Journey
Chapter 3 of 4
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Chapter 3: Journey
“You’re from their world. Have you ever wondered why the non-wizards are not bothered by werewolves and vampires?”
Her first thoughts were that it was denial, but if there were enough incidents, then it couldn’t be denied. She next considered that either the non-wizards weren’t as vulnerable or they didn’t live in close proximity as wizards did or some combination of the two. But, finally, she didn’t know. She looked at him and shook her head no.
“Retaliation,” he said.
She reflected for a moment. “Okay, we stir up the monsters, they attack the humans, the humans retaliate, and the wizards of Central Europe are too embroiled with a war against the vampires and werewolves to be a threat to England.”
I’m disguised as the perfect tourist, she thought as the escargots à la Bourguignonne arrived.
“Can we afford this?” she asked.
“We’re on a bloated war budget. Wait 'til you see our battle brooms complete with code words.”
“Code words for battle brooms?” she asked.
“If things get dire, say, ‘Tchaikovsky,’ and a 105mm howitzer pops out.”
There was a pause before she said, “That rings a bell,” and was able to return to her lunch with a peaceful mind, proud that she had not hexed a snail up his nose.
“We could have rented a car. It would be more flexible. We wouldn’t have to fight the crowds at the rail stations,” she said. “Aren’t you tired of cities? Wouldn’t you prefer a country inn?”
“Didn’t take you long to get spoiled. Besides, who wants to drive thousands of weary miles?”
“I can handle it,” she said.
“And what’s so romantic about country inns?”
“You said it, not me,” she replied.
“How, exactly, are we supposed to rouse the vampires and werewolves against the general population? And don’t give me that 105 howitzer bullshit.”
“Surely, you’ve guessed.”
“That’s terrible. Think of the innocent lives.” She paused. “Oh, no, it’s worse than that, isn’t it? We’ll have to provoke both sides.”
“It calls for daring and cunning,” he said, “and some people think we’re not capable enough.”
“Not capable!” She paused again. “Let me think about this.”
They may have sent the right girl, he thought.
“We’ll have to check the references. Where’s the best library?”
“Okay, I know how non-wizards kill vampires and werewolves, and I know how to fake a vampire or a werewolf killing a human, but I don’t know if I can bring myself to do either one.”
“Things are more desperate now than during our civil war,” he said.
“More desperate than facing a Dark Lord?” she asked.
“He may have been one of the most powerful wizards ever, but people followed him out of fear, envy, and hate. It was never a cohesive, effective group.”
Can’t we decide not to do this?” she asked.
“If we don’t carry out the mission, the people who sent us will conclude that we are going to betray them, and they will send a team of assassins after us.”
“Can’t we join the other side for protection?” she asked.
“We’re dealing in treachery. The other side won’t trust us, and they will kill us.”
“Isn’t the other side trying to do the right thing?” she asked.
“That makes them more dangerous,” said Severus. “They’re not going to make a long speech justifying their actions that gives us a chance to escape. They’ll immediately do the right thing and eliminate us.”
Hermione wondered how it was that she was an agent provocateur instead of being someone trying to stop a bloody war between humans and vampires. She wondered how close she had come to being on the other side and how much of morality was a justification for the accident of being on one side or the other.
“I’m not very sexy,” she said.
He sighed. “Okay, what did I do wrong?”
“You didn’t do anything wrong,” she said.
“I thought you liked it.”
“I loved it,” she said.
“I thought you had a good time.”
“I had a great time,” she said. “It was wonderful.”
“Then you’re sexy,” he said.
“I don’t get very excited, and I know I don’t make much noise,” she said.
“It’s a deep and personal experience for you,” he said. “At least, I hope it is.”
She nodded. “Yes,” she said.
“I couldn’t ask for anything better,” he said as he put his hand on top of hers.
“It’s magical here,” she said.
“Perhaps you just like breathtaking mountain scenery,” he replied.
“No, I mean ordinary life has a magical quality about it.”
“Well, you’ll have to be satisfied with that while we’re here. We can’t leave any trace of magic as we go about our work.”
“Ah, yes, our work,” she said. “Do you think they will let us back into normal society after this?”
“You rejoined normal society after the civil war,” he said.
“That was different,” she replied.
“It might have been different for you because you were young and there seemed to be only one right choice. Now, you’re older and confused.”
“Okay, we’ve located two girls with leukemia, two with incurable tuberculosis, and one with a broken heart. Is that a big enough batch? And why do we have to arrange their deaths within one week of each other?”
“It’ll be easier for us to ignore our consciences for a short period of time. We may crack under the stress anyway,” he said. “Besides, it will have more impact. The human mind responds to large deviations.”
“I’ve been watching, Severus.”
“Yes.”
