perked up with her impulsive invitation to Severus and their subsequent dinner. The conversation flowed easily and with his interest and compliments, he seemed to be making up for his reprehensible behavior of the past. Things heated up nicely during dessert. I especially loved the exchange about the restricted section. Then the lemony goodness of the ending was just perfection.TGIF. What a wonderful way to start the weekend. Thank you, Bambu.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
You've made me blush,
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
. Thank you.Hermione has always struck me as being fairly isolated, with few friends. Frankly, Harry's peril and headlong flight into danger is somehow stunting to Hermione's ability to make friends. He takes much of her time and attention, and after the war it would be difficult to know just who wanted to be friends with Hermione for herself, for her fame, or for her connection with Harry. So I sent her to a quiet coastline where she could find beauty, peace, and ... in the end ... Severus.
Well, I'd say it is a good thing that Harry couldn't come to dinner! While I love a good sex scene, I really, really love a good lead up to the action. From the time she decides to be impulsive until they make it to bed is sexy as hell. Sometimes I think that it is unrealistic for them to meet and end up together all in one day, but this felt so real. Bravo to you!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
::laughs:: I would say it was a good thing about Harry, too.I appreciate your concerns about the too-abrupt transition from meeting to bedding, but I'm thrilled you thought it worked believably. There are meaningful, long-lasting relationships which have happened in this fashion. Really there are.
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Oh, I believe that. Those two are just so difficult in so many ways. Of course, that is what makes it so great when they finally hook up. This story, however, showcases a chilled out version of them in which I can see them bonding so quickly and easily. Again, very enjoyable!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I think the plausibility hangs on the eight-year gap from canon to this time frame; the author can use it to her advantage. I know I certainly played with it. And thanks again.
I like this a lot. I have to say, the mental image of snape eating Pot Noodles was pretty hilarious. And I like what you did with the "Hermione wonders what title to refer to snape by" hurdle Too often that question is resolved with cartoonish awkwardness.and by then end--you write this well. really well. I can see the whole thing, and it looks good :) and the speech just before hermione apparates upstairs is the sexiest thing since sex.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I think there's an equal amount of the mundane about Severus, and without it he's a bit too perfect. Hence: Pot Noodles! I'm delighted the image tickled your fancy.And oh, my goodness, I'm so pleased you liked the way I skirted the issue of his given name. I made the mistake a couple of times when I first started writing fanfiction, mostly because I didn't know better. Depending on the circumstances it's a non-issue, but in this case, not enough years have really passed to make it a non-issue. Thank you very much for thinking I made it sexy.
OMG! That was awsome. I wish I could have a wild and sexy Severus Snape for my birthday.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
He's quite a present, isn't he? Thank you.
That was lovely. A good, believable set up and very sensual at the end.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I try to make my stories plausible, and thank you for letting me know you thought it worked.
Oh my, you do remain a Master of this genre, my dear!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
What an absolutely wonderful thing to say. Thank you very much.
Mmm... I'd say that Severus makes an excellent birthday present and Hermione is one lucky witch!I have to say I really loved Hermione's description of what happened at her first meeting with the Hogwarts governors, thanks to Fudge's fishing. Especially the last bit about Dumbledore:“I’m afraid I lost my temper … only a little, you understand. I told the Board the purpose of Hogwarts’ curriculum was to provide the best education for young witches and wizards, regardless of house affiliation or blood ties, and Dumbledore, saintly or otherwise, had been a manipulative old coot who leaked favoritism from every flamboyantly robed pore.”I think Hermione captured the "manipulative old coot" to a tee. Dumbledore always put his favorites first... in Severus' day it was the Marauders who could do no wrong, in Hermione's it was all about Harry, pretty much everyone else be damned. I agree with Severus... Dumbledore was hardly a saint. But my gosh, the gorgeousness of Hermione and Severus and what happened after dessert may be the absolute sexiest love scene I've ever seen written for them. This story is definitely being added to my Favorites... I believe this ranks as one of my favorite Bambu pieces of all time. Wonderful work as always, thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece with us and brightening my Friday afternoon!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thank you for such gorgeous compliments; especially my little rant about Dumbledore. He's never been a favorite character. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
That was great. I thought your description of her life and where she lived was wonderful. It was my favorite part (and I love to read about sex). It should be the introduction to something that is all yours. Well done.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I always want the settings in my stories to be plausible and realistic. That you liked this one lets me think I accomplished that. Thank you!
Oh, this was lovely. Two lonely souls finding each other, my favorite! Loved it, thank you for sharing.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thanks so much!
It probably says something about where my head is these days that, while the sex was hot hot hot, I was more moved and intrigued by your description of Hermione's shoreside cottage, loaded bookshelves, and sweet kitchen garden. This was wonderfully soothing. Thanks for writing!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you liked the setting and the tone, not to mention that you enjoyed the erotica.
Very good I want a chapter 2!!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
What a great compliment. Thank you very much.
Wonderful sexual tension! A delightfully voyeuristic, vicariously erotic, treat. I so enjoy Severus' new man and it is completely believable when you've been around the block a few times and know that some people really do find themselves after a near death event and embrace a new, more contented life. They gain freedom and begin to enjoy their life once they have left the old one far behind. This Severus Snape will be very good for Hermione. We don't learn enough about his circumstances to know if this Hermione would be good for him.Will you tell us? I'd like a mature mating with none of the childish angst they seem to have happily out grown.Kisses and hugs Bambu. I'm very sleepy so I hope this review makes some sense. I was looking for a quick SS/HG romance to lighten my heart and to hide away inside my head until morning and reality must once again be faced.Breastlady
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I always love reading your reviews. They totally make my day, and it's not only because you're saying such nice things, but you also tell me why you like it, and that's invaluable to me. As always, thank you very much.
That was really great. Loved the conversation. Good dialogue is so hard to write and you did it wonderfully!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thank you very much. I've worked long and hard on writing dialogue so your compliment means a lot to me.
Aww, I liked this story. The smut is always a welcome bit between these two, but the rest of the storyline was also good!
this is so beautifully written. well done.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
A belated thank you very much.
Good Story! Please write more!
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Thanks so much. Belated reply, I know, but I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
She'll have to thank Harry for standing her up, no matter how unintentionally. ;)
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
I totally agree with you. In some ways it was the best birthday present Harry ever gave her! Much belated thanks for leaving me a review.
“Last chance.”I don't think I breathed from there until the end. Wow. Hot. Wild. And lovely.
Response from Bambu (Author of A Beach in Ireland)
Wow! What a great compliment. Thank you so much.