New Chapter for Valentine's Day
Valentine's Day
tonksinger50 Reviews | 6.3/10 (50 Ratings, 0 Likes, 72 Favorites )
It's Valentine's Day, the most miserable day of the year for Severus and Hermione. They would like nothing more for it to be over, but someone has decided that they'd like it to continue... Written for the 2008 SSHG exchange for julilith.
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Hiya. I'm tonksinger, mostly former author. I don't expect I'll be writing any more fanfiction, but I invite you to enjoy the stories posted here.
Reviews for Valentine's Day
Really enjoyed this one! Gotta love a sexy Groundhog Day!
oh no, wondering how bad the date will go for Hermione.
haha, oh they are so in for it. I thought at first it was fillius up to this all, but the comments make me think it was actually lucius, so now I'm wondering where he comes in.
"No touching", including himself...now that is a very fitting and absolutely inspired form of revenge to take on Lucius!
Hehehe...is Lucius even remotely capable of "looking extremely chagrined"???? My impression of him is that of a man with aplomb practically oozing from every pore, one whom it is damn near impossible to shock or catch wrong-footed because he's a consummate Slytherin who does not trust anything to chance -- a real "it's not a bug, it's a feature" man. I picture him as being like a cat which even when caught doing something spectacularly ridiculous will give you a look which says "I meant to do that" -- I mean, when was the last time you saw a cat looking hangdog????
Lol, I LOVED the part about Hermione wanting to strangle Percy with the lace at the tea shop. awesome mental image.
What can I say . This is one of the yummyest Valentine treats I've read in a long time. Sence Lucius got them together and they already "punished" him already so who could they curse for that repeating Hell? Let's see for FIVE DAYS they had to deal with Sybil and Percy. How bout they get the curse next. Now That! Would make for an interesting read!
Cheers for making Lucius suffer--just a little bit. ;)
I actually happened on this site by accident, and now I am so glad I did! This story was nothing short of brilliant!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Thank you very much! I hope you read everything here--it's all good stuff!
poor lucius got what he deserved. as they say the punishment fit the crime. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Thank you!
Wow, what a way to have at it! I'm assuming this is the end?
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Yup, that's all folks! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from Jinxie (Reviewer)
Cool beans, you may want to change the story from WIP to finished - its still listed as incomplete. ;)
Finally, everyone gets what they deserve.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Yup! All's well that end's well.
Brilliant, loved it. Poor old Lucius, would of been nice to watch him wanking away, daresay he only lasted seconds though ;o)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Thank you! I was rather cruel to Lucius, but it was such fun.
Haha. Lucius really got what was coming to him! :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Indeed he did. Poor man. Thanks, sunny dear!
Anonymous
heh. good one.
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What happens if they skip breakfast and move right on to sex? Do they get to keep repeating that day over and over?
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Mmm. It's a thought...
At least she didn't have to go on a one-to-one date with Percy this time! :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Always look on the bright side!
Oh, dont live me waiting for too long... please!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Muahaha. Okay, okay, Ill put the next one up soon. Ish. :p
great update! how can i get a copy of that massage spell? thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
If I knew how to get that massage spell, I would gladly sell you one. :P
UST is the best! :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Isn't it just? Thanks, hon!
Poor Severus, I hope he tells her of his feelings soon, and that this little date with Percy will spur him into action, to TRY and be nice to her...I love this story, Hope to see more soon...Well done....
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Aw, but if he goes and blabs I don't get to write fun UST... Thank you for reveiwing! Chapter 3 is in the queue.
wonderful start! poor long suffering severus! thanks and smoochies
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Thank you! There's more to come!
Excellent start, I can't wait to read more.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
Glad you liked it. More is on the way!
"Merlin, he had wanted to drag her back there with him and make her concede her erroneous points as he..." *ahem*This one line pretty much makes the story. Anyone can lust after somebody, but only Snape would lust after someone's erroneous points as well.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Valentine's Day)
We all have our little kinks, I suppose. :p. Thank you!