“The four girls we’ve picked out with fatal diseases have someone who loves them, and they either know or don’t know that their loved one has a limited time upon this earth, and at least two eligible wizards wish the heartbroken girl would notice them.”
“And your point is?”
“The world doesn’t need a love-potion; it needs a cure-for-love-potion.”
“Would you take it if there were one?” he asked.
“Do vampires love each other?” she asked.
“Now that you mention it, our plan will go better if they do,” he said. “I was counting on retaliation, but a vampire revenging a loved one will create more havoc.”
“Then we should attack beautiful or handsome ones,” she said. “If vampires have any trace of humanity left, that increases the chances that another is attracted to them.”
“When this is over, will we be able to stay together, knowing what we’ve done?”
“I don’t know.”
It was cold. Very cold. The sun was bright. Every blade of grass cast a sharp shadow. Wrapping the cloak tighter did no good; the cold inside was sharper than the cold outside. The trudge up the hill was over sharp and unforgiving rocks.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Tanz der Verfluchten
11 Reviews | 7.18/10 Average
Interesting. I have to say this reads like its not very fleshed out. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
If it helps, take this as a gossamer text that balances and highlights the darkness of the tale. It is a demanding way of writing that relies on the reader to fill in the blanks, and it is a light interlude before the final chapter.
Intriguing and I'm a bit clueless, but I suspect that this is one of those fics where one is SUPPOSE to feel that way and things will gradually fall into place if I exercise a modicum of patience.
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
Yep. We'll have to see if I can portray Hermione's character and have the outcome be a consequence of this.
This is a very different scenario, eagerly waiting for an update
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
I did try to write something different. Thanks.
Interesting. I look forward to the next installment.
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
Thanks. I hope it continues to entertain you.
Wish I knew what was going on! Um, I think the saving grace for her marriage would be for her to kick the bum out and begin anew... with someone else.Gotta be Ron.
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
If I've written this well, both the reader and Hermione will gradually discover what is gong on, and the ending will be both unexpected and a logical consequence of personalities and decisions. It is an important clue that she refuses to admit her marriage is a failure.
Hmmm, interesting beginning. I wonder who the angry husband might be, anyone we know?
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
Thanks for reviewing. Hope the story holds your interest.
Beautiful, touching story--thank you! Love the narrative, the captured depiction of him at the end numb in his world of indifference, yet within that the final stroke of him placing a flower on her grave, an act of deep caring and remembrance. Lovely, poignant, dynamic tale!
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
Thanks for reading and reviewing this tale of the doomed. The love of his life pushed herself beyond any hope of survival. In a cold and uncaring world, he remembers.
Love the snippets of dialogue chronologically revealing their evolving journey and intense relationship between each other; there is a wonderful pace and dynamic set therein, building, building, building as they near their target--love the insightful commentary on human nature throughout and the elongated, foreboding and poetically descriptive ending lines--great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
This chapter was an experiment in telling a story by means of short suggestive vignettes. It lets the reader imagine their growing attraction to each other set against the terrible things they are planning and doing. Thanks for the review.
Loved Padma's rant--hahaha! And loved the escape--will they be able to manage throwing the baddies off their trail? Even in his snark, Severus seems to be having a levelling affect on Hermione--but there seems to be something further ominous with the final lines, as if they could be the inner thoughts of a vampire... Is this the fate that is awaiting them in the infamous Balkanian land of the Undead?Great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
Thanks. The Padma rant was fun to write although it is more American than Brit. Severus and Hermione engage in a battle of snark. Nevertheless, there are still signs of Hermine's flaw of over achieving, and there is a small recognition-reversal when she realizes she can't return home.
There is a strong undercurrent of sadness and poignancy revealed, such lines as 'The situation at home had progressed to the point where she hated to tell him anything about her job. Working with Hannah and Padma had become a refuge that she didn’t want sullied with her married life.' and her praying the husband is not at home in order to avoid further abuse from him brought tears to my eyes--in stark contrast to the seemingly loving and caring and mutually joyful relationships her peers are enjoying with their partners, etc. She is struggling and clinging to a thin hope of still making things work, being fully responsible for a healthy relationship with him. In denial of what he truly is and what their existence together truly is. Loved also her inner thoughts and the reflection on the Balkans. Love the chapter ending, an unexpected violent attack--this story has a very particular Hermione's voice and tone and style that I can't quite put my finger on--must read on as soon as possible--great chapter, as always!
Response from Amita (Author of Tanz der Verfluchten)
As you observed, there is something particular about Hermione: the tragic flaw of being overly dutiful. She should leave both her marriage and the administrative assignment instead of becoming involved with people who care nothing for her. She does not admit her marriage and the Balkans are a mess about which she can do nothing. Thank you very much for wanting to see how this turns out for her.