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Correspondence
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A mystery admirer begins a correspondence with Hermione. When she learns who it is, they develop a friendship, which morphs into something more than that. Written for the HermioneBigBang.
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Ummmmm. I don't really know what to say. I'm a Junior in college and an English major because I am a total bookworm.
I have been a fan of HP since I was around 11. I started reading fanfiction about a year and a half ago, and writing it a little later.
Reviews for Correspondence
Ah, what a tantalizing image, Severus pulling her glove off with his teeth!
Love it!
Wow, that bit with the glove was intense.
Oh, I just love this chapter! I think it might be my favorite of the whole story. He's such a sneak! Arranging for her to see him then admitting that he arranged it in an almost smug, yet adorable, manner. And Hermione's tentativeness was quite sweet too. Both of theirs was!
Love his insecurity in the beginning, then his brazenness with the glove. I'm surprised she didn't just melt right there!
Well, he needs a few lessons in communication, but he really is trying. Neither of them probably have extensive experience in the dating arena. I love how the conversation flows so freely in print, but face to face it is kind of awkward. The end was really sweet. I loved him initiating the hand holding... he is apparently not completely inept :)
That was a lovely chapter. I like to see Severus's reaction to things. Does Hermione really not know what he thought of her bending over a desk like that?
Poor man. She has such an effect on his and is completely clueless! :)
Mmmm. It seems as if seeing Hermione bent over her desk had some effect on him. I wonder why? What could he have been thinking about?
Well Severus needs to learn a few comunication skills. But I think it's sweet the way he got all fluttered around Hermione.
Awww! I love the end (the rest of the chapter, too). It's just so sweet them holding hands, like two timid teenagers on their first date. Very cute.
Yeah a first date!
Oooooh, finally a first date, I can hardly wait to see how it turns out.
Awwww, Dinner, I love it, Bless his heart, I love this chapter, Her fingers brushed the locks behind his ear, and her cloth-covered fingers traced the shell of his ear.
SIGH....I love it!!!
Can't wait to see how dinner goes!!!...Excellent!!!
Awwww, Severus is so sweet. I like how he stuttered a bit when Hermione bent over the desk. He's so flustered because he's obviously feeling a bit awkward.
This is so sweet two lonely people finding each other. I hope things don't get weird between them now that she knows it's him.
I can't wait for the next update.
I like this. A nice slow building of friendship and possibly more.
Maybe now they can touch a bit in addition to talking. It's about time he let himself approach by another human being.
The little scene with her eating and making him uncomfortable without realising why was priceless! :)
Awwwww, I hope they can talk face to face comfortably as they did through their letters...Poor Severus, you just know he is so lonely, and so is Hermione...Can't wait to see what's next....
This is a lovely turn of events! I'm not sure that I understand why Severus was looking out over the hall or why he had a strained look on his face, but I'm glad Hermine knows for sure Severus is her pen pal. Perhaps they will become even better friends. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Beth
I'm glad they are getting there, past the awkwardness.
I glad that Severus decided to out himself. They are perfectly matched. I can't wait to see how far this goes.
I hope there are no bumps in the road to friendship... or whereever they may be headed. I'm really in the mood for some fluff.
Ive sat and read every chapter, and WHOOHOO I love this story I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh yeah!!!
More wonderful letters. I am really enjoying their correspondence.